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A SIMPLE AND CUTE LOVE OF TWO LOVERS-A RAGLAK TS BY RIYA MITRA (Shot 10) Last shot

Hi guys, How are you all? Thanks a lot for commenting in the previous part. I am really too much happy by your response. Now without wasting any time let’s move inside the last shot.

Recap-Raglak shared a romantic moment with each other. Annapurna came to know that the dance performancers are Ragini, Daksh and Mansi. She beat them ruthlessly. Daksh, Ragini, Uttara and Mansi escaped from MM and Daksh and Uttara got married in a temple. Later, when all the family of Gadodia Mansion were happy by seeing Daksh and Uttara married, some goons came and took Uttara and Daksh with them.

Link of all the previous shots:
Intro
prologue
shot 1
shot 2
shot 2 b
shot 3
shot 4
shot 5
shot 6
shot 7
shot 8
shot 9

Today

At Gadodia Mansion

Everybody is still in shock because so much has happened in front of them but they couldn’t do anything. Ragini is struggling to free herself from the rope. All others are too struggling. Just then Ragini sees a knife which is on the dining table. It’s for cutting fruits. She somehow manages to take the knife and with lots of difficulty she frees herself and then frees others too.

Mansi-Ragini… Are you alright?
Janki and Shekhar-Yes beta. Are you alright?
Ragini-Maa, papa, Mansi.. How can I be alright? My brother is kidnapped..
Sneha-Di you can call Laksh..
Ragini-Great idea!!

Ragini calls Laksh..

Ragini-Laksh… Do you have any idea that where is my bro?
Laksh-Why? What has happened? I’ve heard that Uttara and Daksh got married right?
Ragini-Yes.. But…

She takes a deep breath….

Ragini-Your mom’s goons had came and kidnapped my brother and took Uttara somewhere.
Laksh-What!!!!
Ragini-Yes…
Laksh-Ok you don’t worry I have an idea. You please take care of yourself and sleep now as its late already. Tomorrow we’ll go to in search of them.
Ragini-But the tension is not going Laksh.
Laksh-Ok I am coming to your home.
Ragini-What!! In this time you will come to my home?
Laksh-I mean I will come to your room.
Ragini-But how?
Laksh-That’s not your tension. You wait for twenty minutes I am coming.
Ragini-Ok..

After 20 minutes…

Ragini is tensed as twenty minutes has passed but still Laksh has not come. Just then Laksh comes to her room by a window and sees her lost in deep thoughts. He comes and hugs her from behind. Ragini gets scared.

Ragini-Who?
Laksh-Arey it’s me..
Ragini-Oh..
Laksh-Won’t you say anything to me?
Ragini-For what?
Laksh-For touching you in this way.

Ragini remains silent.

Laksh-Tell me.

No answer from Ragini.

Laksh-I know that you’ve already started loving me right?

Ragini turns towards him and hugs him tightly.

Ragini-Yes. I love you Laksh… I love you soooo much..
Laksh-I love you too jaan.
Ragini (still hugging Laksh)-But what will happen with Uttara and bhai?

Laksh breaks the hug.

Laksh-Yes.. What did I say? You don’t have to worry about that matter. It is totally my tension.
Ragini-But if it’s your tension then it’s mine too.
Laksh-That’s right!!
Ragini-Ok I won’t take tension because you are there with me. Now you go or else…
Laksh-Ya.. Ok bye.. Love you..

He gives her a flying kiss…

Ragini (smiles)-Love you too.

Laksh leaves.. Ragini takes a deep breath and goes to sleep.

Next day

At MM

Laksh wakes up and decides to confront his mom. He heads towards Annapurna’s room. He comes and sees that she is also thinking something.

Laksh-Mom why did you do this?
Annapurna-What did I do?
Laksh-Mom you know it very well that about which thing I am talking. Mom you’ve separated two people who loves each other. I will support you in everything except in this matter. You know when I’ve started loving Ragini that time also I didn’t understand the pain of Uttara. But it was Ragini who had made understand about Daksh and Uttara’s pain. And yes this thing has made me more bound to love Ragini more and more. Yes mom I love Ragini a lot and she loves me too. I can’t live without her. Mom please for my sake unite Daksh and Uttara again. Forget alk those incidents which had had happened. Which Daksh had done. Only for your daughter and my sister Uttara.

Just then Nikhil, Ramprasad and Sahil comes there too.

Nikhil-Yes bua. Laksh bhai is right at his point. You know I’ve also started loving Mansi. And she loves me too. She had confessed her love to me yesterday. And I also love her. So please bua unite Daksh and Uttara. Because my happiness also lies in that house.
Sahil-And bua I love Sneha. And she also loves me. I think you didn’t know this but we both used to love each other from a long time. And yeah I agree with Nikhil and Laksh bhai. All of our happiness lies on that house because we all love that house’s daughters only. So please bua unite Daksh and Uttara. It’s a humble request to you from all three of us.
Ramprasad-Nikhil and Sahil? You both also?
Sahil-Yes papa.
Ramprasad-When Sujata died she told me to not to make sad to you both. And I also promised her the same. But today I can’t do anything. Everything is depending on jiji and her decision.

By all these Annapurna melts.

Annapurna-Ok. If my children’s happiness is on this then I agree.

Immediately Laksh, Sahil and Nikhil goes and hugs her tightly.

Annapurna-Leave me.. Or else I’ll die today.
Laksh-Mom, don’t say in this way.
Annapurna-Ok I won’t. Anyways Ram…
Ramprasad-Yes jiji…
Annapurna-Go and release Daksh and Uttara.
Ramprasad-Ok.

Some goons is standing there. Ramprasad asks them to release Uttara and Daksh. Just then one person comes and says…

Person-But I won’t let this happen. Because I can’t see you all happy. Specially that Laksh.

Everybody turns back and is shocked to see that person. And that person is none other than Sanskar.

(Hahahaha… Kaisa jhatka laga guys??? You all have thought that the real culprit might be Rp but you all were wrong as I told you all long ago that Sanskar is very jealous with Laksh. And one more thing that if there is any Sanskar’s fan then I am so sorry for them as long back I’ve already decided this. And I can’t change my story’s plot. So pardon me for this.)

Sanskar is smirking just like a villain.

Annapurna-Means? We didn’t understand.
Sanskar-You all will understand now because I was the one who had killed Durgaprasad chacha.

Everybody is hell shocked.

Sanskar-No need to get shock in this small thing because I think you all will get more shock when you all will come to know the reason behind this.
Annapurna (tears in her eyes)-What reason?
Sanskar-I’ve done all these because I can’t see Laksh happy. I can’t see his happiness. His happiness makes me crazy, angry as hell. And bechara Daksh.. Tch tch tch tch tch… I’ve trapped him in my plan. I’ve done everything but everybody thought that Daksh is the culprit. And I intentionally arranged the plan in the way that everybody will blame him and will think that he is killer. And the same thing has happened. Because Daksh was Laksh’s best buddy. And Laksh was very happy with him. And as I said that I can’t see Laksh’s happiness. So I’ve done all these. Then the friendship between them will be finished forever. And now also I won’t let Laksh happy. I’ll kill him.
Annapurna-When your father and mother died they gave you to us (Annapurna and Durgaprasad) and told us to take care of you. We had done all those things which are a father’s and mother’s duty. I and Durgaprasad never ever compared between you and Laksh. But you?
Sanskar-Yes me.. And now I will kill him. I will kill him for sure.

Saying so he takes out a revolver and is about to shoot Laksh when Daksh comes and shoots Sanskar on his back and takes his revolver off.

Daksh-Officer, arrest him.
Annapurna-Wait Daksh…

Daksh looks at her confusingly. Annapurna goes to Sanskar and gives a tight slap on his cheek.

Annapurna-I’ve never ever thought that you can do this. Daksh take him away from my eyes.

Daksh orders some officers to take Sanskar. Then some officers comes and takes Sanskar to jail.

Annapurna-Daksh beta, please forgive me. I misunderstood you. Please forgive me.
Laksh-And me too Daksh.
Daksh-What you both are doing? Aunty, sorry I mean mom, now I am your son-in-law, and Laksh I am your brother-in-law now. Not only friends. More than that.
Laksh-You were always more than a friend for me Daksh.

Saying so he hugs Daksh. Daksh also hugs him back.

Daksh-And about forgiveness then it doesn’t suits here as we are a family.
Annapurna-Yes you are right. But one minute, how do you know about all these? Who told you?
Ramprasad-I told him. When Sanskar was telling about his true colour I called him secretly.
Annapurna-Ok so after one month Laksh and Ragini’s marriage will take place.

Everyone gets happy. Daksh informs everything to his home and there also everybody gets happy.

1 month later

A beautiful girl is in red bridal lehanga and handsome boy is in a groom’s attire is sitting and their marriage is taking place. Both of them are looking gorgeous and they are our RAGLAK. While dorning mangalsutra around Ragini’s neck Laksh says…

Laksh-Get ready Ragini.. We are going to start making babies from the first night.

Saying so he winks at her and smiles naughtily.

Ragini-We will see about that.

Now marriage is complete. Ragini goes to upstairs. Then after some time Laksh goes to upstairs. Then he tries to go to his room but Sahil and Nikhil doesn’t lets him to go.

Laksh-My cute innocent brothers let me go inside your bhabhi is waiting.
Sahil-First give us money.
Laksh-Ok fine. How much?
Nikhil-5 lakhs.
Laksh-Ok.

Then Laksh calls one servant and asks him to give five lakhs to Nikhil and Sahil. That servant does what he is asked to do.

Laksh-Now let me go.
Sahil-This much eagerness? Ok go.

Laksh goes inside his room. And here Ragini is waiting and when she sees Laksh she is having butterflies in her stomach. Laksh comes near her. He holds her chin and makes her look at himself. Then he kisses her lips and she also reponds. And then finally they consummates their marriage.

(Sorry guys I am really very bad in writing romantic parts. So isi se kaam chala lijiye sab. And now it’s totally your work to imagine whatever has happened between them ?)

Next day they both wakes up. They are lying on bed and are in each other’s embrace.

Laksh-I love you jaan.
Ragini-I love you too.

And the story ends on the smiling faces of Raglak.

So finally this ff has ended. But guys I want all your opinions about epilogue because in the previous my one friend has requested me to give epilogue. What you all want? Should I write an epilogue or not? Don’t forget to say this in your comment. Because if you all won’t agree then I can’t write. Love you all ???

Riya_Mitra

Relationships are like birds. If you hold them tightly they will die. If you hold them loosely they will fly. But if you hold them with care they will remain with you forever.

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