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Home»Fan Fiction»A SIMPLE LOVE STORY ( LAST )- BY HELLYFAN
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A SIMPLE LOVE STORY ( LAST )- BY HELLYFAN

hellyfanBy hellyfanSeptember 19, 201742 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello everyone
I m back with last shot of A SIMPLE LOVE STORY…
Sorry for late….
Sooo let’s begin…..
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LINK:
Let’s continue
Next morning
Swara and sanskaar came down and he was just teasing her secretly and she was blushing like hell.
Then swara came in kitchen and started preparing breakfast . suddenly sanskar came and started his drama cum romance as sujata was also there.
SANSKAAR- dost please make halwa … please
SWARA- no not today
SANSKAAR started crying sitting on a chair next to her.
SWARA (thinks)- such a dramebaaz…huhhh
Seeing him Ragini and Sujata were laughing because it was his routine when swara says no for something but Swara was shocked and numb because sanskaar was silently caressing her waist under her saree… (what a shameless creature mami or sister in law k samne romace..)
SANSKAAR (holding her bare waist and caressing it seductively ..) please na dost
SWARA- han han ok I will make halwa you go (in a low voice) sanskaar please leave me …. Please
Seeing her pleading he smiled and left..
Like this time passed…. days turned into months and both were living happily with eachother.. their love increased day by day .
After 5 months
There is a function going on in MM.. it is the birthday party of SANSKAAR’s DADI.

A beautiful girl in blue saree is welcoming all the guests… and everyone is praising her…..
LADY 1- sujata ji your daughter in law is very sanskari.
LADY 2-han ji see how she managed the whole house warna kon ladki without husband k support k rehti h aaj k tym m.
SUJATA ( overwhelmed )- hmmm I know that my SWARA is the best.

Like this everyone was talking and on the other side
SWARA- I m feeling hell tired today and very restless too … ohh god help Sanskaar to reveal the truth safely.
SUJATA- swara beta where is sanskaar..
SWARA (Stammering )- wo ma wo…yaah he is sleeping he was feeling tired
SUJATA- ok beta..
Swara signs in relief
Now its cake cutting tym and everyone was clapping suddenly Swara faints
SUJATA- ohh god I told her to eat something but no… she is such a careless girl. Hey bhagwan laksh chore swara ko utha or room m le chal or ragini tu doctor ko bula…..
Suddenly a girl comes in front and says- I m doctor let me check her
She checks swara and comes out
Doctor- sujata ji congratulations .. ur going to be a dadi soon Swara is 1 month pregnant .
Sujata and all family members get shocked in mean time swara comes out and was about to go
SUJATA called her.

SUJATA- SWARA (shouts) chii today I m ashamed to call u my daughter
SWARA( shocked)- ma.. par hua kya..
SUJATA- ma mat bol… u did this with us .. chii we thought that u sacrificed ur life for sanskaar but u r doing ayashiyan ( profligacy) with ur lover…
SWARA ( on a verge of tears )… ma ye aap kya kh rhe ho..
Everyone started gossiping .
SUJATA ( with disgust )- kiska ganda khoon paal rhi tu … tell me
SWARA ( still not getting anything and crying vigorously )- ma I m not getting anything.. someone please tell me ragini tujhe to pta hoga( ragini made a disgusting face like she did a crime ) laksh u tell na
Before she can ask someone else she felt a burning sensation on her cheek ,,,,, yes Sujata slapped her…
SUJATA (angry)- just get lost from my house … I said get out ..U don’t deserve living in this house .. what u thought haan that we will never come to know that ur pregnant with someone’s child …you played with us … are mujhe to tabhi samajh jana chaiye tha when u said a yes for marriage ..

Swara gets happy as well as shocked ….. happy because she is pregnant and shocked because of there thinking …
SWARA ( still crying)- ma believe me ..its not any illegal child … ma its ur
Suddenly Sujata pushed her and she was about to fall but someone save her in the nick of time … he is none other than ACP SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI
SWARA ( with a relief )- sanskaar
SANSKAAR- ( cupping her face) swara why are u crying …
SWARA (still crying and sobbing like a kid)- sanskaar see na what ma is saying ….she she is saying that our baby is illegal and its not your ( this line made her cry vigorously ).
SANSKAAR ( happy because of her pregnancy )- shhh …. No jaan don’t cry ….. mera bacha why are u crying han calm down ( hugs her and she sobs)
Everyone gets shocked seeing Sanskaar in his uniform …

SUJATA (shocked)- sanskaar beta ur fine…
Everyone questions him the same but he just ignored everyone ..
SANSKAAR ( rudely shouts)- constable … arrest ms. Janki ( sanskaar’s bua)
Listening him everyone gets another shock that why he is arresting her.
ms. Janki- what I did..
SANSKAAR- what you did.. u tried to kill me my mother oh no sry my soo called mother and tried to defame us and take our property ( everyone gets shocked listening to this revealation) I have proofs against you .. and even arrest warrant … rest we will talk in police station .
Constable arrest her….
The police takes her and he takes swara and was about to go
SUJATA- beta what are u doing… THIS GIRL…
SANSKAAR ( shouts)- maaaa.. THIS GIRL have some name and that is SWARA SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI ….and yaah one last thing whatever she is saying is true…
And now she is tired and need rest..
He leave with a stern face
SUJATA- I m sryy beta… she cries
All the family members left to there rooms being ashamed because they knew what is there mistake

Time takes a leap of 8 months and the screen shifts to a hospital.
A lady is seen holding 2 babies in her hands and a man is just admiring 3 of them or we can say his small family…
SANSKAAR- thank you swara for these two beautiful gifts to me..
SWARA- but still I want something
SANSKAAR- why are u asking ..tell me ..
SWARA- sanskaar I know that u can’t forgive them but just talk to them.. we will live separate but please include them in our happiness please… its there right too
As we know he can’t deny her …so he just talked to them …( guys I don’t want to forgive them sryy)

AT HOME… THEIR SWEET HOME
In night.. on bed
SWARA- thank u soo much I love u..
SANSKAAR- I know and I love u too
And they were about to kiss but the twins started crying ….
SANSKAAR- ha ha ha mere romance k dushamans abi se hi jealously start and yes my babies
BOTH TOGETHER – WE LOVE U TOO

AND SCREEN BLURS ON THEIR HAPPY FACES …
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DONE… AS U ALL KNOW IT WAS MY VERY FIRST ATTEMPT AND I COMPLETED IT…SO PLEASE FORGIVE ME FOR GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES
AND IT WAS THE END EVERYONE PLEASE COMMENT LAST TIME .. IF U R NOT ABLE TO COMMENT JUST MESSAGE ME PERSONALLY .. ONLY ONE SMILE WILL BE ENOUGH FOR ME…..
now tata bye bye take care ….love u all and ,,,,
THANK You for ur support

Your~ simran

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    42 Comments

    1. Mars on September 19, 2017 7:44 am

      Awesome dear I loved it. Do come with new story I will be waiting??????

      • hellyfan on September 19, 2017 1:47 pm

        thank u soo much dii
        will try to come with a new story

    2. Febi on September 19, 2017 8:15 am

      Nice dear

      • hellyfan on September 19, 2017 1:47 pm

        thank u soo much dii

    3. Rachna on September 19, 2017 10:23 am

      Awsm

      • hellyfan on September 19, 2017 1:48 pm

        thank u soo much dii

    4. Anu Rathore on September 19, 2017 11:14 am

      Awesome

      • hellyfan on September 19, 2017 1:48 pm

        thank u soo much anu

    5. Milestone on September 19, 2017 12:59 pm

      Awesome dear…..

      • hellyfan on September 19, 2017 1:48 pm

        thank u soo much dii..

    6. Kumu on September 19, 2017 2:46 pm

      Awesome..tc..

      • hellyfan on September 21, 2017 12:25 am

        thank u soo much dear

    7. Sus on September 19, 2017 3:36 pm

      awesome dear

      • hellyfan on September 21, 2017 1:19 am

        thank u soo much dear

    8. anu on September 19, 2017 3:37 pm

      awesome come with new story

      • hellyfan on September 21, 2017 12:24 am

        thank u soo much dear
        will definitely try.. thank u once again

    9. Stg on September 19, 2017 4:21 pm

      Awesome ??

      • hellyfan on September 21, 2017 1:19 am

        thank u soo much dear stg

    10. independent on September 19, 2017 4:32 pm

      Loved it

      • hellyfan on September 21, 2017 1:20 am

        aww thank u soo much dear Independent

    11. Vanisha on September 19, 2017 7:50 pm

      Awesome …..loved the story….do come with a new story
      Would be waiting???

      • hellyfan on September 21, 2017 1:21 am

        thank u soo much dear vanisha
        will definitely try.. thank u once again

    12. AbrahamEzra on September 19, 2017 8:57 pm

      Loved it dosth. At last swasan got a sweet cute family.

      • hellyfan on September 21, 2017 1:22 am

        haha thank u soo much dear friend ezra…
        i love their cute family only ..
        not that dozen people

    13. Tani on September 19, 2017 10:59 pm

      Nice

      • hellyfan on September 21, 2017 1:23 am

        thank u soo much Tani

    14. yamee on September 20, 2017 1:03 am

      Awesome….

      • hellyfan on September 21, 2017 1:23 am

        thank u soo much dear Yamee

    15. Chaitu on September 20, 2017 7:30 am

      Awesome dear loved it come up with another swasan story

      • hellyfan on September 21, 2017 1:24 am

        thank u soo much dear Chaitu
        will definitely try.. thank u once again

    16. Anniya on September 20, 2017 8:41 am

      Sorry for such late cmnt, I was stuck somewhere that’s why not get time. By chance when I opened my Gmail I got to know that you posted it not only but also ended it whyyyy you end so soon see I am angry from you now I wanted more and more…. Waise I can okay if you again come with new story but yes only you have time.
      About this story it’s just fabulous and we’ll written. The way you presented each and every thing was perfect. Specially this part Sanskar’s naughtiness, and Swara blush just superb. Glad Sanskar didn’t forgave anyone they should ask Swara before blaming her but no just character certificate.

      • hellyfan on September 21, 2017 1:31 am

        its ok dii don’t be sorry….
        haha as u know it was a ss so due to my exams i thought why not to make it a six shot
        so i did it ..
        don’t be angry di .. sorry
        and i will try for a new story..
        and omg thank u soo much for praising me but its because of u only warna m to post karne hi nahi wali thi 2nd part ……
        so thanks to u..
        haha it was my wish to not to forgive them warna sanskaar to dyalu hi h.. glad u liked it

    17. Soujanya on September 20, 2017 9:21 am

      Awesome….

      • hellyfan on September 21, 2017 1:32 am

        thank u soo much dear

    18. AnuAnn on September 20, 2017 3:52 pm

      just suprb yaar

      • hellyfan on September 21, 2017 1:33 am

        thank u soo much dear anu for being a part of this journey

    19. rini on September 20, 2017 10:59 pm

      superb nice ff

      • hellyfan on September 21, 2017 1:34 am

        thank u soo much dear
        Rini

    20. gayathri.visu on September 28, 2017 8:05 pm

      Sorry for veryyyyy late comment dear.
      Fabulous story…..I loved it. This part is awesome….lil cute Swasan’s romance….Sanskaar’s support for swara….Sanakaar’s decision……lovely part dear!
      Don’t know if u started another story or not….if not then come back soon.

      • hellyfan on September 29, 2017 9:20 pm

        its ok dear … i can understand …and thank you soo much
        no no i haven’t started another story …but i will definitely try

    21. sanchi on October 2, 2017 6:17 pm

      loved this cute story

    22. ost on October 2, 2017 6:18 pm

      it was not that simple girl… but u rocked it

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