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Home»Fan Fiction»Ruhaniyaat (Segment 31)
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Ruhaniyaat (Segment 31)

StoneheartBy StoneheartAugust 30, 201617 Comments2 Mins Read
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Angel point of view-
I can hear birds singing..
I can feel the cool morning breeze and a strong masculine perfume..
strong masculine perfume..?
I open my eyes at once and notice that i am in the backseat of a car covered in blanket while he and one other guy is up in the front..
“So finally miss sleeping beauty is up..” he says looking at me from the rearview mirror…
“Mmmhhh….but i am still shleepy . .” I mumble and turn to the other side pulling blanket over my face..
Her best friend’s point of view –
I was the one who has been up all night looking after her ..then picking her up and getting her in the car and she is Sleepy..
Great … just great..
Sach main ladkia na..

I hear someone chuckle and turn to see my cousin laughing..
“Kya ” i groan
“Bhabhi achi hain …”
“Chup kar yaar …pitwaega kya..Tu uske bhaiyon ko nai janta….Ek lion toh dusra tiger…”
“Phir bhi tu utha laya na bhai…tu b sher se kam nai hai.”
“Chup kar jaa…. teri bhabhi sun legi .”
He bursts out laughing ..
“Kya hua … sab kyun hass rahe hai..?” She asks rubbing her eyes….
She is just so cute..
“Kuch nai angel tum so jao… abhi pahuchne main 1 hour hain…”
“Aye Aye Captain..” she says with a salute and i smile …
“Bhai …Made for each other….Woooow” my cousin starts again..
“Chup ho ja …main hi maroonga tuze nahi toh…”
We continue our nok jhok and finally reach our hometown..
We get down from the car and everybody stares at Angel ..
I wonder whats wrong …

I turn to look at her …she is in shorts and t-shirts…
Oh my god..!
“Angel tum andar jao car k abhi..” i plead her and finally she gets in the car..
I look at my cousin sister and she understands me..
She takes Angel in from the back door..
We wait at the entrance for her to return and when she does …

P.S This segment is dedicated to Kaza .
I love you

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    17 Comments

    1. Shagun on August 30, 2016 8:34 am

      Where r they
      Awesome
      Plz update pie and dex part asap
      I can’t wait more
      I wanna see how dex will take out swara from all sorts of worries and depression

      • stoneheart on August 30, 2016 10:17 am

        they are at Dex hometown..
        and thank u so much

      • stoneheart on August 30, 2016 4:09 pm

        i am sry my typing error they are Ted”s hometown and not Dex”s

    2. s on August 30, 2016 10:31 am

      nice..

      • stoneheart on August 30, 2016 1:53 pm

        thanks

    3. Rekha on August 30, 2016 12:10 pm

      Nice…

      • stoneheart on August 30, 2016 1:53 pm

        thanks

    4. Kakali on August 30, 2016 12:21 pm

      Sweet episode… ??

      • stoneheart on August 30, 2016 1:53 pm

        thanks

    5. kaza on August 30, 2016 3:13 pm

      Hahaa dedicated to meeeee☺☺☺☺☺ thanks alot
      its my pleasure that a great writer like u dedicated a chapter to me…. and i am really in love with ur writing style
      the way u describe the feelings of characters is just awesome
      And one more thing that i like in u is u never ever asked or forced readers to comment in ur ff such a sweet person u r
      I think i never commented before really i dont have time to comment on any ff as i have to manage both household works as well as my studies
      But today u made me comment once again thank u and i love u toooooo

      • stoneheart on August 30, 2016 4:08 pm

        thanku so much … really aap bhut zada kam karte ho padai ghar ka kaam..
        aap story padho aur enjoy karo ..comment karna important nai hain

      • kaza on August 30, 2016 8:24 pm

        Actually now i am preparing for IELTS exam can u plz tell me how to learn good vocabulary… it will be useful for both listening and speaking session so plz let me know how to practice for it
        I must say your vocabulary is awesome

      • stoneheart on August 30, 2016 10:16 pm

        why dont you try reading english books and newspapers and if you dont understand a meaning somwhere look up in the dictionary..

    6. vyshu10 on August 30, 2016 3:27 pm

      nyc…guessing angel is dex’s sis. I m missing dex and pie

      • stoneheart on August 30, 2016 4:08 pm

        thank u.. i miss them too

    7. Arshaanya on August 30, 2016 3:54 pm

      Its awesome as usual bt missing dex n pie..
      Wanna see how wil dex help pie n want dere hot romance ???

      • stoneheart on August 30, 2016 6:07 pm

        thank u so much

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