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Home»Fan Fiction»A SIMPLE AND CUTE LOVE OF TWO LOVERS-A RAGLAK TS BY RIYA MITRA (Shot 4)
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A SIMPLE AND CUTE LOVE OF TWO LOVERS-A RAGLAK TS BY RIYA MITRA (Shot 4)

Riya_MitraBy Riya_MitraSeptember 4, 201759 Comments7 Mins Read
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I am back guys!!! How are you all? Did you all miss me and my ffs? I don’t know about you all but I missed you all a lot. And your lovely comments as well. Thanks a lot everyone for commenting in the previous shot. And for commenting in my new story too. I am so glad by your response. Anyways here is the next part. Hope you all will like this.

Link of all the previous shots:Here

Recap-2 years leap. Ragini became a lawyer. Sanskar helped Ragini to find evidence about her case. Laksh was jealous for Ragini and Sanskar’s friendship.

Sneha is shown waiting for Sahil. She is repeatedly looking at her watch. She is about to leave when someone holds her hand and brings her closer. The person turns out to be Sahil.

Sneha-Where you had been?
Sahil-For a beautiful girl I went to buy a beautiful bouquet.

He shows a beautiful bouquet of flowers to Sneha.

Sahil-This is for you.
Sneha-Wow! This is very beautiful. By the way suddenly you got romantic? Any special reason?
Sahil-You will get to know very soon.

Then both leaves from there in Sahil’s car.

After 5 days at the court

Ragini is shown looking at the court. She then gulps and enters inside the court. She is late and sees that everyone is waiting for her.

Judge-Ms. Ragini you’ve wasted lots of time of court. You are too much late. Now please hurry up.

Yuvraj smirks at Ragini. She watches him but ignores.

Ragini-Sorry sir.. I am late because I’ve got a very important evidence which would let the court to know that my client has got struck in a case of dowry. And only for this evidence I got late. Again I’m asking sorry to the court. Anyways the evidence is a video which I would like to present…
Judge-Yes sure.

The video is shown and it shows that Mr. Agarwal is abusing his wife and is asking for jewellery and money to keep their married life safe.

Ragini-Sir, now I think everything is clear to you?
Judge-After watching the video, court is declaring that Mr. Agarwal is guilty and he will be sentenced into the jail for 3 years.

Yuvraj looks at Ragini who is already smirking at him. Yuvraj leaves from there. Ragini is very happy and everyone is thanking her and congratulating her.

At night
Ragini is tired. But she is driving her car very fastly and is thinking that when she will reach at her house because it’s almost midnight. And she is more worried because Sneha is with her. Suddenly Ragini’s car breaks down and Ragini gets down from the car to check it.

Sneha (in a taunting voice)-Wow! Di your car is so irritated by you. Huhh!! Di this is a car not an aeroplane.
Ragini-Very funny!!

Just then Laksh’s car is passing by and Sahil is also there with him.

Sahil-Bhai stop!!!

Laksh presses the break causing Sahil to bump with his head.

Laksh-What man?
Sahil-Look there! Isn’t that Sneha and…
Laksh-Ragini..
Sahil-Yes. Let’s go there.

Laksh goes with Sahil. Sneha is overwhelmed after seeing Sahil.

Sahil-Sneha baby what are you doing here at this time?

Ragini is shocked by Sahil’s words.

Ragini-What is this Sneha? Why he is calling you in this way?
Sahil-Listen Miss. I don’t even care about anyone so please stay out from this matter. First of all you shouldn’t interfere in other people’s matter and in your way it is “Mind your own business”. So please remember this sentence. This is what you always use to say to my bro Laksh.
Laksh-Sahil stop it!
Ragini-Just shut up! And Sneha you tell me about this idiot and your relationship and since when you’ve started hiding things from me and bhai?
Sneha (a tear escapes from her eye)-Sorry di I hide this big thing from you but I know the big distance and everything which had happened 2 years ago, even still happening between you
and… Laksh.
Ragini-Sneha did you think because of some person I would sacrifice your happiness?

Laksh feels bad when Ragini called him ‘some person’. But he avoids.

Sneha-No di never…

She hugs Ragini tightly. Ragini hugs her back.

Laksh-Now let’s get back to the point. Come on sit inside I’ll drop you off.
Ragini-No I’m fine.

Saying that she leaves.

Sahil-Wow! What’s wrong with her? She is always so mean.
Sneha-Talk with respect she is my di.
Laksh-Talk properly Sahil. Anyways you drop Sneha to her house while I’m following Ragini.

Sahil and Sneha leaves with the car. Laksh then starts following Ragini.

Ragini walking. She is upset and is thinking that she is a bad sister. Just then 12 goons comes up to Ragini and starts to tease her. But Ragini is lost in her own world (thoughts). Then one of the goon holds Ragini’s hand and pulls her closer to him. Ragini comes back to reality and then sees that guy so close to her, which makes her angry. She slaps him so hardly. The goon jerks and holds her hardly and drags her towards a forest by holding her hair tightly. Ragini is kicking him on his leg but nothing works. Then the goon slaps her hardly on her cheek which makes her to fall on the ground. She screams loudly.

Laksh hears her scream and runs to that direction from where her screams are coming.

On the other hand, all the goons then surrounds Ragini who is crying in pain.

1 goon-We just wanted to tease you but you slapped one of our friend so now you will face the worst pain. More than this pain from which you are going through right now. So get ready for the horrible sight.

Then everybody starts to kick her, pull her hair, punch her and beat her mercilessly.

Laksh sees this and gets hell angry. He goes up to the goons and beats them up ruthlessly. Almost everyone is bleeding really very badly. Just then two of the goons comes to Ragini and holds her both the hands. Ragini tries to shoo them off but fails to do so. One of the goon hits her with a metal rod on her leg. Ragini screams soooooo loudly and falls because she can’t balance herself and can’t walk also.

Laksh is super angry. He loads his gun and shoots them. The goons are alredy dead but Laksh continues to shoot them.

Ragini is hell shocked after seeing this shade of Laksh.

Ragini (shouts)-What the hell did you do? Now what will we do with these dead bodies?
Laksh-Nothing will happen. Just leave them and believe me nothing will happen.

Laksh then carries Ragini and makes her sit in a bench which is there at the side of the road. He then ties his handkerchief around her foot from where the blood is oozing out. Ragini is surprised to see Laksh so caring for her. She stares at him lovingly. Then Laksh asks lift from a car which is coming. He then carries Ragini in a bridal style and goes with her to hospital in that car.

On the other side

Sneha and Sahil are on their way to reach at Sneha’s house when Laksh calls Sneha and tells her everything. Sneha stops Sahil and asks him to take her to XYZ hospital. Later, she tells everything to Sahil and after sometime calls her family and tells everything to them too.

How was it guys? Do tell me through your lovely and sweet comments. I am waiting… Love you guys ???

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    59 Comments

    1. lovely7 on September 4, 2017 4:53 pm

      Awesome

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:16 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    2. asra on September 4, 2017 7:03 pm

      awesome dear…loved it alot…eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:18 pm

        Thanks for commenting. Tc to u too dear.

    3. kitkat on September 4, 2017 7:08 pm

      finally the phase of enimity gonna end soon n friendship gonna start eventually resulting in love to blossom…..

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:21 pm

        Hahaha its true that finally the phase of enmity has ended. N about friendship n love then I’ve not yet decided about these two things. Hope u understood. Anyways thanks a lot dear for commenting.

      • kitkat on September 6, 2017 5:23 pm

        yup I do understand dear….?????thanks for replying…

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 11:21 pm

        No need to say thanks for my reply as it’s my duty to reply my readers/friends. Many things r waiting dear so just wait n read. Though I’ll end it in shot no. 10. But I will add lots of things in this ff ?.

      • kitkat on September 6, 2017 11:34 pm

        OK dear…. waiting for next shot egarly…. all the best dear…. love u sweetheart

      • Riya_Mitra on September 7, 2017 2:37 pm

        Love u too sweety…

    4. masthi on September 4, 2017 8:08 pm

      Oh its good but beating thing is sad.

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:23 pm

        Thanks for commenting n about beating then it was necessary to make Ragini understand that how much Laksh cares about her.

    5. Fairy on September 4, 2017 8:17 pm

      Oh wow riyu????? such a superbbbb uodate dr…loved it soooo much!!!! Omg it’s sooooooo awesome!!!!post nxt part soon plzzz!!!keep long n stay blessed dr..loatz of love!!!umaaah????

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:26 pm

        Thanks a lot di for commenting. N I’ll try my level best to post the next part soon. U too stay blessed di. Loads of love to u also.. Umahhhhhhh ????

    6. Anju on September 4, 2017 9:32 pm

      Awesome update

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:27 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    7. Sherin on September 4, 2017 9:45 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:27 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    8. Thahseem on September 4, 2017 9:49 pm

      Nice

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:27 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    9. Sreevijayan on September 5, 2017 1:01 am

      Awesome update dear

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:28 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    10. Ashly on September 5, 2017 8:14 am

      Fantastic awesome superb

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:32 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    11. Monisha on September 5, 2017 3:18 pm

      Superbbbb

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:33 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    12. teitokUn1718 on September 5, 2017 3:19 pm

      Superb…
      Ab toh maan jao Ragu…

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:33 pm

        Thanks for commenting. Aur Raagu bohot jald hi maan jayegi ?.

    13. Vini on September 5, 2017 3:48 pm

      Good one, keep going

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:34 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    14. Malu on September 5, 2017 4:03 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:35 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    15. Aamy on September 5, 2017 4:07 pm

      Awesome

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:35 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    16. Soumya on September 5, 2017 4:39 pm

      Superb di…..post next soon

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:36 pm

        Thanks for commenting. I will try to post next the part soon.

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:38 pm

        The* next part.

    17. Elizabethlovely on September 5, 2017 5:01 pm

      Awesome

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:37 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    18. IQRA222 on September 5, 2017 5:13 pm

      riyu di!!!!!!! it was a superb episode loved it too much!!!
      raglak moments were nice even though they were less. and a very good lesson lucky taught to the goons was fab!!
      anyways waiting for the next part eagerly!!

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:39 pm

        Thanks for commenting sissy.

    19. Raglak_fan on September 5, 2017 5:26 pm

      Fabulous dear

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:39 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    20. Arjuna on September 5, 2017 6:34 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:40 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    21. Laashya on September 5, 2017 8:56 pm

      Wonderful episode di and poor raglak and can’t wait for next episode

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:41 pm

        Thanks for commenting. N don’t call me di. I am ur friend ?.

    22. Vennila on September 5, 2017 9:07 pm

      Awesome episode

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:43 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    23. Monu on September 5, 2017 9:17 pm

      Interesting dear

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:43 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    24. Jiyani on September 5, 2017 9:37 pm

      Amazing dear….Loved it

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:47 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    25. Pearly on September 6, 2017 8:35 am

      Superb part

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:48 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    26. Ammu on September 6, 2017 3:41 pm

      I’m very sorry dear and I know I’m very late but what to do I’m busy in onam celebrations. Till it’s not over. After a long time and I really missed you and this story dear. It’s outstanding episode and Raglak scenes are superb. Laksh care towards Ragini is so cute. Hope soon Ragini will also love Laksh and if possible please unite Raglak soon. Eagerly waiting for more more Raglak scenes. Please post next part ASAP. Love you dear and take care

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 6:03 pm

        It’s ok dear no need to ask sorry. Everybody has their own problems n works in their personal life. So don’t say sorry. Even I also missed u n ur comments. U know I was waiting for ur comment n that’s why I didn’t reply to anyone. I’ll unite Raglak soon. Don’t worry for that. N yes Ragini will also love Laksh. N that thing is also coming soon. I’ll post the next part asap. Love u too n take care of urself.

    27. Zoya on September 6, 2017 4:25 pm

      Awesome

      • Riya_Mitra on September 6, 2017 5:55 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

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