Shivika ff by nans ( part-1)

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Hi every one
This is my first os with ta present track of IB. Guys I am really angry on Shivay for always misunderstanding anika and now its limit. We saw tat tia planted seed of obsession in shivays mind and from there my os starts hope u like it….
So after pinky forcing shivay to perform for his sangeet he decides and goes to om room for practise while our rudra is busy on making sumo wear ta ring Here anika sees a wedding PIC of tia which tia uploaded just now seeing anika going through her account. And after anika runs to shivay she deletes tat from her account. Anika being unknown goes to om room and,
A: tia shadi shudha hai
S: tum hosh mein toh ho!
A: app ye dekiye uske baad apke hosh udjayenge and she shows the phone but there is no PIC just a blank page. Om tries to speak but shivay bursts out
S: have u lost it anika! Har baat ki limit hoti hai in A very angry serious tone anika eyes become wet
S: coming close to her in rage tum Bas tia ko wrong prove karna chahti ho, baar baar karnepar use galti nahi batameezi kehte hai and u ….
Om stops him and shivay leaves in anger???

Om tries to speak to anika but she leaves from there and tia being a dayan type taunts anika om goes to shivay and tries to talk to him.anika makes herself strong and thinks to talk shivay clearly abt all happenings and comes to his room and stops at the door listening omshiv convo
O: shivay voh anika Jo bhi kehrahi hai ek bar suntolo . she won’t blame tia without reason na?
S: plz om tum bhi rudra ka samjme aata hai,tum bhi anika ki side lekar tia ko blame kar rahe ho
O: shivay anika ko me janta hu , vo aise hi bina baat ki…
S: actually u r right, vo ye sab yuhi nahi kar rahi. Vo aesab maksat se kar rahi hai. Vo meri tia ki relation break karna chahti hai. First I thought tia is wrong but now I know the reality. Sach ye hai anika tia ki jagah Lena chahti hai.isliye use galat prove karne ki koshihs kar rahi hai.sach ye hai Anika is just a gold digger. Use Jo save karke me favour kar raha tha use lagne laga ki I care for her and voh muje trap karna chahti hai . yes she is doing for this only..yes ( he means nothing in tat actually shivay thinks tat anika is feeling for him and due to jealous she is doing tat but he says all this to make his own mind free from anikas obsession)
O: shivay tu pagal hai kya tu aisa soch bhi kaise liya.tat anika..
( om sees anika listening) anika listening all this is in a shock heavily breathes in n out but Shivay words rewine in her mind. She sits outside ta room along ta wall tightly closed her mouth with both hands but she couldn’t control her cry and runs from comes out of room and see her running and goes after her and witnesses anika crying vigorously sitting down and holding her knees tightly .om goes and sits beside her and keeps his hand over hers.anika tries to stop her tears

O: anika vo shivay…
A: om plz apki bhai ne jobhi kaha voh sahil hai. Galti meri hai Jo limits cross kar rahi thi.unki yesan ko much jyada samaj rahi thi. Par ab nahi.
O: anika I am sorry from his side but tumne tia le bare me jobhi kaha muje nahi pata sach he ya joot par itna janta hun ki tum yese hi inti nadi baat nahi bologi. Age se jobhi kaha soch ke bolo and me tumara saath jarror dunga always. Apne dost keliye itna toh kar sakta huna?
A: thank u so much om. Mein na batak gayi sochne lagi unte meri baat par vishwas hoga par Mr.oberoy ko proof chahiye ab muje pata hai muje kya karna hai. Muje todi dear akela rehna hai main teek hojaungi om plzz
( om leaves her saying take care and anika again remembering all harsh words cries more and says to heart “ Bas bahut hogaya Mr.oberoy .apko ab prrof milega and uske baad is gold digger ki shakal nahi dekni padegi and aur yes an karne ki bhi jaroorat nahi hai ab Bas. And she takes her phone and calls someone which is muted)
Later she does all the work of sangeet while shivay eyes on her for her glimpse. But she doesn’t cares a bit and don’t sees him even once after work when she is leaving daksh offers her lift shivay comes and says “y will u go , I know ta way well , I will go ,come anika”
A: daksh mere ghar already achuke he and vo rasata janta hai and vaise bhi vo mera dost hai to unke saath jaungi mein. Abki is favour ke liye thanks Mr.oberoy
( she n daksh leaves. Shivay was shocked with this.he was thinking I should be angry on her for blaming how can she talk like this .daksh is her friend what? Wow then wht abt me ? Am I nothing? And she is saying my care as favour? How can she do like this? )

Omru who watched all ta scene and shivay in thoughts of hurt comes and rudra asks “ shivay bhayya kuch jalne ki boo arahi hai na”
S: ha kya…y will I feel jealous ? Tat to coz of daksh
Rudra smirks.
O: he is right rudra after all she is a employee tats it let’s go n practise tats more imp right shivay?
S: ha…yes let’s go
Here anika gets down on ta main road itself saying she will go by herself and thanks daksh and bids bye and otw to her house in late night some mask men comes and tries to hurt her with knife when daksh comes and saves her . mask men runs away. And guards shivay arranged also come there.
A: thanks daksh. Main teek hu ab vo nahi ayega usne guards ko bhi dekliya na toh … Mein chalti hun
D: take care OK . any need just call me.bye
And he leaves

Anika to guards
A: aap log jayiye. Main teek hu
Guards: par Shivay sir
A: dekiye apne mereliye yaha safeguard kar rahe the thanks par ab jayiye varna majbooran muje complaint karna padega apke upar bhi so plzzz
Guards leave . anika goes to her house and sees tat doll again and goes to freshen up and in washroom she msgs someone and comes back and sleeps with full tears
Shivay gets to know abt everything through guards and he himself drives to her place and stays there all night watching her house from his car.

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  1. Priyali

    Khidki tod…… . Nans … u just rocked it!!

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks priyali glad u like my imagination

  2. Sanaya_malik

    Welcome nans in IB family…… Finally u wrote it…. Wow omika were so gud…. And when anika leaves wid daksh…. It was a big slap on shivaye face…. I feel so gud seeing shivaye like this…. Bechara…. Waiting for. Next dear… ❤❤love u

    1. Nansshivika

      Love you too sana ???? 4 or 5 parts ke baad shivay ke saath aur bhi hoga
      Bahut kuch baaki hai. Thanks yaar for liking this

  3. Nansshivika

    Guys just comment if u like it. One word also I feel blessed but just comment and I know this part is kind of boring I will upload parts regularly

  4. Superb nans..whom did anika msg . Eagerly waiting for ur nxt update

    1. Nansshivika

      Chachi papa comment chesinanduku thanks ba post chesta tondarga

  5. Pri_24

    Nandupie first all of welcome to writer club…???

    And you rocked it and nailed it….

    Omika’s bond is awesome and Shivay is arghhh I am angry on him…

    and Anika choose to go with Daksh instead of Shivay is amazing and khidkitod answer ???? to stone Singh Oberois and I like this Daksh hope he won’t be over flirty like he is in serial….

    Nandupie update next part soon…??☺☺☺???

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank you chocopie I am in cloud 9 tat u all liked it .love you guys

  6. Lisaaa

    superb….. but plz in english…. plz plz…..

    1. Nansshivika

      I will try to type in English. I thought to type in English only but anika language should be in Hindi na so ….. And thank u so much for ta comment

      1. Sure Nans u can go with Hindi but with English trans plz….. I am eager for next episode….. u r awesome ..

      2. Lisaaa

        sure Nans u can go with hindi but with english trans plz.. waiting for next epi…u r awesome

      3. Lisaaa

        wen is ur next epi…

    2. Nansshivika

      Ya sure yaar . I will translate it . and I am trying to type next one so I will post as soon as I finish.

  7. Can u write ur ff in English????I am a south Indian…I can’t understand Hindi fully ….

    1. Nansshivika

      Ya dear I will translate it.

  8. Ketaki19

    very nice part… aur less comments ki fikar mat karo yar… silent readers bahot hote hain yaha aur may be ab exams hain sabke to sari stories ko comments kum mil rahe hain

    1. Nansshivika

      Ya dear . thanks for liking my first part and ya I too agree abt comments. But it takes just 20 seconds so writer is always greedy to comments na.. Tats y ???

  9. ???????
    Welcome nans as an author seriously didnt expect this sudden surprise wow aaj toh first epi and that too dhamakedar khidki todh…..
    If u keep on writing such episodes than believe me…. U will rock

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u so much shama dear

  10. Super….

  11. awwwww caring and stupid rude shivayy

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks sadia

  12. Shivika

    Wow… superbb….shuvaay toh just stupid he cant even understand what his heart wants………har waqt bs raita phailata rehta hai

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u so much

  13. Jayashree

    Awesome dude… waiting for next part..

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u so much yaar

  14. Nithu

    Akka super unde….lovely…….nxt part fast ga post cheyyu pls…..

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks ra .enta fast ga kudirite anta fast ga chesta

  15. Tulasi

    Nanduuuu…..welcum baby??? epi toh awesummmm hain….anika uss bagad billa ko kidhki thod jawab degi…..bagad billa pata nahi kya sochthe hain aone bare main…….epi is fantastic dear…..i luvd d writer in u…..bring up them more….nandu luv u papa…..keka…chinchesavu…..omika r cute…u know na i luv their bond….n shivaay being jealous……he insulted her n now feelng jealous if she is wid him……. pagal kahe ka… i hate him yesterday….. he shuld realise his mistake…….she is my indpiration….anikaa????

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks tulasi. Love u too????? .

  16. nans u r killed it yaar great start. i luvd it

  17. Superb….yup exactly the track i want in ishqbaaz…shivaay should be jealous from Daksh …and Anika paying no heed to him after much insult ..he deserves that…but then he would realise her importance…pls update the next ff asap…❤

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks sabhya. Will update it asap

  18. Ishqkum

    Super Dr shiviya need this he is always hurting anika so bad but he is caring also so for anika

  19. Nida

    Eagerly waiting for the next update

    1. Nansshivika

      I will post it asap nida

  20. Nandu… thod daala yaar???
    I loved it… u r such a good writer..
    Eagerly waiting for next part?
    N i wish this would hav happnd in the show?

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u so much saha

  21. Akshaya

    Nandhu. Great ma
    Billuji= jealous.
    Gold digger. out of his mind always. Is daksh positive in your ff?

    1. Nansshivika

      aksh gul conformed tat d is not daksh na so me too going with tat but he is not positive he is obsessed with her which develops slowly.thanks for ta comment dear

  22. Ayath

    wow when i came back from school i searched tu tht time i saw ff by nans…..firstly i didnt read but i scroll down to know…. it is u only or someone else when i see ur name i was sooo happy and ur ff intro was superb continue like this only dear love u lotzzzzzzzzzzzz……………………….

  23. Nansshivika

    Thank u so much for such a sweet comment dear
    Love u too??

  24. Nice episode ??

  25. Shivika22kapoor

    Wooooow this was awesome I really loved it to the core especially the way Anika replied him today was amazing she nailed it by replying him back in his own language, you nailed it dear and apart from that when Shivaay comes to guard her house ? himself was super duper cute.
    Just loved the epi.
    Love ❤ you darlooo

    1. Nansshivika

      Glad u like it. Thank u u too???

  26. Nainaa

    A Heart full and Soul full welcome to my dearest Nandu Pie……
    Woah!! Nandu You rocked it, You killed it, You did everything with this….No words after a khidki thod one….OOPS!! yours is a Darwaaze thod one…. I really think that it is such type where Anika is not broken after Shivaay’s taunts over her. The way Anika replied him that She doesn’t need his favour and She can go with her friend Daksh is amazing. Shivaay deserves that how can his mind think so cheap anyways his heart is beating for Anika. The way you narrated this scene is a way better no no best than the original one. I want more of Jalan Singh Oberoi and Panika scenes…. Love you so much….

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u so much cutuepie for such sweet comment

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