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school love part 11

administratorBy administratorApril 22, 2016Updated:April 22, 201630 Comments8 Mins Read
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Hey guys, thank u soo much for ur support.
Here i am wid the next part of school love. Hope u guys will enjoy it ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜‰

Part 11

After marriage tw bidaai takes place which is done by leela as rt left the place before only….

Leela- kunj puttar meri beti ka dhayan rakhiyo

Kunj- maa u dont worry i will take care of her. He smiles and wipes leelas tears….

Tw hugs leela and cries….
After that twinj sits in the car and leaves from their.
The car stops in front of a building. They both came out.
Tw- toh mr. Sarna aap yahan rehte hain.
Kunj- yes mrs. Sarna yahan hamara ek chota sa ghar hai. I hope u will nt mind.
Tw- no i am happy. Tum mujhe kahin bhi le jao…. ๐Ÿ™‚

Then they entered the building and reached 6 floor. They were standing outside the a flat. Kunj opened the gate and enters and asked tw to stay outside. He will be back..
Tw was w8ing for kunj and it has been 10 minutes now. She was feeling restless and ws abt to enter.
Kunj- stop tw.
Tw stops and saw kunj was carrying a glass in which rice were filled and a thaal( smthng like plate with borders) filled with red water.
Tw raises her eyebrows and asked wat is this???
Kunj- maine tv pe dekha hai wen newly wedded bride enters in her house for the first tym then this rituals are done.
He places glass and thaal in front of her and asked her to enter now…
Tw kicks the glass lightly and steps in the thaal and then in the house. As soon as she started moving the red prints of her feet were left behind… ๐Ÿ™‚ .
Kunj closed the door.
Kunj- tw fresh ho ja then we will do dinner. I will bring it in our room.
Tw nodes and enters the room and goes to washroom. Here kunj came in the room wid the dinner. Tw came out of washroom.
Kunj- i am sorry tw today u have to adjust mujhe sirf noodles banane ate hain…
Tw- np kunj i love noodles.
Twinj smiles….
Kunj came near her and hold her by her waist. Tw feels butterflies in her stomach and blushes.
Kunj( in husky tone)- u love noodles only.
Tw- (shies)- ku..nj… U r very much changed.
Kunj- this is nt the answer of my question..
Tw- i lo..ve u kunj and hugs him immediately in shyness
Kunj-(hugs her back)- i love u too tw. I missed u soo much. Plz dont leave me ag….
Before he can complete his sentence tw keeps her hand on his mouth and nods no…
Tw- i will never leave u . We will always be together…
She hugs him again.
Tw- kunj mujhe bhukh lagi hai…
Kunj- ya come…

They both sat on the couch for having their dinner. Tw was going to have it only bt kunj interupts.
Kunj- tw we are married??
Tw- haan kunj i know..
Kunj- u know how married people eat
Tw- nahi actually meri pehli shadi hai i dont have experience jab nxt tym shadi karongi then…
Kunj( interupts) nxt tym shadi karongi mtlb??
Tw – haan toh i am nt going to spend my whole life wid u. U r very boring u know….
Kunj pulls tw on his lap and said i am boring.
Tw( shocked) yyess…
Kunj starts caressing her face wid his hand sensously
Kunj- i will show u how much boring i am
Tw started breathing heavily. Tw- kunj lets eat i am hungry…
Kunj leaves her and asks her to pick the noodles bowl.
Kunj- i will tel u how married ppl eat. He asks her to take a thread of noodle in her mouth from one side and kunj takes the other side in his mouth. Tw blushes and kunj smiles naughtily.
( guys this is one of my fav scenes o tei ๐Ÿ˜› )
They slowly slowly start eating .The noodle ends and their lips meet. It was a soft and ap passionate kiss. Twinkle’s hands reach kunj’s neck and ahe started rubbing it slowly and kunj’s hand reached twinkles bare waist and he started moving his hands on her waist sensously. After sm tym both broke the kiss wen they were out of oxygen.

They ate the noodles like this. Then kunj carries tw in his arms and make her sit on the bed.

O hoโ€ฆ
Bheegi bheegi sadkon pe main
Tera intezaar karun
Dheere dheere dil ki zameen ko
Tere hi naam karun Khudko main yoon kho doon
Ke phir na kabhi paaun
Haule haule zindagi ko
Ab tere hawaale karun
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Karam re, karam re
Tera mujhpe karam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
O hoโ€ฆ

Then slowly slowly he removes his jewellery and then placed his lips over the part….
After removing jewellery they both were busy staring in eo eyes. Both dont want to stop eo, want to show how much they were desperate to see eo and love eo…

Coming back from thoughts
Kunj make her ly on bed and comes over her. They both were breathing heavily and were able to feel eo’s warm breath. Then kunj again kisses her lips romantically while his hands were discovering the curves of her beautiful wife and tw was rubbing his hairs. Then suddenly kunj bites her lower lip and tw moans his name. Bt tw is tw he also bite his upper lip in return and again both started kissing eo. After sme tym they broke the kiss. Kunj digs his fce in tw’s neck and started kissing it letting shivers pass thru tw’s body. Then he bites her neck and tw moans in pain then to soothen the pain he sucks the bitten area and again same he did wid the other side of her neck..

Tere kareeb jo hone laga hoon
To toote saare bharam re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
O hoโ€ฆ

Then kunj opens the dori of her blouse. Tw feels the touch and turns to othr side due to shyness. Kunj then kisses her bare back and tw clutches the bedsheet in her hands…
Then again kunj tries and this tym he removes her clothes and after sme tym he removes his clothes too. Now they both were fully naked. Kunj took a glance at his wife from top to bottom and started kissing her everywhere. A single part of her body was nt left where kunj have nt kissed her.

Baadalon ki tarah hi toh
Tune mujhpe saaya kiya hai
Baarishon ki tarah hi toh
Tune khushiyon se bhigaya hai
Aandhiyon ki tarah hi toh
Tune hosh ko udaaya hai
Mera muqaddar sanwara hai yoon
Naya savera jo laaya hai tu
Tere sang hi bitaane hain mujhko
Mere saare janam re

Sanam re, sanam re (sanam re..)
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re (sanam re..)
Tu mera sanam hua re
Karam re, karam re (karam re..)
Tera mujhpe karam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re (sanam re..)
Tu mera sanam hua re
O hoโ€ฆ
Mere sanam re mera hua re
Tera karam re mujhpe hua ye (x2)

By now tw was nt able to control herself. She rolls over kunj and started kissing and bitting him. Now this was the tym for kunj to moan in pain and pleasure. Both were enjoying their moments of intimacy and wanted the world to stop here….

Then again kunj comes on top of her and said smthng in her ears.
Tw nods in a yes and with in no tym two bodies became one. Firstally tw shouts, her eyes were filled with tears bt later on she enjoyed the moment and moans in pleasure. Making kunj more crazy….. They make love for some more tym and after that tgey dozes off…

Precap- a new day with lots of hopes…

Guys how was this?? Plz leave comments. I even dont know how i have written this this is on ur guys special demands. I hope i reached ur expectations. I have not read it once.

Padhon bhi kaise likhne mein hi dhuyen choot gye. ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜‰

Sorry if it is nt wat u expected and if it is vulgar. Really sorry…. :'(

Love u all.. :-*

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30 Comments

  1. Mayatwinjfan on April 22, 2016 11:36 pm

    Love u and ur ff. Ur amazing plz continue ur ff and keep writing lovely twinj scenes.
    Bless u sweetie

    • ridhima on April 23, 2016 3:50 am

      Thank u soo much dr
      will continue soon and will be adding more twinj scenes…. ๐Ÿ˜‰

  2. Cutie pie on April 22, 2016 11:43 pm

    No it was jus awsme continue soon loved it wat did kunj say in tw s ears actually frankly speaking i wanted sme more romance n long part continue sooon

    • ridhima on April 23, 2016 3:51 am

      Thanks dr
      Will try to fulfill ur demand by adding more romance….

  3. Twinkle on April 22, 2016 11:43 pm

    it was soooooo amazing……geez i love it. please do continue writing

    • ridhima on April 23, 2016 3:53 am

      Thanks dr
      will continue soon

  4. Yukku on April 22, 2016 11:53 pm

    Frankly saying the epi had too much intimacy & I loved that????…….. It was amazing……. Upload next one soon yar

    • ridhima on April 23, 2016 10:59 am

      Thank u soo much dr

  5. sam on April 23, 2016 12:05 am

    Awesome loved it

    • ridhima on April 23, 2016 3:54 am

      Thank u soo much dr

  6. Mitali on April 23, 2016 12:17 am

    awesomeeeee……………amazing…………………

    • ridhima on April 23, 2016 3:55 am

      Thank u dr

  7. srija on April 23, 2016 12:52 am

    wow
    it was a very hot update ????
    continue soon

    • ridhima on April 23, 2016 3:56 am

      Thank u soo much dr
      will continue soon

  8. twinkle on April 23, 2016 8:20 am

    U r superb yaar go ahead nd we need more twinj scenes what said guys?

    • ridhima on April 23, 2016 11:00 am

      Thanks dr
      will try to add more twinj scenes

  9. yashu on April 23, 2016 8:24 am

    wowwwww… it ws jst superb…… i hav no words to say..

    • ridhima on April 23, 2016 11:01 am

      Thanks dr

  10. nataksha on April 23, 2016 10:05 am

    Aweeessooooommmmeee episode..
    Loved it.. Post the nxt epi sooooooon plzzzzz .. LUV U..

    • ridhima on April 23, 2016 11:02 am

      Thank dr
      and love u too
      will post soon

  11. Zayb_zikra on April 23, 2016 10:14 am

    Jus luv ur ff n u dear loved it so so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much do cont soon plzzzzz luv u no words to describe it it ws jus amazing superb

    • ridhima on April 23, 2016 11:03 am

      Thank u soo much dr
      will continue soon

  12. zarmeen on April 23, 2016 11:56 am

    verry nice

    • ridhima on April 24, 2016 3:18 am

      Thanks dr

  13. HBD sid-(tamanna) on April 23, 2016 11:58 am

    it was awesome….seriously amazing…keep writing twinj romantic scenes….

    • ridhima on April 24, 2016 3:19 am

      Thanks dr
      will try to add more scenes

  14. Lama on April 23, 2016 3:15 pm

    Awesome episode……loved it…..plz do continue and plz some more romance ???

    • ridhima on April 24, 2016 3:23 am

      Thanks u soo mch dr
      will try adding more romance

  15. Grace on April 23, 2016 10:12 pm

    It was really nice. I loved their romantic scenes. U r a brilliant writer.

    • ridhima on April 24, 2016 3:24 am

      Thank u soo much dr

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