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Home»Fan Fiction»Sakhi Saiyaan (Prologue)
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Sakhi Saiyaan (Prologue)

MABy MAApril 2, 201782 Comments3 Mins Read
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Bela is back!
For all those waiting for Cocktail, lemme tell ya, I think it is jinxed. Half of Shot 4 got deleted from my phone again. I am typing it out do expect it by Tuesday. Meanwhile, I give you a glimpse of another story I had been forming while I was on a break. Here is the first look of Sakhi Saiyaan….

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“I WANT DIVORCE!” Lakshya Maheshwari screamed at his wife Ragini. She flinched at his tone and the contemptuous look on his face. He really hated her.

Lakshya had kidnapped Ragini and tortured her. Ragini closed her eyes in pain. Was this coming? Did she get too blind in her dream world full of his imaginary love that she forgot that her castle was made with sand? That he would hate her to such an extent that he would try to crush her under his car? And would then show no remorse and instead demand for a divorce?

Somehow, she knew that she deserved it. Swara was her own sister who she didn’t think of twice. So then why would this man in front of her, who never even cared for her, do? Ragini wiped off the tears from her face and from her husband’s outstretched hand, took the divorce papers. She took a pen and signed all the papers. Handing them back to him, she said, “I hope you are happy now Lakshya.”

Lakshya sneered in disgust. “I wish you had done this sooner. At least I wouldn’t have had to dirty my hands and my mother would not be in a hospital right now!” He told her. A line tear escaped from Ragini’s right eye. Maa got a heart attack after Lakshya was arrested. She was currently in the ICU.

Lakshya signed the papers and called up his lawyer. “Yes Mr. Das, the papers have been signed by both of us. Yes, she did them herself, without any force or treachery. I will come and give them to you, start the proceedings immediately!”

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Lakshya heaved a sigh of relief as he drove through the sandy roads of Old Kolkata. At last that witch had signed! He was glad he was getting rid of her now. Granted, he could never get Swara back but then, at least Ragini would be out of his life. It would become peaceful again. Little did he know that in a few days, his entire life would turn upside down as old graves of the Maheshwari family would be dug. A secret that was kept hidden for the past two and a half decades would get revealed, destroying a certain Maheshwari and his pride.

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The story is set during the track when Lakshya tried to kill Ragini but Swara saved her. Yet again, no maalkin track, my story would continue from the day he asked her for a divorce.

Do comment and tell me if you want me to continue?

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82 Comments

  1. Tigeress on April 2, 2017 5:24 pm

    awesome, new concept…..interesting….loved it …..post next part soon ….and it is raglak na ?

    • Bela on April 2, 2017 10:02 pm

      Thanks Tigress……and yes, it is definitely Raglak??

  2. Aanchal on April 2, 2017 5:30 pm

    Awesome update please regulat

    • Bela on April 2, 2017 10:03 pm

      Thanks Aanchal, I will try my best?

  3. Swasan on April 2, 2017 5:31 pm

    Nice

    • Bela on April 2, 2017 10:03 pm

      Thanks Swasan???

  4. Mintu on April 2, 2017 5:38 pm

    Awesome bela…!!! Nice plot…waiting for it nd ur cocktail shots..!!!!Post it soon dear..!!! I think ur xam r nearly..all d best….!!! Take care dear

    • Bela on April 2, 2017 10:08 pm

      Thanks a lot Mintu…….yes my exams are nearing ???

  5. Naz on April 2, 2017 6:03 pm

    My god bela…ur stories r always my favorites….this is so interesting….update soon dear

    • Bela on April 2, 2017 10:09 pm

      Thanks a lot Naz.???

  6. Eba on April 2, 2017 6:08 pm

    Awesome Held
    Waiting for your next update eagerly 🙂

    • Bela on April 2, 2017 10:11 pm

      Thanks a lot Eba???

  7. shilpa-saraj on April 2, 2017 6:12 pm

    Wow… im really waiting dear…. hope to read further..

    • Bela on April 2, 2017 10:12 pm

      Thanks a lot Shilpa-Saraj ???

  8. Ankita on April 2, 2017 6:30 pm

    Update next part soon I am soooo excited to read it and plz update cocktail too

    • Bela on April 2, 2017 10:14 pm

      Thanks a lot Ankita, I will update Cocktail first then this one??

  9. Akshitha on April 2, 2017 6:32 pm

    It’s a different track…it’s raglak Na dear… Don’t seperate dem dearr??

    • Bela on April 2, 2017 10:17 pm

      Yes it is going to be different. And don’t worry, it is definitely Raglak. Thanks a lot Akshitha???

  10. Malika on April 2, 2017 6:35 pm

    belaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome awesome !!!!!!!!!!! woooooooowwwwwwwwww really lovee itt. and it sound interesting alsoooooooo!!!!!!!!!! superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb ..

    • Bela on April 2, 2017 10:19 pm

      Thank you so much Malika?????

  11. Berdilla on April 2, 2017 6:42 pm

    Superb dear friend continue

    • Bela on April 2, 2017 10:20 pm

      Thanks Berdilla, I would???

  12. Megha on April 2, 2017 6:47 pm

    Awesome and mindblowing as always

    • Bela on April 2, 2017 10:21 pm

      Thanks a lot Megha???

  13. Mitra on April 2, 2017 6:59 pm

    Your stories are always superb. Please continue.

    • Bela on April 2, 2017 10:23 pm

      Thanks a lot Mitra???

  14. Asw on April 2, 2017 7:03 pm

    so Bela came with a another track of raglak ??? but u came this track of rishtha Purana tilte at the time ragini is so innocent & here maybe she is brave amazing keep going

    • Asw on April 2, 2017 7:18 pm

      What is ur meaning of ur tilte?

    • Bela on April 2, 2017 10:05 pm

      Sakhi means female friend while saiyaan means lover. So basically it can be translated to a lover who is also a friend?

    • Bela on April 2, 2017 10:04 pm

      Ragini will be brave, like she has always been. Thanks a lot Asw???

  15. Mithu on April 2, 2017 7:17 pm

    Wow. I m fan of u r stories. I had read koi mujhe ko u mila h jaise banjare ko Ghar more then 10 time. Keep writing. Waiting fr another part

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 8:03 am

      What? 10 times? You broke my record, I read it only 4 times! Now I would have to read it seven more times to break your record 😛
      Thanks a lot Mithu???

  16. avika on April 2, 2017 7:25 pm

    Superrrrrr

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 8:03 am

      Thanks Avika???

  17. aleeza2 on April 2, 2017 7:36 pm

    Awesome

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 8:04 am

      Thanks aleeza2 ???

  18. Ria on April 2, 2017 7:37 pm

    Belaaaaaaaaaa, I would’ve missed this! ? Thank God you tend to write your name usually or else, what would I’ve been Fangirling on? ?

    Well, getting back to this, let me tell you shortly. I’m freaking excited. So, I’m waiting for Cocktail and Sakhi Saiyaan, both now. ?

    Love to Bela, the extreme vela! ??

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 8:06 am

      I know. Fats once told me that Bela is Back sounds rather good, as it is almost alliterative. ??
      Thanks a lot Ria??

  19. Soni on April 2, 2017 7:49 pm

    Hey Bela sis the update was amazing……. Good to see u with another RAGLAK story n the story seems intresting…… Yup we r waiting fr Coctail……since it got deleted frm ur phone we did be waiting till tuesdae…..

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 2:00 pm

      Thanks a lot Soni???

  20. asra on April 2, 2017 8:00 pm

    Ohh bela come back with another ff….wow it’s interesting dear….ofcourse plz continue dear….eagerly waiting for ur update….tkcr dear…

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 2:02 pm

      Thanks a lot Asra, take care???

  21. AimRagLak on April 2, 2017 8:25 pm

    ????Why no one understands Ragini’s Pain.Why???Whenever I go back to the old phases of this serial I again start hating Laksh.Like Really hate.Then I really wish that Ragini hated him right back with full force & Moved on in her life with a new guy after Kavya ditched him.Ugggh!

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 2:02 pm

      I sometimes wish for it too but Raglak are so amazing that I always come back to them.
      Thanks a lot AimRaglak???

    • AimRagLak on April 4, 2017 8:29 pm

      I Know right?That is why I always wanted RagLa even after everything.Never RagSan.And please you have to make her hate him right back ok? ?

    • Bela on April 4, 2017 9:13 pm

      Okay ?

  22. raglakholic on April 2, 2017 8:27 pm

    vry vry vry exited……plz cntinue asap n try to be regular plz…n ya waiting fr cocktail….u r one of my fvrt writer…

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 2:03 pm

      Thanks a lot raglakholic???

  23. abi on April 2, 2017 8:58 pm

    Awesome
    Superb
    Amazing ????

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 2:04 pm

      Thanks a lot abi???

  24. Ammy on April 2, 2017 8:59 pm

    Awesome dear

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 2:08 pm

      Thanks Ammy???

  25. Ammu on April 2, 2017 9:02 pm

    Interesting prologue dear and plz continue. Eagerly waiting for next episode, plz post next part soon with ur another Raglak story

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 2:09 pm

      Thanks Ammu, I will try and update soon???

  26. Sindhura on April 2, 2017 9:04 pm

    Nice

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 2:08 pm

      Thanks Sindhura??

  27. Follybraverl on April 2, 2017 9:14 pm

    Awesome Bela all the best dear looking forward for your ff

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 2:07 pm

      Thanks a lot Follybraverl???

  28. tëìtō kUn on April 2, 2017 10:16 pm

    Nice Concept…..
    Post Next Part Soon….

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 2:07 pm

      Thanks a lot tëìtō kUn ???

  29. sultana on April 2, 2017 10:38 pm

    superb bela dii..waiting eagerely for the next updates…

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 2:06 pm

      Thanks sultana ???

  30. sultana on April 2, 2017 10:39 pm

    sorry for the extra e…

  31. Rasha on April 2, 2017 11:53 pm

    wow this amazing u r too amazing update the next to soon baby please…

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 2:05 pm

      Thanks a lot Rasha???
      I will try and update.

  32. gayu on April 3, 2017 9:34 am

    Awesome

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 2:05 pm

      Thanks a lot gayu???

  33. dharani on April 3, 2017 12:09 pm

    awesome

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 2:04 pm

      Thanks Dharani???

  34. IQRA222 on April 3, 2017 3:14 pm

    awesome intro di
    do cntinue

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 9:42 pm

      Thanks iqu, I will update Cocktail first, then this one :-* :-*

  35. Halima on April 3, 2017 4:21 pm

    Bela, you’re back! Am I dreaming or is this for real? *pinch myself.

    Yayyyyy, you’re back, finally with a new story. Loved the prologue ? I need to tell my friend this, she’s gunna be so J (jealous) because I’ll get to read it and in fact I read it first because she’s out of country ???

    I’m so glad you’re back, looking forward for Sakhi Saiyaan. I wouldn’t have ever found out if one of my friend said to check TU out.

    Hope you remember me ??

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 9:43 pm

      Hehehehe Thanks a lot Halima :*
      Of course I remember you, don’t worry 😀

  36. Vk on April 3, 2017 8:38 pm

    Interesting and if u can plz write one ragsan ff dr

    • Bela on April 3, 2017 9:46 pm

      Thanks Vk 😀
      I am thinking of a Dil Ye Bekaraar Kyun Hai sequel. Up for it? 😉

    • Vk on April 4, 2017 2:31 pm

      That will be awesome ???

  37. Aasthu on April 4, 2017 3:20 pm

    Belaaaa what are you?????? You are amazing dear…..I’m excited for this story…..plzzzz update soon…..

    • Bela on April 5, 2017 5:35 pm

      Aasthu…….I am a fat girl 😛
      Thanks a lot 😀

  38. wild rose on April 5, 2017 3:28 am

    its awesome…most say i am ur fan

    • Bela on April 5, 2017 5:36 pm

      Thanks wild rose 😀

  39. A.xx on April 10, 2017 8:44 pm

    Amazing and always love ur stories dear xx

    • Bela on April 11, 2017 11:31 am

      Thanks a lot A.xx???

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