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Home»Fan Fiction»Savitri devi- Love rhymes-Os
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Savitri devi- Love rhymes-Os

PrettypreetiBy PrettypreetiAugust 5, 201726 Comments5 Mins Read
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Mai tujhe hmesha pyaar kroonga
Zindagi mei jitne mauke milege utni baar kronga
Tu hi meri manzil hai tu hi mera raasta
Ek baari haa krde tujhe mere pyaar ka vaasta
(I will always love u,
As many as chances i will get i will still love u
U my destination and u r my journey
Just say yess,for the sake of my love)

A single day didnt pass where he not took her name..she was her life soul..she was her sun and moon..she was everything for him..Why soo much love for her???
No one knows…
Tu mil jaaye toh rabb miljaye,
Tu pass ho toh saare gham bhi mushkuraye,
Tu mera dil tuhi meri rooh,
Sirf tujhe paane ki hai aarzoo
( i will get god if u get u,

All sorrows laugh when u r with me,

U r my heart,u r my soul
To get u, is my wish)
Its rightly said~”Love is blind”.Let me tell u the story of lovers…
A happy go lucky girl full with zeal and confidence fell in love with an unknown guy really not knowing who???
Flashbacks
Savitri devi college and hospital well known hospital in the city..
A girl:areh yaar isha,tum na hmare samaj ke hi bahar ho samji!
(I think u all samaj gye who she is)
Isha:oh ho pragya now what i have done?
Pragya:Saachi have again got that slip.and u r busy in makeup
Isha:again!!!oh these love rhymes!
Where is saachi?
Saachi:here is saachi…

Isha:kk now dont be shy and read it aloud.
Pragya:cmeon read!!
Saachi:ok baba,
Raahe aur bhi thi,
Lekin dil ne tujhe chuna.
Pyaar bhi bhut ajeeb hai,
Hoya usse jisse nahi tha hona…
(There were many roads,
But my heart choose u

This love is very unique
Fell in with that person which was not expected)
Pragya:areh wahh,? superb..just want to know who have written it.
Isha:seriously saachi,someone is mad for u…
Pragya:and someone is blushing..
Saachi:i m confused yaar,if he love me then he should come and confront it…these letters will be just useless if i will get married and not even know the one??
Isha and pragya:marriage!!!

Saachi:ya guys mum was talking to me about this last night.
Isha:really!!!

Pragya:oh this poor lover!!his love story will remain half completed
Saachi:if i will not find that annonymus then i have to get married with the one mum choose..
Isha:dont worry we will find him…
Many days passed and the same routine countinued…
One day
Pragya:saachi,,see chidhi aa gyi..
Isha:show me,show me
Isha starts reading~
Tum mere khaboon mei aati hoo,
Meri neendh ko churati hoo,
Tum mere dil ki rani,
Tum meri prem kahani..

(U come in my dreams
And steal my sleep
U r princess of my heart
U r my love story)
Saachi takes the slip from isha’s hand and tear it.
Pragya:what u did Saachi?
Saachi:Pragya u know its useless..mum have fixed my marriage and next month i m going to be ‘Mrs Saachi’
Isha:but we r trying to find out…
Saachi:but its worthless…

Pragya:but saachi!!
Saachi in anger goes to the balcony.
Saachi:hey u mr lover r u listening.if yes then stop this nonsense coz i m getting married next month and if u r not gonna tell who u r then sorry,i cant love u..
Isha:stop it saachi..
Pragya:saachi u can tell aunty about it..
Saachi:kya kahu mumma se that i m in love with a boy u send me shyaries…
Pragya:then,
Saachi:guys i m leaving today and i want u two to come there fast…
Saachi left to delhi..

It was just a week left for engagement and isha and pragya aarived there…
Saachi met themm..
Pragya:saachi,only one letter came after u left…
Isha take out that slip and give it to saachi..
Saachi-(reading)Zindagi ne kuch khel aisa ha khela,
Ab na rahunga mai akela.

Mera pyaar mujhe mil jaayega
Hum toh bagvann bhi na rokh payega..
(Life had played such a game,
That now i will not be alone,
I will get my love,
Even god cant stop)
Saachi was curious after reading it and was in deep thoughts…
Isha:btw whom u getting married??
Saachi:woh,

Just then her mom calls her
Saachi:u both go and rest…
It was the engagement day but saachi was in the thoughts of that person only…
Just before the ceremony isha and pragya comes with the box in their hands on which Saachi was written…
She opened the box and read it..
Saacgi:aarey pagli abhi bhi na samjhi

Tu toh meri mummy ki hi pasand thi,
Ab teri zindagi ka hero hu mai aur meri zindagi ki heroine ha tuu,
I love uuuuuuuuu……..
(Oh stupid still u didnt understand,

U was my mum’s choice
I m ur hero and u r my heroine
I love u)
It put a huge smile on saachi’s face as well as isha’s…they understand it and ran towads the engagement hall….
The groom enters and saachi saw her handsome prince with love and knowing that yess he was the same whom she loved..also she found that mr.annonymous..

~The end~

Sooo thank god i finished writing..ok so it was my first ever update on sdcah and i didnt mention the lead boy male coz there r both veer’s and kabir’s fan so whom do u wish u can keep it and put a smile on ur face..sorry i m not much good in translating poems from hindi to english….so i hope u can cooperate..
Thank u

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    26 Comments

    1. Abhilasha on August 5, 2017 11:30 pm

      This was super se upar……. Fantastic and yaa I wish that Mr anonymous should be kabir… Its my wish… But u wrote so well!!

      • Prettypreeti on August 8, 2017 5:02 pm

        Thank u dear…happy u liked it.
        ???????

    2. Premamohan on August 5, 2017 11:47 pm

      Wow very nice os for me its kabir and his mother’s wish was sachi … I never ever think veer…

      • Prettypreeti on August 8, 2017 5:03 pm

        Thank u prema and its ur wish veer or kabir..thank u for liking

    3. Riya on August 5, 2017 11:53 pm

      Preeti dear u r simply amazing….i mean ur words r just magical…. r u a poet???? Such beautiful shayari….just loved it ??? just hope its our mr.khadoos aka kabir… fingers crossed….eagerly waiting for ur next update asap ?

      • Prettypreeti on August 8, 2017 5:04 pm

        O dear it was just an os so means ending in one go but i will try to write more os..and yess i like writing poetry so these r my words and very much glad reading ur comment..thank u

    4. anu on August 6, 2017 12:05 am

      Nice story.but who is the boy.i wish he will be mr kabir

      • Prettypreeti on August 8, 2017 5:05 pm

        Thank u anu and the boy is ur wish whomsoever u like..thanks

    5. Richa1496 on August 6, 2017 12:56 am

      Nice os…. Awesome…. Great work… And I just hope it’s our Mr. Khadoos Dr. Kabir….. BTW rhymes were outstanding, mindblowing…. ?

      • Prettypreeti on August 8, 2017 5:06 pm

        Thank u richa as i said its ur wish …it can be mr khadoos no prob..and thank u for apreciating my workk.
        ???

    6. Vasundhara on August 6, 2017 12:57 am

      Nice one…..for me it is kabir

      • Prettypreeti on August 8, 2017 5:07 pm

        Okk thank u vasundhara dear….love u .
        ????

    7. Ashnita on August 6, 2017 1:28 am

      Very nice unique and thanks

      • Prettypreeti on August 8, 2017 5:08 pm

        Thank u ashnita and dont thank me..i m thankful to u for reading it and commenting..
        ???

    8. Divya on August 6, 2017 7:52 am

      Wow so nice

      • Prettypreeti on August 8, 2017 5:09 pm

        Thank u divya…thank u
        ???

    9. sanyukta on August 6, 2017 10:38 am

      Awesome .Just loved it.????
      Keep writing dear.

      • Prettypreeti on August 8, 2017 5:10 pm

        Thanks sanyukta and i will try to write more..
        ????

    10. RANdomfANCreationz on August 6, 2017 11:02 am

      Hey PrettyPreeti yaar this os is amazing loved it yaar so finally Saanchi got together with her mr.anonymous so cute ?

      • Prettypreeti on August 8, 2017 5:11 pm

        Thank u my yo jo…i m very muchhh happy that u commented.
        Yup saachi got her mr annonymous..
        Belated happy friendship day..
        Lots of luv..

    11. QVZRQE3M on August 6, 2017 12:16 pm

      This was amazing preeti hope it’s kabir. I just love kaanchi.
      Happy friendship day.

      • Prettypreeti on August 8, 2017 5:12 pm

        Hi dear..a very big thanksss….lots of luv and ya a belated happy friendship day to u too…
        ?????☺☺☺

    12. Swetatitli on August 6, 2017 1:54 pm

      Really awesome ???

      • Prettypreeti on August 8, 2017 5:13 pm

        Thank u sweta….
        ?????thanks

    13. ragini on August 8, 2017 4:43 pm

      Awesome os and poetry lines

      • Prettypreeti on August 8, 2017 5:33 pm

        Thank u ragini..
        ???

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