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Home»Fan Fiction»Ruhaniyaat (Segment 34)
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Ruhaniyaat (Segment 34)

StoneheartBy StoneheartSeptember 2, 201619 Comments3 Mins Read
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Her best friend point of view –
“Teeeddd……he ……he is back….he will….u come …Now… ” says Doll over the phone…
I quickly grab my keys and head out..
I drive frantically to her house and i find her behind the kitchen door..
“Ted..” she whispers and crashes in my arms..
I take her to her room and make her lie down..
“He ….is…ba..back..” she keeps murmuring about him being back…
I need to find out..i need to talk to uncle about this..
I send a sms to uncle to meet me in some time at his office…
After doll has calmed down i try to lighten the mood by telling her about mine and Angel’s proposal

Flashback–
That day after i delivered my maiden over she yelled from the stands that i have been wanting to hear from a long time..
“I love you captain …. Go …get them..”

I send a flying kiss towards the stands to where she is sitting and i see her blush instantly..
In our innings i dedicate a over to her where i hit all sixes ..
After the victory she comes to me and i pick her twril ling her..
End of flashback —
By the time i finish narrating her the incident i see Doll is almost asleep…
So i cover her in comforter and come to the hall to talk to uncle..
“Uncle .. he is here too..abh kya karein..?”
“Beta office aaa jaao… aram se baith kar bath karte hai …”

I recheck on doll to see that she okay..
I grab my keys and head to meet uncle..
As i take out my car i see a car pull over in the driveway…
Assuming him to be someone who stays in the society i drive off…
His point of view-
As i entered the house it was pitch dark..
“Pie …babu..kaha ho aap…”
I switched on the lights and found her asleep in my room..
I quickly changed my clothes and got in the comforter with her..

As soon as she felt my touch she hugged me tight..
“He….is….back….he..will.kill….me”
“Baby …its me shona…….look at me..”
She gently lifted her face and i saw relief on it..
“Dex…pl…pleassseee dont leave me…he…he…” and she burried herself more into me.
“Shhh bacha main hoon na…mere hote hue kuch nai hoga apko…Promise…”
“Pakka promise..?” She asks innocently..
“Yes love..”
With that she relaxes in my arms and doses off

P.S I see that people are getting too confused about the names..
Ted is pie’s best friend.
Jhonny and Dex are same person
John is Dex’s best friend
Angel is dex’s and john”s sister and ted’s girl.

This episode to all you dearest readers i love you all .
You guys really make my day with lovely comments
Thank you

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Stoneheart

    My name explains it all..!

    19 Comments

    1. Rekha on September 2, 2016 7:25 am

      Awesome…as always

      • stoneheart on September 2, 2016 9:13 am

        thank u

    2. Kakali on September 2, 2016 9:48 am

      Awesome dear…??

      • stoneheart on September 2, 2016 2:15 pm

        thanks

    3. Shagun on September 2, 2016 11:09 am

      Awesome
      Amazingk
      Who’s the person trying to kill pie

      • stoneheart on September 2, 2016 2:15 pm

        lets find out who is it..

    4. vijay on September 2, 2016 11:22 am

      c

    5. Heltej on September 2, 2016 1:17 pm

      Thanx stoneheart…. My confusion got cleared i was rereading some chappy to get clear the confusion… Btw who is going to kill pie. 🙁

      • stoneheart on September 2, 2016 2:16 pm

        pata nai kaun hain wo

    6. vyshu10 on September 2, 2016 1:30 pm

      nice…..do ted n dex know each other before?

      • stoneheart on September 2, 2016 4:49 pm

        thank u .. ofcourse they are in the same college..

    7. Arshaanya on September 2, 2016 2:41 pm

      Awesome …. who is dis villian from swaraz past… continue soon

      • stoneheart on September 2, 2016 4:50 pm

        thank u

    8. Pramudi on September 2, 2016 3:59 pm

      Awesome dear.

      • stoneheart on September 2, 2016 4:50 pm

        thank u

    9. kumu on September 2, 2016 4:48 pm

      nice..

      • stoneheart on September 2, 2016 7:27 pm

        thank u

    10. chanu on September 2, 2016 9:38 pm

      sry 4 late cmnt dr.
      nice epi as always
      hey i dnt hv any confution abt names.

      & thank u so much 4 dedicate dis epi 2 us. lv ya. 🙂

      bt who is trying 2 kill our pie?

      keep writing
      be happy always

      • stoneheart on September 3, 2016 6:25 am

        thank u so much

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