sab theek ho jayega*part 1*
hi guys dis is sargam writer of ff ’jee le zara…swaragini’.i wrote dis being fed up the ongoing track .it will start from jail wen swasan and raglak were in jail and dey receive phone call from sujatha but not pari taking ap and dp wid her.so here it is :
rags-sanlak u go I’ll stay here wid swara(assuring dem)
sanlak leave for hospital.
Swarag in jail-
Inspector(rudily)-do u think it as an easy task ,u have to obtain bail from court ,which u can only after 2 days ,so its not an option, so if ur dadi takes d case back den it cud be possible,but I think she wont(smiles sarcastically)
Rag(emotionally)-don’t worry swara I will get u out soon,but I didn’t expected dadi to behave lyk dis,y,y she aint realizing dat she is falling in her family’s eyes only.
Swara-ragini I also didn’t thought of dis,I know she doesn’t lyk me much but she did dis wid us wen she knows our family needs us d most.(rags was in sum thoughts)
Rags(wiping her tears)-swara u jst wait here I will get u out 2day only(determined)
Swara-but how ,court’s close for 2days.????
Rags-don’t worry I will do sumthing
Rags leaves from police station and reaches baadi in fully enraged mode.she marches 2wards gadodia house.dadi was dere sitting on dining table enjoying her victory.she saw rags and was elated to see her dere and went upto her.
Dadi(lovingly)-laado,come ,come inside (holding her hand)
Rags(removing her hand)- I jst came here for one purpose.
Dadi-wat???
Rags-will u take d case back or not???(sternly)
Dadi(nervously)-no laado she has done a mistake,she is a theif so she has to bear punishment.
Rags-jst she did it ,didn’t u saw me seeing all this or aapne apni aankho par mere pyar ki patti bhandh rakhi h………………..I m asking u again will u take d case back or not??
Dadi-na laado tu samajh maari baat ko (was cutted by rags)
Rags(angrily)-will u take d case back or not????
Dadi-na main na leti ja jo karna h kar le (avoiding eye contact)
Rags-thik h so from now on u don’t have any grand daughter!!!!!
Dadi(shocked)-laado je ke keh rahi h tu!!!!
Rags(wid tears)-haa ,aaj se meri pehchaan sirf ragini lakshya maheshwari,lakshya maheshwri ki patni,maheshwari khandan ki bahu,swara ki behen shekhar gadodia ki beti hu aur kuch nhi,main ap se apne saare rishtey toodti hu!!!
Dadi(crying)-naa laado aisa mat bol,thaare siva h hi kon maara,aur to toh jaanti h na usne chori ki toh phir kya galat kiya maine?
Rags(letting out a sarcastic laugh)-galti,aapko sirf swara ki galti dikhi ,aap janti h na ki hum bhi uske saath the.toh phir hume kyun nhi beja jail(shouting)ye bhed-bhav kab tak,kab tak???tang aa chuke h hum aapki in rudivadi baton se,agar koi tumhare samaj ka nhi toh matlab who achoot.wah!!!(clapping her hands)kya soch h !!! agar hum samaj chod bhi de toh bhi aap hamesha se use aise hi treat karti aayi h!kyun aapne hume jail nhi bheja kyun sirf use??(she falls on her knees)
Dadi cums to pick her up but rags shooes her away by saying-“hume haath lagane ki koshish bhi mat kijiyega”
Dadi was super shocked to see her laado talking to her lyk this.rags stood up and let her outburst again
Rags(wid tears flowing down her cheeks)-(shouting)aare insan ko toh ek janvar se bhi lagaav ho jata h ,toh swara toh aapki poti h woh bhi wo ladki jisne itna kuch kiya hamare parivaar ke liye ,humare liye ,aapke bête ki zindagi ko dobara rango se bhara,aapki poti ko ek maa ka saya diya aur kya chahto h aap??
Dadi was standing silent only while the earth beneath her feet slipped away.she knew dat at sum point of tym sum1 will show her aaina(mirror) or she will have to repent for her mistakes but she never imagined her laado breaking her guroor and showing her d real face. She was broken now and became more infuriated and stern dat she will take revenge for turning her laado against her from swara.
Dadi-laado tujhe bas meri galatiya dikhti h ,kya tu bhool gyi swara ne kya kiya h thare saath?tujhse tera honewala pati china,tujhe burai ki taraf dhakela,aur tujhe………….(cutted by rags again)
Rags(showing her hand)-bas!!!(shouting)don’t u dare say anything about my family(she lets out a sarcastic smile)main hi galat thi jo aapko samajhane chali thi,socha baat karke sab thik ho jayega paa nahi……………koi fayeda nhi iss sabka
Every word of rags made dadi more angry on swara and she dindnt wanted to see anything rather than getting her laado back but sumwhere the reality hit her dat how she treated her bahu and poti.she was feeling guilty but still she needed sumthing big to realize her mistake,that’s wat came nxt.
Rags(sternly)-I m asking u last tym will u take d case back
Dadi-no!!!!!
Rag-y r u doing all dis ,1st u tried to kill chotu den my sister y dadi,don’t u want my happiness??cant u see ur family happy??
Dadi(trembling voice)-laado I m doing all dis for u only ,to get u free from d bengali’s jadoo,u r the one who matters to me most and now u r not realizing but soon u will,that whatever I m doing is for ur good only.
Rags-hamare liye???dadi maa hum ye sab nhi chahte !!!aap samajhti kyun nhi,hamari khushi hamare parivaar ke saath ,unki khushi mein hamari khushi h jiska ek zaroori hissa swara h ,hamari takat,hamari behen!!
Dadi-laado tu keh tujhe jo kehna h but I know dat wat I m doingis for ur betterment only.
Rags thought that might her dadi melt down after all this not counting her dadi but atleast her laado’s crying face but she didn’t so to get swara out of jail she cud see only one way .
Rags wiped her tears and said in mind ‘I m sorry lakshya ,hume maaf kar dena swara’.she den moved 2wards d dining table and took d knife while dadi’s back was facing her.she looked at d knife and den slit her wrist.she dropped d knife listening to d voice dadi turned around and was distraught to see the scene .blood was flowing continuously from rags hand while her face had a kind of satisfaction.dadi ran towards her shouting ‘LAADO’.
Dadi came to her while rags moved back wid a smile on her face.
Dadi-laado ye keh bachpana h,kya kiya tune?apni nas kaat li!!hey mara khatu shyam ji samajhao ise.(hell worried)laado beta mare ko thari patti karne de ,dekh beta kitna khoon beh rha h .(wid tears)
Rags(weakly)-no dadi maa,its d punishment for my sins that I go away from my family.
Dadi-laado ke keh rhi h tu??
Rags- hum aapko samajha kar thak gaye par aap nhi mani toh humne ye sab karne ki wajah hi khatam kar di…(smiles)bas iss baat ka afsos rahega ki hum aakhri baar swara ke gale nhi lag paye(swara’s smilng face comes to her mind,her care and anger ,everything jst passes in front of her)……………..laksh ko aakhri baar dekh nhi (she reminsices laksh’s smiling face ,her consolation to him in hospital ,their marriages) paye……..apne parivaar ko iss mushkil ghadi mein chod kar jaa rha h hum(she remembers all family moments)……………..(she feels dizzy)
Dadi-naa laado …………….na…………………..acha bol ke chahto h tu main swara ko chudva dungi par mare se baat kar ………..maare ko maaf kar de(folding her hands)tu jo kahegi main who karungi………………..mare ko maari galti ka ehsaas ho gya h……………………main aaj ke baad aisa kuch nhi karungi…………….
Rags was about to fall down but dadi caught her on tym and made her sit on chair.she was closing her eyes and dadi tried to keep her awake and messaged doctor & laksh to cum to her house alone as she didn’t wanted to make it a big issue.
Dadi-laado mare se baat kar na ………………..bol na laado
Rags(hardly speaking)-dadi maa ……….apko apni…………….galti……………ka ehsaas ho gya……………..
Dadi nodded in a yes and encourages her to speak.
Rags-dadi maa…………………bas hamari…………………..aakhri ichcha …………………puri kar di jiye………………
Dadi(b/w her sobs)-laado aisa mat bol……………………
Rags-dadi maa swara ko…………….. jail se bahar………………….. nikalva…………………. dijiye ……………….
Dadi-thik h tu jaisa chahti h waisa hi hoga……………..tu apni himmat banaye rakh doctor aate hi honge…………….maine laksh ko bhi bula liya h………………..
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Guys I was thinking of making dis a 3 shots so tell me shud I continue.
i know its quite absurd but I cud think of dis only.rags standing again her dadi lyk this and dadi will only realize her mistake wen sum1 close to her gets hurted bcoz of her.
Guys pls no rotten tomatoes or chappals pls……………………
And yes if any bashers den kindly stay away.
Thanks for reading if any1 read it.