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Home»Fan Fiction»My secret admire »DevAkshi« Episode 1
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My secret admire »DevAkshi« Episode 1

rj12By rj12December 15, 201636 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hi guys Rithika here
Thank u for ur support in my previous ff I’ve come up with this episode so read and comment

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BOSE MANSION
Asha : Ramu(servent) Call Vicky for breakfast
Just then he comes down on his own
Vicky : Ma I came
Asha : Achha have breakfast come
Vicky : Where’s baba
Asha : For walk he’ll come in sometime…..one thing u’ll do for me beta
Vicky: Ya ma what
Asha : Wake up Shona know
Vicky : No I won’t wake up that kumbkaran
Asha : U told u’ll do what I say now go
Vicky leaves for Sona’s room
Vicky : Sona…..Sona wake up u don’t want to go to college get up kumbkaran(he shakes her)
Sona : (sleepy voice) Which monkey is waking me up so early
Vicky : Ur Vicky bhai
Sona :(sleepy voice) Vicky…bhai don’t irritate me go or I’ll kick u
Vicky : (anger)Sonaaa just wake up nowwww!!

Sona jerks and gets up
Sona : Bhai u here go let me sleep
Vicky : Just get ur college is starting today don’t u wan’t to go
She gets up happily
Sona : Thanks for waking me up bhai… love u
She hugs him
Vicky : Now go get ready
She goes

After sometime she comes down ready
Sona : Good morning ma, baba
Asha : Shona come eat breakfast
She finishes her breakfast and leaves
Sona : Ok now bye everyone
Vicky : Sona come with me I’ll leave u till the gate
He drags her outside where her eyes fall on Elena
Sona : Ele….
They share a hug
Elena : U know how much I remembered u
She elbows her
Sona : Me or bhai waise leave this let’s go
She makes her sit on the scooty
Vicky : Hi Elena
Before she could reply
Sona : Bye bhai
She starts the scooty and drives off just then Dev comes there
Dev : Hi Vicky
A smile comes to Vicky’s face and he hugs him
Vicky : U finally came after 4 years from London and didn’t tell me even Elena didn’t
Dev : Chill yaar I thought of giving u a surprise and where does Elena remember me she only roams around u na. Hmph!
Vicky : Shut up
Just then a fatty comes(Ayan) and hugs both of them
Vicky : Ayan what r u doing keep calm yaar and come we r getting late for office
Ayan : Dude Dev just came from London let’s hang out like before
Vicky : Come on lot of work is there Dev u joined?
Dev : Ya waise Ayan u reduced ur eating or no?
Ayan : Y do u all eye my food
Dev : Ok sorry let’s go in my jeep
They sit in the jeep and leave for office
Ayan : Waise Dev any girlfriend in London
Dev : No
Ayan : I thought girls will fall flat on u because ur handsome
Dev : There were many who fell for me but they were not my type
Vicky : Then who’s ur type haan
Dev : He has already decided
He said looking towards the sky

In the college Sona parks the scooty in a hurry and goes towards a small mail box in which there was a letter beautifully decorated with hearts
Elena : Utha jaldi take it read it and stop blushing
She blushes and takes the letter
~~~~Letter~~~~

Tu hai meri geet
Tu hai meri jeet

Hai mujhe tujse pyar
Jald karoonga tujse mere pyar ka iqraar

Agar tu ne mere pyar ka kiya haan
Le jaoonga tujhe mein ek dusre jahan(planet)

Jahan mein barsaoonga tere upar mera pyar
Kya yaad rakhegi meri yaar

Ki har janam mujhe hi apna sathi banana chahogi
Because I’LL LOVE U ALWAYS

Yours and yours only
Admire?

~~~~~~~~

She blushes even more reading the letter just then Natasha comes
Natasha : Oh ho again the secret admire strikes
Sona and Elena : Hi Natasha
Natasha : Leave that he has been sending u letters from 6 years still didn’t come in front of u and u still love him
Sona : So he always expresses his love through these beautiful letters which r always kept close to my heart and physical presence doesn’t matter to much as long as he sends these letters to me
Natasha : Stop ur lecture better is to blush
They all laugh

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How was it please give ur views

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    36 Comments

    1. Richa on December 15, 2016 10:13 pm

      Too good yaar..was desperate to read… please post next episode soon.

      • rj12 on December 15, 2016 10:44 pm

        Thanks richa

    2. Manya on December 15, 2016 10:20 pm

      Awesomeeeeeeeeee di❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
      Especially those lines❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
      Post soon
      Love love?????

      • rj12 on December 15, 2016 10:45 pm

        Thanks ayushi glad u like the lines I did so much hard work to create them

    3. Heshine on December 15, 2016 10:21 pm

      Hey Rithika…how r u….hope u r fine…!!!I’m really sorry fa not cmntng in the previous parts of ur ff…..!!!as there no network at all…!!it was juz a big mess…here so hope u wip understand….!!! and yeah….u hve ended ur ff….No matter……oh…?…but no prob will be in touch wit this new
      one…..okok….I knw I’m boring…..but coming to ff….
      Ohhhhhhhhh…..!!!its juz awesome….!!!I loved it…….really….!!amazing…..I’m stuck….its really different….!!!?????????
      U really nailed it witbur new plot….!!!I’m eagerly waiting fa the next epi……(note: so desperately ..??)..!!!yeah of course y not…..it really seems interesting…!!???pls dear update the nxt asap….I’m waiting ….!!though its filmy tats the truth…!!!
      Take care ….bye…..
      Love…love…???
      Heshine….???

      • rj12 on December 15, 2016 10:46 pm

        Thanks heshine I will update the new epi soon

    4. dolly on December 15, 2016 10:43 pm

      Superb start friend. Lovely epi.

      • rj12 on December 16, 2016 1:10 am

        Thanks dolly

    5. Princess on December 15, 2016 11:05 pm

      Awesome dear desperately waiting for the next episode..

      • rj12 on December 16, 2016 1:10 am

        Thanks princess

    6. Riddhi on December 15, 2016 11:08 pm

      Awesome episode post soon

      • rj12 on December 16, 2016 1:11 am

        Thanks riddhi

    7. Anjali333 on December 15, 2016 11:15 pm

      Amazing ritika
      Totally loved it
      Each n every thing was soo perfect
      Please next part jaldi SE update kr do
      Bilkul wait nahi ho raha
      Please update very soon
      I am eagerly waiting

      • rj12 on December 16, 2016 1:11 am

        Thanks Anjali

    8. akshita on December 16, 2016 12:02 am

      It was too good yr can’t wait for next episode post soon

      • rj12 on December 16, 2016 1:11 am

        Thanks akshita

    9. Varsha94 on December 16, 2016 12:32 am

      Looks very interesting yaar.. I hope sona gets to know who s it soon.. Awesome work..loved it..?❤???

      • rj12 on December 16, 2016 1:12 am

        Thanks varsha

    10. Maleeha on December 16, 2016 9:48 am

      Amazing and awesome dear……really loved it….. Dev must be the secret admirer* of sona…..?
      ❤❤❤

      • rj12 on December 17, 2016 1:25 pm

        Thank u maleeha you’ll find out soon who the admire is

    11. erika on December 16, 2016 3:35 pm

      awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee epi

      • rj12 on December 17, 2016 1:25 pm

        Thanks Erika

    12. AnShIta on December 16, 2016 4:27 pm

      Hey Rithika di!
      This was amazing! Every thing was amazing really! FANTABULOUS, I’d say!
      Please do post the next one soon!
      Love ya!?????

      • rj12 on December 17, 2016 1:25 pm

        Thanks anshita

    13. Bharti123456 on December 16, 2016 6:44 pm

      This was totally awesome loved it post soon

      • rj12 on December 17, 2016 1:26 pm

        Thanks bharti

    14. simplesweety1 on December 16, 2016 7:43 pm

      Wow! Awsm! Update Soon! *Claps*

      • rj12 on December 17, 2016 1:26 pm

        Thanks simplesweety

    15. Alka on December 16, 2016 8:33 pm

      Wwowowowowowowowo …..epiiisode was very good. ….???

      • rj12 on December 17, 2016 1:26 pm

        Thanks Alka

    16. SHAHEER on December 16, 2016 9:10 pm

      Amazing??????

      • rj12 on December 17, 2016 1:27 pm

        Thanks shaheer

    17. mahi sama on December 16, 2016 10:32 pm

      Toooo Oooooo gooooodddd yaaarrr. ……
      Eagerly waiting for next part
      I guess ADMIRE = DEV

      • rj12 on December 17, 2016 1:27 pm

        Thanks mahi you’ll find out soon who the admire is

    18. Erina on December 17, 2016 7:26 pm

      D way u present ur ff is awesome dear nd specially those words of letter was awesome I loved those line ?????nd well I know whos that secret admire as u told in ur intro nd I hope u will not change that ….. ???just kidding dear ….

      • rj12 on December 17, 2016 9:28 pm

        thanks erina
        glad u liked the lines it took me so much time to create it

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