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Rival – Raglak TS by anaz

anazBy anazJune 12, 201727 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hii guyz anaz here came with new ts…dedicating to ❤ yashashri naik

Rival ?? (ts)

Part -1

The sceen starts with two lovers playing on the beach in goa…happily….suddenly his mbl starts to rang…but no one is picking his mbl…

Nw sceen.shifted to hospital…one person walking here nd there outside of the operation theatre… tensed nd signald something to his PA… he nod nd moved out…

Again camera focused on the two.lovers who were playing on the sea shore…

Someone called…laksh…ur pappa calling…

Yes that guy is our laksh …he rushed to their..nd pick that call…his face turns to be tensed…

One day later..

Laksh entered inside the MM..nd wondered to see everywhere decorated by beautiful flowers nd lights…

DP (pA take laksh inside the dp.room )

He tried to hugg him…but he jerked…so laksh take blessings from him…

Laksh i want to talk with u …he nod sure pappa…

They starts to talk with each other ( something muted )

Few seconds later…

Laksh family memberes nd guest were gathered infront of mandap….nd waiting for someone hesitately…

Within sec dp take laksh with him….to mandap…nd asked him to sit on mandap…yes laksh mrg is going to be happen…but still he dont kow anything abt bride…

Pandith asked to bring bride near to groom…

One girl wored beautifully desinged dress nd walking near to him…nd sit beside him…..her face covered by pallu…

Rituals started…everything done…except…sindhoor…

He take pinch of sindhoor nd slowly raised up her pallu to fill.sindhoor on her mang… without looking her face clearly

He filled it…somewhere he looked into her eyes….its fuming in anger….it can able to burn anything …that shine nd sharp eyes looked straightly on laksh eyes….

That girl too felt the same feeling while looking back into his eyes…

Both were shared killing look each other…

Finally mrg done…she removed her pallu from her face immediately…in anger…

In first night :

That girl come out from washroom…someone bring spl dress to her to wore in first night…. she nod… nd shut the door

She looked on the dress nd threw it down…nd shouts badly….arghhhhh..wt the hell ???

She closed her eyes…nd remaind wt was happend in the past

That girl pov :

I’m ragini ..ragini gadodia…..shekhar gadodia’s daughter…gadodias industrys owner…perhaps that company was in my name…but i dont have intrest in such things…i wish to lead my life happyly…nd wanna migrate to london…thats my passion…..i hate my pappa….i know he is the only one relation of mine…but he didnt loved me …he needs money only…so i hate him… finally i got my visa …to move to london…all my friends r their…

But everything spoiled by my dad…he puts an agreement with dp….if he got the tender he is ready to arrange mrg with his son laksh maheshwari…

How dare him…who gives rights to him to choose my life decision…

When i argued with him…he hold his chest nd admitted into hospital…my bad luck dp got that tendar…

How badly he blackmailed me yeaterday in hospital…..how dare he ??…if he complained …my visa will be cancel ..he used my situation nd played in my life…but mr.dp listen…i’m ur enemy…i will finish u all one by one…

On the another side laksh entered inside nd looked raginii..

Laksh pov :

I’m laksh…dad is my life..nd all…maya my girl friend…i’m in relationship with maya for last two years…i wished to mry her…but destiny played in my life …i married this ragini..cz of my dad …

Little fb :

When he starts to talk with dp…

Dp hold laksh hand nd plead him to save dp from shekhar …

He said…he puts an deal with shekhar…unfortuanately…i failed to submit the property pappers on the date…cz of that he lossed his many properties…now he is blackmiling me…to arrange ur mrg with his daughter…or else he will file that pappers on court…plz help me laksh…nw MM was in ur hand…

Fb ends…

Both raglak looking each other angrily..???

Ragini pov :

When i got my next visa i will leave india soon…before that i will finish u all…

Laksh pov :

Once i get that deal pappers in my hand i will throw u out from this house

So the sceen freezed with raglak angry face ???

( To be continued )

Guyz leave ur cmnts if i get good cmnts i will post next part tdy

Guyz who is right here ?? Who is telling the truth ?? Nd tell.me is this gd or boring…..

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    27 Comments

    1. Sreevijayan on June 12, 2017 10:47 pm

      Amazing start dear… loved it……

    2. Asw on June 12, 2017 11:04 pm

      Nice keep going

    3. Makku on June 12, 2017 11:36 pm

      Interesting dear, continue it. By the way your VM for Teja’s birthday for the song , “Manasellam mazhaiye” was awesome dear ? ??? and the pictures of her were perfectly matches to the soothing music dear ????. Post next part soon dear.

      Bye dear. Take care.

    4. masthi on June 13, 2017 6:21 am

      very nice. raglak enemy trake was good keep going..

    5. teitokUn1718 on June 13, 2017 8:22 am

      Interesting…. Superb…

    6. SPP on June 13, 2017 8:58 am

      Awesome Superb Fantastic
      Interesting
      Please continue Dear
      Waiting for the next one……….

    7. asra on June 13, 2017 11:14 am

      awesome dear…loved it alot…

    8. avika on June 13, 2017 12:28 pm

      nice

    9. Ammy on June 13, 2017 12:37 pm

      awesome

    10. Bela on June 13, 2017 1:28 pm

      Aur ek aur Tashan shuru????
      Loved this part, waiting for your next update???

    11. raguzz01 on June 13, 2017 2:18 pm

      Nice.. Interesting concept

    12. Vini on June 13, 2017 2:29 pm

      Awesome

    13. Elizebathlovely on June 13, 2017 3:16 pm

      Awesome

    14. Laashya on June 13, 2017 3:51 pm

      Nice and plz continue

    15. Arjuna on June 13, 2017 4:32 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME

    16. amul on June 13, 2017 6:23 pm

      noce

    17. Anju on June 13, 2017 7:52 pm

      Superb episode

    18. Ashly on June 13, 2017 8:17 pm

      Awesome superb

    19. Vennila on June 13, 2017 8:44 pm

      Interesting

    20. Sherin on June 13, 2017 9:31 pm

      Awesome dear

    21. Jiyani on June 13, 2017 9:40 pm

      Wonderful ending and feeling sad that I miss this story

    22. Jiyani on June 13, 2017 9:42 pm

      Sorry for wrong comment and awesome start

    23. Rehna on June 14, 2017 9:52 am

      Interesting dear

    24. Aamy on June 14, 2017 5:20 pm

      Awesome

    25. Monu on June 14, 2017 6:57 pm

      Superb

    26. Ammu on June 14, 2017 9:59 pm

      Interesting

    27. hemalattha on June 17, 2017 1:19 pm

      Interesting

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