Sajda Tere Pyaar Mein- Part 1- A sisterly bond

So, I finally came with chapter 1:

In a normal middle-class household, an old woman is reading the Quran. The woman is Shayonti. Faraz comes there.

Faraz: aapka teeno ladli Abhi tak utthe nahi kya.

Shayonti: utthe hai, aur teeno aapne aapne kaam karne ke liye gye hai.

Faraz: sach mein

Field

A girl and her friend are flying kites

(Picture blurry hai but bear karoπŸ™πŸΌπŸ™πŸΌ)

The red dress wali girl runs fast and jumps onto a stack of hay.

Mustafa: Afeeza rukkkkkk!!!!

The red dress wali girl turns, her face is revealed. It’s Afeeza.

Afeeza: main jeet gyi! Ab Chal mujhe teen handiya rassgulle khilwa

Mustafa: Yeh fair nahi hai! Tune toh bhaga

Afeeza: Toh rules mein toh yeh sab nahi tha

Mustafa: phir bhi!

Afeeza: Iss khel ke har niyam humne char char baar padha hai.

Mustafa: haan haan, tu toh bohut zyada hi padhaku banrahihai

Afeeza: Matlab Kainat Di ki ekdum opposite

Other side

A girl is dancing

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=h6lHUn20J5g

(Deepika ki jaga Anushka ko samajh lo)

In the middle, a tsunami 🌊 comes. Kainat wakes up from sleep.

Kainat: tsunami koi bachaooooo!!!

She stands up. All of the students laugh at her.

Teacher: Kainat! Tum har test mein C paate ho! Aur ab soraheho, Sharam nahi aata kya?!!

Kainat: sorry teacher saheba

Teacher: Main tumhara class participation marks mein 0 dungi

Kainat: kyaaaaaaaaaaaa?!! Please nahi

Teacher: tumhe tumhari behen Suhaira se sikhna chahiye. Vo topper hoke pass hui hai humare college se

Kainat(mumbling): Di yeh sab kaise karleti hai

Mashjid

A girl wearing a white hijab πŸ§•πŸ» is seen praying among many people. They do Sajda, The girl’s face is seen.

Government Mahila college

Class ends, students go for break.

Kainat: Di yeh sab kaise karleti hai?

Yasmine: mujhe kya pata?

Kainat: Haan Haan Tujhe toh kuch pata nahi!(sarcastically)

Kainat: Ab toh ghar jaakar hi puchh naa padhega.

Somewhere

Afeeza and Mustafa are lying on taken on a wheel gadiΒ 

Mustafa: haan tu jeet gyi, par ab yeh bol ki hum teen handiya kiddhar se lekar aungi?

Afeeza turns

Afeeza: mujhe pata hai jaane ke liye

Sana’s Sweets

A girl is seen ordering workers to do their work. A boy comes there

Boy: Itna bhi kya hai ki tu itna preparations karrahihai?

Girl: Manik, itna sawal mat ka-

“Suniye”

The girl recognizes the voice and turns, her face is revealed.

Sana: Afeeza!

She hugs Afeeza

Afeeza: Thank you didi, didi kya aap mujhe teen handiya rassgulle desakte hai?

Sana: Kyun nahi?

Sana gives her 3 matkis of rassgulla. Afeeza is about to pay, but Sana stops her.

Sana: I don’t make my sister pay*Afeeza looks on dumbfounded*, and you are like my sister.

Afeeza: Even I’ve never met anyone like you

They hug.

Mustafa: Afeeza Chal, do bajgya!

Afeeza: Oh! Teri, Itna jaldi! Chal Chal chal!!!(Reminds me of chol chol kobita by Kazi Nazrul Islam)

They both go out.

Sana: *chuckles* these two will never change

Worker: madam kaam hogya

Sana: Haan theek hai

Sana and Manik leave to deliver the order.

Precap: more intros

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Exactly 608 words, actually I had this lying in my drive for a week, so I decided to give it.

Goodbyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

~Samaila

4 Comments
  1. Shesha485

    Amazing start. Kainat dream and Vashrit intro was nice and interesting. Others are also lovely

    1. Samaila

      😁😁😁😁

  2. Wow! It’s awesome you are writing on KUDCA (I can say one of my favourite series, but hoping to not drag that Veer – Amrit drama and also give some more importance to Vashmay) It was excellent at beginning.
    Coming back to your ff, it was very well written. Looking forward to your story.

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