SEPERATION (SWASAN) TS BY AAMNA (SHORT SNAP)

Hey Everyone!
Aamna Here ?

How R U people?

It isn’t an update but a short snap to a story ahead ?

Let’s Start with a Smile ?

SMALL SNAP TO STORY

CITY HOSPITAL

Maheshwari and Gadodia family was roaming in corridor worriedly ! Swara was crying miserably whilst sumi and ragini were trying to console her !

Sanskaar was admitted to hospital as he suddenly fainted in office ; Doctor’s were observing what was the reason of sudden collapse !

After sometime doctor came out with a serious expression and what he told shocked everyone ?

Swara was numb to react ; she wasn’t able to digest what doctor said…..

(What doctor said will be revealed in upcoming update ? So bear suspense for now ?)

INSIDE WARD

Swara sat near an Unconcious Sanskaar who was in deep slumber due to medicinal effect , His face was pale and gloomy ?

Sw: I LOVE YOU SANSKAAR! I promise I won’t leave U again but please don’t punish yourself for my mistake or other’s  (crying) Plz don’t torture yourself for this ?

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S:(Shout)Noooooo

Sanskaar woke up with a jerk ; sweat beads visible on his Forehead ; His face was pale as if someone snatched his soul ; He was panting heavily..

Sanskaar held his head between his hand’s it was paining badly ; All the memories of past ; yesterday’s incident ; swara’s taunt , their Seperation, their pain , his harsh word’s were revolving in his mind ; Making his state vulnerable..

He rested his head on head board and closed his eye’s ; A lone tear escaped his eye ?

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What happened yesterday that made sanskaar’s state so vulnerable?

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SWASAN were standing facing eachother  ; both were sharing a painful eyelock ?

Sw:Sanskaar ! I am Sorry  ?

Plz don’t do this ?

S:Why not swara? Do u only have the right to take decision and not me ?

Am I a toy to play?

Are my feeling’s just a mere thing for you to play?

No this time I won’t let this happen..

          
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What Sanskaar is Upto?

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S: I LOVE YOU SWARA !

Plz don’t do this again to our selves !

Plz don’t ruin our lives again for them ?

Sw: I DON’T CARE MR MAHESHWARI ? I HATE YOU ?

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Sanskaar was standing on edge of cliff ; his eye’s swollen and filled with tear’s ; his state vulnerable!

He fell on his knees crying miserably ??

S: Why this always happens to me ?

Am I not worth of trust and love ??

Why U did this Swara?

Why ??

If no body want’s to trust me ; Love me than what’s the need for me to be here ?

I will go away from here !

Forever and ever ?

Sanskaar Maheshwari died today !

Sanskaar is dead for world ?

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In a dark room ; slight traces of light wasn’t able to reach the room !

There was soft sobbing sound heard ?

A lady was shown sitting in a Corner of dark room crying holding a pick ??

She was none other than Swara..

Sw:Why you left us Sanskaar? Why you did this with us Haan??

I am sorry for not trusting you ? but plz come back ? plz don’t punish us more ??

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Here is a short snap to the story ahead!

I am not so happy with ur response toward’s my writing ? I guess u people aren’t liking my story so this would be my last story on SwaSan!

U people read and even like or unlike but never Comment’s ! For me Comment’s are something which let me know what’s the point I am missing! It’s a motivation for me to do better !

Cause when I write something I intend to get a feed back wether +’ve or -‘ve !

But by ur silence I can only drew one conclusion that you aren’t liking my effort and I have never intend to bore you people so this will be the last story on SwaSan!

Do Comment wether +’ve or -‘ve

See U Soon!

Bye Everyone!
Urs Aanu ?