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A SIMPLE AND CUTE LOVE OF TWO LOVERS-A RAGLAK TS BY RIYA MITRA (Shot 5)

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Recap-Ragini won her case. Later on, at night some goons beat Ragini. Laksh came there and saved Ragini from the goons and beat them up. When Ragini saw Laksh’s concern for her, a soft corner grew up in Ragini’s heart for Laksh.

Laksh comes home. He is drunk and is bleeding badly due to the fight. He is not able to walk properly but tries to walk but falls causing a big sound. Hearing the sound Annapurna Devi comes with her rifle thinking it’s an intruder. She sees her son and starts her sentimental drama.

Annapurna Devi-Laksh beta what has happened to you? Are you fine?
Ramprasad-Who dares to hit my nephew and Annapurna Devi’s son? I will kill that person just tell me.

Sahil comes runningly and screams

Sahil-Bhai you have a phone call..

Laksh is still drunk but answers to the phone call.

Laksh-Hello!

The person who has called Laksh is none other than Daksh.

Daksh-Laksh listen to me. I know we have so much differences between us. But anyways leave the past. I just want to say thanks to you for saving my sister’s life.
Laksh-It’s ok. By the way how is she now?
Daksh-She is fine now and tomorrow you can go to meet her at the hospital.

Saying so he cuts the call.

Laksh goes to his room happily ignoring Annapurna and Ramprasad’s questions. He is struggling to walk but he manages. Annapurna gets tensed and asks to Sahil…

Annapurna-Sahil what happened?

Sahil tells everything to her and leaves for his room. Annapurna gets mad and tells in full rage to her bro…

Annapurna-Oh.. So a girl is responsible for this condition of my son? Just wait and watch what I will do to her… What’s her name Ram?
Ramprasad-Ragini…

Annapurna smirks.

Next morning

Laksh goes to meet Ragini at the hospital. He goes to her cabin.

Laksh-Ragini… How are you feeling now?
Ragini-I’m fine but what about you? What have you done to yourself?
Laksh-What have I done to myself? I’m all fine it’s you who is in the hospital not me.
Ragini-No, Sahil had called me today at morning and told me about yesterday’s condition of yours. Please take care of yourself. By the way thanks.
Laksh-No need and if you want to do a favour then please accept my friendship after all I was after your friendship for 2 years, 3 months, 15 days and 8 hours.

Ragini is shocked. Then she composes herself.

Ragini-Yes!

She forwards her hand in front of Laksh. He also brings his hand forward and both shakes.

On the other side Daksh is shown standing outside of Ragini’s cabin and is listening Raglak’s talks. Daksh then goes into a flashback.

Flashback….

Two boys are shown in a college. And they are none other than Laksh and Daksh as young boys who are in the college.

Laksh-Daksh you know what I love my dad. He is the best!! Mr. Durgaprasad Maheshwari my dad, I feel proud by his name. But I also love my mom.
Daksh-Even I also do the same but I like my mom a little bit more cause I’m her laadla!

Then Laksh and Daksh enters inside their classroom. They praises their mom and dad. Laksh gets a call from DP.

Laksh-Hey dad… Yes I’m in college… I’m fine… Thanks… Ok bye…

Daksh smiles at the act

Laksh and Daksh were remarkable in studies. They used to compete each other well in competitions and shared a tight bond.

Next day when Laksh was going back from college to home, he was attacked by some goons when Daksh made an entry and both fought back and shoo the goons off. Then they shaked their hands and hugged each other.

Laksh-Thanks.
Daksh-No need of it as we are friends forever.

Laksh smiled and again hugged Daksh

Next day Daksh was going somewhere when he saw that some men were beating a man. He couldn’t see the face of the man whom the men were beating. He started going to that direction when one man took out a knife and stabbed that man. Daksh was shocked. Then those goons turned back and came to Daksh.

One goon-Sir our work is finished. See.. Durgaprasad Maheshwari is no more now.

The person who was stabbed is none other than DP. Daksh was shocked.

On the other side Laksh was running and came to that spot and was shocked after listening Daksh and the goon’s conversation. Annapurna also came and she was also shocked.

Daksh (to the goon)-What you all are saying? I didn’t tell you all to do this.
One goon-What you are saying sir? You only gave us money to do all these things. Because you wanted to take Durgaprasad’s properties.

Laksh started clapping.

Laksh-Waah! Daksh, waah! You have done a great job… I’m feeling proud of myself for making a friend like you who is a greedy, liar, cheater. And who can kill his friend’s father just for his wealth.
Daksh-No Laksh. Believe me. I haven’t done all this. I’m your best friend.

Laksh slapped Daksh.

Laksh-Friend???? Do you really know what is the meaning of this word?

Annapurna, who was watching all this from a long time now broke down and started crying.

Annapurna-Why you have done this to us Daksh? Why you have done this? What wrong we did with you?
Daksh-Aunty believe me I haven’t done anything..
Laksh (having tears in his eyes)-Oh really? Then what are you doing here now? Tell me damn it!
Daksh-I was passing from here when I saw this. But how come you know?
Laksh-Oh you were passing from here? Just don’t talk rubbish Daksh… And yeah you want to know that how we came to know about all this.. Then listen me and mom both got a phone call that you are beating my dad. Now I think your confusion got clear?
Annapurna-Let me call the police..

Daksh got angry because Laksh was accusing him unnecessarily and was not listening to him.

Daksh-Wait aunty! Do you have any proof? A big NO… So you can’t call the police.

Both Annapurna and Laksh got stunned by these words of Daksh. Now they are sure that Daksh has done all this. Annapurna and Laksh didn’t utter a word.

On the other side one person is shown. His face is not shown.

Person-My mission is completed now. Now Daksh and Laksh are no more friends. I’ve snatched your best friend from you Laksh. I can’t tolerate your happiness. I hate you Laksh. I hate you a lot.

He then smirks and leaves.

Flashback ends…

Daksh comes back to his senses when he hears Laksh’s voice. Laksh comes outside.

Daksh-Thanks for saving Ragini.
Laksh-Hmm..
Daksh-Laksh.. Can we be friends again?
Laksh-You think so?

Daksh sighs.

Laksh-You might have forgot everything but me… I remember that day when my life had changed because of you.
Daksh-It wasn’t me.. Trust me..
Laksh-Trust? And you? Not at all… It was you only who had broke my trust. I got a chance to kill you 2 years ago but I couldn’t. The reason is Ragini. I love her Daksh. Her love is overpowering my hate for you. But if you’ll try to come between us then my hatred will be shown in the form of your death. I promise…

Laksh leaves from there.

Daksh-Taht day it wasn’t my fault Laksh. But since that day you have changed. You really have changed a lot. After that day Annapurna aunty had struggled and now she is a famous business woman. Now she is ANNAPURNA DEVI. She had sent you Australia for your studies and you had gone far away from me. And today when you are near me then also a very big distance in there between us. Huh!! And after that when you came back Annapurna aunty had made your admission in Ragini’s college to study law. She now becomes this much bad that the college didn’t want to give you admission because you are a Science student. But she had threatened to kill them and only for that they had taken your admission. Annapurna aunty is now no more that old Annapurna aunty who used to love me a lot. If I’ll get to know that who was the person who had killed Durgaprasad uncle, then I swear I would kill that person.

Daksh cries and the episode ends.

Now tell me how was it? Was it interesting? And who the person might be who had killed DP? Keep your investigation on about this matter ???.. And if you will get to know then tell it to me and don’t forget to drop your comments and tell me your opinions/feedbacks about this part. I am waiting for your comments… Love you all ???

Riya_Mitra

Relationships are like birds. If you hold them tightly they will die. If you hold them loosely they will fly. But if you hold them with care they will remain with you forever.

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