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A SIMPLE AND CUTE LOVE OF TWO LOVERS-A RAGLAK TS BY RIYA MITRA (Shot 9)

Hi guys, I am back ??.. Thank you everyone for commenting in the previous shot. Now let’s move inside the ff.

Link of all the previous shots:
Intro
prologue
shot 1
shot 2
shot 2 b
shot 3
shot 4
shot 5
shot 6
shot 7
shot 8

Recap-Ragini, Daksh and Mansi entered into MM by wearing masks. Laksh said to Annapurna that they are dance performers. Ragini got to know that Sanskar is Laksh’s cousin. Then Raglak got happy seeing Daksh and Uttara happy.

Today

Laksh-So let’s begin the dance.

Laksh sings…
Teri banegi ye dulhania dulhania 

[This bride will be yours]

Dulhania, dulhania-2 

[Bride, bride-2]

Sharmaye sharmaye dulhania dulhania 

[This shy bride]

Dulhania, dulhania 

[Bride, bride]

Laksh holds Daksh’s hand and does bhangra with him. Then Laksh goes to Uttara and pulls her nose.

Daksh sings…

Raat ye aayi hai naachenge hum 

[We’ll dance this night away]

Daksh dances.

Laksh sings…

Teri sagayi hai naachenge hum 

[We’ll dance at your engagement today]

Laksh points towards Daksh confusing Annapurna.

Nikhil sings…

Naachenge sang mein dulhania dulhania 

[The bride will dance too]

Both grab Uttara towards the dance floor and she too dances. Laksh pulls Ragini towards him.

Dulhania, dulhania 

[Bride, bride]

Kyun tere chehre pe tham gayi ye nazar 

[Why has my glance stopped at your face]

He holds her by waist and both move in slow motion.

Ragini sings…

Hosh kyun ud gayi yeh hua kya asar 

[Why have I lost my senses]

She pushes Laksh and twirls around him. Nikhil, Laksh and Daksh spin and sit on knees with extended legs. Mansi keeps foot on Nikhil’s leg, Uttara on Daksh’s and Ragini on Laksh’s.

Daksh sings…

Sajaan ki hogayee sajaaniya sajaaniya

[the sweetheart belongs to her beloved]

Daksh kisses Uttara’s foot while Laksh caresses Ragini’s foot with his finger.

Nikhil sings…

Sajaanya, sajaanya-2

[Beloved, beloved-2]

Song ends and Nikhil sees that Mansi has fallen on floor as her foot got twisted. He keeps hand on her shoulder and picks her up and takes her to his room. And everybody claps at the dance. While everyone gets busy Laksh grabs Ragini’s hand and takes her to a corner.

Laksh-Now remove your mask and let me see you.
Ragini (shows him thumb)-No way…
Laksh-Why?
Ragini-My wish.

She laughs and is about to go but Laksh grabs her hand and pins her to a wall. Laksh stealthily slides the mask from Ragini’s face whose eyes are shut and she is looking like a divine beauty…. Laksh smiles and kisses her forehead. Ragini shys and hugs him. Laksh breaks the hug and tries to go but Ragini holds his hand.

Ragini-Why are you running away from me?
Laksh-I can not loose my friendship again…
Ragini (cups his face)-You won’t.. Never…

Saying so she places her lips on his lips and he places his hands on her waist and pulls her. Both shares a passionate soft kiss. Expressing their love which in no time becomes intense and Laksh presses her waist tightly and Ragini pulls his hair. Both gets apart due to lack of oxygen and smilingly joins their heads…

Ragini-Now I think we should leave or else…
Laksh-Yeah sure..

Ragini tries to go but she slips and falls. Laksh comes to her and makes her sit on a chair. He massages Ragini’s leg and Ragini is lost in Laksh’s eyes and is loving his care and compassion for her.

Ragini’s POV
I can’t believe this, this Laksh is so cute and nice. All I just want to do is to kiss him on his lips again. Wait a minute, I can’t believe this that I kissed him and that too on his lips.. Wow! My first kiss… I don’t know what’s wrong with me or why am I behaving like this but all I want to do is to forget everything and be in his embrace forever..

Ragini’s thoughts gets disturbed by a sweet, loving and caring voice which is Laksh’s voice.

Laksh-Ragini are you fine? Are you hurt? If so then tell me I will apply ointment. Hey come on tell me quickly.. God! Damn it! Why aren’t you answering?
Ragini-Laksh at first let me speak. You are continuously asking me and not even giving me the chance to say something.
Laksh-Ok say..
Ragini (smiles)-Calm down Laksh nothing has happened to me. But I think that you should atleast go down otherwise… You know..
Laksh-Yes don’t worry today Daksh and Uttara’s engagement will be done.

Laksh leaves for downstairs waving Ragini goodbye. Ragini smiles.

At downstairs

Annapurna Devi is happy seeing Uttara so happy but Ramprasad knows that something is fishy.

Ramprasad-Jiji I think that.. Isn’t Uttara too much happy today.. Like you know that she loves Daksh and not Veer.
Annapurna-I agree that something is wrong.

Then Annapurna sees that the dance performers are none other than Daksh and Mansi as they already removed their masks. Then Daksh walks towards Uttara and gives her a red rose and is about to put a ring on Uttara’s finger when Annapurna Devi comes and pushes Daksh and takes his ring from him. She angrily sees Mansi and pulls her hair and slaps and punches both of them. Laksh sees this and is heading to stop his mom when Annapurna signalled her guards to stop both Laksh and Uttara. Annapurna Devi is ruthlessly beating them (Daksh and Mansi) up when suddenly she stops and screams…

Annapurna (shouts)-Wait, where is the third dancer?

Laksh, Daksh, Uttara and Mansi are really got scared hearing Annapurna Devi remembering the third dancer/Ragini while Nikhil is mesmerized too see Mansi.

Annapurna-I understood who is the third dancer. She is none other than that Ragini. Laksh, bring Ragini here. I know that you know where she is right now. Bring her, bring her. Guards, leave Laksh.

Laksh is really very shocked and is feeling helpless as he can’t disobey his mom. Then Daksh pushes those guards and grabs Mansi’s hand and runs to upstairs where Ragini is present. Daksh tells Mansi and Ragini to leave immediately.

Ragini-Why bhai? What happen?
Daksh-Now it’s not the time to explain everything to you. You go with Mansi she’ll tell everything to you. And Mansi you take her with you at home because I can’t control it. Now Annapurna Devi is gone.
Ragini-But…

Just then Annapurna comes and slaps Ragini. She drags her to downstairs and then punches her and kicks her. Ragini isn’t using her self defence because she respects elders. Daksh and Laksh now can’t handle this all and both pushes Annapurna. Daksh angrily storms out of her house taking Uttara, Mansi and Ragini. They heads towards a temple and Uttara and Daksh gets married. After their marriage got completed they takes blessings from god and the priest and leaves for their home.

At Gadodia Mansion

Mansi goes into the house and asks Daksh, Uttara and Ragini to wait outside. She prepares aarti. Shekhar and Janki got confused until they sees that Daksh is married to Uttara. They all are really very happy. They knows Uttara from a long time and likes her a lot.

Janki-Wait Mansi.

Mansi got confused.

Janki-She is my bahu so I’ll do the aarti.

Everybody gets happy and Janki goes and does the aarti. She kisses Uttara on her forehand and pulls Daksh’s ear.

Janki-You got my bahu and didn’t even think to inform me? By the way I like her a lot. No sorry I love her a lot as she is my another daughter.
Shekhar-I agree that we got a wonderful bahu.
Ragini-Well, obviously it had to happen as it’s my bro’s choice after all.

Everybody smiles and Daksh and Uttara takes blessings from the elders. Sneha comes to downstairs and gets happy seing all these. Just then Uttara sees some goons who comes inside their house and forcefully makes Daksh to smell something which makes him unconscious. Ragini, Mansi and everybody tries to stop them but they can’t as some goons are not allowing them to go. The goons then ties everybody with a rope. Then they drags Daksh and everyone watches this helplessly because they are tied up now. They takes Uttara too with them.

And the episode ends..

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Riya_Mitra

Relationships are like birds. If you hold them tightly they will die. If you hold them loosely they will fly. But if you hold them with care they will remain with you forever.

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