Hi guys I’m luvIBN n I’m writing an TS on Avneil. Guys it’s my first TS so plz tell me how it is. I’m even writing a FF Love BLOSSOM so plz read it.
So in the TS Swetha and Avni don’t have any problem with each other.
And it’s different from the serial track.
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In chamko cafe
Bebe, Swetha and Avni are having coffee and have some gossips with each other.
Suddenly Avni sees some one and gets shocked. After seeing them she keeps her hand on neck and looks around and gets shocked once again. Both the times she doesn’t bring the shocked expression on her face.
Avni: Bebe, mummy ji mein abhi aa ti hu
(Bebe, mummy ji I’ll just come)
Saying this she gets up and goes towards washroom.
Wantedly she hits a girl and the juice in her hand falls on her dress. Both of them go to the hand wash area.
( Guys washroom and hand wash area will not be visible to Bebe and Swetha)
Girl: ( hugging) Avniiiiiiiiiiiiiii u know how much I missed you.
Avni( breaking the hug): are you mad baby. Why the hell did you came here. If someone knows about this then. U have to have minimum……
Baby: Avi why r you taking stress. Chill… Take a chill pill
Avni: baby I’mnt joking I’m serious babes
Girl2: Come on Aav
Avni: you just shut up first cause of you all came here.
Second you told me hi and hello in front of Bebe and mummy ji
And third what was ur need to come behind us anu.
Anaita: Aav stop getting tensed Babes
Baby: haaa Avi
Bebe: Avni puttar saf hogaya?
( Avni did the stain got cleaned)
Avni: shit… now what
(To Bebe) Bebe almost hogaya 2 min
Avni: what ever it is let’s talk later. First (looking towards Anaita) shall I
Anaita: yaaa sorry
Bebe and Swetha are shown
Swetha: Bebe Avni ab tak nahi aayie. Mein jake madat karthi ho shayad use help ki zaroorat ho
( Bebe I guess Avni needs help cause she didn’t come yet)
Avni: mummy ji us ki koi zaroorat nahi hain
( Mummy ji it is not)
Swetha: Avni Kya hua itini dher kyun lagi
( Avni what happened it took you soo much time)
Bebe: Swetha poorane dost seemili tho 24 bate karkehitho aayegi
( Swetha she met her old friends so she’ll have some gossips and only come)
Avni: Its… esa kuch nahi hain Bebe
( it’s…. it’s nothing like that Bebe)
Bebe: apne dostyion ko yaha bulao
( call your friends here)
Avni: Bebe uske kooi ZAROOORAT NAHI. VO VAHI THEEK HAIN
( Bebe thanks but NO THANKS THEY ARE CONFORTABLE OVER THERE)
The last line was little louder so that it is even audible to her friends
Bebe: Avni…… esa kyun keharahi ho….. Bacho yaha par aake hamare saath beto
( Avni…… why r u saying like that…. children come on sit here with us)
Avni(mind): Bebe aap samajte nahi agar vo yaha par aagaye tho…. mera tho parda fash hojayega hey bhagwan ab kya……. plz bacha lena bhagwan
(Bebe you aren’t understanding if they’ll come here my secret will get revealed OMG what now………… plz save me god..)
Swetha: Avni sab kuch theek hain naaa? tum pareshaan dhik rahi ho
(Avni is everything alright? U look tensed)
Baby: shaayad(i guess) by cing us. I’m I right Avniii
Avni: Baby just stop it yaar
Anita: Ab aaye Av..ni Avni bahar
(now Av…ni Avni came out)
Avni: mummyji is liye mein ne naa kaha
(mummyji this is the reason I said no)
Kyun ki hum tho always fight karte hain
(cause v’ll always fight)
Bebe: Avni aaj tumare hindi ko kya hua. Aur beech beech mein American English aaraha hain.
(Avni what happend to your hindi today and in between ur even speaking Amerian English)
Avni(mind): Shit!!!! What now…….
(to Bebe) nothing like…….. eesa kuch nahi Bebe
(nothing like that Bebe)
Wo aape dostyon ke saath collage mein English mein baat kar……
(Actually me and my friend would talk in English only in collage soo….)
Swetha: Avni Bebe bus teri taang keech rahi hain
(Avni Bebe is just pulling you leg )
Bebe: aur tut ho dar gai
(and u got tensed)
Avni(in mind):thank god I’m saved
All of them were talking and having coffee and some snacks. Bebe and Swetha were trying to know about Avni but were interrupted by someones call
Man1: Av……..
Avni(turning back and cing a masked man): who r you
She came two steps front and during the same time another person came and caught her hands cross so that she cant even move them
Man1: awwww……. come on Avi can’t u sit siiiiiilennt
Avni&her friend(together):Rahulll……………………………..
Rahul: right Avni( saying this he removes the mask) you naaaa made me obsessed… then I’ve to come naaaa
Avni: it means(turning her head back) Ronnie
Man2: sorry dear its wrong.
And he removes his mask
Avni: TARUNN………….. U………
Tarun: haaa sorry dear
Rahul takes out a gun and points towards Avni
Rahul: Sorry dear but ur gonna die today. And auntyji(to swetha) plz don’t try to call any one or else dear Av u’ll also go to god… and you girls don’t try to show ur smartness orelse ur bestiee for ever n ever n ever will surely die
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Precap
Can avni be saved???????????????????
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Sorry guys I had to go out for some reasons so couldn’t post. I’ll surely try to post next epi of Love BLOSSOMS by tmrow. Sorry for the delay. And thank u for giving sooo many comments i mean answers to all my queries in my previous article. If you want any changes or have any suggestions plz plz put in the comment area. I started but hav eto write the epi with changes as requested, so i should tpe again so plz give me some time guys.
Thank u for comments
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