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sajna ve twinj ff part 11

AnushaBy AnushaDecember 17, 201720 Comments14 Mins Read
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Sajna ve twinj ff part 11
(Sorry for late update guys kya karu final exams chal raha hey ,making time in between exam to write ff now hope u like it n to post other ff I need time hope u guys understand my situation I’m really sorry for making u all wait)

@hospital
Twinj going though tough situation dat dey can’t explain or express to anyone what dey r feeling ryt now der baby has been snatcher away from dem ,dey were very happy knowing twin baby joining der sweet family but what all happen in some time ago has snatched everything from dem but somewhere happy knowing dey got der princes at least but pain of loosing prince killing dem inside both were sad n crying inside but not showing it dey plastered smile on der face to convince each other dey were happy
Kunj playing wid baby angel she started to cry
K – twinkle y she is crying

T – may be she is hungry kunj give her to me
Kunj gave her baby twinkle adjusted little angel on her lap n signed kunj something
K – wt?
T – sadu go outside na I should feed her now
K – so what twinkle give her milk I’ll sit here only n sat beside her
T – aww close ur eyes den
K – u r doing like I’m going to see some new thing twinkle, I saw everything before only???? twinkle closed baby ears to prevent her from listening her dad’s naughty words like she understands everything

T – shh kunj sharam nahi aathi baby ki saamne ye sab bolne mey what she ll think abt us now
K – twinkle she is baby she ll not understand anything yar
T – oh ya k angel cone I’ll give u milk bhook lagi hey meri bachi ko ??? n she adjusted her near chest n started to feed her when baby drinker first drop of milk twinkle felt very happy its new feeling for her she closed her eyes to feel dat happiness vch she feeling ryt now kunj smiled looking at her

Kunj POV

I Want to see u always happy twinkle u look good when u r smiling n twinkle I’m pretending I’m happy in front of u inside I’m dying ,ye kya hogaya twinkle sapne bhi nahi socha tha mey ki hamarey baby ko bhi problems se gujarna padega who is dat heartless person want to kill our babies mera beta aanke khol key iss duniya ko dekhne ne se pehle hi uske aanke ko kisine hamesha hamesha ke liye bandh kardiya uska kasoor kya tha if I get to know who have done dis all with u n our babies Ill not leave dem, twinkle I promise u I’ll find dat person who killed our son n I’ll punish dem for der deed n I’ll make der life hell bcoz of dem v r crying n v lost our son???? control kunj u should not cry in front of twinkle if I’ll cry like dis den who ll convince twinkle

Baby stopped drinking as its tummy is full now
T – bas baby tummy full huva? ?? baby smiled at her twinkle kissed on her forehead n started to play wid her its very cute baby n her eyes r same like twinkle
K – u both r too bad twinkle baby n twinkle looked at kunj
T – arey what v did huh
K – den wt u both only playing with each other u didn’t asked me to join also so bad n give me baby now its my turn to play wid my angel n took baby from twinkle baby looked at kunj making big eyes
K – Hi baby my self kunj kunj sarna I’m ur father
T – ???????? laughing loudly
K – chup twinkle y u laughing
T – den what kunj how u r introducing ur self to baby ha n look at her she is showing u her big eyes n digisting ur words
K – angel ur mom is too bad c na how she teases ur dad

T – aww no baby ur dad teases momma lot n ur mom is too innocent n sole u know
K – ur mom silent its joke of the year dear baby looking once at twinkle den at kunj who were teasing each other n busy in dat baby thought (don’t ask me how she thinks its baby I know? its twinj baby it can do many thing ) its not fair her mom dad forgotten her presence its not good ryt she has to be center of attraction now so she kicked kunj on face to gain attention
K – ahha u kicked me
T – oh kunj may be she is angry day v didn’t talked to her
K – oh den I’ll handle dis little siyappa queen n looked at baby

K – from dis leg u kicked me na now c what I’ll do n kissed her tiny legs twinkle smiled at dem n kunj started to talk to baby cutely n baby also enjoying n responding to kunj by moving her hands n touching kunj face from her tiny hands

Twinkle POV
Kunj u look good when u r smiling n I know u r pretending u r happy in front of me na bcoz u don’t want me to cry remembering abt other baby my son who left us kaoun theey oh log Jose mujse mera chota kunj ko chin liya usko mere pass rehne nahi diya ,kyu babaji kyu y u took him away from us , isse acha tho vo mere khot mey hey rehte safe tho hothey mera beta duniya me sake aanke kholne se pehle usko maar diya gaya if I know who have done dis I’ll kill dem n kunj I’m also hardly controlling my tears from falling bcoz I know if I cry in front of u u can’t take it n u can’t control yourself n I don’t want u to c u like dat so I’ll avoid talking abt it.
K – twinkle
T – haan

K – my angel is so cute

T – yes she is??
K – yes she is more beautiful Dan u???
T – aww acha yes she is…..
K – ithna jaldi maan gayi
T – arey Mr.sarna aap much bhul rahe ho
K – acha ji aur vo kya
T – kunj angel is my daughter n I’m her mother when her mother is so cute n beautiful den she should be beautiful only bcoz she adopted dat from me bcoz I’m her mother it my baby ????? world’s beautiful mother n daughter hena baby
Baby smiled in agreement n she is very happy

K – self obsessed kahi ki n baby wt y u r smiling to her words don’t listen to her she ll only teach u how to do siyappa u join my team n vll teas twinkle k
T – ???? don’t listen to him baby he is sadu sarna

On other side
Uv taking care of baby n mahi was resting simply
Uv showering baby with love n mahi don’t cared abt baby at all busy in her own world
Uv – jaan I’m so happy u gave me worlds best gift n he is so cute baby started to cry suddenly bcoz he is hungry

Uv – arey isse kya huva
M – don’t know
Nurse – ma’am feed baby may be hungry
M – ???? kya karoon abh
UV – arey haan jaan lo isko dhoodh peela
M – vo vo UV ,UV got call he went outside giving baby to mahi n when mahi touched baby it started to cry more
M – chup ha yegdum chup ?? don’t cry

Baby was crying more n more looking at her aggressiveness
M – o my god n nurse go n get milk for dis n say family members I can’t feed baby bcoz I have some problem n can’t give milk to baby k n I’ll give u extra money for dat
Nurse – k ma’am
M – k go n get feeding bottle for it now otherwise I’ll get headache bcoz of its cry
N – ma’am he is too small n outside milk is not good for him
M – just do what I say u to do don’t come to teach me k

N – k ma’am n she got feeding bottle for her
Mahi kept it in baby mouth but baby wasn’t interested in it n was crying
M – arey what’s ur problem drink it n sleep don’t disturb me drink?? n kept in his mouth again forcefully
UV came to room after attending call n he got to know abt twinj he was sad for dem
UV – how dat people can do like dis who r d cruel people dey killed der baby
M – what happened UV

UV narrated everything mahi acted like she is sad n was happy inside looking at twinkle pain
M – wt twinkle doing now
UV – playing with der baby
M – what u told dey killed der baby right?

UV – yes mahi dey killed d boy baby n when dey throwed babies kunj catches dem so girl baby is fit n fine n unfortunately other baby found dead
M POV (shit dey got other baby too alive no worries twinkle baby I have ur baby wid me now n c now how I’ll play wid u hahaha)
Baby cryed again louder
M – chup piyo issue?? rudely
UV – mahi???? is it d way to handle baby idiot n what is dis u r making it drink from dis bottle

M – vo vo sorry UV but doctor said I can’t give milk der is some problem so
UV – oh k give it to me I’ll make baby to drink it don’t know from how many hours he hungry
UV took baby n started feeding it but no baby didn’t drink it n crying like hell UV got tensed baby crying continuously ,didn’t drink a drop of milk too
Anitha came to c baby
A – mera potha y he is crying dis much n she tried to convince him but no use baby crying like hell
UV – I’ll call doctor mom baby crying from 2hrs continuously doctor examined n dey said to make him drink milk n dey were not getting wt happened to it.
UV – I’ll take him outside may he ll feel good
M – hmm k UV Anitha concerned abt baby but mahi not at all
UV talking wid baby n walking n he came near twinkle ward
K – who is dat baby crying dis much

T – go n c na kunj
K – k n he placed baby angel beside twinkle n went outside to c what happened
K – UV
UV – hey hi kunj how is twinkle n ur baby angel
K – ☺☺☺☺dey r good UV n y baby crying dis much
Kunj POV (ye kya mahi ka khot bacha tha sach mey per ye baby kitna tiny hey aur uska stomach tho kitna tha na leave it)
UV – don’t know yar from 2hrs crying continuously kunj I’m tensed
K – wt from 2hrs give him too me
Kunj took his baby n tried to convince but no use but crying become bit slower looking at him
K – bhook lagi hogi na
UV – v gave him feeding bottle bcoz mahi can’t give milk bcoz of some problem
K – oh did he drinked
UV – no yar he is pushing it out from his tongue
K – k den be here only I’ll come in while n took baby inside twinkle ward
T – kunj who’s baby it is

K – UV ka twinkle n c baby crying so much from 2hrs
T – wt from 2hrs give him to me n she took baby in her hand in minute baby stopped crying n looked at twinkle
K – arey wah kya jaadu kiya tune siyappa queen
T – don’t know n c kunj he is so cute na n arey c his lips is same like urs n nose too
K – acha

T – I think his Tummy is empty give him to di she ll feed him
K – no ur sis have some problem it seems so can’t give him milk n he is not drinking bottle milk
T – oh no worries looking at baby boy
T – mey tumhe doodh dethi hun n made him to drink milk baby drinked it without any complain n very happy feeling twinkle touch y not bcoz he felt mother touch ( vll say na its baby n dey ll not get anything but no its wrong baby can sense its mother touch bcoz its her womb from past 9 months n very well know abt her touch it fan sense it bcoz baby was is her from 9 months n communicated many times with hey by kicking n touch n playing in her womb n when his mother touched him he sensed it n stopped his crying session mother love is like dat n one more thing a women ll become complete women when she gives birth to baby n moment dey give birth dey become mother n der love n emotion towards baby ll never be fake may its mother or surrogate mother a surrogate mother also a mother who keeps others child in her womb may be for any reason dey r doing dis job to give others happiness n ven she feels for baby n shows emotions towards baby it ll not be fake v should not judge mother love by saying dey didn’t care abt it n all is fake just to prove our hatered towards character spreading negativity abt dem is too bad. I’ll stop it here just wanted to share it so shared n if its boring I’m sorry for dat)
K – twinkle mujhe bhi dho

Kunj took him in his arms n hugged him baby was happy with him n smiled at kunj n twinj felt happy with dat child dey found like dey r connected to dis baby too
UV knocked door
K – come UV
UV – chup ho gaya
K – yes twinkle gave him milk n he is small UV to drink bottle milk
UV – thank u guys thank u so much
T – arey isme kya thank u jaishe meri bachi ko dethi hun using tarah isko bhi kunj smiled at her
K – haan UV whenever u want help abt baby ask us k
UV – k n now make me meet ur angel

K – oh she is here c
UV took baby n played wid her n after sometime he went to kunj to take baby
UV – mera beta aa javo chalege abh
K – go to papa
Baby wasn’t ready to leave kunj it felt he is in safe place now being in his fathers arm made him to feel good
UV – arey avo na no use it didn’t went ven he tried to take baby held kunj shirt tightly saying don’t want to go
K – arey nahi jayega

UV – he is attached to I both soon
T – ☺☺☺ how is di?
UV – fine☺
UV left baby wid kunj n went to make discharge papers ready saying to keep baby eid him only some time

Kunj placed baby near to his baby both baby saw each other n smiled like dey very knowing each other n started to talk in baby way among themselves twinj enjoying baby to baby conversation

To be continued……

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    20 Comments

    1. sidmin78 on December 17, 2017 10:49 pm

      superb episode?
      twinj and their babies scenes were too cute?
      post ur other ffs also plz☺

    2. Himanigaur on December 17, 2017 11:15 pm

      It was so cute pls post soon

    3. Vags on December 18, 2017 12:08 am

      It was. Lovely

    4. SSK on December 18, 2017 2:25 am

      Cute ff… Plz post soon?

    5. Presha on December 18, 2017 1:38 pm

      Awesome
      Loved it

    6. Ramya on December 18, 2017 4:19 pm

      Awesome Amazing superb
      It’s best
      Baby ne apni mummy ko pehchanliya
      Awesome
      I just loved it
      And papa ko bhi
      I feel this as best episode up-to now
      I lived it
      Awesome yaar
      Please jaldi sach ko bahar lao
      Please please po

      Post soon

    7. SidMin23 on December 18, 2017 4:59 pm

      Cute Iove twinj moment with baby

    8. Veda on December 18, 2017 6:33 pm

      Awesome loved it ?

    9. Sia on December 18, 2017 6:45 pm

      Hi anushasan epiosde was awsm and cute that baby to baby talks were cute post soon

    10. Twinj2000 on December 18, 2017 8:54 pm

      Wow Anusha this episode touched my heart ❤️❤️❤️
      Loved it ❤️❤️
      It’s my fav episode of urs till date ??
      Baby scenes ???
      I cried reading the scene twinkle was feeding her baby boy I.e what she thinks is Mahis baby ??
      I loved that very much
      N how much ever u try to snatch baby from parents babies ll identify their parents ???
      Superb
      N about the updates don’t worry
      Post when u r free
      All the best for your exams ?❤️

    11. rayna on December 19, 2017 4:48 am

      Such a lovely episode
      Loved every bit of it??
      Hats off to u
      IT was really very cute..
      POor twinj.Felt very bad for them.
      And baby identified their parents??
      And post when u will get time
      All the best for ur exams..
      Lots of love to u

    12. Mariam on December 19, 2017 4:50 am

      Superb episode
      Totally loved it.
      Baby part was the best..
      Do post soon

    13. Kiya1234 on December 19, 2017 12:31 pm

      Hey Anusha.. superb yaar I loved your episode today very much like connect to my heart everything the baby part awesome yes you are right about mother love if she surrogate mother. MAA ke emotions always true…-
      !-: that baby feeding part twinkle feet him it’s so amazing I loved and emotional too. Yes right baby can easily find their mother because the smell of mother they can sense easily… the first drop of milk automatically he drink his mother milk. Great I want some part like this..

    14. Kiya1234 on December 19, 2017 12:32 pm

      Hey Anusha.. superb yaar I loved your episode today very much like connect to my heart everything the baby part awesome yes you are right about mother love if she surrogate mother. MAA ke emotions always true…-
      !-: that baby feeding part twinkle feet him it’s so amazing I loved and emotional too. Yes right baby can easily find their mother because the smell of mother they can sense easily… the first drop of milk automatically he drink his mother milk. Great I want some part like this.. superb episode yaar amazing hats offf you today post soon

    15. Waiza on December 20, 2017 4:45 am

      Lovely episode..
      Fantastic..
      Totally loved it..

    16. unknown on December 20, 2017 4:46 am

      Fantastic…
      I am speechless today…
      The way u defined everything was amazing
      Hats off to u

    17. ria on December 20, 2017 4:47 am

      Cute,lovely episode..
      Loved every bit of it…

    18. msmahi on December 20, 2017 11:31 pm

      Cute emotional superb mindblowing fabulous fantastic episode dear mtlb aaj word nhi bache h mere pass itna awesome episode tha ye loved it dear
      plzzzz apne dusre ff bhi post kr do plzzzz
      luvvvvvv u dear

    19. Ananya_DSK on December 21, 2017 5:39 am

      That was so adorable!!! Twinj and their daughter form the cutest family ever…. Their conversations are so sweet..! I’m sure that if their son too would join them, it would be lovely!! Anyways that’s up to you, I don’t want to disrupt the storyline… The way you built up the bond between Twinkle and her baby boy was so beautiful! Twinkle and Kunj hiding their tears for each other, that won my heart… So touching… And I totally agree with you about that little note you added on a mother’s love… You’re absolutely right!! I think that needed to be said here too… Loved it!!!

    20. Riya on December 23, 2017 8:33 pm

      Its was amazing…..

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