Saavan of Relations – Prologue and Chapter 1

Hi… Everyone….. This is Jnana. I’m really new to this webpage….. Hope you welcome me…..

Actually I’m writing this story on the basis of brotherly sentiments…. I concentrate majorly on this part…. Please do comment….

So let’s get into the prologue and chapter 1…..
All the characters are same except few which I’m going to introduce….. There are three lead pairs….
Shruthi Maheshwari: daughter of Durgaprasad Maheshwari but never cares to his words….. sister of Laksh Maheshwari. Loves her brother and her chacha and chachi to the core…. Calls them as dad and mom…… Has a cousin sanskar maheshwari….. loves him a lot…. Younger to him by 3 years…..
Laksh Maheshwari: brother of shruthi maheshwari…. Same character as hers. These two share a beautiful bond as in father and daughter…. Elder to her by two years…. But acts as if two decades…. Loves his family except his father. Has a cousin sanskar maheshwari….. loves him a lot…. Younger to him by 1 year….. also loves his chacha and chachi to the core….
Sanskar maheshwari: cousin of shruthi and laksh…. Loves his cousins and family… respects his badepapa and is a pupil of him…. Elder to his cousins….
Adarsh Maheshwari: eldest son…. Shows his power of being elder to his siblings but they never care…. A comic character… is married to parineetha sinha….
Parineetha sinha/maheshwari: wife of adarsh… unlike him he loves her nanad and devar too much…. But can’t support them when they get scoldings from their so called father….
Durgaprasad Maheshwari: thinks he is successful as a business man coz of his wife….. loves her a way too much….. Father of adarsh, laksh and shruthi maheshwari….. He loves his eldest son and doesn’t even care about the other two. Has a good grip over the house. Takes every main decision of the house. Elder brother of ramprasad maheshwari. He thinks only the eldest son can run the business…. And the other two are fit for nothing…
Annapurna Maheshwari: backbone of durgaprasad maheshwari…. Doesn’t interfere in the business matter but sometimes helps her husband….. Cares a way too much to her eldest son and pretends to look after the other two….
Ramprasad Maheshwari: best father in the world…. Takes care of shruthi and laksh more than his own son….. fan of his wife….. loves her too much….. and also loves his son sanskar maheshwari to the core….
Sujatha Maheshwari: wife of ramprasad maheshwari…. Loves her husband and all the four kids and especially shruthi and laksh very much….. ofcourse loves her son to the core…
Swara Gadodia: elder daughter of shekar gadodia…. Cute bubbly girl
Ragini gadodia: younger daughter of shekar gadodia…. Cute bubbly girl… these two are twins…..
Adithya Agarwal: a joyful person enjoying his life and waiting for love of his life…. Doesn’t love a girl, but thinks he would get the best girl in the world…. has only mother… father died due to cardiac arrest a few years before… takes time for his entry….
Aastha Agarwal: sweet loving mother of adithya. Losther husband a few years ago… a big business magnet…
Shekar and sharmista: parents of swaragini…

Camera focuses on a couple sitting next to each other having coffee early in the morning…. The man: sujatha go and wake your son up and I’ll go to wake my son up… sujatha: oh!!! Come’ on ram, I will go and wake him up after sometime…. He was studying all night…. First get and fresh up…. Ram agrees…. They started their work….. of course after a little romance of theirs…
Later we see a lady entering a room with a tray carrying two cups of milk…. Camera turns to have a focus on the bed…. There we can see a guy sleeping in sitting position cradling a girl in his lap…. Slowly the lady walks towards the guys, dips her fingers in the milk and smears the guy’s lips with it…. The guy opens his eyes horrified…. Mom…… milk….. The girl who was sleeping got up as soon as she heard milk and ran outside the room…. Poor guy… his hand was held by the lady and she closed his nose with a clip…. Soon his mouth opened and she poured the milk in it…. he had no other choice than gulping it. Once he finished: mom, why do you always torture me…. you can ask her to drink first right… daily you do one or the other stunt to make me drink milk….. sujatha: lucky baby, boys are so slow…. See she ran away as soon as she heard the word milk….. But you sat and got caught…. What can I do??? Okay fine… go as usual go and make her drink… I’ll pack her bag….. laksh went with an impossible expression on his face….
This was their daily routine…. He slowly went near her who was standing spying something near the kitchen…. He kept his hand on her shoulder…. She jerked and turned…. The glass of milk slipped his hand and landed on adarsh who just came dressed to go to office…. These two closed their eyes…. Soon a hand landed on their ears twisting them…. They opened one eye next the other one…. And smiled at each other and shruthi took the water jug nearby…. She emptied it on the person and ran while he chased them…. The person: hey! Idiots…. Stop there….. I will kill you…. If not my name is not sanskar…. He shouts….. laksh turns and asks: how many times will you change your name bhai….. Try something else…. They were running and bumped into Dp who came to stop their nonsense…. He fell and held his hips crying in pain….. dp: idiots…. Is this play ground…. Anu, I told you before itself these two are fit for nothing…. they are nothing when compared to my son…. Shruthi murmured: that’s the reason he is triple graduate of third year engineering and we are toppers…. Sanskar and laksh who stood there chuckled…. Ap glared at them… shruthi still had some water in the jug…. She emptied on dp’s pants who was not aware because he was sruggling due to pain…. Adarsh saw this but feared to tell thinking he might get scoldings….
These three ran from there…. Soon they got ready to go to college and came to have their breakfast…. Laksh whispered: what is in breakfast near shruthi’s ears…. Shruthi also whispered: no idea… but for us mom will get the food… leave… they were waiting for breakfast when Dp served into laksh and shruthi’s plate…. They glared at him… he glared back…. Laksh bent his head and started eating… but shruthi did something unexpected….. She took her plate and emptied it into dp’s…. she soon got up and took her back pack and went away…. Dp: she will never know the value of food….he snorted….

So here is my prologue with first chapter do tell me how you felt…. Should I continue or not!!!!