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Home»Fan Fiction»Ruhaniyaat (Segment 80)
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Ruhaniyaat (Segment 80)

StoneheartBy StoneheartOctober 17, 201636 Comments4 Mins Read
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Her best friend’s point of view –
Its been a complete one day and Angel won’t talk to me..
So i decided the filmy way out ofcourse i learnt it from our very own Love Guru..jhonny..
He is like a curse to the entire male population …he does things that are like beyond men control.
He is freaking super god..
Yeah so here i am under her balcony..
No i am not climbing up..she will throw me down from the same balcony..i know her..baby lion ..just like her brothers..
I am planning on apoligising publicly.
“Angell..” i yell and like all bollywood movies i throw a stone too..
“Kya hai..?” She comes out screaming.
I have thing you know i get transported to my dreamworld when she wears white.
“Excuse me lover boy we are trying to sleep in here..” yelled her neighbour.
Sorry auntie…but my love out here is angry ..please ask her to talk to me..”
“Beta please talk to him so that we can sleep well..”
“Alright i am coming down ..” she said …
Yaay…finally.
“But only because i don’t want you to disturb my neighbours ” she snapped before finally ariving from the front door..
“Would you like to go coffee house..?” I asked ..i hope she accepts
“Okay..” she said and shrugged..
Good going bro..! You are making progress…screamt my conscience..
Shut up will you…you created this mess..i yelled back..
We started to walk down her street to the coffee house..
I tried to hold her hand but she just wouldn’t let me…dejected i stuffed my hands in my pocket..
We reached the counter and she ordered a hot chocolate with marshmallows while i ordered a kit kat shake..
We headed upstairs and sat ourselves down on the bean bags.
“Baby i am really sorry..its just that..”
I saw her expression soften and she shifted closer..
“Hey..its alright..couples do fight..”
I guess chocolate worked its magic..
Maybe its my irresistble charm.
Whatever ..the point is that she is not angry anymore..
She then rested her head on my shoulder..
“I am scared of commitments…i want to take things slow ” i confessed.
She held my face and looked into my eyes..
“You want to take it slow then be it..staying with you matters and not the relation..” she said before kissing me..
I pulled her onto my lap and she setteled herself properly..
Her hands round her cup while her back pressed to mine..
My hand around her while the other held my shake..
That night we spoke about eveything on this earth from sense to nonsense and to back to sense..
I realised two things..
1. I am in love with this girl.
2. I am not letting her go ever..

His point of view –
Pie had convinced me to meet mom ..yep she already started to call her mom..
I wonder if i can ever do that.
Currently we were heading out to meet them for dinner..
She was exited for the double date as she called ..
I am trying to still get on terms with the truth..i just can’t believe it..
But when i join the dots together i can see the truth..
Their fights..
Her lack of intrest towards me..
Dad being happy with his mistress..
“I am ready ” exclaimed Pie walking out of the room.
She was dressed in a saree that was navy blue in colour ..
She had adorned on herself a beautiful diamond set and she looked breathtaking..
” I have changed my mind..” i said approaching her..
“What do you mean .?” She asked hesitantly.
” Instead of taking you to dinner i am taking you to the bedroom.” I said kissing her jaw..
Trying my best to avoid those s*xy lips which are calling out to me..
I don’t want to ruin her make up.
“Shut up and lets go ..we are getting late ..” she said walking ahead..
“Waise…maybe we can continue this when we get home if you be a good boy and not misbehave..” she said turning to me and winking.
She did not just do that..
Oh my god i love my naughty little girl.

P.S Hey guys won’t be there on 21-10-2016 to 25-10-2016
If i can manage i will surely come..
Thank u

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    36 Comments

    1. Simin on October 17, 2016 11:34 pm

      Good red u re alive and the situation is good
      Pie naughty girl dex ka asar hai haina

      • Stoneheart on October 18, 2016 10:28 am

        Thank u

      • Simin on October 18, 2016 11:06 am

        All the very best di for exams

      • Stoneheart on October 18, 2016 11:49 am

        Thankbu

    2. shiksha on October 17, 2016 11:42 pm

      Hello,well same is my case I think so I won’t b available here on those days or b4 21st.
      Anyways u r awesome.love u.

      P.s. Are u a student?

      • Stoneheart on October 18, 2016 10:28 am

        Yes i am a student..thanks

    3. chanu on October 17, 2016 11:47 pm

      wow
      amezing epi dr.
      lv it 2da core.
      he he teds filmy avatar is sweet!
      & my dex is da god f romance? ya he is. 😉 😉
      awww my dex and pie looks cute 2gether.

      keep writing
      be hpy always!
      lv ya

      • chanu on October 18, 2016 9:24 am

        and wt ws dat u r nt updating 21-25.
        😮
        omg!
        hw cn i live without ruhaniyath for 5dys.
        oh no.!
        bt its k dr.
        i knw if u cn u surly uplode it. well wait 4 u.
        bye
        lv ya

      • Stoneheart on October 18, 2016 10:30 am

        Thank u so much..exam hain mere

    4. KrsytleS on October 17, 2016 11:59 pm

      supebb Dr … waiting for next part

      • Stoneheart on October 18, 2016 10:31 am

        Thank u

    5. kumu on October 18, 2016 12:00 am

      awesome epi..tc..

      • Stoneheart on October 18, 2016 10:31 am

        Thank u

    6. savanshi27 on October 18, 2016 12:49 am

      Amazed… like always u Rocked…
      waiting for tomorrow…
      if u are gogoing to ask for what?
      Then the answer is… off course for next cute update from our writer fend Stoneheart….
      ????

      • Stoneheart on October 18, 2016 10:31 am

        Thank u

    7. savanshi27 on October 18, 2016 12:50 am

      Amazed… like always u Rocked…
      waiting for tomorrow…
      if u are going to ask for what?
      Then the answer is… off course for next cute update from our write frnd nd Stoneheart….
      ????

    8. Arshaanya on October 18, 2016 1:12 am

      Nyc chappy

      • Stoneheart on October 18, 2016 10:32 am

        Thank u

    9. DivzS on October 18, 2016 1:25 am

      Cutieeeeeee!!

      • Stoneheart on October 18, 2016 10:32 am

        Thank u

    10. Rekha on October 18, 2016 4:53 am

      Awesome….

      • Stoneheart on October 18, 2016 10:33 am

        Thank u

    11. Kakali on October 18, 2016 8:10 am

      Sanskar tum naughty number 1 hoo.. teen teena teen..
      love it dear.. thnk u.. ;*

      i knew it u r coming to my home in these days.. so will take time for shifting.. rit?
      have a good day.

      • Stoneheart on October 18, 2016 10:33 am

        Thank u so much..yes dear shifting

    12. Soujanya on October 18, 2016 8:35 am

      Awesome

      • Stoneheart on October 18, 2016 10:34 am

        Thank u

    13. Afra96 on October 18, 2016 10:41 am

      Nice..

      • Stoneheart on October 18, 2016 11:50 am

        Thanks

    14. rabia on October 18, 2016 12:14 pm

      awesome dear 🙂

      • stoneheart on October 18, 2016 4:33 pm

        thank u

    15. vyshu10 on October 18, 2016 1:12 pm

      Aww…..dex and pie??? U won’t be there for 5 days???

      • stoneheart on October 18, 2016 4:34 pm

        thank u

    16. Dharshini on October 18, 2016 5:40 pm

      Lovely..

      • Stoneheart on October 18, 2016 8:28 pm

        Thank u

    17. Shagun on October 18, 2016 6:58 pm

      What??????
      U will not update for 5 days…
      Omg!!!
      Ab mera kyaa hoga ….
      What will happen to me???
      I can understand ur situation …
      But plz its an request that if u get time then plz update epi ….ok
      U know my day will not complete without ur ff
      And promise me u will update a lil bit longer epi after ur leave
      Sorry for late comment and i didn’t get time to comment yesterday because of laxmi puja visarjan but i read epi yesterday. ..

      • Stoneheart on October 18, 2016 8:29 pm

        Thank u so much

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