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Samjhota Swara aur Sanskaar Ka (Hisaab Barabar)

Hello everyone…..Eva is back…missed me?KK nehi bhi kiya hoga toh koi problem nehi hai…so…i’m writing the third season of Samjhota..and this is going to be very different from the previous 2 people..i had given a promo..i forgot when…so just forget that…one of my friend Chaitali wrote something similar….and at that time a new idea popped up in my mind..so i’m writing on that only…my ff’s name is Samjhota Swara aur Sanskar ka(Hisaab Barabar)…

The scene starts with a lady of 24 in white saree crying.Her room was dark and was symbolizing the agony and darkness in her life.A 54 years old lady comes there and keeps her hand on her shoulder….and that girl hugs hers her and weeps…
Girl:Badi ma…why did this happen?Just a few hours ago I had him with me…and now?I’ve no one…i’m all alone!!!!I don’t want to live…..
The 54 years old lady in Annapurna….
Ap:Swara….how can u say that u have no one?U have a reason to live..u r not alone…u have your love’s symbol inside you..u have to live for it…
Yes the girl is none other than Swara…She is business tycoon living in US with her family…just one tragic day took away everything from her…
Swara:Badi ma…i could not share the news of my pregnancy with him…i could not tell him that he’s gonna be father….my baby.its so unfortunate…..his father left this world before he arrived…his father didn’t get to hear the news of his arrival…..why did god show this cruelity?Did i do some mistake?If i did even then he should had punished me….only me..but not my baby….
Ap:Swara beta…yeh mere bête ki akri nishani hai…please take care of him…
Ap leaves from there..
Swara:Jisse bhi mein pyar karti hu usseh hi bhagwan mujse chinn leta hai….pehle meri Ragini aura bb……i’m a bad luck for everyone….
After some days..
Scene:Kitchen
Sumi is talking to Ap..
Sumi:Samdhan ji…meri bacchii ko kya hogaya hai?Ussdin ke baat toh usneh bolna hii bandh kardiya hai….
AP:Swara is the backbone of this family…i’ve always seen the strong Swara…who can fight with any problem…now can’t tolerate this silence…she has to handle this family…god will send someone who will handle her..i’m sure….she has her whole life ahead…and god will handle everything..
Pari is listening to all these…

Pari’s pov
How can mummy ji say this? Swara is window…and she is thinking about someone else to …..yeh thik nehi hai…Swara apni zindegi akele bhi toh bitah sakti hai..she is going to be a mother…and thinking like this?
Pari goes to Janki…
Janki Maheshwari- A widow,Swara’s MIL,Pari’s badi sasuma..Pari is her chamcchi…
Pari tells her everything..
Janki:How can jiji think like this?My son has passed away…and she is thinking about Swara?
Pari:Taiji..u r thinking about this?I’m thinking about if Swara gets someone else in her life then your grandchild..your son’s child will get away from u…
Janki:No..i lost my son…but i won’t let anyone snatch my grandchild from me…
Pari smiles wickedly..(Idiot kahiki..sab jaga…pari nehi kali pari baani bethi rehti hai)
Ap is still talking to Sumi…
Sumi:Asthi visarjan ke liye kon jayega?
Swara comes from behind..
Swara;Mamma…i’ll go…
Sumi comes near her…
Sumi:India jayegi tu?
Swara:Ke apne ke liye India choda tha…..ke apne ke liye ab wapa India jarahi hu….
Ap keeps her hand on Swara’s cheek..and nods…
Swara goes back to her room..
Sumi:Swara hates India….but today she got ready for…
Ap;Swara needs to face her past…..only then she can forget it….god knows what’s written in my Swara’s fate….her past is bitter….so is her present….patanehi uska bhavishya itna accha ho ki woh apne saree gaam bhul jaye.
On the other hand Uttara is seen entering Janki’s room….She has listened to the whole convo of Janki and Pari..
Uttara:Pari bhabi…why don’t u find a job?
Pari:Why r u saying this?Why do i need to do a job?
Uttara;Apko koi kaam toh hai nehi aur yaha waha aagg lagati rehti ho….now agar apki ijazat ho toh can i talk to my mom?Alone??
Janki;Aise koi apni bhabi seh baat karta hai kya?
Uttara;Ma…she is my younger brother’s wife….younger to me….if she is wrong then i have to correct her….yeh kaam apka hai phir bhi…
Pari leaves from there angrily…
Janki:Kya galat kaha usne?
Uttara:Ma…ap kiski baat maan rahi ho?Pari bhabi ki?U know na she..
Janki:What wrong did she say?Its not even a month since my son died and jiji is thinking about my DIL’s second marriage…
Uttara;Ma…Pari bhabi haar baat barachurakar bolti hai..badi talked to me also..she said that Swara has her whole life ahead..so she will need someone sooner or later….everyone needs a partner…that does not means ki kaal hii ham unki shadi karwa denge….
Janki:No…no one can take my son’s place..
Uttara:Yahi toh problem hai hamare society ki…i got divorced…i have a daughter….still u got me remarried…u said…Beta agge teri puri zindegi paari hai..its very hard to lead a life alone…and now when its our your DIL….your words change?
Uttara leaves from there….

Precap:Swara going to India….

Now lots of questions right???
Who is Swara’s husband?
How Ragini died?
What is Swara’s past?
How is is Swara and Sanskar’s samjhota?
Sab jawab mil jayege……
Or ha…iss story ka start mene banaya hai…but this story has many scenes..and i would like to give some credit to Suhasini Khanna also…she suggested me some scenes….sarii wahwayi khud nehi lootna hai mujhe….aur ha thank u Chaitali…tunne similar story likha isliye mujhe yeh story likneko mili…

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