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She and Her Kidnapper

administratorBy administratorFebruary 9, 201630 Comments2 Mins Read
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a crap noise disturbed my beautiful sleep but I didn’t open my eyes i hugged my diary more tight.I felt someone’s touch in my ankle. I pulled my legs in a sudden. There was a man standing beside my bed all covered. I only can see his sharp and beautiful green eyes.I looked at him with eyes popped out and hung open mouth.

“Thief” I shouted but it came out like a whisper which only I can hear =-O so sad of me ๐Ÿ™
The thief bent down my level.he covered my mouth with his hands and his other hand wrapped my shoulder tightly. Still my eyes are in same state as before.

“Ssshhhh…I won’t harm you..please just give me your golden anklet” he whispered in my ear.
Hey…what he just said??? Please??? I haven’t ever seen a thief begging for a golden anklet in my entire 22 year life time.have you ever see a thief in my entire life time???no.then don’t talk nonsense ZAHRA just focus on your mission.
I tried to free me from his grasp.he tightened his grip more.I hit him with my diary.I kicked in his manhood. Unlucky me, he moved away from my kick.meanwhile his veil went off of revealing his face.
My eyes popped out, my jaws hited on the floor. He is freaking handsome! !!! His green eyes are just amazing, straight nose and pink lips.he..he was just perfect.I am sure every girl will fall for him at first sight.
He loosened his grip and dig his hand to his pocket to take something from it.I realised that I was staring him for so long.he took a bottle from his pocket and poured something to his handkerchief. He covered my face with his handkerchief. .I went unconscious.
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The girl went unconscious. I wrapped her in her duvet and threw her on my shoulder. Something fell from her hand.it was a diary. I put it in my bag.I tip toed to kitchen and opened the door with my duplicate key.I sat on my bike and made the girl sit in my lap.her legs wrapped around my waist.her head rested on my chest. I didn’t want to kidnap this girl.I just wanted her golden anklet.I drove off to my destination.

Credit to:Guess Me

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30 Comments

  1. sara on February 9, 2016 1:59 am

    nice. ..

    • guess me on February 9, 2016 8:58 am

      thank u

  2. Elena Montez on February 9, 2016 7:06 am

    Super & interesting

    • guess me on February 9, 2016 9:59 am

      thnx Elena

  3. Lakshmi on February 9, 2016 7:26 am

    Nice start dear.

    • guess me on February 9, 2016 9:58 am

      hey dr…guess who am I???

    • Lakshmi on February 9, 2016 1:10 pm

      Who r u dear? I’m getting so many names in my mind n I’m really confused and don’t know exactly who you can be.

  4. Hayathi on February 9, 2016 10:59 am

    What just gold anklet ke liye kidnap god unbelievable person

  5. suraj on February 9, 2016 12:03 pm

    nice ff..continue n plzzz update soon

  6. zayn on February 9, 2016 12:32 pm

    OMG a theif beggin ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
    First timer i think
    I really funny ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
    Really u want me to guess ur name??
    Or is it just ur user name

    • guess me on February 9, 2016 1:41 pm

      I want u to guess my name dr

  7. Kriya on February 9, 2016 12:35 pm

    hey its just amazing…few questions plz give reply..is this part is 1st part ? r u going to continue ? if yes from which page i c find this ff ? i just liked this epi..and wanting to read further.

    • guess me on February 9, 2016 1:40 pm

      u can read it on fan fiction page and yeah I am continuing this ff…keep reading and thnx for commenting

  8. swara on February 9, 2016 12:49 pm

    very interesting pls update soon

  9. Ananya on February 9, 2016 1:23 pm

    It was a gud one. Interesting.. Update soon…

  10. guess me on February 9, 2016 1:39 pm

    I want you guys to guess me.lakshmi, hayathi, suraj, zayn, ananya u guys know me well and swara u too know me.I am so writing other ffs

    • Ananya on February 9, 2016 2:48 pm

      Can u give me a clue.. I have a name in my mind just need to confirm.

    • guess me on February 9, 2016 3:57 pm

      Red colour ๐Ÿ˜›

    • Lakshmi on February 9, 2016 4:37 pm

      I think u r Mandy ,sorry if not.

    • Lakshmi on February 9, 2016 5:54 pm

      Lol.i’m bad in guessing??so u r ruby!!

  11. Prtibha on February 9, 2016 1:53 pm

    Interesting n superb

  12. Nive on February 9, 2016 3:22 pm

    Ruby…

    • Ruby on February 9, 2016 6:33 pm

      u r ryt buddy love u

    • Nive on February 10, 2016 11:48 am

      Is this continuation of yours โ€œShe untold storyโ€ or new one…

    • Ruby on February 10, 2016 1:52 pm

      nope dr..it is another one.I stopped writing. ..SHE

  13. Ananya on February 9, 2016 4:16 pm

    Ruby its u right…?? This story is so gud dr… I just loved it… โ˜บโ˜บ

  14. Ruby on February 9, 2016 6:33 pm

    yep dr it is me

  15. Harani on February 9, 2016 10:19 pm

    Hey awesome yaar …handsome thief …who will not fall for him ,, ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ awesome

    • Ruby on February 10, 2016 7:28 am

      thnx harani

  16. Roma on February 11, 2016 8:34 pm

    Awesome episode ruby dearrryyyy, it was lovely. ..keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very tight hug

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