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Home»Fan Fiction»Sanskar Rocked Swara Shocked (SwaSan One Shot) by Marsuu
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Sanskar Rocked Swara Shocked (SwaSan One Shot) by Marsuu

MarsBy MarsSeptember 8, 2017102 Comments13 Mins Read
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Hello guys!! This is Mars currently coming alot on earth to give swasan stories hihi. Now a days I m loving to write os don’t know why?? Okay till now i had always made swara naughty and sanskar mature but here is reverse. Those who want cool and carefree sanskar and serious swara they can read it and others should also read. I hope you will like it. Let’s jump into crazy world of swasan with marsuuu

Sanskar Rocked Swara Shocked
(SwaSan One Shot)
Gododia House:
A girl is talking angrily to his father.
Girl: No no dad I can’t marry him. He is not of my type. We are totally different he knows only how to do fun and tease others but i m very serious in my life.
Shekar: listen swara he is nice boy.
(Yuppp the girl is swara…. Let’s see with whom she don’t want to get married)
Swara: seriously nice and he ?? don’t crack joke dad.
Shekar: plzz swara I never asked anything from you just marry Sanskar (Haww she don’t want to marry our hero)
Swara: u r blackmailing me now.
Shekar: whatever plzz agree for your father.
Swara: okay fine.
Shekar: aww that’s like my girl.
Swara give light smile and went to her room.

SWARA GODODIA
24 years old beauty with brain. She is CEO of gododia industries. Very sensible mature and smart. She always remain serious and has no fun in her life. She don’t like sanskar, her father’s friend’s son bcoz he is careless and flirty type.
She has only her father, shekar gododia who helps her in office. He wants Swara to get married to sanskar as he is known to him and he is worried for her future.

SANSKAR MAHEAHWARI
24 years old. Carefree flirty cool person. He has no interest in business and most of the time he spend in playing vedio games parting and most importantly sleeping. His Father Ram Maheshwari has till not made him CEO of maheshwari industries bcoz he wants him to be responsible first.He has his Mom Dad in his family.

Let’s see when these two opposite poles will collide what will happen??

Maheshwari house:
Swasan got married with all rituals but during their marriage they didn’t talk to each other.And finally Swara Gododia changed to Swara Sanskar Maheshwari.
Sanskar is going to his room super excitedly mumbling something
Sanskar(singing): aaj meri suhagraat hai mazzaa ayegaa(today is my first night wow it will be fun)
He reached at his room and opened the door. He entered inside slowly but the sight in front of him made him confused. Swara is removing the rose petals from the bed as it was decorated for their first night. Sanskar went near and asked
Sanskar:what are you doing?
Swara: removing flowers.
Sanskar: I mean why are you doing this??
Swara: bcoz I want to sleep here.
Sanskar (shouted):no u can’t sleep tonight.
Swara(raise her eyebrow): why???
Sanskar: its our first night.
Swara: so??? U want to do something?
Sanskar(blushes): yeah if you don’t have any problem.
Swara: what??
Sanskar(make faces): huh!! From whom I was expecting. I will sleep on bed.
Swara: no I will sleep.
Sanskar: why always boys have to sleep on couch in serials also they do this only why this discrimination with boys???? We want justice.
Sanskar said loudly raising his hands.
Swara: such a dramebaaz you are.
Sanskar (smile sheepishly): thanks if you say I can try in movies also.
He said removing his hairs from forehead showing style.
Swara: just go and sleep. Don’t know how I will live with this idiot.
Sanskar: ohh hello u can call me sweetu jannu baby but not idiot I have respect yrrr.
Swara(roll her eyes): whatever.
Sanskar: one thing I want to clear now only I married to you but I can flirt with other girls and u should not have problem.
Swara: I don’t care do whatever u want to do.
Saying this swara lie on one side of bed while sanskar lied on other side and both slept.

Next morning:
Swara got up and saw Sanskar’s one leg is on floor and and other far apart on bed. His arms are raised at top as if doing hands up and comforter is beneath him.
Swara(mumble): what is this way of sleeping??
She signed and went to washroom.
After sometimes sanskar got up as he heard some noise from washroom. He opened his eyes and saw his posture.
Sanskar: ohh god Sanskar you are not alone now to sleep like this what if my pent will tore with my legs apart what about my dignity in front of her. I have to control myself.
Then only swara came out of washroom with wet hairs and jeans shirt.
Sanskar stare her shamelessly
Sanskar: Hot
Sanskar said when Swara glare at him. To avoid he said
Sanskar (faning with hand): it’s hot today.
Swara ignored and got ready for office.

Hall:
Swasan came down and went near dining table where ramta are sitting.
Swara: good morning mom dad
Ramta: morning beta.
Sanskar sit and started having breakfast.
Ram: swara Sanskar as we have merged gododia and maheshwari industries so u both go to gododia office. Swara guide sanskar and give him little wit to take responsibilities.
Swara: sure dad.
Sanskar also nodded with mouth filled with food.
Later, after breakfast both went to office.

Gododia Industries:
Swasan are coming inside when Sanskar asked
Sanskar: beautiful girls are there in your office?.
Swara: why??
Sanskar: no then I can praise their beauty.
Swara: don’t you dare to flirt with my employees.
Sanskar:u will get jealoused??
Swara: no but I don’t want any stupidity in my office.
Sanskar: okay Lady Don
Swara: what u said??
Sanskar: Lady don your new Nick name.
Swara went inside angrily while sanskar laughs.

Swara’s Cabin:
After roaming in whole office sanskar enter inside the cabin and saw swara working on laptop.
Sanskar: hey wifey your hubby is back.
Swara: thanks better concentrate on work rather than looking at other girls.
Sanskar: don’t doubt i went to see the infrastructure not girls.
Swara: yeah I know.
Whole day Sanskar was with swara annoying her and talking everything except work.

After one week:
Its one week since swasan are married and they are still same all the time Sanskar irritating Swara. She is getting fed up.
One morning:
Swasan are standing in front of the washroom door and fighting who will go inside first.
Swara: Sanskar I have office so let me go first.
Sanskar: even I m also going to office.
Swara: but its of no use you don’t work there.
Sanskar: whatever I will take bath first.
Swara: no I will
Sanskar: okay I have idea
Swara: what??
Sanskar (naughtily): let’s take bath together.
Swara(shouted); What the….
Sanskar(put hand on mouth in shock) hawww
Swara: its hell
Sanskar(grin): I thought u mean what the FUC….
Swara: shut up.
Swara went to washroom quickly and shouted from inside
Swara: now I will get ready first.
Sanskar: yeah do even I m not interested to get ready it’s just I was enjoying fighting with you.
Swara: urggg
Sanskar laughs.

After few days,
Swasan are standing on road at night as their car broke and they don’t have any way to go home.
Sanskar: how we will go home my serial will be missed(pout)
Swara: what???
Sanskar: today the culprits face will be shown I m super excited.
Swara: I don’t care
Sanskar: but the lead actress is very beautiful.
Swara: plzz can you think of the way how we can go home.
Sanskar: okay let me go and see if there is someone.
Swara nodded.
Sanskar left from there.
Little later,
A boy of sanskar’s age came and stood near swara.
Boy: hey beautiful this is arjun.
Swara: then what can I do??
Till now sanskar also came back with mechanic from nearby shop.
Arjun: u don’t do anything I will handle everything baby
He held swara’s hand tightly
Swara: idiot leave my hand
Sanskar came forward and held man’s collar and started beating him.
Swara got shocked as he was beating him so badly that blood came out from his mouth
Sanskar(punch him): how dare you tried to touch her.
Arjun was feeling difficult to breathe. Swara got scared and held sanskar’s hand
Swara:stop it sanskar he will die.
Sanskar: I don’t care.
Swara: leave him.
Swara pushed sanskar back. As soon as arjun got free from sanskar’s grip he ran from there to save his life.
Swara: what the hell was that??
Sanskar: he was flirting with you.
Swara(annoyed): so you can talk politely also and about flirting you also do with every random girl what about that??
She said in anger not knowing what effect her words have on him.
Sanskar(hurt): yes I do flirting but I don’t give them disgusting looks.
Swara(realizes): I m sorry I didn’t mean to hurt you
Sanskar: I never thought you think like this about me.
Till now mechanic has repaired the car and Sanskar sit in car followed by swara and both left to maheshwari house. They didn’t talk to each other at all.

Next morning:
Swasan room:
Swara opened her eyes as sun rays strike her face. She look at sanskar’s side but he is not there. She got up and checked washroom but it’s also empty.
Swara: where he went in early morning?
Then only swara’s sight caught letter on table. She went near, picked it and started reading
” hello this is Sanskar
I want to say that I m going away from you people forever. Mom dad swara I had disturbed you all so much but now u r free from me I m leaving this house this world also. I will never come back. I was not able to live with the tag of irresponsible and idiot. May u live happily without me….. I m committing suicide so don’t try to find me
……….your stupid Sanskar”.
Swara was shock to the core. She read the letter numerous times but the words remain same. Her hands are shivering now. Not understanding anything she ran downstairs.

Hall:
Swara came running down and shown letter to ramta. Sujata started crying
Sujata: I told you ram Ji don’t always scold him see now what happened.
Ram: I never knew he will do something like this.
Swara’s tears are flowing and her heart is beating at infinite speed. She is feeling empty just thinking that she lost him. She has started loving him the way he always tease her and his possessiveness when any other man come near her.
Swara: we can talk to police.
She said with dry throat.
Ram: but they will not do anything till 24 hours so we can just wait.
Swara nodded.
They all settled in Hall. No one is speaking they never expected something like this will happen. Swara is praying that once if sanskar will come she will confess her love.

Later, the door of the house opened and Sanskar came inside with his coat on his shoulder and messy hairs. Swara saw him and it was like she got her life back. She ran to him and hugged him tightly. Sanskar got shocked at her sudden action.
After breaking hug she cups his face and said
Swara: how can you do like this??
Sanskar (confused): what I did??
Ram: what is this letter suicide and all??
Sanskar took the letter from ram and read it.
Sanskar: ohh this I was getting bore and then thought to try to write suicide note if I will need in future.
Swara and ramta were shocked.
Swara: from where you are coming??
Sanskar: club
Ram slapped sanskar for his stupidity.
Sanskar(pout):what I did??
Sujata: we thought you really left the house.
Sanskar: haww don’t worry i will not leave you all easily.
Ram: this is last time I m tolerating all this next time I will throw you out myself.
Sanskar: no I will be careful now.
During this time swara was not speaking at all. She silently went to the room and sit on bed.
Later Sanskar enter inside and saw swara crying for the very first time.
He went near her and sit on bed.
Sanskar: ohyee what happened??
Swara turn her face other side.
Sanskar held her hand and asked
Sanskar: u r angry I m sorry
Swara (sniffs): don’t talk to me.
Sanskar: actually i did this letter drama to go to club but see then also I got slap now at least you don’t behave like this.
Swara: u know how I felt I thought I lost you.
Sanskar: but why you care for me. U should be happy that u will get rid of me that u always want.
Swara looked down not able to answer.
Sanskar (curiously): tell me why you care for me??
Swara: bcoz I….
Sanskar: bcoz you???
Swara(close her eyes): I love you.
Sanskar jumped on the bed and shouted
Sanskar: what u said???
Swara: can’t u listen once.
Sanskar: no plzz once more.
Swara(blushes): I love you.
Sanskar pull her closer in excitement and kissed her lips. Swara also responded with equal pace. They kissed each other passionately.
Sanskar join his forehead with her and whispers
Sanskar: love u tooo
Swara: I know
Sanskar(confused): how??
Swara: u used to speak in sleep.
Sanskar: aww this sleep will take out my all secrets.
Swara: yeah I get to know many things when u r asleep.
Sanskar: did you get to know that also?
Swara: what?? That u kiss me in your dreams???
Sanskar: ohh so u got to know till kiss otherwise we have 5 babies also in my dreams(wink)
Swara: what??
Sanskar(Peck her lips): yuppp
Swara(laughs): u r seriously crazy.

After six months:
SwaSan Room(night)
Today swasan are so happy as finally Sanskar took the responsibility of office and today he become CEO of maheshwari industries. After their confession they used to discuss everything and living with swara all the time sanskar also started having interest in business and slowly slowing he become expert. Seeing his skills now ram made him CEO. Swara is even more happy then Sanskar.
They enter inside the room hand in hand.
Swara: so how u are feeling after becoming CEO??
Sanskar: I m feeling same only no difference
Swara: nothing could be done of yours.
Sanskar: I know.
Sanskar held swara’s hand and said
Sanskar: swara I had decided that whenever I will be settled in my career that time we will take our relation ahead.sooo
Swara: soooo??
Sanskar: I think we should do it.
Swara (teasing): but i m sleepy today
Sanskar (crying like kids): this is not done I m waiting from so many months.
Swara laughs and kiss his lips.
After kissing each other sanskar made her lie on bed and lean on her.
He kissed her earlobe and whispered
Sanskar: I had done flirting with many girls but I always get dreams of loving you only.
Swara blushes
Sanskar: so we should start in reality also to plan for cricket team.
Swara(confuse): means
Sanskar: in dreams we have reached 5 and only 6 more to come but in reality we have to start from one (winks)
Swara now understood what he is taking.
Her mouth got opened with shock.
Sanskar Chuckles and seal her lips. Then they consummated their marriage.
The End.

So how’s it. Let me know.
Thank you
Bye
Take care

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    102 Comments

    1. NDSG on September 8, 2017 8:19 am

      ??????????????????? it’s the best OS…. Mars I can’t tell u. How much I loved it.?????????????????????? this Sanskaar oh God I love him.?????????.

      They way he sleeps ??????????? damm hilarious????????????

      Arjun ??????? poor boy he don’t know Mr Maheshwari can’t see anyone near his Jaan?????

      And that suicide letter damm I was also afraid. ????? but Sanskaar dreams reviled his love for Swara. And at last oh God 6 child +5 in dreams ????????

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 9:27 am

        Awwwww thank you so much depuuu dear glad u liked it and even I loved this Sanskar while writing and was laughing imagining him and my mother was saying tumahra dimag kharab ho gaya hai hihhihi. Take care dear

    2. Rachna on September 8, 2017 8:30 am

      Awsm

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 9:28 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    3. Halima on September 8, 2017 8:36 am

      Marsu no words do describe dear ur all stories r just amazing like u

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 9:29 am

        Awww thank you so much dear tc

    4. pravee on September 8, 2017 8:37 am

      as always mars rocked too

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 9:30 am

        Aww that’s so sweet of you thank you so much dear tc

    5. seebu_s on September 8, 2017 9:10 am

      aww??this is amazing and so cute????sanskar is drama king?loved it?

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 9:31 am

        Awww thank you so much dear yupp Sanskar is tooo much tc

    6. Praneetha on September 8, 2017 10:02 am

      It’s awesome

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 10:15 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    7. mica on September 8, 2017 10:03 am

      can’t stop laughing

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 10:16 am

        Awww thank you so much dear tc and keep laughing its good for health hihihi

    8. parisha on September 8, 2017 10:13 am

      Wow it’s a amazing after all it’s written by whom the great mars

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 11:08 am

        Aww that’s so sweet of you Thank you so much dear tc

    9. OP on September 8, 2017 10:14 am

      I am not someone who would usually read OS but this one was fun. I also want to read one of your Swara naughty Sanskar mature version. Do you have any OS where Swara is naughty till this level, like Sanskar here?

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 11:13 am

        http://googleweblight.com/i?u=http://www.tellyupdates.com/crazy-girl-swasan-one-shot-marsuu/&grqid=O-aj7aWH&hl=en-IN

        Hey dear above I had given the link of my os ” My crazy girl” in this swara is naughty and sanskar is serious. Hope so u get it and like it.

        Thank you so much for reading this os glad u enjoyed it. Take care
        And one thing if you want swara’s naughtiness to peak level then give try to my ff “Naughty Billo’ if you get time.
        Thanks dear.

      • Op on September 8, 2017 9:22 pm

        Sure, I’ll try that. You have replied to every single comment over here. That’s very sweet of you.

      • Mars on September 9, 2017 7:20 am

        Awww thanks dear and its all my pleasure tc

    10. Anjali on September 8, 2017 10:23 am

      Superb nd pls post my better half too……..

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 11:15 am

        Thank you so much dear and my better half I m writing will give today tc

    11. Febi on September 8, 2017 10:30 am

      Awesome dear

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 11:16 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    12. swasan on September 8, 2017 10:46 am

      Amazing ????? and funny also
      And thank you for fulfilling my wish

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 11:06 am

        It’s all my pleasure dear thank you so much dear tc

    13. Chaitu on September 8, 2017 11:11 am

      Awesome dear as sanskar rocked swara shocked but mars super duper rocked I can’t control myself from laughing

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 11:18 am

        Awwww that’s so sweet of you thank you so much dear tc and keep laughing good for your health hihihi

    14. Stg on September 8, 2017 11:12 am

      Awesome ???

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 11:19 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    15. Tweety_SwaSan on September 8, 2017 11:20 am

      This is amazing dear… super se uper.. You know my mood was off after reading something…but by reading this I am laughing like anything.. You made my day dear,, And as always you rocked.. I became a crazy fan of your stories.. Thank you soooo much.. Love you and your stories alot.. Be happy and tc..

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 12:53 pm

        Awww thank you so much dear your words really means a lot to me and glad u like my stories. I m happy that i was able to change your mood love u too tc

    16. Zoya on September 8, 2017 11:22 am

      Amazing yrrrrr….it was so funny

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 12:54 pm

        Aww thank you so much dear tc

    17. Anu Rathore on September 8, 2017 11:32 am

      Awesome……

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 12:56 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    18. Rekha on September 8, 2017 11:34 am

      Wooowwwwww………. Nailed it………?????
      Amazing………….. Lovely……….?????

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 12:57 pm

        Awww thank you so much dear tc

    19. gayathri.visu on September 8, 2017 11:41 am

      Marsssuuuuu…..ur title…yaar, for a sec I can’t believe my eyes. Awesome….can’t control my laughing….ROFL!!! Sanskaar…..that suicide letter unbelievable!!!

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 12:58 pm

        Awww thank you so much gayuuuuu dear and keep on laughing it will me good for you tc

    20. nabamita on September 8, 2017 11:46 am

      Awesome os dear

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 1:00 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    21. Sus on September 8, 2017 12:07 pm

      omg omg now in this ff sanku name really suits him. such a naughty boy
      woww in mood to write suicide letter and went club
      if he will remain like this then soon double cricket team will be shown in home

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 1:01 pm

        Awww thank you so much dear and yupp he is naughty sanku tc

    22. rini on September 8, 2017 12:08 pm

      superb shot

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 1:02 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    23. Tamil on September 8, 2017 12:38 pm

      It’s amazing dear loved it

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 1:03 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    24. Vidhi on September 8, 2017 12:51 pm

      Seriously speaking… I loved it…bt it was hard to digest that sanskar is naughty…
      I don’t knw I can’t imagine him that way…
      Though this was good…. Bt I didn’t liked the way I like ur every OS or ff… Sorry Marsuuuu bt this are my opinion….
      Plz don’t get dishearten….
      Love u ❤❤❤❤

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 1:37 pm

        Well thank you so much dear for reading tc

    25. Kumu on September 8, 2017 1:05 pm

      Awwwww it was so cute and funny??
      Sanskar’s character was ????
      Loved it ??❤❤
      Tc??

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 1:38 pm

        Aww thank you so much dear tc

    26. qwertyu on September 8, 2017 1:33 pm

      fabulous, amazing

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 1:44 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    27. Fariha on September 8, 2017 1:40 pm

      awesome

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 1:45 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    28. Fariha on September 8, 2017 1:42 pm

      nice

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 1:48 pm

        Well thanks dear

    29. ROJARANI on September 8, 2017 2:15 pm

      Nice yaar

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 3:27 pm

        thank you so much dear tc

    30. Vanisha on September 8, 2017 3:38 pm

      Awesome….fabulous… Loved it?????
      That suicide letter scene was hilarious…couldn’t stop laughing??

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 4:05 pm

        Awww thank you so much dear tc

    31. hadi on September 8, 2017 4:13 pm

      awwwwwww suring whole chappiee i was laughing like mad this os is wonderful i have ever read superb seriously sanky’s behaviour is hilarious he was literally mad bathroom fight haha office enjoyment all r superb no seriousness at all plz post one more like this marsuu

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 4:30 pm

        Awwww thank you so much dear glad u enjoyed will try to give one more tc

    32. maryum on September 8, 2017 4:28 pm

      Hahaha ur sanskar is great yar maza aya gaya too ????

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 4:43 pm

        Awww thank you so much dear tc

    33. harneet on September 8, 2017 4:40 pm

      lovely ,,, it was damn entertaining and love to see a role reversal … plz come with more os and i love u dear

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 5:00 pm

        Thank you so much dear will try to give such os more tc

    34. phoniex on September 8, 2017 5:06 pm

      god that guy is crazy who does something like writing a suicide note for going out

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 5:42 pm

        Yupp he is damm crazy thank you so much tc

    35. Guna on September 8, 2017 5:58 pm

      I enjoyed a lot after reading this os it’s too awesome

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 6:40 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    36. Ashani on September 8, 2017 5:59 pm

      Awesome ?

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 6:41 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    37. anu on September 8, 2017 6:04 pm

      awesome

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 6:42 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

    38. Neptune on September 8, 2017 6:37 pm

      Oh god marsuuuuuuuuu it was amazing yaar loved it

      • Mars on September 8, 2017 7:45 pm

        Thank you so much nepuu tc

    39. AnuAnn on September 8, 2017 9:49 pm

      Marssu loved it

      • Mars on September 9, 2017 7:16 am

        Thank you so much anuuu dear tc

    40. sneha on September 8, 2017 9:50 pm

      Awesome. Amazing.. Excellent. No words dear loved it so much

      • Mars on September 9, 2017 7:18 am

        Awww thank you so much dear tc

    41. ami on September 8, 2017 10:25 pm

      Amazing one..naughty sanku..and i loved the title..
      U r awsm dear..bt i thnk its short bcz i cmpletly flwng with ur stry dat cant realise its ended soo soon..
      Love u dear
      Hats off to u

      • Mars on September 9, 2017 7:23 am

        Awww thank you so much dear and sorry if you find its short next time will try to give long one tc love u toooo

    42. Milestone on September 8, 2017 11:19 pm

      Awesome dear…..

      • Mars on September 9, 2017 7:24 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    43. mumpi on September 8, 2017 11:21 pm

      really rocked nd shocked type os

      • Mars on September 9, 2017 7:25 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    44. Sia on September 8, 2017 11:59 pm

      Marsuuu…..just loved it….u lile writing os n i love reading them…so keep writing

      • Mars on September 9, 2017 7:26 am

        Awww that’s so sweet of you thank you so much dear tc

    45. Adishu on September 9, 2017 1:13 am

      haha funny n interesting

      • Mars on September 9, 2017 7:28 am

        thank you so much dear tc

    46. Liza on September 9, 2017 3:28 am

      Really beautiful os.
      Enjoyed it

      • Mars on September 9, 2017 7:29 am

        Awww thank you so much dear tc

    47. Soujanya on September 9, 2017 9:01 am

      Awesome….so sweet…

      • Mars on September 9, 2017 9:30 am

        Thank you so much dear tc

    48. Prashasti7 on September 9, 2017 4:51 pm

      awww awsm dear

      • Mars on September 9, 2017 6:40 pm

        Awww thank you so much dear tc

    49. yamee on September 10, 2017 9:01 am

      I’m late but what to do it was soooo awesome os that I can’t control myself from commenting.really loved sanskar naughty avatar and suicide letter part is best.loved it so much.

      • Mars on September 10, 2017 2:28 pm

        Thank you so much dear and you can comment anytime tc

    50. vyshu10 on September 10, 2017 12:01 pm

      haha…superb

      • Mars on September 10, 2017 2:29 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc

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