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Introduction of the charecters and the first episode;


Neil Khanna—An Ex-IPS officer ,is currently working as an RJ.

Avni Ayesha—A writer.

Harleen Khanna—Neil Khanna’s Paternal Grandmother.

Prakash Khanna—Father of Neil Khanna and a renowned business tycoon of Mumbai.

Shweta Khanna—Neil Khanna’s Mother.

DD—Neil’s best friend.

Neela Pareikh—Avni Ayesha’s stepmother and a renowned businesswoman of Mumbai,also runs an orphanage named sukoon ghar.

Ali—Avni’s best friend.

Reha—Ali’s wife and Avni’s cousin.

Aman Ayesha-Avni’s brother.

Sunehri—Avni’s best friend.

Karan Kapoor—Avni’s ex-fiancée.

Sayesha Kapoor—Karan’s new fiancée.

Episode 1.

Scene 1:A radio station.

Neil:When the fragrance of the sea blends with the night and takes this city into the arms of slumber that is the time when I wake up,when the world closes its eyes to make the present,the past ,my eyes look for people like me who want to meet an old mistake again and walk down memory lane once again the same lane which is a pain as well as a relief , welcome to the program of the lonely hearts of such moments .The program is for people who are feeding themselves in this dark night or sharing coffee with the moon outside the is also for people who are on the bed but are still awake due to a book or lost in somebody’s memories ,I have brought a piece of my heart for such people but first as per the promise that I made 2 years ago I am going to tell you all the reason for which Neil Khanna turned into ACP Neil Khanna and ACP Neil Khanna turned into RJ Neil,so the story of my life has always been very complicated I fell in love with a girl named….

ok let’s call her j as I cannot tell her whole name so I was madly in love with her and then we decided to get married but on the day of our marriage she was kidnapped and forcefully married to vid…ok we will call that man v I wanted to kill that man but then I decided that I will punish him but after becoming an IPS so Neil Khanna became ACP Neil Khanna for the sole purpose of taking revenge from the man who snatched his first  love from him and soon that day came when I was pointing  a gun at v but that day my heart shattered into pieces I came to know that ju..sorry j was just playing with my heart she didn’t love me she loved my money and she was already married to that man v so that day ACP Neil Khanna became RJ Neil and that day I realised that if your first love gives you your first heartbreak it means that you never fell in love so now enough of emotional talks and let’s hear to this song :Mai jahan rahu, mai kahee bhee hu
Teree yaad saath hai

Jaane kiski talaash unakee aankhon me thee
Aaraju ke musaafir bhatkate rahe
Jitane bhee woh chale, utane hee bichh gaye rah me faasale
Kwaab manjil thee, aur manjile khwaab thee
Raston se nikalate rahe raaste
Jaane kis waaste aarju ke musaafir bhatkate rahe

Mai jahan rahu, mai kahee bhee hu, teree yaad saath hai
Kisee se kahu, ke nahee kahu, yeh jo dil kee baat hai
Kehne ko saath apane ek duneeya chalatee hai
Per chhupke iss dil me tanhaayee palatee hai
Bas yaad saath hai, (teree yaad saath hai -3)
Mai jahan rahu, mai kahee bhee hu, teree yaad saath hai.

Scene 2 :Pareikh Mansion.

Avni’s POW(point of view)

Avni:Dayawanti Mehta was right I am darkness but  its not my fault that I am illegitimate then also  Karan left me why does this always happens with me Ma why?

Neela:Avni , its not your fault and now  you don’t have to be scared dayawanti mehta is dead .

Avni:Ma I know she is dead but her words will always haunt me because they were true ,and maybe she was right that Ayesha Ma and Ashish mehta died because of me .

Neela:Avni,why are you saying that her words were true she herself was a murderer she killed Ashish ,she killed Deeksha ,She killed Ketan and Hetal she tried to kill you ,she caused Ayesha ji’s accident she killed nanno ,she tried to kill you she tried to kill me and you are saying that her words were true you are saying that a blo*dy murderers words were true.

Avni:No Ma she was right because of me Aman is also spending his life in prison .

Neela:Avni,have you gone mad Aman is not in prison because of you he is in prison because he killed dayawanti mehta .

Avni:Ma ,then why Karan left Me do you have an answer ,you don’t have any answer right ,he was right no one will ever love an illegimate girl i don’t deserve love ,it would have been good if i  would have died when dayawanti mehta shot me.

Neela:Avni,don’t you dare say this again.

Avni goes away from there.Neela hopes that love soon enters Avni’s life.

Precap:Neil meets Avni .

What will happen when Neil a witty and handsome RJ will Collide with Avni a beautiful heartbroken writer will they unite to become Avneil or will their meeting turn into hatred.

I hope that you all like this FF and please comment.








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  1. Hasinasoghra

    It seems to be very interesting

    1. 8B4756

      Thanks ,and I ensure that I will keep it intersting till the end.

  2. Avneil_adiza_fan

    Great into…update soon

    1. 8B4756

      Thanks and I will update soon.

  3. very interesting
    update soon

    1. 8B4756

      Thanks,I will update soon.

  4. Hey you are amazing the FF starts with interesting twists I hope you will give a nice FF for us

    1. 8B4756

      Thanks,for your love and support and I bet that you will love thisFF.

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