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Home»Fan Fiction»Sanskar: My Kidnapper -prologue
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Sanskar: My Kidnapper -prologue

jnanaBy jnanaMay 15, 201740 Comments3 Mins Read
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“hello… ” a guy approaches me as I come out of my office.
It was already late and I should reach home with in an hour to avoid the awkward moment when my dad enters at the same time.

“hello…. ” I said. It was oddly strange. He seems familiar but, never mind,  I don’t remember seeing anyone like him.

“well, hmm…. I was actually waiting for your dad. Is he available to talk or? ” he trailed off.

I had to let out a sad smile at him. My dad!! Well, my dad, Shekar Gadodia, the second successful businessman of India. He was never available for me to talk to him ever. He was just busy with his work and he had put himself completely in making money. This guy is asking me, if he was available. Shut that. He’ll never be available unless it is for business.

“I had to speak about a deal with him!! ” he exclaimed at my emotionless face.

“maybe, please do call his secretary… He’ll be having the schedule… ” I said plainly before I walked to my car in the parking lot to my left.

“strange!! ” I heard him mutter as I passed him.

“Miss Swara…” he calls out for me.
I waited for a second before turning to him questioningly.

“Pink suits you best… ” he said, with his hands dropped into his pocket.

I smiled at him like a teenager blushing before turning and walking out to the parking lot.
I was never the one who welcomed compliments. In case, as my friend says, I’m strange in few aspects.

I walked up-to my car, and unlocked it. Throwing my bag in the car, I head to sit inside when I felt the sudden, strange pain at the back of my head. The pain stung and I try, turning, to see what was the cause. I lost my balance and landed on my back on the ground and my eyes immediately dropped at the stinging ache in my head. The world lost its colour turning black every time I try opening and concentrating my vision. And soon everything turned black and strange is that I felt myself off ground. And soon I felt my conscious turn down as my eyes drooped shut.
***

Here’s the prologue to My Kidnapper. Seeing the response to my prologue, I would decide to continue or not. Hope you people like it. I’ve updated my two shots, my tragic Fairy tale love story a couple of days ago. Hope you like that too. Anyways thank you for reading. Please drop the comments in the comment box. And I bet, it means a lot…..

http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-tragic-fairy-tale-love-story-part1/

http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-tragic-fairy-tale-love-story-part2/

Here is the link to my two shots. Read and review. Thank you.

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    40 Comments

    1. phoniex on May 15, 2017 10:34 pm

      Lovely dear please do write . Are you on Wattpad ?

      • jnana on May 16, 2017 8:28 am

        Thank you dear…. Yes! Jnana_ash is my ID. Will continue soon

    2. Pintumintu_penguin on May 15, 2017 10:45 pm

      Nice

      • jnana on May 16, 2017 12:26 pm

        Thank you

    3. Indira on May 15, 2017 10:55 pm

      Interesting ,please continue

      • jnana on May 16, 2017 12:27 pm

        Thank you….

    4. Sus on May 15, 2017 10:58 pm

      kiddnapping story
      nyc start dear

      • jnana on May 16, 2017 12:28 pm

        Thank you.

    5. Kakali on May 15, 2017 11:20 pm

      Wahooo Jnanaaaaa..!! Welcome back.! Good to see you here..!!
      Nice start.! Would love to read more..!! Continue soon dear..!! Thnk u.. ;-*

      • jnana on May 16, 2017 12:32 pm

        Thank you dear…

    6. Simi on May 15, 2017 11:36 pm

      Wow.. Interesting

      • jnana on May 16, 2017 12:28 pm

        Thank you…

    7. a on May 15, 2017 11:55 pm

      nice..

      • jnana on May 16, 2017 12:29 pm

        Thank you…

    8. Arshaanya on May 16, 2017 1:20 am

      Amazing..
      Continue soon

      • jnana on May 16, 2017 12:29 pm

        Thank you…

    9. meera_s on May 16, 2017 6:11 am

      loved it dear

      • jnana on May 16, 2017 12:30 pm

        Thank you…

    10. neptune on May 16, 2017 7:38 am

      interesting concept hmmm padhne me maza aayega continue soon dear

      • jnana on May 16, 2017 12:30 pm

        Thank you…

    11. anu on May 16, 2017 9:52 am

      nyc continue

      • jnana on May 16, 2017 12:31 pm

        Thank you…

    12. Priya on May 16, 2017 11:03 am

      Awesome dear plz continue

      • jnana on May 16, 2017 12:32 pm

        Thank you…

    13. Rachna on May 16, 2017 12:08 pm

      Awsm… Update soon

    14. jnana on May 16, 2017 12:27 pm

      Thank you…

    15. veena on May 16, 2017 3:20 pm

      nice

      • jnana on May 16, 2017 9:46 pm

        Thank you

    16. sri on May 17, 2017 7:26 am

      interesting dear

      • jnana on May 17, 2017 3:14 pm

        Thank you….

    17. Seebu_s on May 17, 2017 9:27 am

      welcome back dear?i loved fairy tale story so much…so happy to see u writing swasan?plot is damn interesting….continue soon?

      • jnana on May 17, 2017 3:15 pm

        Thank you dear. ..will be back with chapter one soon….

    18. kat on May 17, 2017 5:08 pm

      interesting…continue soon

      • jnana on May 17, 2017 5:18 pm

        Thank you…

    19. TanuLaksh on May 17, 2017 5:29 pm

      Interesting…. continue soon….?

      • jnana on May 17, 2017 5:52 pm

        Thank you…. Chapter one is posted.

    20. Kriti249 on May 18, 2017 1:15 pm

      Awesome dear!! I Loved it. The concept is so damn good

      • jnana on May 18, 2017 2:43 pm

        Thank you

    21. neha on May 19, 2017 11:21 am

      this is am

    22. neha on May 19, 2017 11:22 am

      this is amazing…i love this type of plot?and this is on swasan only na…!

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