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Home»Fan Fiction»Ruhaniyaat (Segment 90)
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Ruhaniyaat (Segment 90)

StoneheartBy StoneheartNovember 3, 201630 Comments4 Mins Read
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Her point of view –
“There you go mom…all ready ..” i said fixing mom’s pallu (aanchal) over her head .
“Thank you so much beta.” She said blessing me.
“Lagta aaj the men of the family are going to die..” teased my sister..
“Yea yea tabhi tumne itna makeup kiya hai ..” i replied and she blushed..
John was family
Papa considered him as his son and Dex as his brother.
“Si si ..” yelled the kids when they came running in..
“Baby how many times i have to tell you not to run” their mother scolded them..
Typical mothers..
“Yes love..” i said and crouched down to their level..
“Lion said he will eat everyone up if you don’t come out..” they said..
“Did he say that..?” I asked faking innocence..
Dex kabhi nai sudhar sakte..
“Mom i will be back.” I said and let the twins drag me to their Lion…
“Baby please my fix my tie..” whined Dex as soon as he saw me..
I took a minute to take in his appreance.
He wore a black shirt with a checked black suit and a white tie..
“Dexy you could have asked John to do so….you know i was busy .”
“Yea but..”
“But kya..?”
“I couldn’t have pulled him closer like this ..” he said pulling me closer..
“And..?”
“I couldn’t have kissed him like this..” he said kissing my throat..
“Hm….”
“And like this..” he whispered in my ear before biting my ear lobe..
“Lion is eating si..” yelled my little princess before running away to fetch her brother..

Minutes later John came running behind her with an amused smile..
“Bhai there are kids around..” he teased Dex and winked at me..
“As if you don’t steal kisses from their mother..” dex snorted and i widened my eyes..
“Guys..” i said and pointed below us where the twins were listening to us intently..
“Come babu..” i picked up both the tiny tots and the boys followed close..
“Can we come in please..?”
“No..” i said handing them the twins and closed the door behind me.
“So all set ??” I asked mom and my sister..
“Yup” they chirped in unison.
—
His point of view –
Me and John both held each twin and walked up to the main hall to all the guest and our impatient father..
When we reached there..suddenly the lights dimmed and princess hid herself in my arms..
“Hey its alright baby..” said Pie from beside me.
She was finally ready and looked heavenly in her black saree with red border..
“Staring is rude mr” she said winking..

Before i could reply the music started
Sukh dukh jhoothe
Dhan bhi jhootha
Jhoothi moh-maaya
Saccha mann ka wo kona jahaan
Prem ratan paaya.
Prem ratan paaya.

i recognised it as mom’s voice before she came descending the stairs..
Saiyan tu kamaal ka Baatein bhi kamaal ki
Laaga rang jo tera Hui main kamaal ki
Payo re payo re payo re payo re payo
Payo re payo re payo re payo re payo re..
Prem ratan dhan payo Prem ratan dhan payo
Rut milan ki laayo
Prem ratan..Prem ratan dhan payo maine
Prem ratan dhan payo

Bhabhi joined her
Kya main dikha doon Yaa main chupa loon
Jo dhan hai mann mein Yeh bhi na jaanu
Bajne lagi kyun sargam si tann mein
Khushiya si hai aangan mein
Chehre pe aaye meri rangatein gulaal ki
Laaga rang jo tera hui main kamaal ki
Payo re payo re payo re payo re payo
Payo re payo re payo re payo re payo re..
Prem ratan dhan payo Prem ratan dhan payo
Mann gagan par chayo
Prem ratan..Prem ratan dhan payo maine
Prem ratan dhan payo

Pie joined them from beside me…
Mujhko the ghere jitne andhere
Ho gaye door sabhi Sab sapno ki
Sab rishton ki paa li keemat bhi
Prem ko main samjhi
Kisi ne na ki meriTune jo sambhaal ki
Laaga rang jo tera hui main kamaal ki
Payo re payo re payo re payo re payoPayo re payo re payo re payo re payo re..
Prem ratan dhan payo
Prem ratan dhan payo
Aaj mann bhar aayo
Prem ratan dhan payo..

All the women finished and looked at us smilling..
Suddenly the kids ran up to their mom.
The three of them walked to a shocked John before kneeling down in front of him.
“Will you be our Daddy..?” The twin chorused while their mother held the ring box open to a now crying John..
“Yes” he screamnt before giving his new family a bear hug while the guest cheered..

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Stoneheart

    My name explains it all..!

    30 Comments

    1. savanshi27 on November 3, 2016 11:33 pm

      Hey dear I’m back after many days….
      I know u don’t remember me but I can’t forget ur ff so here I’m laying my appreciation….
      the epi was awsm… bindass… jhakaasss…
      the ending was fantastic…
      loved the update in whole…

      • Stoneheart on November 4, 2016 12:38 am

        Thank u so much and ofcourse i know u

    2. kumu on November 4, 2016 12:06 am

      amazing..loved it..
      d best part is d last part..it was unexpected..nw waiting for their marriage..tc..

      • Stoneheart on November 4, 2016 12:38 am

        Thank you so much

    3. Arshaanya on November 4, 2016 12:21 am

      Aaaww d best part is d last part…
      I so love dese twin in ur ff…
      Loved it

      • Stoneheart on November 4, 2016 12:49 am

        Thank u

    4. MickeyMouse on November 4, 2016 1:07 am

      Proposal was sooo cute??

      • Stoneheart on November 4, 2016 7:01 am

        Thank u

    5. mariyajap on November 4, 2016 1:40 am

      Wow superb

      • Stoneheart on November 4, 2016 7:04 am

        Thank u

    6. Jerry on November 4, 2016 2:43 am

      Proposal for pie was going to happen and boom….? Unexpected and totally unbelievably awesome proposal happened…….

      Just missed birdie n ted they are also family right? Then y they r not there??

      Btw u reached 90, just 10 more to go…

      • Stoneheart on November 4, 2016 7:02 am

        Thank u so much..yup they sre family

    7. Rekha on November 4, 2016 6:44 am

      Awesome….loved it……

      • Stoneheart on November 4, 2016 7:03 am

        Thank u

    8. Simin on November 4, 2016 7:08 am

      Wow awesome
      Good work john

      • Stoneheart on November 4, 2016 10:42 am

        Thank u

    9. Soujanya on November 4, 2016 7:57 am

      Awesome…

      • Stoneheart on November 4, 2016 10:42 am

        Thank u

    10. vyshu10 on November 4, 2016 8:05 am

      awesome……???? want dex n pie’s mrg first

      • Stoneheart on November 4, 2016 10:43 am

        Thank u

    11. chanu on November 4, 2016 10:28 am

      wow jhon!
      gd job!
      and congo dr!
      da kids r soo sweet and cute!
      aww my dex and pie.
      lv all!
      keep writing
      be hpy always!

      • Stoneheart on November 4, 2016 1:53 pm

        Thank u so much

    12. Kakali on November 4, 2016 2:01 pm

      Pragyaaaaaaa !!!! what was that?¿? omgggg !!!! i almost paralysed reading d chappy…. love it.. it’s soo adorable…
      Thnk u… ;-*

      • Stoneheart on November 4, 2016 4:36 pm

        Thank u

    13. Shiksha on November 4, 2016 2:05 pm

      Sweet proposal
      So happy for J’s(john n Johnny)
      10 more to reach century
      !!! Hurray!!!
      Keep it up.

      • Stoneheart on November 4, 2016 4:37 pm

        Thank u

    14. Dharshini on November 4, 2016 3:16 pm

      Wonderful dear..

      • Stoneheart on November 4, 2016 4:37 pm

        Thank u

    15. Shagun on November 4, 2016 4:58 pm

      It was just amazing
      And the proposal was awesome! !!
      Aj tak maine itna acha and unique proposal nahi padha kahi
      Plz update asap
      I can’t wait more to see dex’s proposal as well as pie’s reaction. .

      • Stoneheart on November 4, 2016 5:25 pm

        Thank u so much

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