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Home»Fan Fiction»Shattered Soul (swasan ten shots) by Marsuu Epilogue
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Shattered Soul (swasan ten shots) by Marsuu Epilogue

MarsBy MarsOctober 11, 2017Updated:October 11, 201778 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello guys!!! Well this epilogue is totally unplanned but many have asked on tu and wattpad so I’m giving it.
I hope you will like.
Let’s begin:

Shattered Soul(swasan ten shots)
Epilogue:

After 3 years:
Maheshwari House
SwaSan room:
Swara is standing in front of the mirror wearing bangles, earings and necklace. Two handsome smart gentlemen are staring her lovingly sitting on the bed.
Okay one will be sanskar but who is second one??.
Sanskar: she is looking beautiful.
Other person nodded his head in agreement.
Sanskar: after all she is my wife(proudly)
The other gentleman look at him and wish to say something but was helpless bcoz he can’t speak no no he is not dumb but so small to speak. He is Mr Sanchit Maheshwari, swasan’s one and only son who is just 6 months old but his attitude is difficult to handle like his father. No doubt he is so small but give tough competition to sanskar in loving his mamma,swara.
Swara turn and look at them as usual both are sitting together with sanchit in Sanskar’s lap.
Swara: let’s go Sanskar
Sanchit extend his arms towards swara that she should lift. Swara picked him and kiss his cheeks.
Sanchit and Sanskar are wearing same dress, black pant and white shirt with black neck tie.
Today is Reception Party of Uttara and nikil’s marriage. Its organized downstairs. They both got married one week ago.
Swasanchit came down. Sanskar went to nikil and swara to uttara with sanchit. He is uttara’s all time favourite buddy.
Party was in full swing whole family is busy attending guest. But sanchit started crying suddenly. Swara was consoling him
Swara: sanchuu what happened baby??
But he was still crying. Sanskar saw this and went near them.
Sanskar: why he is crying?
Swara: don’t know.
Sanskar took him in his arms rubbing his back.
Sanskar: did he had milk??
Swara: yes just 15 mins back.
Sanchit has fisted sanskar’s little beard as if he is getting irritated.
Sanskar: sanchit what are you doing.
Swara: may be his diaper is wet.
Sanskar: hmm possible.
Swara: come will change.
Then only sujata called her
Sujata: swara come here.
Swara: Ji mom
Sanskar: I will change you go to mom.
Swara nodded. Sanskar and sanchit went to their room.
He made him lie on the bed and went to cupboard and took diaper.
He started changing but sanchit was pushing his legs.
Sanskar: sanchit stay still.
Instead he increased the speed. He love to tease his papa.
Sanskar: when Swara used to do you don’t even move now irritating me.
Sanchit giggles seeing his annoyed papa.
With great difficulty, Sanskar finally put the diaper.
Swara(came inside): how much time you took Sanskar
Sanskar: bcoz of your this naughty son(pull his cheeks): its done.
Then again they went downstairs.
After few hours party got over.

Swasan Room(night)
Sanskar is trying his best to make sanchit sleep as swara is busy with the work.
Sanchit looks at the door and shouts as if calling swara.
Sanskar: sanchit mamma will come you sleep.
Sanchit put his thumb in mouth.
Sanskar take it out and softly slap his cheek
Sanskar: bad manners.
Sanchit again put thumb in mouth, Sanskar take it out he again put Sanskar again take it out. They started playing like.
Swara: what’s going on??
Sanchit literally jumped in sanskar’s lap seeing swara.
Sanskar (tightly hug him): I will not let you go to your mamma you were irritating me now see.
Swara signed as its their daily drama.
Sanchit stood in Sanskar lap and apply full force with his little hands to come out of his grip but sanskar didn’t let me.
Sanchit: ahhhhhhh
Sanskar: shout as much you want I will not let you go.
Sanchit look at swara who sitted beside them.
Swara: come my baby.
Sanskar held him tightly. He fisted sanskar’s hairs and pulled them.
Swara: Sanchit leave papa’s hair.
Swara took him in his lap.
Sanskar: this boy will make me bald headed one day the way he always pull my hairs.
Swara: you are no less always teasing him.
Sanskar stuck his tongue at sanchit and he hide his head in Swara’s chest.
Later, they slept.

Midnight:
Swara was not able to sleep as her head was paining. She sit and saw Sanskar and sanchit sleeping. She sightly jerk sanskar
Sanskar: ha swara what happened?
Swara: my head is paining severely.
Sanskar touch her forehead.
Sanskar: you are burning and have fever also.
Swara: may be bcoz I’m feeling very tired.
Sanskar got up and took medicine.He sit on swara’s side as sanchit is sleeping in centre.
Sanskar: take this.
He passed medicine and water.
Sanskar: how suddenly you got fever.
Swara: don’t know.
Sanskar: its just you were running in the whole function I was saying swara take rest but who listen to me(scold)
Swara pout.
Sanskar: now don’t make faces.
He made her lie covering comforter on her properly.He kissed her forehead.
Sanskar: take rest
Swara: I’m feeling cold.
Sanskar: wait
He raise the temperature of ac and took another comforter and place on swara.
Sanskar: feeling warm??
Swara: hmm you also sleep.
Sanskar: I’m sitting here only you close your eyes.
Swara: I’m feeling better sanskar you also sleep.
Sanskar: okay but if you left pain or something wake me at that time only.
Swara: I will.
Sanskar went to his side pecking her lips.
After that Sanskar didn’t slept properly. He was again and again checking swara’s forehead to see fever.

Next morning:
Swara is sleeping and sanchit is beside her. He opened his eyes and saw his mamma. He turn towards her and pull her arm to wake her.
Sanchit: ahh
Sanskar came from washroom and saw him. He ran to sanchit
Sanskar: sanchit don’t disturb mamma she is not feeling well.
He made him sit in his lap.
Sanchit look at Sanskar first then at swara as if asking why she is still sleeping.
Sanskar: mamma is having fever let her sleep.
Sanskar made sanchit ready.
He came and checked swara’s forehead.Now she is normal but due to medicine effect she is sleeping.

Kitchen:
All family members went to temple so no one was there. Sanskar made sanchit sit on shelf and boiled milk for him and made soup for swara.
Sanchit shout calling Sanskar.He put one carrot forcefully in Sanskar’s mouth.
Sanskar: ohho sanchit I don’t want to eat this.
He took him back to room and made him sit beside swara.
Swara open her eyes as she felt sanchit near.
Swara: sanchit
Sanchit laughs happily finally his mamma wake up.
Swara slowly sit and took him in her lap
Sanskar came with milk and soup.
Sanskar: swara how are you feeling now.
Swara: better.
Sanskar: sanchit come here and drink your milk.
Sanchit hugged swara not want to leave her.
Swara: give to me I will feed.
Sanchit has his milk sitting in swara’s lap.
Sanskar: open your mouth swara
He feed her soup and then give medicine.

After few month:
Swasanchit came out in park in the evening.
Sanchit is playing little away with his friends sitting on ground.
Swasan are busy with each other talking but seeing sanchit also.
But they got shocked hearing something
Sanchit(shouts): maa paaaa
They look at sanchit who called them to show that he is standing.
Swasan are spellbound as first time he said ma and pa. He is stood on his own.
They ran to him.
Swara:(teary eyes)Sanskar finally he spoke.
Sanskar(kiss his cheesk): hmm
Swasan held his first finger of both hands and slowly made him walk.
Swasan kiss on either side of his cheeks while sanchit giggles.

The End

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    78 Comments

    1. harneet on October 11, 2017 3:48 pm

      extreamly adorable … wow … sanchit sooooooooo cute ,…… he was a maammma’s boy and love to tease his daddy …. one kissy to this fictional baby …bye tc

      • Mars on October 11, 2017 4:10 pm

        Yupppp sanchit is mamma’s boy??????thank you so much dear tc???

    2. Arpita arohi on October 11, 2017 3:52 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on October 11, 2017 4:11 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    3. Tamil on October 11, 2017 3:59 pm

      Amazing dear….loved it…..Swasanchit moments so cute lovely…..sanchit so naughty…..

      • Mars on October 11, 2017 4:13 pm

        Swasanchit are cutiesss???? thank you so much dear tc?????

    4. Samaira_khan on October 11, 2017 4:24 pm

      Aww this was only one thing coming from my mouth!! Seriously this was sooooooooo perfect.. Loved each and every scene of this.. Sanskar ‘s care for swarw❤️❤️.. Swasanchit bond was amazingggg it was cute to an extreme level.. Huhh sanchit is soooo naughty antics like his father.. Loved swara and sanchit bond!! Superb yaar.. Last scene??❤️❤️ he took both Maa and paa named loved it.. Swasanchit rocks!!give a tight kiss and hug to the trio!

      • Mars on October 11, 2017 4:39 pm

        Awww thank you so much dear glad you liked it???
        Swasanchit are indeed cute???
        Take care??????

    5. Chaitu on October 11, 2017 4:41 pm

      Wow…so cute epilogue loved it daer

      • Mars on October 11, 2017 5:03 pm

        Thank you dear tc????

    6. Bush1122 on October 11, 2017 4:42 pm

      I dint expect this epilough… its beyond my imagination….
      More than awesome…
      Perfect in all the sense……….?????
      Each n every scene was adorable….
      Sanskar is really caring…..!!!!???
      Swasanchith moments were so cute….
      Cute lovly family….
      Specially Sanchith naughty lil boy mumma’s boy…… loves to tease his daddy…. naughty like his mom n dad only….
      Perfect???
      Love you…
      Tc

      • Mars on October 11, 2017 5:01 pm

        Awww so it was surprise for you??? even I thought after posting last part as many asked??
        Yuppppp sanchit is naughty like his mom dad???
        Thank you so much dear for your words???
        Love you tc??????

    7. Chaitu on October 11, 2017 4:45 pm

      Wow…so cute awesome epilogue loved sanchit teasing sanskar and his intro was awesome naughty baccha loved it dear

      • Mars on October 11, 2017 5:06 pm

        Yuppp sanchit is naughty as he is SwaSan’s son?? glad you liked it thanks dear tc??????

    8. Priya on October 11, 2017 5:00 pm

      Awesome dear swasanchit beautiful family sanchit is cute naughty

      • Mars on October 11, 2017 5:09 pm

        Aww thank you so much dear indeed they are cute family??? tc????

    9. independent on October 11, 2017 5:04 pm

      aww so cute

      • Mars on October 11, 2017 5:11 pm

        Thank you so much dii tc????

    10. Febi on October 11, 2017 5:09 pm

      Awesome and excellent dear

      • Mars on October 11, 2017 5:13 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    11. rini on October 11, 2017 5:31 pm

      happy ending.. u r too good

      • Mars on October 11, 2017 5:50 pm

        Aww so sweet thank you so much dear tc????

    12. Rp on October 11, 2017 5:35 pm

      Nice dearr

      • Mars on October 11, 2017 5:52 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    13. Prashasti7 on October 11, 2017 5:54 pm

      Awww marsuuu that was unexpected but rly cute

      • Mars on October 11, 2017 6:58 pm

        Aww thank you so much dear tc??????

    14. Kumu on October 11, 2017 5:55 pm

      Sweet and cute??
      Loved it ❤❤

      • Mars on October 11, 2017 7:00 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    15. AnuAnn on October 11, 2017 6:06 pm

      Marssu????..This was the best episode of this ff till now?????????.. loved my swasan chit??????

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 8:51 am

        Awww thank you so much anuu dear tc?????

    16. mumpi on October 11, 2017 6:22 pm

      Soooo sweet and adorable.. I love sanchit too much. Lovely.

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 8:52 am

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    17. anu on October 11, 2017 6:27 pm

      amazing loved it didnt thought this ss will end this soon

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 8:54 am

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    18. SHAN on October 11, 2017 6:34 pm

      Happy ending and loved it dr. Sanchit is so cute??

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 8:55 am

        Thank you so much dii tc????

    19. anu on October 11, 2017 6:40 pm

      awesome didnt thought this ss will end soon

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 9:56 am

        But there is nothing to extend it so ended thanks???

    20. Vamwolfan on October 11, 2017 6:42 pm

      One of the most cutest swasan and their child episode. Too good

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 9:58 am

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    21. Jj on October 11, 2017 6:47 pm

      Super and nice epilogue and love sanchit naughty boy like him mother how he irritated sanskar. And swasan are really a cute couple and cute and naughty child.

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 10:01 am

        Indeed swasanchit are so cute???? thank you so much dear tc????

    22. Adishu on October 11, 2017 6:51 pm

      awww soo cuteee this was the cutest ever…

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 10:06 am

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    23. Vidhi on October 11, 2017 7:15 pm

      OK so he’s mumma’s boy ha..
      Waise where do u get such unique names yar… This was lovely…. Such a cute family.. ❤❤❤❤

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 10:11 am

        I have collection of names for swasan’s babies?????? glad you liked it thank you so much dear tc??????

    24. Stg on October 11, 2017 7:36 pm

      Super Awesome ????????????????????????

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 10:12 am

        Thank you so much dear tc?????

    25. AbrahamEzra on October 11, 2017 8:19 pm

      Aww Sanchit is such a cutie pie. He loves his mamma so much and also love irritate his papa. Good job sanchu. It was beautiful and I just loved It dear. And if u can plss post he is dangerous. I’m obsessed with that story. He he.

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 10:15 am

        Awww thank you so much dear glad you liked it. I will post he is dangerous Also soon tc??????

    26. Rachna on October 11, 2017 8:53 pm

      Awsm

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 10:18 am

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    27. nabamita on October 11, 2017 8:59 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 10:20 am

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    28. Halima on October 11, 2017 9:13 pm

      Thanks for epilogue dear u r best love u yaar .

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 10:21 am

        Thank you so much dear love you tc?????

    29. yamee on October 11, 2017 11:54 pm

      Beautiful….

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 10:22 am

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    30. Tani on October 12, 2017 12:52 am

      Awesome

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 10:24 am

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    31. Anjali on October 12, 2017 10:54 am

      Superb loved it

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 11:22 am

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    32. Romaisa on October 12, 2017 3:33 pm

      Wow soo cute ma sha allah ❤️❤️?

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 4:27 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    33. milestone on October 12, 2017 4:08 pm

      Awesome dear…..

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 4:30 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    34. NDSG on October 12, 2017 5:04 pm

      Firstly Mars from where u got this name Sanchit.??????. Sanchit is my classmate… So I can’t even say Swasan child Sanchu…. I was laughing reading the whole ff. Each time my class mate is coming before my eyes… Sorry ???????????????.

      This is literally beautiful????? swasan child,? is naughty. Loves mumma and teases daddy????? naughty boy…. ?????. . I can’t say more… ???????. But loved it. And last scene was cherry on the cake… ???????

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 5:21 pm

        Hawwwww sanchit is your classmate???? mujhe nahi pta tha I can understand ase hi hota hai????????
        Indeed sanchit is naughty yeh swasan vale ki baat kar rahi huu?????
        Thank you so much depuuu dear tc???????

    35. gayathri.visu on October 12, 2017 5:37 pm

      Unbelievable epilogue Marsuuuuu….one of the cutest epilogue forever dear! Adorable ending….loveeeeeeeeee it. Sanchit…..good name dear. Such a dramebaaz child…..mumma’s boy, loved to tease his papa…..ha ha ha. And Sanskaar is also not less! Can’t express my feelings in words dear…..It’s INDEED CUTENESS OVERLOADED EPILOGUE yaar!!! Thanks for giving this wonderful ending.

      • Mars on October 12, 2017 5:51 pm

        Awwww thank you so much for your words gayuu dear I’m glad you liked it tc?????????

    36. Tweety_SwaSan on October 12, 2017 6:00 pm

      So cute and amazing epilogue dear… And Sanchit is so adorable… SwaSanChit are perfect family… Like father, like son…posessive of their loved ones… Swara is so lucky… Loved it loads… Thank you so much for this… Tc…

      • Mars on October 13, 2017 11:45 am

        Awwww thank you so much dear glad you liked it tc?????

    37. Soujanya on October 13, 2017 10:18 am

      Awesome…

      • Mars on October 13, 2017 11:47 am

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    38. Anu Rathore on October 13, 2017 2:54 pm

      aww its superb part nd sanchit was too cutee

      • Mars on October 13, 2017 7:02 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    39. vyshu10 on October 18, 2017 6:57 pm

      Awwww….so bubbly bubbly cuteeee. Loved it.

      • Mars on October 21, 2017 7:05 am

        Thank you dear tc????

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