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Home»Fan Fiction»My secret admire »DevAkshi« Episode 14
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My secret admire »DevAkshi« Episode 14

rj12By rj12January 23, 201725 Comments8 Mins Read
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Hi guys Rithika here
I know I’m little too late but sorry for that

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Sona was walking alone on the dark road, tears were rolling down from her beautiful eyes wetting her soft milky cheek reminscing Dev’s slap

Sona: (tears)How he can slap me for a girl…he slapped me…I hate him, I just hate him

She remincses Dev holding Rhea’s hand. She felt heart broken and got teary eyed

Sona : Y it’s bothering me haan it shouldn’t bother me at all, let him be with any girl ..I don’t care .. I hate him

She was so much hurt by his behavior towards her that she didn’t realize that she is walking alone in the road which is so dark and silent as it is late night. Soon she comes to sense & lifts her head and looks around and gets scared finding herself in a unfamiliar place

Sona : How come I’m here ?

She gets scared as there was no one except her. Just then her eyes falls on a car coming towards her with full speed, she gets happy

Sona : A car…Let’s ask for help

Before she could shout for help the car stops near her shocking and surprising her, she gets scared seeing many men sitting in the car, a man who’s face is covered with a cloth comes out of the car. She moves back in fear seeing him moving closer to her. The man smiles evilly and pulls her holding her hand and takes a white cloth from his pocket and keeps it on her nose she screams and falls unconscious as it was chlorophyll, and he takes her inside the car. The man’s removes the cloth from his face he revels to be Birju and he calls Bhaya ji

Birju : Hello Bhaya ji ..
Bhaiya ji : Haan bol
Birju : Ur work is done Bhaiya ji
Bhaiya ji : (smirks) Good! Now I will show this Dev Dixit my real power by using his weakness (smiles evilly)
Birju : (smiles evilly) Haan Bhaiya ji

Birju : (to a man) Chal start the car

The man nodes and Start’s the car they leave from there

After dropping Rhea at her house Dev returned back. He parked his jeep and sat outside on a bench. He keeps looking at the window of Sona’s room remincsing how he slapped her, his love. He admits and claims to love her but what did he do, he slapped her is this was his love. He gets teary eyed remincsing tears in his love’s beautiful eyes which was because of him, he is the reason for her tears

Dev : I’m sorry Shona, I’m sorry my jaan, I know what I did was wrong but I didn’t had any other option, ur talks would’ve affected Rhea’s health as she recovered just now after the dreadful thing that happened in her life..how can I let her put in danger

He wanted to speak her, ask apologies from her, but he thought she might have slept by now so decided to talk her at morning. He lies down on the bench looking at her window hoping to take a glance of his love. He hurt her but what about him..didn’t she hurt him !! He gets teary eyed

Dev : (tears) And how can I cheat on u, I LOVE YOU only u Shona, how can u think that. This heart (points to his heart)just beats for u only u my love

His eyes dried, he got tried of everything, he was just staring at her window hoping to see his love just once and soon he dozes off outside on the bench itself

Next day. Elena and Vicky comes out of their respective mansion. Both smile looking at each other. Vicky goes towards her and hugs her

Vicky : Good morning jaan
Elena : (hugs back) Good morning

He releases the hug, just then his eyes falls on Dev who is still sleeping on the bench outside the mansion. He looks at him surprisingly

Vicky :(surprised) Dev…
Elena : (confused) What?? Dev bhai

He points to Dev, she looks at that direction and gets surprised to see Dev

Elena : Bhai….yahan…y is he sleeping here outside the mansion
Vicky : This ur bhai sahab can only tell so come let’s wake him

Elena nodes Vicky and Elena go toward Dev and shake him in order for him to wake up

Elena : (shakes him) Dev bhai, bhai ..utho…wake
Vicky : Arey Dev wake up yaar

Dev opened his eyes and looks at them who were smiling looking at him. He rubs his eyes sitting on the chair he was still in sleep

Vicky : Dev, y r u sleeping here outside on the bench

Hearing this Dev got up from his sleeping world and looked around confusedly

Dev : (confused) I don’t know
Elena : U don’t know y did u slept here last night ???

“Last night ” this word made his mind refresh his memory. He remincses last nights incident, his slap to Sona, he got teary eyes while Vicky and Elena looked confusedly yet get worried seeing tears in his eyes

Elena :(worried) Bhai,y this tears in ur eyes?? U crying?

Dev doesn’t reply to her. He bends back and holds his head, Vicky and Elena look more worried because this was the firat time they r seeing Dev in this condition

Vicky : (worried ) What happened dude, any problem??

Vicky said sitting beside him keeping hand on his shoulder. Dev lifts his head and looks at him and hugs him

Dev : (tears) I’m sorry Vicky….how I hurt her??? I’m sorry
Elena : Bhai kya hua tell na ….y r u crying??
Vicky : Yes Dev, what happened

Vicky releases the hug and asks him. Dev wiped his tears and looks at him

Dev : Vicky woh Sona (he tells everything)
Elena : What…u slapped Sona….how can u bhai
Dev : (bends his head in guilt) I’m sorry Ele…I’m sorry Vicky
Vicky : Dev, I know u love Sona and I’m aware of how much u love her and I also know that u wouldn’t have slapped her intentionally so don’t blame urself
Elena : No Vicky I don’t agree with u bhai is..

Her words were left incomplete as Dev’s phone rang. He lifts the call

Dev : Hello
OS:……
Dev : (shock) What??

Vicky and Elena look at him confusedly

Vicky : (confuse) What happened dude

Dev looks at him and keeps the mobile on speaker

Dev : (confused) Birju???
(It’s Birju’s call)
Birju : Haan I’m Birju, Bhaiya ji’s man, u heard right I kidnapped ur love Sonakshi (laughs sarcastically) last night I kidnapped her …

(All look on shock..Elena goes to Bose mansion to check Sona)

Dev : oh so u r tat idiot’s man
Birju : Idiot kis ko bola bai, u r over now (serious yet dangerous tone) and if u want ur love Sona back then come to ABC place or else we will not leave her

He thought Dev would fear and will beg him to not to harm Sona …but instead he hears laughing sound, yes Dev was laughing. Briju got confused

Dev : Hahaha nice joke hahaha go ahead don’t leave her…

Saying this Dev cuts the call leaving Birju confused. Whereas Elena who didn’t find Sona in Bose mansion gets angry to see Dev laughing taking it as a joke. She goes towards him

Elena : Bhai, u r laughing here huh! I guess he didn’t joke, he really kidnapped Sona because I searched her she isn’t anywhere in Bose mansion (worried) but y did he kidnapped Sona

Dev looks at her and gets up from the chair

Dev : I know Ele, I know that he kidnapped Shona
Elena : Then y r u so calm, and y did he kidnapped Son

Dev pats her cheeks and leaves to Dixit mansion, Elena gets angry yet confused, she looks at Vicky

Elena : Vicky woh Sona
Vicky : (interrupts) Bye jaanu

He say’s this with a smile and was about go but Elena holds his wrist not letting him to go he turns and looks at angry Elena

Elena : Vicky aren’t u worried about ur sister, about Sona huh! She is kidnapped and u r smiling her how can u both be so calm not worrying about Sona
Vicky : (smiles) Yes I’m not worried and u will get to know the reason of my not worrying about her very soon sweetheart

Saying this he leaves from there, leaving her again confuse yet angry seeing their calm behaviour. She is angry cause even though they r aware that her friend, their love and sister respectively Sona is kidnapped they show now worries….

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    25 Comments

    1. Richa on January 23, 2017 1:44 am

      Thanks for posting..I was waiting. Please post next episode soon

      • rj12 on January 23, 2017 4:42 pm

        Thanks Richa

    2. Poonam on January 23, 2017 11:04 am

      Episode was nice… but not that romantic.. we are missing some romance between Devakshi.. pls writeit soon.

      • rj12 on January 23, 2017 4:44 pm

        Thanks Poonam
        Sorry for that. Promise I’ll put the romance sequel soon

    3. Princess. on January 23, 2017 11:11 am

      Awesome episode dear plz post the next episode soon

      • rj12 on January 23, 2017 4:44 pm

        Thanks princess

    4. V.V.harshita on January 23, 2017 11:15 am

      Hi it was awsome and plzs post soon

      • rj12 on January 23, 2017 4:45 pm

        Thanks Harshita

    5. Maleeha on January 23, 2017 11:19 am

      U brought dev emotions to us so beautifully…. And even I’m confused at the last part…. Maybe dev is planning something…or idk….* but the episode was awesome
      Love,
      ❤❤❤

      • rj12 on January 23, 2017 4:45 pm

        Thanks Maleeha

    6. akshita on January 23, 2017 12:49 pm

      Finally after a long wait you posted…..now plzzz post it regularly

      • rj12 on January 23, 2017 4:47 pm

        Thanks Akshita
        But sorry I don’t think I can post regularly till March

    7. simplesweety1 on January 23, 2017 1:02 pm

      Wow! It Was Awsm Yaaar! And I Think That I know Why They’re Not Worried About Sona … Because Sona Hi Unke Liye Kaafi Hai … Right ?????

      • rj12 on January 23, 2017 4:48 pm

        Thanks Tanvi
        Ur right Sona hi unke liye kaphi hai ???
        But stay tuned to know what happens because apparently Dev and Vicky r hatching a plan

      • simplesweety1 on January 24, 2017 6:02 pm

        ????

    8. Aarti32 on January 23, 2017 6:25 pm

      I’m sad ??

      • rj12 on January 23, 2017 8:57 pm

        Why??

      • Aarti32 on January 23, 2017 9:55 pm

        For Sona..

      • rj12 on January 23, 2017 10:13 pm

        Oh! That’s understood

    9. priya12 on January 23, 2017 7:20 pm

      Omg..wat a epi…the way u write…u showed devs emotions , amazing …….see the heart , ths heart beats 4 u only, I love u sona u only……thos line were splendid…n u showed dev’s lov 4 sona ..nicely .. n epi was awesomeeee , the last part, I think dev n vicky r planning 2 save sona only,….pls post the nxt epi soon dr…..eager 2 know what happens nxt

      • rj12 on January 23, 2017 9:02 pm

        Thanks Priyu
        Ur somewhat correct itself

    10. Manya on January 23, 2017 7:30 pm

      Awesomeeee ❤️❤️❤️
      Post soon
      Love❤️

      • rj12 on January 23, 2017 9:04 pm

        Thanks Ayushi

    11. erika on January 24, 2017 10:51 am

      awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee epi loved it update asap

      • rj12 on January 24, 2017 7:10 pm

        Thanks Erika

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