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Home»Fan Fiction»A SHORT STORY… RAGLAK OS BY SANSKRITI..
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A SHORT STORY… RAGLAK OS BY SANSKRITI..

ALLU_JANVIBy ALLU_JANVIJuly 29, 201755 Comments4 Mins Read
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hii gys sanskriti back…by the way my real name is janvi… guys its my first raglak os… sorry me if you find incomplete scenes…
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Her pov
i was scrolling down to see new feeds on fb…and i got a frnd request… i frnds request blog.. the request was of a boy named laksh maheshwari… it was mine senior… so i accepted his request…
as soon as i accepted his request i got a message…
hii from him…
i replied him… with hello…
and we set to talk…
we had chat for two hours… in the mean time he told a bit about him…
he was in final year… and martial art club head…
by his talks he seemed little bit flirty but a nice nature after all…
next day…
i was in canteen when he came… he acted to ignore me… i think he was just doing to attract my attention…and he was successful also…
we came and sat next to me… and we had chit chats…he cracked several jokes… and i was bursted in laughs…. the whole canteen was looking at me… it was such an awkward moment….
Now days passed..
he became my habit…like partying with him.. eating with him.. laughing with him… chatting with him… everything… even the whole college was doubting about me n laksh.. but i always said .. he is mine frnd…
one day
i was jogging when i got a call…
it was laksh
he said… i am going to Mumbai for a week…
i would be back soon..
i was unhappy…
tommorow moring he left…
and the one week was passing like a century… eberything became very boring without him.. even i had mood swings… i missed him so badly…then i realised that it is not frndship … it is love….

as soon as he came to delhi and college… i ran towards him and hugged him…
I said i love you laksh… i realised it when .. then you were not woth me… i cant imagine my life without you…. my life will became meaning less…
he pussed me away.. and said i dont love you…just go away… just go away…. and dont dare to contact me…
it broked me… it literally killed me…
i migrated to my uncle’s house…after 2 weeks.. i got a call…
it was my frnd..
he is in icu…
only that words were enough …. and i hurriedly catched flight and ran towards him…
it was city hospital…
my frnds…were on the entrance…
me: where is he…
they: icu on 4th floor..
i ran towards lift but it was taking time so i took stairs…
i was on fourth floor and rushed towards icu..
the doctor was outside..
me: can i meet him
doc: okk but dont take much time..
i been inside …
i said : laksh
he: ragini tum aagayi…
me: kyu nhi aana tha…
he: ragini can i say you something
he holded my hands…
me: sure
he: ragini for that day sorry … actually i want to confess something.. that i really love you…. i been to mumbai for tje check up … i have lungs cancer… and doctors said its too late… i dont have even a month…. ragini i dont wanted to destroy your life …. but wanted to live with you forever….but god cheated us….i reallyy lovvvv….vvveeeee y…ooo..uuuuuuu
his grip weakened and his soul gone to rest in peace of heaven….
i asked him to wake up but he didnt……. he slept…. he slept for forever……
…_________
how was the os guys…i know its little emotional… i had teary eyes while wirting… hope you dont throw tomotoes on me by reading this stupid os….

guys one more thing.. my self janvi… sanskriti is just a false identity…

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    55 Comments

    1. teitokUn1718 on July 29, 2017 3:34 am

      Superb & Emotional one…

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 29, 2017 9:13 am

        thankss

    2. Arjuna on July 29, 2017 7:03 am

      AWESOME AWESOME

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 29, 2017 9:13 am

        thanks

    3. Jiyani on July 29, 2017 7:26 am

      Emotional dear

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 29, 2017 9:14 am

        ohh…

    4. Soumya on July 29, 2017 7:27 am

      Simply superb di

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 29, 2017 9:14 am

        thankuu

    5. Akankshanna on July 29, 2017 7:39 am

      Awesome
      …amazing…. Senti

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 29, 2017 9:15 am

        thanksss….

    6. Thahseem on July 29, 2017 8:23 am

      Nice

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 29, 2017 9:48 am

        thanks

    7. Sherin on July 29, 2017 9:14 am

      Awesome dear

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 29, 2017 9:49 am

        thanks

    8. Vennila on July 29, 2017 9:36 am

      Awesome episode

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 29, 2017 9:49 am

        thanks

    9. lovely7 on July 29, 2017 10:14 am

      Happy ending unte bagundedi
      Nice

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 29, 2017 1:14 pm

        thanksss.. iknow that happy ending would be awesome

    10. aleeza on July 29, 2017 10:31 am

      Awesome

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 29, 2017 1:15 pm

        thanks

    11. Asw on July 29, 2017 10:35 am

      Nice

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 29, 2017 1:15 pm

        thanks

    12. asra on July 29, 2017 2:32 pm

      awesome dear…loved it alot

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 29, 2017 4:12 pm

        thanks

    13. Ammu on July 29, 2017 3:45 pm

      Interesting os dear and loved Raglak a lot. It’s emotional also. Please post your ff soon and If possible write more Raglak stories. Love you dear and take care

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 29, 2017 4:38 pm

        thank you so much dear

    14. Monu on July 29, 2017 3:57 pm

      Nice dear

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 29, 2017 4:13 pm

        thanks

    15. Malu on July 29, 2017 4:36 pm

      Amazing part nd write more

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 30, 2017 12:49 am

        thanks

    16. Laashya on July 29, 2017 5:40 pm

      Lovely story

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 30, 2017 12:50 am

        ty

    17. Ashly on July 29, 2017 6:46 pm

      Superb awesome emotional

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 30, 2017 12:49 am

        thankuuuu

    18. Aamy on July 29, 2017 8:40 pm

      Awesome

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 30, 2017 12:50 am

        ty

    19. Vini on July 29, 2017 8:47 pm

      Good one, keep writing

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 30, 2017 12:50 am

        ty

    20. Raglak_fan on July 29, 2017 9:42 pm

      Fantastic dear

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 30, 2017 12:51 am

        ty..

    21. Pearly on July 29, 2017 10:11 pm

      Very nice

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 30, 2017 12:52 am

        ty..

    22. IQRA222 on July 29, 2017 10:41 pm

      janvi !!! its fabulous dear
      totally loved it!!!
      it was too emotional and superb
      do keep writing more
      take care
      keep writing and smiling

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 30, 2017 12:52 am

        thnk you sooooooooo much for the lovely comment

    23. Anju on July 30, 2017 9:39 am

      Awesome

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 30, 2017 11:38 am

        thanks

    24. Elizabethlovely on July 30, 2017 10:10 am

      Awesome

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 30, 2017 11:38 am

        thanks

    25. Monisha on July 30, 2017 10:45 am

      Superrrrr duperrrrr endddd

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 30, 2017 11:38 am

        ????

    26. Monisha on July 30, 2017 10:46 am

      Sorry wrong comment, superb shot

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 30, 2017 11:39 am

        ok ok …. thanksss

    27. ARJS on July 30, 2017 12:40 pm

      So Janvi is your real name.U already said me Na that the sanskriti name was false.its k n u said u will post your ff after 21st now what’s the date???
      Post it soon.
      This was one emotional.i found this ending to be perfect as if it was a happy ending it wouldn’t have been good as it is now.
      Keep writing
      Hope u remeber my name

      • janvi_sanskriti on July 30, 2017 1:23 pm

        yaaa i willl i posted part 6 .. 3 or 4 days back check it…yaa my real nameis janvi…
        thankss … rufi di for a lovely comment…. but dii why you deactivated your acco. whats the reason…and of coure you are rufi tufi dii…?????

    28. hemalattha on August 4, 2017 11:50 am

      A sentiment is. The ending too emotional. Loved it dear.

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