Fan Fiction

Saath Nibhana Saathiya (One shot)-Decision yours

Hi Guys..Shakaib here. I’m writing a OS on SNS. Its not OS from any track. It is based on a social issue. You will decide who is real culprit..And its totally different one. I’ve write it in summarized way. I hope you all will like it. So, Let’s start.

The story starts with a woman been sitting on floor and crying continuously….She reminisces…. Flashback….

Mumbai is shown. A newly wed couple comes Mumbai for their honeymoon. They are Our Gopi (Devoleena Bhattacharjee) and Ahem (Mohammad Nazim). They’ve some romantic moments.

At hotel….
A room is shown being decorated. Gohem have some cosy moments there.

Next week….
Delhi is shown. A Mansion is shown. Gohem come. A lady does their aarti. She is Mrs. Modi(Shahnaz Rizwan). She showers love on them. Meanwhile, a man comes. He is Mr. Modi(Kaushal Kapoor). They four have a huge family gossip.

Time passes….
Its hospital….
Gopi has given birth to a baby boy. Dr. tells this news to family. Ahem and Mr. Modi smiles. Mrs. Modi is little sad but later becomes happy.

3 years passes….
Gopi is shown cooking food in kitchen. She feels unwell, She was to fall but ahem holds her. Mrs. Modi sees and calls Doctor.

Dr. checks Gopi and informs that Gopi is pregnant. All cheers up.

Time passes….
Gopi has given birth to second baby girl.

Mrs. Modi comes to her room angrily. Mr. Modi comes to her. Mrs. Modi shouts Can’t they see? Are all of you blind..?? Gopi can’t give birth to a boy. She is inauspicious. Mr. Modi comforts her. Her anger got a little less.

Mrs. Modi warns If next time, it will be girl…. I’ll make ahem remarry. Understand..?? Mr. Modi says but…. Mrs. Modi interrupts saying that We’ve so much property…. If we’ve no heir than others will snatch property….My Ahem’s struggle will get waste…. and I’ll never let this happen. Gopi overhears that.

Time passes….
During this…. Mr. Modi suffer with a major heart attack and dies. Gopi become pregnant for 3rd time with twins.

Mrs. Modi calls Ahem and says If Gopi have not a boy this time…. Ahem has to divorce Gopi and remarry. Gopi who was passing by there, overhears that and gets shock. She recalls her love marriage with ahem.

During Gopi’s pregnancy…. Mrs. Modi used to insult Gopi for not having a baby boy and threats her. Gopi gets worried.

She comes to her room. She gets teary eyes. She wipes her tears and says No….I’ll not let my love go….!!!! It will be baby boy this time.

Time passes….
Gopi’s 9 months get completed. Gopi gets labor pain. All takes her hospital. After operation…. Dr. informs that Gopi has given birth to baby boy and girl. All cheers up.

Mrs. Modi congratulates Ahem and Gopi. Mrs. Gopi thanks Gopi for giving her baby boy.

Time passes…. Gohem has named their son, Sahir. Sahir is grown up now. One day….While Gopi gets busy in work. Sahir while playing falls down from stairs. Mrs. Modi and Gopi gets worried and takes Sahir to Hospital. Ahem comes there.

Dr. tells them that it has bleed so much….they need blood and that type of blood isn’t available in our blood bank. Gopi asks Gopi to check their blood group. Dr. agrees and test their blood to check whether blood group matches or not. Dr. informs Modis that Blood Group didn’t match.

Meanwhile…. Jigar(Vishal Singh/Ahem’s cousin, he used to visit at modi house sometimes) comes. He meets them and asks what the matter..?? Ahem tells Jigar. Jigar says I also ask Dr to test my blood. Dr also checks Jigar’s blood group. Dr. tells that Jigar’s blood group has matched with Sahir’s blood group. Jigar donates his blood for Sahir.

After Donating blood drama….Jigar leaves. Dr tells Modis that they have to keep Sahir with them for observation for two days. Ahem stops at hospital.

Two days later….
Ahem comes Modi house and shouts Gopi. Gopi comes and sees Sahir and showers love on Sahir. Mrs. Modi comes. Ahem slaps Gopi. All gets shocked. Ahem shouts Sahir isn’t my biological son. Ahem tells them that How doctor tell him that One of Baby’s parents’ blood at least match but here that doesn’t happen. He further tells that Doctor has done DNA test also. He throws reports on Gopi’s face. Gopi cries. Mrs. Modi says Gopi…Is it true..?? Gopi shouts Yes…It’s true. Ahem says and Sahir’s blood group has matched with Jigar…So that means…. Gopi shouts no..!! Mrs. Modi scolds Gopi a lot. Mrs. Modi then asks ahem to remarry now..!! Ahem agrees and says yes, looking at Gopi. Gopi gets shocked. Ahem asks Gopi to sign on Divorce Papers. Gopi signs. Ahem also signs. Flashback ends.

Gopi thinks I can’t loss ahem…. She cries….Flashback….

In Gopi’s ward….

Dr tells Gopi that she has given birth to a baby girl….and…. Gopi asks What..?? Dr says and a boy…. Gopi gets glad. Dr says and a boy who has born dead. Gopi gets shock.

Gopi tells Dr about Mrs. Modi and pleads her to help her for a boy. Dr smirks and says You’ve to give me money…. Then I’ll…. Gopi says I’m ready…. But boy…. Dr tells that Some poor people want to sell their baby boy…. for money….due to poverty. Gopi agrees.

Dr deals with Poor people and gives them 50,00,000. People leaves. Dr. smirks and says They are now lakh patis but I’m…. Crorepati…Oh…..Crorepatni..!! She laughs.

Dr. gives baby boy to Gopi who has born just that day….Dr. asks Gopi for 20,00,00,000. Gopi gives her money. Flashback ends.

Gopi has written all this on paper. She thinks Now…I’ve to die…. There is no meaning of my life….My life is meaningless..!! She cries.

In hall….
All are enjoying Sangeet. Ahem is a little sad but her would be wife, Meera(Mahira Khan) makes his mood. Gopi messages ahem to come to hr room. Ahem, Meera and Mrs. Modi comes to Gopi’s room. Ahem sees a paper having paperweight on it. Ahem takes it to read. He reads and gets shock…He reads….Ahem…I love you…. I wish you live happily with Meera… and I son want to be thorn of you both life and for that…. I’ve to die….I’m going…going from all of far…I’m going to commit suicide from cliff…..Goof bye….You loving Gopi..!! Meera and Mrs. Gopi gets teary eyes.

Ahem, Meera and Mrs. Modi arrives at Cliff. Gopi is shown going to edge of cliff. Meera, Ahem and Mrs. Modi shouts Gopi..!! Gopi turns to see. Ahem says Not do this… please Gopi…. I love you…. Gopi nods no and moves backward. Mrs. Modi folds her hands and says No Gopi….Not do this….I beg you…. please forgive me..!! Gopi says I’ve already forgave you…. and don’t stop me….please….. Gopi says and Meera….promise me…. after me….you’ll take care of my Ahem and my kids. Meera says Not Gopi….Not do this….you’re a good mother…good bahu… good patni….. please….. Gopi gets teary eyes. She moves back and reaches at Cliff’s edge. Gopi smiles. She falls from Cliff. Meera, Ahem and Mrs. Modi runs to cliff’s edge. Gopi is shown falling.

SLOW MOTION AND SPECIAL EFFECTS ARE SHOWN. Gohem love tune plays….All cries.

5 years later….
It is revealed that Meera and Ahem has get married. Ahem and Meera has also start loving each other. But ahem sometime remmber Gopi. Mrs. Modi has realise her mistake. It is also revealed that Meera has miscarriage an can’t be a mother again. Mrs. Modi now don’t care of Baby boy as she repenting still. Meera also loves Gohem’s kids as her own.

The End.

Now you tell, Who was real culprit in this matter..??

• Gopi..?? Who bought a child because of social forcibly and fear of second woman in her life…. Hide her child’s death fact and gave pain to his husband’s trust.

• OR Ahem….Who did not give her wife a chance to say from her side…. and think her wife criminal due to his wishes’ forcibly.

• Or THEN Mrs. Modi…. who threat and insult her Bahu for that desire which was in Lord’s control.

• OR THEN THAT Doctors…. who being proved in playing such dirty tricks.

• OR THEN THOSE POOR PEOPLE HOUSES…. Who sold their kids for just some rupees because of poverty and become criminal.

• Who is real culprit…. Can you decide..??

shakaib

He said that we belonged together because he was born with a flower and I was born with a butterfly and that flowers and butterflies need each other for survival.

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