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Home»Fan Fiction»school love part 16 (pt 2)
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school love part 16 (pt 2)

administratorBy administratorMay 11, 2016Updated:May 17, 201639 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hey guys ridhima here..
Thank u soo much for supporting me guys…i am really happy tat i got friends like u…smetyms i bcme senti and started thinking alll rubbish tats wat i did yesterday….at a point i lost trust over myself bt u ppl help me to gain it back….love u all..

#And really sry for this discontinous updates kya karoon apne ghr mein apne hi phone ki chori krni padh rhi hai…?….

Now myself…for baby and others who want to know me…
My name is nt ridhima( this is name of my favourite character from dil mil gayye..?)
Bt ya i m a girl..
I m 17 from punjab…completed 12 strugglung wid entrance exams..
Give me ur mail ids i will contact u ppl by snding mails or on fb if anyone interested…
Sry for bak bak now back to story…

ON A SERIOUS NOTE

Sid- vivian dsena
Samar- harshad arora ( if any one of u want i will add swadheenta also… choice is urs)
Photo frame was of sagars dad from ganga(& tv) lets name the character as Raj..
Sids mom – give ur suggestions plz….

Part 16( pt 2)

Twinj was seen standing at the edge of the cliff…

Kunj closes eyes of tw from behind….
Tw- wat r u doing kunj..
Kunj- shh tw kitna bolti hai…
After sme tym kunj removes his hand nd asks tw to open her eyes….nd after opening her eyes she was awestruck seeing the view …
I LOVE U TWINKLE ws written in the sky wid the crackers bt bt bt this was nt enough….
He asked tw to see downwards….
Their thousands of divas were floating in the water wid written I LOVE U TWINKLE…wid it… increasing the beauty of water…she was having tears in her eyes…
Nd at last he turned her towards him and shown written I LOVE U TWINKLE on land wid the roses of different colour nd a board is hanging in front of her wd the many pics of tw nd kunj from childhood till now…

Tw slowly slowly moves towards the board nd strarted touching the pics lovingly….and started recalling the tym spent wid kunj….
Tw turns nd find kunj on her knees…
Kunj- i know tw we r not married like normal couples…hve nt spnt tym like others bt i can say tat i love u more than anything….i will love u like the stars do to sky…fishes to water and soil to land….means totally dependent on eo…like tem i will nt be able to live widout u…i know this is awkward proposing after marriage lekin jo insan ajeeb cheeze kare usse kunj sarna kehte hain..haha leave it..
Will u be mine forever???
Saying this he saw towards tw bt she was lost somewhere…

Kunj slowly moves towards her and kept his hand on hers nd brought her lips close to her ears nd asked do u like this???
Tw immediately turns nd hugged her tightly nd strted crying…..

After smetym kunj departs her from him…
Kunj( tensed) dont u like it tw…
Tw nods her head in negative….
Kunj was shocked nd also feels hurt as he did all tat for her bt she didnt like it…bt his thoughts came to an end wen
Tw- hw cud i like it wen i loved it…and i am urs forever… and smashes her lips on his….and started kissing hiim…for sme tym kunj remains numb and didnt respnd bt after smtime he got her senses back nd started kissing her wid equal emotions….
After sme tym they broke the kiss..
And both look into eo eyes lovingly…
Then at tat tym rain started making them drebched…( as u all know koi bhi date bina barish ke kaise ho skti hai…?)
Then they started dancing smoothly nd romantically their only….

After smee tym they both get back to their home..hd dinnr nd slept…
( i know guys u must be expecting much more from their date bt kya karoon i m very bad at filmy romance..)

On the othr side…
Samar ws seen sitting on a stool near a bed in hospital…
Raj was lying on the bed all unconcious….
Samar( in tears)- dad i m missing u…u know wat i ws nt able to save our tw from tat rt all alone…bt now her husband kunj is wid her…he will save her definitely…i m very happy for my sister….
U know dad she becme very big tall nd intelligent..jab apne usse dekha tha than she was really very small haha…a 4 yr old kid…u know dad mom still nt get her mmry back….dad i know i alwys tell that i will handle everything bt now i lost all my patience …i need u, i need mom…i need to play wid my sweet lil sister…after tat accident all lifes are changed…
Agr rajat uncle na hote toh main 12 saal ka bacha kb ka mar gya hota…he supported us nd help me….i m shocked ki rajat uncle jaise lig bhi duniya mein hain…warna woh rt toh….
Leave it dad bt u know she got her job on her own i know its in my company bt potential is hers….she is all like u…
I promise u all will be fine soon…
A 40-45 yr old man entered the room..
Man- beta kab se yahan baithe hoo pichle 16 saal se tum roz yahan aate ho koi change nhi aaya..kyun tum apne aap ko dukh de rhe hoo..main hoo na yahan.
Samar- plz uncle yeh mere liye dukh nhi hai…. mujhe yahan aakar acha lagta hai aur dill halka ho jata hai aur mujhe pta hai aap ho aap hi ke karan toh hum zinda hai warna..
Rajat- beta aise nhi bolte chodo aisi baaton koo….

Other place
Rt- i will nt allow tat kunj to ruin tw’s life i have to do smthng asap…

At sids house…

Sid- mom i am sry ma i know u r nt happy wid mee…plz tell me how can i help u…i will do anything 4 u….
Sids mom ((soul))- complete my last wish marry tw…
Sid was shocked bt agreed…- if u will feel happy in this way then i will do anything for u…i will marry tw…bt plz u remain happy..saying this he fells on his knees nd cried…..

To be continued….

Hw was this guys ??? Do leave ur comments…
And i know i said u tat everything will be sorted out till nxt month bt know this irregularity will remain till august….
Sry for this…even in b/w i can take a long gap abt a month….or 15 days…
R u guys ok wid it means ready to w8 otherwise i will try to wnd my ff fast…
And ya break is nt near bt not far also…

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39 Comments

  1. yashu on May 11, 2016 5:29 pm

    nice….

    • ridhima on May 11, 2016 7:59 pm

      Thanks dr..

  2. Amy on May 11, 2016 5:37 pm

    Nice.this is my email ([email protected])

    • ridhima on May 11, 2016 7:59 pm

      Thank u soo much dr…
      i will surely contact u asap

  3. Salma on May 11, 2016 5:38 pm

    Awesome epi ridhima

    • ridhima on May 11, 2016 8:00 pm

      Thanks dr

  4. cutie on May 11, 2016 5:59 pm

    Nice ridhi,and ya from my side u may take leave ( permission granted)
    As many days as u want , no worries just chillax as I can understand ku jab apne ghar main apne phone ki chori karni pade to samaj jaana chaahiye ki stithi kitni gambhir hai ( god I just love my hindi???) but I would b eagerly waiting for ur ff.

    • ridhima on May 11, 2016 8:02 pm

      Thank u soo much dr….and i m really thankful for ur leave nd understanding my condition….nd even i love ur hindi…??

  5. Sadaf khan on May 11, 2016 6:02 pm

    Awesome….. My fb account is ( khansadaf1233 ) and my email ( [email protected] )

    • ridhima on May 11, 2016 8:03 pm

      Thank u soo much dr….i will contact u asap

  6. Anushka on May 11, 2016 6:03 pm

    Nice epi

    • ridhima on May 11, 2016 8:06 pm

      Thanks dr..

  7. Lama on May 11, 2016 6:29 pm

    Fabulous epi

    • ridhima on May 11, 2016 8:06 pm

      Thanks dr…

  8. Ria on May 11, 2016 6:49 pm

    It was great. And, I guess adding Swadheenta would help sort out everything quicker.

    • ridhima on May 11, 2016 8:30 pm

      Thank u soo much dr

  9. zikra on May 11, 2016 7:03 pm

    Amazing epi dear loved it so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much

    • ridhima on May 11, 2016 8:31 pm

      Thank u sooooooo much dr….

  10. grace on May 11, 2016 7:43 pm

    very nice epi.

    • ridhima on May 12, 2016 9:44 am

      Thanks dr

  11. baby on May 11, 2016 8:05 pm

    Ohk hey ridhima my mail id is [email protected]
    2ndly thnks alot n den i m a big fan of urs di i m 16 in 11th n yah amazing episode jst luvd it u wr amazing as always bas pls post asap luv u

    • ridhima on May 12, 2016 9:45 am

      Thank u soo much dr…
      i will post asap nd will contact u soon..

  12. Sam on May 11, 2016 8:27 pm

    Awesome and amazing

    • ridhima on May 12, 2016 9:45 am

      Thanks yr

  13. panchi on May 11, 2016 8:58 pm

    Awesome epi ……loved it ……. and u cn take break …… we can undrstnd yaar ….. we wl wt fr ur update ……… but pls dnt end it …….. love it a lot ……

    • ridhima on May 12, 2016 9:47 am

      Thanks dr…
      and also thanks for understanding me…
      nd will nt end it..

  14. nataksha on May 11, 2016 10:45 pm

    Hey ridhima..nice episode.. Are u Writing NEET?

    • ridhima on May 12, 2016 9:47 am

      Thanks dr…
      Yup i m writing neet…?

  15. Ritzi on May 11, 2016 11:37 pm

    amaaaazing ridhima…. nd ya ridima(jenniefer winger)is my mooooost fav. actress aftr jasmin yaar…. nd dil mil gayye was my most most favourt show… i loved it yaar…. nd i love ur ff too

    • ridhima on May 12, 2016 9:48 am

      Thank u soo much dr…
      Even i love tat show and jenni the most…

  16. rupam on May 12, 2016 12:44 am

    I hd no wrds now abt ur ff…..it is mindblowing….luv u yrr

    • ridhima on May 12, 2016 9:48 am

      Thank u soo much dr…

  17. sonal on May 12, 2016 1:52 am

    Apne ghar me chori….plzz tell me what happened……

    • ridhima on May 12, 2016 9:50 am

      Thanks 4 ur comment…..
      and maine apne ghr mein chori ki kyunki aap logo ko update dena tha…..mmy ne mujhe phone uthane se mana kr dia bcz of my exams….lolz…bt i m addicted to writing toh…

  18. Sana on May 12, 2016 5:45 pm

    Nice one ridhima…. ::*:*:*:*@):-@):- this is my gmail account — [email protected]

  19. Sana on May 12, 2016 5:51 pm

    Its nice dear..

  20. Sana on May 12, 2016 6:01 pm

    Srry dear i gave wrong gmail id .. [email protected]

  21. Sana on May 12, 2016 6:04 pm

    Srry dear i gave wrong gmail id .. [email protected] Keep smiling always…

    • ridhima on May 13, 2016 4:25 pm

      Thank u soo much dr…..
      i will contact u asap

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