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Home»Fan Fiction»A simple Love story …A TS (shot-5)
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A simple Love story …A TS (shot-5)

SairishBy SairishOctober 25, 201733 Comments4 Mins Read
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link for the earlier ones ..
All Parts here
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His quietness was killing me every nano second . Each moment seemed to burden my heart even more . and such a stupid he is..atleast he should tell me what was he thinking so that i can justify my deed .
A red faced him turned around and this one look was enough for me to recognise the end of our relationship..oops..a so called ‘friendship’
“What the hell is this ANNIKA…how could you?..how could you do do this to me ,to your friend. you were stalking me ! seriously…i never ever expected this from you,this in return of my friendship”
Fresh tears formed in my eyes and I began to sob.
“Shi.. shivaay. I know I’m wrong and I know that you’re angry from me but please give me a chance to explain . PLEASEE.”
in no mood to listen to me
“silent..silent. I don’t want to hear anything from you. you’re such a cheap girl,you have been stalking me. you know what ..I’m done here .”
and he stormed out of my eyes filled with immense anger. i tried stopping him but he jerked my hand and didn’t even turned around once and atleast bid me a small bye .
broken from within i landed on the floor with a great thud. I didn’t even had energy to move my hands . Everything froze. THE boy whom i loved more than myself returned after 20 years and due to my mistake he just left .

After a moment or so my tears automatically stopped coming down . I was no longer sitting on the floor but standing on the very same position with all my might. when the vision became more clear i saw him staring at the pictures opposite facing me. does that mean he didn’t went? does that mean that ……i..i was day dreaming.
A new chill of thrill ran down through my spine and I swear …at that moment. it felt i got a new life .
my myself might not be knowing how many times i thanked God for not making this horrible dream a true reality but the problem was that he still was facing the wall.
“sh..shi..shivaay”..said an hesitated I
“haa..hmm”..he turned around while saying ..pointing his index finger at the photographs “this….”
this much suspense was enough for me and the childhood problem
…”JAI HANUMAN GYAN GUN SAGAR”
“JAI KAPEES TRIHULOK UJAGAR”
I had just started under my breath..
“ANNIKA…this is awesome .Really fascinating it is.”
but my ears didn’t seemed to hear what he said
“listen shivaay..I’m really really very sorry . I never meant that. please please..forgive me and try to understand me . if you want ..I’ll remove it . promise ..I’ll do it by today itself…….but please don’t leave ..”

“OY!..Annika..what are you saying. why are you saying sorry and why would I leave .”he said jerking my shoulders slightly because i wasn’t listening to what he was saying .

“huhh??”…replied a sheepish me “you don’t have any problem in this”

“why would I well?” he sounded as cool as ice
A new layer of happiness was there within me .
“good then..what do you want ..i mean why you’re here?? any help or any problem”
…”well…I’m here to reunite with the love of my life”
his words raised some hope in me . does that mean he too is in love with me??
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heyya peeps!
finally with the 5th shot of this TS. I hope it’s good. well..i would like to ask ..am I dragging the story. If you think so feel free to tell me. silent readers..a request to make some notice. common yaar youngest writer jab return4d after a long time after all ??????
I genuinly owe to you all for showering so much of love to me . thank you loads.
PLEASE COMMENT. IT WON’T TAKE MORE THAN A SECOND . PLEASE
infinite love
Sairish
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    currently writing the biggest chapter ..of my life

    33 Comments

    1. Ashwinee on October 25, 2017 6:22 am

      The youngest writer is rocking like hell!!!!!????mindblowing update SAIRISH….
      Lots of love…

      • Sairish on October 26, 2017 5:13 pm

        hello ash di
        thank uuh sooo much.
        next part published long back
        here’s the link
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/simple-love-story-ts-shot-6/comment-page-1/#comment-5385073
        love
        Sairish

    2. Oleen on October 25, 2017 6:25 am

      Nice one shivya ka point of view to pata chale but I I guess its a suspense

      • Sairish on October 26, 2017 5:15 pm

        hello oleen di
        thanks a lot for the support .
        your doubt has been cleared in the next shot
        go read if haven’t
        here’s the link
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/simple-love-story-ts-shot-6/comment-page-1/#comment-5385073
        love you loads
        Sairish here

      • Oleen on October 27, 2017 7:02 am

        Tq ? dear

    3. Hamna on October 25, 2017 7:38 am

      Nice update but tooooooooo short make it little bit longer please ?

      • Sairish on October 26, 2017 5:20 pm

        hello hamna aapi
        thanks a a ton for commenting
        I’ll try longer updates
        next part here
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/simple-love-story-ts-shot-6/comment-page-1/#comment-5385073
        love you loads
        Sairish here

    4. fenil on October 25, 2017 8:09 am

      wow….such a lovely chappy and serious day dreaming Anika.loved it.

      • Sairish on October 26, 2017 5:21 pm

        thanks a lot baiyyuuu
        youre too sweet
        love
        sissy

    5. R on October 25, 2017 9:41 am

      Awesome update , and you are not dragging the story.

      • Sairish on October 26, 2017 5:22 pm

        dear R,
        thanks a lot for liking it and understanding me
        next part here
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/simple-love-story-ts-shot-6/comment-page-1/#comment-5385073
        love
        Sairish here

    6. Shivika on October 25, 2017 10:50 am

      Amazing Update. Loved it ❤
      Bechara Anika was feeling so scared.
      Anika is cute so cute. Waiting to see shivaay’s reaction ?
      Update Soon!

      • Sairish on October 26, 2017 5:28 pm

        hello rhea di
        thank a lot for the appreciation.
        yeahh.. annika is cute ..
        do read the next
        link’s here
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/simple-love-story-ts-shot-6/comment-page-1/#comment-5385073
        love you loads
        Sairish

    7. alekhika20 on October 25, 2017 10:50 am

      Awesome update

      • Sairish on October 26, 2017 5:29 pm

        thanks a lot alekhika di

    8. Aashi9 on October 25, 2017 11:10 am

      It’s a beautiful chapter. Wow?? Anika’s day dreaming was hilarious ???? I’d love to know know who is Shivaay’s love. Waiting for next chapter. Update soon.?

      • Sairish on October 26, 2017 5:32 pm

        Aashi dii
        thanks a lot for all your love and support.
        wanna know shivaay’s love then
        have to read the next one
        link’s here
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/simple-love-story-ts-shot-6/comment-page-1/#comment-5385073
        love you loads
        Sairish here

    9. Niriha on October 25, 2017 1:17 pm

      Awesome fabulous update dear..waiting 4 next update soon

      • Sairish on October 26, 2017 5:32 pm

        hello niri di
        thanks a lot yaar!
        Sairish here

    10. UF3355 on October 25, 2017 1:18 pm

      AWESOME EXCELLENT INTERESTING SUPERB??????
      Take Care And Stay Safe?

      • Sairish on October 26, 2017 5:33 pm

        thanks a lot UF dearrr
        means a lot
        Sairish here

    11. SatyendraSharma on October 25, 2017 2:34 pm

      Anika’s day dreaming part was awesome…post soon

      • Sairish on October 26, 2017 5:35 pm

        hello ayush di
        I’m glad you liked it.
        do read the next one
        link’s here
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/simple-love-story-ts-shot-6/comment-page-1/#comment-5385073
        Sairish here

    12. Zaveesha on October 25, 2017 3:49 pm

      Amazing one cutiepie….
      Everything is going great..just be positive..nd believe on yourself…
      Best wishes nd love…

      • Sairish on October 26, 2017 5:37 pm

        AAPIIII
        yaar!..i love you sooo muchh
        thanks a ton for these encouraging words of yours .
        read the next one too
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/simple-love-story-ts-shot-6/comment-page-1/#comment-5385073
        Ioads of love
        Sairish here

    13. qwerty123 on October 25, 2017 4:04 pm

      ?

      • Sairish on October 26, 2017 5:40 pm

        huh qwerty dear
        I’m soo soo VERYY happy that you commented . it reallllly meant a lot to me
        Seriously THANK YOU .
        please read the next one as well
        link’s here
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/simple-love-story-ts-shot-6/comment-page-1/#comment-5385073
        or if you would like to read more if it
        link for my works have been given at the top of the chapter
        All of my love
        sairish

      • Sairish on October 26, 2017 5:41 pm

        it’s…
        hello qwerty dear
        sorry AUTOCORRECT

    14. nikita_jai29 on October 25, 2017 5:05 pm

      It is awesome dear

      • Sairish on October 26, 2017 5:43 pm

        hello Nikki di
        thanks a ton diii
        loads of love and do read the next one if haven’t
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/simple-love-story-ts-shot-6/comment-page-1/#comment-5385073
        love
        Sairish here

    15. VHM on October 25, 2017 11:19 pm

      fabulous Saiiirriiiiishhhhhhhhhhh……..you are youngest writer by age but one of the awesomest writer by talent….keep going…true…how did i miss this shot …so sorry being so late….hadn’t i read your reply on the previous shot i would have missed this episode and would had waited for long…….thank you for letting me know…when will you be posting the next episode? loads of love…keep smiling and take care

      • Sairish on October 26, 2017 5:47 pm

        hello vhm di
        well.. .I’m just too speechless what to say
        such a big remark from you ,one of the best writers here
        I definitely heart melting
        I’m……just too happieee

        no problem it do happens …can understand very well…
        I feel you’ve read the next one too..
        anyways it’s already published
        loads and loads of love
        Sairish

    16. Niyati on October 29, 2017 10:46 am

      Sairu…..it’s awesome…I know I am late….sorry for that….busy with studies & school…..it’s a beautiful chapter…loved it completely & u too ??

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