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She…an untold story(1)

administratorBy administratorDecember 18, 201528 Comments2 Mins Read
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Hey buddies here Ruby…again with a new story..I am very thankful to u all coz u liked my stories. I am thinking about this story from past 2 weeks. .my mind is disturbed with this one so I thought to write it finally.

“Uncle Tariq”

A middle aged man turned to see who called him,he was wearing a police uniform.

“Arjun”

Tariq called the young guy and hugged him tight and started crying.

“Uncle calm down” Arjun said in a broken voice.

Tariq pulled him from Arjun,wiped his tears.

“I can’t cry..I have to be strong for her”

“What doctor said uncle” Arjun asked with curiosity.

“She is in coma” tariq tried to be strong.

“Any clue about him?”

“No”

Tariq sat on a bench.arjun sat beside him.

“Uncle go home and take rest..i am here”

“How can I go home?what would I say to Ayan?”

“Say him that she is with me”

“Okey” Tariq got up and said by to Arjun.

Arjun looked at him,his eyes were watered. He peeped in to ICCU .

“How can someone do it with her?” Arjun asked to him self.

Doctor called Arjun to his cabin.

“Her condition is worse than we thought” doctor said with no hope.

“What do u mean doctor???”

“I am referring her to st.mary hospital,may be they can do better than us..they have more specialists too” doctor completed his sentence.

“Okey..fine…we need her alive”

“I am not saying that she will loss her life,I am saying that she can’t be the old girl..u didn’t see her body? ” doctor questioned Arjun.

“Yep..” Arjun got up from his seat.

“I will arrange an ambulance. Here is her fail” he handed a file to Arjun.

“Thank you doctor” Arjun said.

Arjun was sad,frustrated and guilty.he pulled his hair,bit his lower lip.tears fell from his eyes.

“If I were with her,it never happened” he feels guilty and thought that it was his mistake.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

To be continued. …

Let me know weather I continue it or not

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28 Comments

  1. Brity on December 18, 2015 11:12 am

    Hey Ruby… Is it any MMZ FF?? Anyways, it’s cool…

    • Ruby on December 18, 2015 12:22 pm

      it is not a mmz ff brity..I like the name Arjun..thnx for reading and commenting 🙂

  2. Hayathi on December 18, 2015 11:26 am

    Ruby dr another story ohhhh cute and where is another 2stories updates dr we are waiting here

    • Ruby on December 18, 2015 12:23 pm

      I will update soon dr..thnq

  3. jasmine on December 18, 2015 11:38 am

    Interesting….

    • Ruby on December 18, 2015 12:23 pm

      thank you Jasmine

  4. Lakshmi on December 18, 2015 11:57 am

    Nice ruby,continue….. All ur stories r different and interesting yaar .update next part soon.who is that girl and what happened to her .

    • Ruby on December 18, 2015 12:24 pm

      thank you so much for the appreciation lakshmi 🙂

  5. Alia on December 18, 2015 12:26 pm

    nice ruby……I am very curious to know what will happen in next update……

    • Ruby on December 18, 2015 2:12 pm

      thnx alia

  6. Vivi on December 18, 2015 12:29 pm

    Hey..nice starting…curious 2 knw wot hppnd to the ‘girl’….write soooon..luv ya

    • Ruby on December 18, 2015 2:13 pm

      thnx vivi

  7. Nisha on December 18, 2015 12:53 pm

    Its nice ruby loved it dear very much interested love u meri jaan. very refreshing .

    • Ruby on December 18, 2015 2:14 pm

      thnx nishu dr

  8. Faima on December 18, 2015 1:10 pm

    Ohh,itha am srchng fo ua stry, thght u dnt upldd ua stry today..atlast i rd ua name so i strtd to rd it..its nce nd plz continue..vry intrstng..nd jumah mubarak.

    • Ruby on December 18, 2015 2:15 pm

      jumua Mubarak to u too dr…thnq

  9. Nive on December 18, 2015 2:34 pm

    hey ruby its interesting…. what happened to her… waiting for next part dr..

    • Ruby on December 18, 2015 3:23 pm

      Thanks nive dr

  10. Devi on December 18, 2015 2:47 pm

    Awesome

    • Ruby on December 18, 2015 3:24 pm

      Thanks devi dr

  11. Ananya on December 18, 2015 3:36 pm

    Interesting story ruby. Continue yar… And post your other stories too ..

    • Ruby on December 18, 2015 4:00 pm

      Sure ananya..actually I am busy with my nephew. .

  12. Roma on December 18, 2015 7:20 pm

    Hi ruby dear, awesome episode, new ff, loved it and pulling attention from just beginning, keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads

    • Ruby on December 18, 2015 9:09 pm

      thank you so much roma dr

  13. josefine on December 18, 2015 8:08 pm

    hi,Ruby it’s very interesting.cool begining…plz continue…

    • Ruby on December 18, 2015 9:10 pm

      hey josefine I am happy to see you here..thank you so much for reading and commenting

  14. DËVGÃ on December 19, 2015 12:49 am

    Very nice ….. But I am eager to read em…. Em… Emerald …. PLZ update no plzzzzz

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