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Fan Fiction Ishqbaaz

THE SEPARATED SOULS- SS (SHOT 1)

NilashBy NilashJune 10, 201736 Comments8 Mins Read
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Hii… to everyone while reading all the stupid spoilers I got so bored and disturbed that I wrote down the following at one go. I know I am very busy with my studies and other stuffs but couldn’t stop myself from writing this SS. To all my readers of O’bros I will post that one soon once my exam get’s over and after ending this one. This one will be of some shots only. So enjoy dearies.

SHOT-1
“Two months fifteen days and fourteen hours have passed. See you have changed so much. You have moved on” cried Anika as she uttered these words. Gauri was looking this from behind the door. She know why her Anika bhojai is upset but she can’t do anything as her Anika bhojai will never let her pain come out infront of the world. Gauri wiped away her tears and entered the room. Anika soon wiped away her tears looking Gauri and turned off her gallery on her phone. Gauri silently sat beside Anika. Anika at first tried to control her tears from shedding but she failed and hugged Gauri tightly and started to cry till her heart feels relieved. Gauri was patting her back but did not ask her to stop; she knew Anika will feel relieved after crying her heart out. One more hour passed like that. Anika controlled her but was still sobbing.

After sometime Mahi entered and looked his two sisters Anika and Gauri hugging each other and their faces grew red due to continuous sobbing for one hour. “I knew that you two will again start sobbing like this if I go out for some work”. Anika and Gauri left each other and looked up to Mahi with a faint smile on both of their faces. “What? What are you both smiling at? Am I sounding like a joker?” Mahi asked showing fake anger. “No Mahi bhaiyaa we were actually…” Gauri tried to explain but Mahi cut her in between. “OK now leave it you two go and wash your faces and give me something to eat I am very hungry”. “yes Gauri let’s go or else he will do gangaram of our brain” Anika chuckled after copying Mahi’s most famous word. Both of them went to the kitchen to prepare something for their sweet brother. Both the sisters came after half an hour or so with two dishes covered in their hand. “okk Mahi bhaiyaa we both cooked something new for you today and we betted against each other about the dish” explained Gauri . “Ohh god again this betting I am sure gangaram of my stomach is on its way” Mahi answered. “arree Mahi taste it both the dishes are khidkitor” Anika assured him with a smile.

Mahi uncovered both the dishes and tasted one by one. Anika and Gauri were waiting for the results but to their surprise Mahi finished the food and ran out as soon as he could. “ohh Mahi bhaiyaa where are you going?” Gauri shouted. “Be happy I am not going to heaven” Mahi answered and vanished from their sight. “Why he vanish such harhariyeke?” Gauri asked Anika with a question full eye. “May be some important work. Gauri let’s taste the dish and check it for ourselves who made nice.” Anika answered. Both of them tasted their dishes and started jumping for water. A hand came from behind handing over two sweets to them. They both took it and ate it. After sometime they felt relaxed. “Sorry Mahi bhaiyaa” Gauri said very sweetly. “Yes Mahi why did you eat those dishes? They were so high on chilli” Anika questioned Mahi. “My dear sisters you two made those dishes for me with so much love then how can I deny to eat them?” Mahi continued “I knew you both were waiting for my response so I ran to buy some sweets for you two so that after you two eat this the chilies won’t trouble you much”. “thank you” both Gauri and Anika replied. Mahi extended his hands and the trio the brother and the sisters hugged. LAFZON KA YE RISHTA…. Played in background.

The scene shifted to THE GREAT OBEROI MANSION. Shivay Singh Oberoi, the great SSO was working on his laptop while Priya his personal assistant entered his room. “sir your espresso” Priya said being a loyal employee. “yeah keep that kaali coffee over there” SSO pointed his bedside table. “sir??” Priya questioned his boss raising her eyebrow. SSO realized what he said and tried to correct his words “I mean keep espresso over that table and leave me alone”. Priya left. After sometime SSO took his coffee and went near the pool. All his beautiful memories with his beautiful wife over there started to play hide and seek with him. He took the first sip of his coffee. A smile covered his face when he remembered how Anika spitted espresso famously know as kaali coffee on his shirt. Another sip of his kaali coffee and he remembered how Anika said him that she has started to like his Kaali coffee. He was remembering all his cherished memories of his and his wife. Soon his trance broke when he realized his kaali coffee is over. He went inside and again started to work on his laptop.

Priya went to Pinky. Pinky asked Priya to bring back love to Shivay’s life through her. “Aunty ji I tried to become everything of Shivay but he always ignores me” complained Priya to Pinky. “Hey Priya I want to make you my bahu so without any further complain just go and try to grab Shivay’s attention. I can’t see my bacchha in pain for that Anika” Pinky howled. Priya again went to Shivay’s room. “Sir can we go out for a dinner today?” Priya questioned Shivay hoping for a positive answer. “ Ms. Priya you are my PA so better you behave like that only don’t try to be someone special in my life” the bitter answer shook Priya and she went away from there crying. Shivay opened a picture of Anika in his laptop. “I know Anika you don’t love him, I know you lied to me for something very big and I will wait for you to confess the truth. If I have to wait for you till my last breath I will do that because I lo…” Shivay stopped in middle. He closed the picture and again started to do his official works.

The scene shifted to Om’s room. After so long Om was returning to his old phase. Old Om is taking and making place in new Om’s heart. After so long Om was making a statue. Jhanvi entered his room and felt happy but she realized sadness in Om’s voice. Om was sad, Om was trying to forget her but could not. Every time he tried forgetting her the old Om shouted from inside that he needs her. She was his habit, she was becoming someone special in his life but before the journey completed Om threw her out from Oberoi Mansion. “Om I know you always take decision correctly but you don’t feel the need of Gauri in this house?” Jhanvi questioned. “mom I don’t know whether I need her or not but I want this house to become like house again and for that if someone is needed to be back then she is our Anika bhabhi. Shivay needs her mom” Om answered being worried. Jhanvi was not satisfied by Om’s answer but she knew to bring back happiness in Oberoi Mansion both Gauri and Anika are needed to be back. She went away leaving behind Om in deep thought whether he seriously needs Gauri in his life or not.

Bhavya the new bahu of Oberoi Mansion went to her room I mean to Rudra’s room where he was punching on his boxing bag. “Rudra you need not punch this bag so hard” Bhavya said sarcastically. “No my Bhavya darling I need to to stay fit” Rudra answered in the same tone. “now drink this protein shake” Bhavya said and handed over the glass of Protein shake to Rudra and went away. “protein shake oberoi” Rudra murmured and smiled after remembering his friend Sumo’s taunting words. “I miss you Sumo” Rudra again murmured. After finishing his Protein shake Rudra went back to his punching bag and started punching hard. He was feeling a sweet little pain inside his heart but was unaware of the reason so he let go of it.

The three brothers were confused. And this confusion created the unhappiness in them. Shivay wanted his Anika but was confused why did she lie to him. Om was confused about Gauri. And our Protein Shake Oberoi was confused about his pain.

How was it?? I know bit emotional. Exactly opposite to the writing style of mine but couldn’t help it. Will be uploading the next part soon.

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    36 Comments

    1. Sairan on June 10, 2017 10:07 pm

      Wow…great to see you after a long time…. amazingggggg episode.. amalgamation is commendable ..post the next asappppppp Plzzzzzzzz

      • Nilash on June 11, 2017 6:09 pm

        Hlooo Sairan… got to read your appreciating words after so long. Missed you.
        Thank Yous so much and i already posted the next episode waiting for TU to upload it.

      • Sairan on June 11, 2017 7:14 pm

        Aaya nahi yaar abhi Tak

    2. Aashi on June 10, 2017 10:08 pm

      Its nice and sweet
      update soon & regular

      • Nilash on June 11, 2017 6:10 pm

        Thank You Aashi… I will surely try to upload the parts regularly and for next part i already posted waiting for TU to upload it.

    3. Ashwinee on June 10, 2017 10:08 pm

      Good one .☺

      • Ashwinee on June 10, 2017 10:10 pm

        And yeah don’t get stressed out and take care

      • Nilash on June 11, 2017 6:12 pm

        Thank You so much Ashwinee… can I call you just Winee because it sounds classy and friendly
        And will surely take care and don’t worry i will never land in the stress filled world as i am very funny and irritating and a chatter box. But Thank You so much for your concern
        You also do take care

      • Ashwinee on June 11, 2017 7:28 pm

        Ofcourse and I love my new name Thank you . And how can I call you by the way

    4. shivika on June 10, 2017 10:10 pm

      amazingghhh superb anirihi bond was loving keep updating asap wait for next one hope soon truth come out

      • Nilash on June 11, 2017 6:14 pm

        Thank You Shivika… i already uploaded the next part just waiting for TU to upload it. And the truth will surely come out soon. Please stay tuned

    5. Sam on June 10, 2017 10:30 pm

      Touched my heart seriously! ❤

      • Nilash on June 11, 2017 6:15 pm

        Thank You Sam… for such sweet appreciating words. Please stay tuned.

    6. Sagithya on June 10, 2017 11:02 pm

      Loved it… It was awesome…. Anika gauri mahi bond was fantastic… waiting for the next part.. post it soon

      • Nilash on June 11, 2017 6:26 pm

        Thank You Sagithya… i am glad dear that you loved it
        i already posted the next part just waiting for TU to upload it. Please stay tuned

    7. pooja26 on June 10, 2017 11:21 pm

      awsm…..

      • Nilash on June 11, 2017 6:27 pm

        Thank You Pooja

    8. Meghana on June 10, 2017 11:46 pm

      Amazing update post next part asap

      • Nilash on June 11, 2017 6:31 pm

        Thank You Meghana…. I already posted the next part just waiting for TU to upload it dear. Please stay tuned

    9. Niriha on June 11, 2017 6:14 am

      Awesome…I loved anika gauri and mahi bonding waiting for next part update soon

      • Nilash on June 11, 2017 6:32 pm

        Thank You Niriha…. I already posted the next part just waiting for TU to upload it dear. Please stay tuned
        And dear your DP is very awesome. The pure eternal beauty of Rose. really an amazing one.

    10. kanfi on June 11, 2017 11:31 am

      Hey nilash…i m reading ur ff frst time,…xcpt that chudailbaaz work…
      U r really an amaxing writr,,.I really loved it….
      The way you describe everything,..its just ammazing,…
      Whoke storyline is fabukous…
      Waiting for next part

      • Nilash on June 11, 2017 6:38 pm

        Hey Kanfi… You know i am a bit disappointed on you I know i left PKJ but Gayathri of PKJ keeps me updated with the first commenters and you were not there not done. This time ordering you go and get your first position.
        And now thank you so much for so many appreciating words altogether. A very different style from my actual style but i am glad you liked it. I already posted the next part just waiting for TU to upload it dear. Please stay tuned

      • kanfi on June 11, 2017 6:49 pm

        When i read disappounted iwas like what have i done…
        Yrr i m trying to bt many of them watch on hotstar n copy paste so i wont think i’ll ever able to do that.. 😉
        Yaaa ofcourse i’ll stay tuned..
        Take care

      • kanfi on June 11, 2017 7:54 pm

        Of course u are…
        U can say anything to me…
        Yes..umeed p duniya qayam h…
        I m tryinggg

      • Nilash on June 11, 2017 7:45 pm

        Kanfi never loose hope. And i can say like that to you right??? After all we are good friends.

    11. alekhika20 on June 11, 2017 12:49 pm

      Amazing update

      • Nilash on June 11, 2017 6:33 pm

        Thank You Alekhika
        Please stay tuned dear

    12. Madhuani on June 11, 2017 2:03 pm

      Amazing…

      • Nilash on June 11, 2017 6:33 pm

        Thank You Madhuani
        Please stay tuned dear

    13. Jerry_36 on June 11, 2017 11:16 pm

      Hello Nilash Di.
      So here I am with a apology note. I am really sorry for this very late comment. Holding my ears di, maaf kardo na !
      Okay I know you are really good so you will forgive me, haina??
      Now coming to the chapter, I don’t know what to say, this is so amazing. I know its really different from your taste, but I loved this side of writer of yours.
      Actually I prefer more emotional stories then comedy ones but I read for you and believe me, they are amazing, but this one is Fabulous and I really mean what I say, you nailed it di??
      I loved that you included Nahi in your ff and the trio bond. They also dwelled up so easily, fantastic.
      Feeling sorry for both Shivaay and Anika, they are so adorable but still waiting for their most awaited meet and I know this will be fun to watch.
      Aldo I will be looking forward to Gauri chiraiya and Saumya’s story. And this Pinky, god what to do.
      So this chapter was awesome with cuteness overloaded and pinch of emotional touch.
      I know that you have updatef the next chapter and am gonaa read still want to say post the other chapters soon.
      Love yaa❤❤

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 10:02 am

        I will hold your ear for this sorry that you said. You refer to me as DI and asking for forgiveness just for late commenting. Now i will get angry.
        Thank You dear that you liked it. Will surely post the next parts soon. And dear just stick to any one ff because reading all three together really hampers your studies i feel. So a request from my side no need to waste your precious study time on these.
        And from next time if you again say sorry then I will be very angry. So keep this in mind.
        Love you my dear Jerry. And a tight hug to you.

    14. kashaf on June 11, 2017 11:18 pm

      It is amazing. Three couples. I hope something like this happens after leap. I miss Rumya so much.

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 10:04 am

        Kashaf I also hope after the leap some really good stories come up but I don’t think CVs are in any mood to end the emotional torture soon. So we have to be strong this time. Thank You dear. And i will try to showcase the most beautiful side of Rumya in my SS.

    15. nikita_jai29 on June 12, 2017 12:01 pm

      It is awesome.. My rocking girl… Some things different from your side…

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 12:19 pm

        Yup yaar really very different. Hey Nikki dear thank you so much yaar. Please stay tuned dear

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