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Home»Fan Fiction»school love part 23
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school love part 23

administratorBy administratorJune 29, 201613 Comments7 Mins Read
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SHOCKED…!!!! Me too…even i was nt supposed to write bt mujhse ruka hi nhi gya…??….
Ooo..dont think i will continue writing…. if possible i will give updates in b/w….let me think…
I will post twice in a week… chalega kya…. decide the days… i will post….

Here we go

Part 23

Scene 1

The scene starts where tw was lying on the bed… she is in a condition where she can hear or listen anything but cannt respond to anything. She ws able to see nd hear ws evident thru the tears falling from her eyes…. may be she was feeling helpless….. nd love for kunj was seen in her eyes.. as he kept her best care in last 10 months… may be if smeone else wud have been at his place has back offed his duty…. she was reminding all his care and love towards her…. he used to feed her, give her medicines, combing her hairs, make her look fresh nd all… nd hw can she forget the nights where kunj used to cry hard jst saying her to cme back bt she was never able although she wanted the same….. kunj used to cry hugging her.. she jst wanted to console him by hugging him back bt she was nt able… everything like this have broken her from inside… she jst wanted to cme back…. to her kunj… instead of love their was even sme sort of confusion seen in her eyes…. dont know wat….

Scene 2

Sid was laying on the bed nd recalling the incident which changed his life completely… which made him go mad… he know he did wrong and he is suffering bcz of that only… either he is repenting for his mistake… bt everytym this doesnt work… we shud try nt to do mistake wen we know wat it will result into…as after doing mistake we can never undo it… hw much we feel bad for it… bt it will nt change anything…

******flashback*******
Sid was seen standing near a car nd was doing smething… he was having tears in his eyes as he know he is doing wrong…bt his circumstances take all the his power to think…
After doing the work…
Sid ( to himself)- i know wat i did is wrong bt i m sry tw nd kunj really sry…. i have to do this… for my mother… their is nthing important for a child then his mother….
{ he failed the breaks of tw’s car as he know kunj will go out in this car to his competition…. as this is lucky charm for kunj…..}
After doing this he left the place…
Nd goes towards his house…
On reaching their he saw his mother( fake ) and Rt talking and accepting each and every crime of theirs along wid the reasons..( reasons will be revealed later).. he was shocked he was nt angry on them bt felt miserable of himself as till know he was unaware that who the hell was he…he dont know abt his reaal identity … bt he was feeling guilty tat hw can he do so widout giving second thought…hw can he think to play wid anyone’s life…. he was abt to rush to do everything correct bt before tat he heard rt talking to smeone on phone….
Rt- (shouts)..- NOOOOOOOO……This cant happen..tw tw…( sweating) ….
Sid’s mother- kyyya hua bhayya…???
Rt- tw tw…( almost shivering voice)..- she my daughter….met wid an accident…( saying this he breakdown competely nd fell on floor wid a thud…) until they heard the voice of smething breaking down… they saw in that direction… nd saw sid moving backward nd jst repeeeeating
sid- i m a murderer i killed her….nd faints…..

LOVE OF RT FOR TW IS TRUE…. HE ALWAYS THOUGHT OF HER AS HER DAUGHTER… BCZ WE ARE HUMANS…HUMANITY CAN NEVER LEAVE US….SMETYMS CIRCUMSTANCES MAKE US DO WRONG THINGS THAT CAN BE FORGIVEN BT IF WE LOOSE OUR HUMANITY THAN NO ONE CAN FORGIVE US EVER IN THIS CRUEL WORLD…. BCZ EVERYTHING IN THIS WORLD SHOWS EQUAL ND OPPOSITE ACTION REACTION…..

******flashback*******

Rt was standing in the front of sid’s room door.
RT- hw will i explain u my child that their is no fault of urs in all this….. u r nt responsible for tw’s condition…. she didnt use her car. This is destiny who played wid her nt u my son…. i cant see my all children in this state…..( wipes his tears nd leaves…)….

Scene 3

Kunj was seen on a stage….nd was performing… ( as it is a launch function of his first album..)..{ he won tat competition..}…

Tere bin, tere bin
Tere bin, tere bin
Tera bina marna nahi
Jeena nahi tere bin (x2)

Tere bin, tere bin..

pa pa pa….

Bawre piya laage na jiya
Dekho mera mann jalta diya
Jalta diya bujhe na piya
Bujhe na piya jalta diya
mm mm..

HE IMAGINED TW IN THE CROWD CHEERING FOR HIM… HE SAW HER COMING TOWARDS HIM… HE WENT NEAR THE AUDIENCE ND GAVE HAND TO HER TO COME UPON THE STAGE…… SHE HELD HER HAND ND CAME UP….. SHARING A PAINFUL YET BEAUTIFUL EYELOCK…..

Tera bina marna nahi
Jeena nahi tere bin
Tere bin, tere bin

pa pa pa..

Bawre piya laage na jiya
Dekho mera mann jalta diya
Jalta diya bujhe na piya
Bujhe na piya jalta diya

Hmm mm..

HE HELD HER HAND ND HELPED HER TO PLACE ON HIS SHOULDER ND KEPT HIS BOTH HANDS ON HER WAIST… THEY WERE STILL LOST IN EACH OTHERS EYES AND WERE SMILING SEEING EACH OTHER….. ND WAS MOVING SMOOTHLY ACCORDING TO THE MUSIC…..

Tera bina marna nahi
Jeena nahi tere bin
Tere bin, tere bin
Tere bin, tere bin..

Tera bina marna nahi
Jeena nahi tere bin
Tere bin, tere bin..

pa pa pa..

THEY WERE STILL DANCING SMOOTHLY HOLDING EACH OTHER CLOSE… THEY HUGGED EACH OTHER ND WAS NOW JST MOVING SLOWLY…. KUNJ WS ABT TO KISS HER FORHEAD WEN HE CAME BACK TO REALITY WID THE SOUNDS OF CLAPS FROM AUDIENCE….. HE WAS HAVING TEARS IN HIS EYES WEN REALITY STUCK HIM THAT IT WAS JST HIS IMAGINATION NOTHING ELSE… ND AS ALWAYS HE LEFT THE STAGE WIDOUT SPEAKING ANYTHING…. ND WENT TO HIS GREEN ROOM..ND CRIED HARD…..

Samar was also present in the audience and ws seeing all this….he felt as if kunj really loves tw..nd he is wrong abt kunj..as he felt his pain…. bt then again his sister’s condition came in his mind nd he scolded himself saying…

Samar- have u gone mad…??? Cant u understand tat he nd his chacha are same blood… manuplating people for own use wid fake emotions is in their blood…. leave it samar..jst think hw to take revenge from him… i know if tw comes to know tat i m planning smething like this..she will never like this as after knowing the truth she trust this man soo much….

Precap- anniversary..

Sry guys i added anniversary in todays part bt wen i was abt to post it…sab delete ho gya…??….
I dont know ki yeh kaisa hai…i have nt checked it…
Bt plz leave ur comments…..
Missed u all sooo much..
Love u all…??

Credit to: ridhima

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13 Comments

  1. Shreya on June 29, 2016 8:30 pm

    Kya epi tha…muaaah amazing…
    Well I prefer to post on weekends…
    Don’t be confused ….I am Shreya only

  2. dreamer...arundhati on June 29, 2016 8:36 pm

    Rhidhima luv u muah… Osum epi
    It was emotional ,perfect. Luved it
    Post it whenever u can.

  3. aamu on June 29, 2016 8:54 pm

    hey ridhima back after so many days yaar n bdw epi was good
    n plz make tw normal
    yaar u had described emotions so well
    it reallly good
    muah
    cm back soon with 24 epi

  4. Angita on June 29, 2016 9:24 pm

    Amazing

  5. Fan on June 29, 2016 9:25 pm

    Awesome epi ridhima…dont worry we can wait for ur ff…post it whenever u can….

  6. kruti on June 29, 2016 9:26 pm

    Hey ridhima ….amazing epi loved it
    And regarding to the upcoming epi post it whenever its possible for u I don’t have any issues with any day of the week…..take care

  7. Dolly on June 29, 2016 9:37 pm

    Lovely episode bt make tw normal

  8. baby on June 29, 2016 9:49 pm

    oh god ridhima di wow m jst w8ing sidhant 2 no dt jasmin is now concious in ur ff n she is ohk n wt ll hapn dn yr di thnks so mch fr snding dis episode omg i luv u yr di d episode ws epic as well as amazing thnks sooooooooooo mchhhhhhhhhhh fr posting dis ff nly if nt d heaven 1 bt i hp u ll post dt soon haha xD

  9. Sayeeda on June 29, 2016 10:48 pm

    Missed u ; missed u soooo much ….missed u like hell ….so happy to see u back ..
    First tell how’s ur health now as Ananya told us that u r not well …I hope u r fine now…
    Coming to episode ….it was so emotional each nd every scene was so painful …nd song was just like an icing to cake ; completely fits with situation ….
    Whenever u r free u can post …as I won’t force u to post soon …love u nd take care

  10. Purnima.agrawal30 on June 29, 2016 10:52 pm

    It’s just fabulous as always….eagerly waiting for next part….

  11. apoorwa on June 30, 2016 12:01 am

    emotional epi

  12. Shatakshi on June 30, 2016 5:23 am

    Hey rushi
    It was too good yaar
    Loved it❤❤❤

  13. Ria on June 30, 2016 8:58 am

    Long time. The episode was nice.. hope you can continue soon.

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