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Home»Fan Fiction»My secret admire »DevAkshi« Episode 12
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My secret admire »DevAkshi« Episode 12

rj12By rj12January 14, 2017Updated:January 14, 201732 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hi guys Rithika here,
I know I’m late sorry I was busy writing an OS in Swaragini here’s the link please read and comment if u liked it :
swasan-os

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Dev’s cabin

He enters the cabin and makes Sona sit on his chair, she keeps angry face. He smiles

Dev : Wild Khargosh look at me na please

He caresses her cheeks lovingly, she gets angry and takes off his hand, he smiles

Dev : Darling…
Sona : (cuts off) Shut up!
Dev : U r so forward haan…asking me to pull up my shirt.. waise not bad idea
Sona : Chi! I will kill u, stop irritating me
Dev : So u want to kiss me, that’s also a very good idea. Waise bhi no one r here,(huskily) just me and u in my cabin and…

He leans on her who was giving him a angry expression. They were so close to each other that his hot breath was touching her soft lips, he looks at her lips and caresses it by his thumb sensuously and romantically, she widens her eyes and her heart starts beating heavily

Swara: wh..a..t r…u doing

She sounds angry whereas he shushes her lips still caressing it sensuously

Dev : Don’t u love me Sona
Sona : N..o…no ..(breathing heavily)

He looked into her eyes immediately after hearing her answer and smiles

Dev : But I LOVE YOU

He smiles and kissed her forehead

Sona: (wonders) Y I’m so confused that I love him, but I don’t love him…he irritates me, but at the same time he makes me feel tat I’m the most luckiest girl to get him..what’s happening to me god please give me the answer please

Her thoughts were interrupted

Dev : I will be back don’t move from here..if u do also u will not be able to go out from this cabin because I will lock it

Sona : Again u started irritating me
Dev : Hmm now what will I do without irritating u my day doesn’t go well

He pulls her cheeks and she takes off his hand

Sona : Stop pulling my cheeks and what did u say u will lock me in this cabin
Dev : Yup, because u r my property na

Saying this he walks towards the door Sona also follows him and he goes out she was also about to go but he closes the door and locks it while she gets angry and bangs the door

Sona : U idiot ugh!!
Dev : (cuts off) Your idiot sweetu

He leaves from there

Sona : Arg!!

She stamps her foot and turns and looks at his cabin she thinks something and smiles naughtily

Sona : U locked me here na now see what this Sona will do Obhodro

She smirks and starts messing the cabin, throwing things here and there, breaking some things then she looks at his pic on the wall, she goes towards it

Sona : How dare u lock me here

She looks at a paint box kept in a shelf, she thinks something and smiles teasingly. She takes the paint and draws horns on his head and draws vampair teeth and writes Obhdro there

Sona :Wow Shona u draw so well. See this idiot is looking like real rudie by ur creativity

She praises herself, just then her eyes falls on the Dev whom she saw via the window. She goes towards the window and opens it and was shocked to see the scenario, Dev was hugging a girl so closely and rubbing her back, her eyes burned in anger seeing that it turned into a pure jealousy, she clutched the curtains tightly in her fist showing her jealousy The were talking something which she wasn’t able to hear

Sona :(confused yet angry) what the hell r they talking

She see’s Dev biding bye to the girl, after trying hard she heard the girl name

Dev : Bye Rhea(in this Rhea isn’t his sister) take care

“Rhea” she murmurs confusedly

She immediately looked at them Rhea was gone while Dev was standing still lost in deep thoughts soon he also leaves from there

Sona : (confused) Rhea.. who is she now?

Same semi dark room

Bhaya ji was chewing the paan looking at the man sleeping on the bed covered with bandages just then Birju comes there

Birju : Bhaya ji …
Bhaya ji : Bol did u gt information about that man, what is his name
Birju : Dev Dixit
Bhaya ji : Haan wahi
Birju : Bhaya ji Dev ki weakness is (he tells something)
Bhaya ji : (smirks) Hmm good now proceed for next step of our plan

Briju nodes and both smiles evilly

“Rhea” hearing this name from his voice she burned with jealousy which is unknown to her. Remincing Dev hugging Rhea her eyes turned red because of jealousy

Sona: Who is this Rhea, how can he hug her

She turns and walks towards the chair just then her eyes falls on a paper on the table decorated with hearts she takes it confusedly
“This is for u My love …Sona” was the words written on it. She immediately opens it and reads

Tere Didaar Ko Tarasti Hain Meri Aankhein,
Bin Tere Raat Din Barasti Hain Meri Aankhein,

Tere Har Naksh Ko Samaaya Hai Dil Mein Maine,
Teri Har Baat Ko Samajhti Hain Meri Aankhein,

Tere Aane Se Sanwar Jaati Hai Duniya Meri,
Tere Didaar Se Chamakti Hain Meri Aankhein,

Tere Har Lafz Ko Samjha Hai Sanam Maine,
Ek Tere Sajde Mein Hi Jhukti Hain Meri Aankhein,

Tujhko Paane Ki Umeed Abhi Hai Mujhko,
Jhoothe Hi Khwaab Kyun Bunti Hain Meri Aankhein

Yours n yours
Dev
Love u my Sweetheart

Her jealousy turned into happiness forgetting what she saw a moment before. Reading his letter which is only for her filled with so much love. She blushes with a cute smile

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    32 Comments

    1. Maria on January 14, 2017 5:49 pm

      The episode was awesome!!

      • rj12 on January 14, 2017 8:11 pm

        Thanks Maria

    2. Maleeha on January 14, 2017 6:13 pm

      Superb one….. Once again the poetry was too good….. Dev romantically teasing sona ???
      Awesome,
      ❤❤❤

      • rj12 on January 14, 2017 8:13 pm

        Thanks Maleeha

    3. simplesweety1 on January 14, 2017 6:39 pm

      Awsm Ya! But Aage Bada Twist Mat Laana Plz! :'(

      • rj12 on January 14, 2017 8:13 pm

        Thanks Tanvi

    4. Manya on January 14, 2017 6:46 pm

      Awwww??so sweet and cute❤❤❤❤
      and those lines ??????
      post soon
      Love ?

      • rj12 on January 14, 2017 8:14 pm

        Thanks Ayushi
        By the way ur dp it’s so cute??
        Is that u??

      • Manya on January 14, 2017 10:33 pm

        yes di!!!!thanks

      • rj12 on January 14, 2017 10:50 pm

        God I never knew ur so cut ??

    5. Princess on January 14, 2017 7:12 pm

      Awesome episode dear but plzz post soon next episode

      • rj12 on January 16, 2017 10:11 pm

        Thanks princess

    6. Erina on January 14, 2017 7:43 pm

      Awesomeeeee part dear
      Post soon Egarlyyy waitingggg

      • rj12 on January 16, 2017 10:11 pm

        Thanks Erina

    7. priya12 on January 14, 2017 7:51 pm

      Rithika, as usual amazing dr…..especially the lines ..superbb dr

      • rj12 on January 16, 2017 10:12 pm

        Thanks Priyu

    8. Darshini on January 14, 2017 8:14 pm

      Awesome yaar…waiting for the next…post soon dear…

      • rj12 on January 16, 2017 10:13 pm

        Thanks Darshini

    9. Anjali333 on January 14, 2017 10:08 pm

      Amazing episode.
      But please try to post chapters early.
      Please

      • rj12 on January 16, 2017 10:13 pm

        Thanks Anjali

    10. akshita on January 14, 2017 11:18 pm

      I just love you ff it’s too good??❤❤

      • rj12 on January 16, 2017 10:13 pm

        Thanks Akshita

    11. Aarti32 on January 14, 2017 11:37 pm

      Soooo cuteeee..

      • rj12 on January 16, 2017 10:13 pm

        Thanks Aarti

    12. Alka on January 15, 2017 8:27 am

      Awesome cHapter …. I hope sona realizes that she is in Love ? … Asap
      Post soon????

      • rj12 on January 16, 2017 10:14 pm

        Thanks Alka

    13. Niki645 on January 15, 2017 10:11 am

      It was amazing!!
      And the lines were just too good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      • rj12 on January 16, 2017 10:14 pm

        Thanks Nikip

    14. V.V.harshita on January 15, 2017 2:36 pm

      Hey Rj12 really really loved it…plzs post the nxt soon…can’t waite to read nxt….and I hav no words to describe this one awsome thts it

      • rj12 on January 16, 2017 10:15 pm

        Thanks Harshita

    15. erika on January 16, 2017 11:20 am

      awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee epi update asap

      • rj12 on January 16, 2017 10:16 pm

        Thanks Erika

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