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She and Her Kidnapper (4)

administratorBy administratorFebruary 13, 2016Updated:February 14, 201632 Comments7 Mins Read
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πŸ™ he is having breakfast without ME !!! :'( how cruel he!!! literally tears formed in my eyes coz I was in love with foods. I grabbed the sandwich from his mouth and pushed it in mouth.I sat next to him.

WHAT THE!!

I heard him saying. I don’t know what was his expression. I wasn’t that state to watch his expression.now I only care about my stomach. I put another sandwich in my mouth but he grabbed it from me

“this is my breakfast” he put it in his mouth.didn’t he know that I am in his home. so he should serve me food.

“I am hungry. ..I want my breakfast” I yelled

“make for ur own. I ain’t making for u” he is so mean.

“I don’t know cooking” I felt bad..I never felt bad when I say I don’t know cooking. in fact I was proud of me..now I am feeling bad coz my kidnapper know how to make sandwich and I don’t know πŸ™ he will make fun of me.

he smirked at me.beautiful smirk I have ever seen..lol why I am finding everything beautiful related to him when he is such a monster.

“so sad of u..if u can’t make then stU hungry” he took his breakfast and juice and went to living room.

WHAT THE….this is how someone treats their kidnapped girl..he is really a monster. I kicked the kitchen door.

“ouch!!! I screamed in pain..his door is also like him.

“don’t break the things..if u break anything I will give u punishment” he shouted from living room.

punishment. ..my foot…he is punishing me without giving food and saying he will punish.I went to living room. he was watching tv while having breakfast. I sat beside him.

I extend my hand to take sandwich. but he took the plate.monster kidnapper.

“pweees” I made a pout

“okey. .” I was like I got a big chocolate bar..he continued “but in one condition” this word made me sad.

“what condition, kid… (I bit my tongue) I mean SIR..”

“u will wash the dishes” he furrowed his eyebrows

why r u doing this with me kidnapper? ?? did u brought me to make ur maid. πŸ™

“I can’t do this” I denied

“okey then stay hungry” he continued his eating

I looked at him.he was busy with his sandwich, my love. .

“okey. .I will do the dishes” I said frustrated

he gave me a smile then handover me the plate.I ate like a monkey.

“clean the sofa too” he ordered and went to kitchen.

as I finished my breakfast I went to kitchen.I put the utensils in sink.I washed all utensils. he was making lunch.why he is making lunch so early..it is only 10’O clock…

I was tired.I sat on the counter.he put a glass of juice in front of me.I wanted to drink that but I didn’t touch it.if I drink this he will make me do some other work.

“drink the juice. .u must be tired” listening him I grabbed the glass and drank it in one.

“don’t u feel cold now?” he asked with a smirk on his face

“what” why I feel cold

“u r not ‘wearing’ ur duvet” he air quoted the word wearing

my eyes popped out.when did I let go off my Minnie? ?yeah I remember when I rushed to snatch his sandwich I let my Minnie in living room. I jumped from my seat to run for my Minnie.

“I already saw u in this clothes. now what’s the need of covering it” he gave a victorious smile.

so…so..so..he understood why I was wrapping my Minnie around me πŸ™ RIP Zahra

he come close to me.my back hit the counter as I moved back.

“u was with me the whole night ” he was saying like he did something to me..no no..he is swt..he can’t do anything. .

‘he is ur kidnapper and look at u, u r beautiful any1 will wants u to be with them’ my mind was playing with me.I slapped on my head.

NOOO I screamed. ..lol it come out.he turned to me with what-on-earth-is-this look.I shook my shoulder and went to living room. I took my Minnie from floor..

“I am soo sorry Minnie” I placed her on sofa..

“crazy woman u r talking to ur duvet as if it is listening to u” he made joke of me

“my minnie can hear me” who the hell is he to talk about my minnie?

“Minnie? ”

“yeah my duvet”

he laughed at me and said crazy woman..why he is always calls me crazy woman? ?? monster kidnapper.

***************

that mad girl snatched my breakfast from me!! how can I let her to have my breakfast. I snatched it from her and told her to make her own..poor crazy woman sge don’t know how to make sandwich. I told her if she want to eat then she should wash dishes. finally she agreed..she washed all dishes after breakfast. I made lunch for us and for rabeeh..he will wait for my handmade lunch.

I looked at her.she wasn’t wrapping her duvet around her.maybe she forgot in hungry.

I asked her “don’t u feel cold now”
“what” she was like what this man is talking about

“u r not wearing ur duvet” I air quoted the word wearing. she looked pale as I saw her in shorts. she was looking modern.then why she feeling shy in wearing shorts in front of me??

she was about to run for her duvet. .I stepped close to her and told that she was witg me whole night..lol I think she over thinked about my sentence.

when I came to living room for taking my phone she was talking to her duvet!!!! whom earth on talk to their duvet..only this crazy girl can do this..and she named her duvet as Minnie. .very funny.I will die out of laughing. .

I filled the Tiffin box .now I have to take shower and get ready.

“come with me” I grabbed her hand anf went to my room. I locked the bedroom door.her face was like a rat who caught by a cat.I am enjoying this..

“stay here..I will be back after taking shower” I told her and went to take shower.
*************

when he take me to his room, the same room where I slept last night I was afraid. ..I thought he will do something to me.but he didn’t πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€ he went to take shower.

one Idea popped in my mind..I started searching for his phone. my eyes stuck on a box.I opened it.there was an iPhone six plus! !!! now I am sure he is rich..so he didn’t came to steal my anklet.he came for some other reason. .reminding anklet I looked at my ankle…still, my anklet was there.he didn’t take it even I was with him the whole night.

I took the phone from the box and dialled my dad’s number.

“there is no sim card in thar iPhone” a sharp voice hited my ear.I looked at him.his hair was wet.he was wearing only a bath towel.his well developed muscles. .everything give him a s*xy look.I stared at him without blinking my eyes.

he came near me..his mint breath hit my nose..I was like I am losing my control. he took the phone from me and put it in back.

“this iPhone is for someone. . I am warn u crazy woman don’t touch my things”

I was still staring me.he came near me.only an inch gap is between us bt I didn’t move from my place.he leaned to my face level…

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To be continued….

wait for more craziness. .

signing off urs crazy writer Ruby. .

anu, lachu, hayu, richu, jwalu, nive, vivi, devu, roma, rose, zayn,
sindu, faikutty. love u tooooo πŸ˜›

hey my malayalies…(ellarum pedum keto) thnx for liking my story buddies. .

ameena deary thnx for ur comment dear..

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32 Comments

  1. Zoyafathima on February 13, 2016 3:28 pm

    Hai ruby u r a malayali were r u frm da njanum malayali yan πŸ™‚

    • Ruby on February 13, 2016 3:55 pm

      Malappuram. .where u from?

  2. Rishi on February 13, 2016 3:42 pm

    Awsome yaar little bit of strange

  3. Sindhu K S V on February 13, 2016 4:06 pm

    Nice story yaar…loved it very much…

  4. swara on February 13, 2016 4:27 pm

    fantastic

  5. zayn on February 13, 2016 4:28 pm

    Wow .. a handsome kiddnapper LOL
    I very humorous … u have got a great sense of humour
    I love ur FF
    N U ALSO β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯
    TC

    • Ruby on February 13, 2016 9:08 pm

      lv u too buddy

  6. Hayathi on February 13, 2016 4:41 pm

    Ha ha ga but why he kidnapped her

    • Ruby on February 13, 2016 9:09 pm

      will tell later dr

  7. Devga on February 13, 2016 4:58 pm

    U made me laugh madly at the first line itself m….. So u sarcastically said we’ll see who washes the vessels. …. Nice twist dear …. Awesome …..
    Take care of u ….

    • Ruby on February 13, 2016 9:10 pm

      I am glad that I made u laugh

  8. Devga on February 13, 2016 5:00 pm

    And u used tht pic …. So awesome …. It’s correct pic

  9. Nive on February 13, 2016 5:21 pm

    hey ruby from the start to end i really enjoyed it… waiting for more craziness…

    • Ruby on February 13, 2016 9:24 pm

      thnx dr

  10. Kriya on February 13, 2016 5:47 pm

    hey dear..u know i was sad bz i could not find ur ff from last 2 days..i was waiting badly..but at last when today i found 2 parts of your ff..i was like wowwww..

    both parts were mindblowing..handsome kidnapper ha..she found everything beautiful regarding him ha..lol..i must say u have very good sense of humr..btw her n his both POV were just awesome..crazy..i am having thousand watt smile after reading both parts..

    • Ruby on February 13, 2016 9:12 pm

      thnq so much dr

  11. Jwala on February 13, 2016 5:53 pm

    love u too ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,and the story superayittundu ,,,,,crazy too,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,chirichu chirichu njan chathupokum,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,…………mad woman and monster kidnapper ,,,lol…..it was totally funny,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,this girl has got guts who else would act like this in frnt of a kidnapper …………….luvd her character …she is totally crazy ……………………………..and i am eagerly waiting for the next epi

    • Ruby on February 13, 2016 9:13 pm

      njan eppaZum swapnam kanarund enne entr dream boy kidnap cheyyunnad πŸ˜›

    • Jwala on February 14, 2016 9:38 am

      Ohhh……. crazy girl…

  12. sana on February 13, 2016 6:27 pm

    Ruby Idh orupad nannayitundada.Enikorupad ishtaayi.ruby ishveerinte oru ff ezhuthan shramikkada.Enik ninte writing othiri ishtaayi.

    • Ruby on February 13, 2016 9:15 pm

      njan MATSH ishani jailil aya sheaham kanditilla…swadave njan seriel kanarilla dr..if u want then I will try bt not now πŸ™‚

  13. aditi syam on February 13, 2016 6:42 pm

    Superb ruby update everyday yaar plzzzzz update one more chapter i can’t wait to see wat is going to happen plzzzzzzzzzzzz

    • Ruby on February 13, 2016 9:16 pm

      sure dr…I will try to upload next part

  14. Lakshmi on February 13, 2016 6:55 pm

    Superb ruby. ??.luv u ..tc..

    • Ruby on February 13, 2016 11:21 pm

      thnx lachu

  15. kriya on February 13, 2016 7:06 pm

    awesome episode n i hope your next part is going to be more interesting…..

  16. Ananya on February 14, 2016 2:05 am

    Ruby this story is awesome.. Just love both characters… And zahra is so crazy just loved this episode… U made be laugh dear… Love youuuuu…

  17. Ruby on February 14, 2016 9:00 am

    I replied to all of ur comments but they didn’t post it πŸ™

    buddies my net pack is over…so wait for me few days..

  18. manha on February 14, 2016 8:04 pm

    ruby it was awesome dear. I will die of laughing. Crazy beautiful girl, Monster handsome kidnapper. wah wah kya jodi hain. Aur unki chemistry. lol. It was superb. I loved it. She talking to her minnie n telling him my minnie can hear. I’m controlling myself hard not to laugh out loud. Or else all will think that i’m crazy. Waiting for next one dear. It was lovely.

  19. Roma on February 17, 2016 3:13 am

    O my rubyyyy it’s superbbbb n hilaaaaaaarious episode. ..Zahra such crazyyyyy girl n he is enjoying it a lotttttttttt. ….sandwich scene was mind blowing….zahra drooling his after shower body…hmmmm….naughty girl…. what’s his name dear? I’m enjoying this craziness soooooooo muchhhhhh. ..it’s a fun to read this unique amazing story. …Zahra is so fun loving ,smart, bright, very interesting girl n looks like the kidnapper is rich n smart too..then why he kidnapped her n her anklet is still with her then what was the resonance behind this kidnapping???keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very tight hug

  20. Abhi on February 17, 2016 7:34 am

    Ya i like this story very much continue updating :-*

  21. deeva on February 27, 2016 8:23 am

    Hey ruby why u r not updating ur ff am silent reader but became restless becz of ur long gap.. .
    .. so l commented………… ….. Plz dear update soon if u could….. Plz.. .. tc dear??

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