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Home»Fan Fiction»Rishton ki Dor (SwaSan) – Episode 1
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Rishton ki Dor (SwaSan) – Episode 1

MaheeraBy MaheeraDecember 11, 201724 Comments4 Mins Read
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Maheswari House
A dinning table is set with the elders of the house sitting around it. Sanskaar comes nd sits.
A woman comes.
Woman- Mom what the hell? Why have bought a new TV set for Uttara’s room when I needed it in my room.
AP- Parineeta beta last month only u gt one
Parineeta- So what? U jst care abt ur daughter. Log sahi kehte hai Saas kabhi maa nahi ban sakti.
Uttar- enough bhabi how dare you talk like that with mom?
Adarsh- Uttara shut up. Choti ho choti raho. What wrong is Parineeta saying? Ma papa you only care abt Uttara Laksh and Sanskaar. We to dnt exist only. As soon as I gain some profit form my company I m going to leave this house and live with Parineeta and my children in a seperate home
DP- Adarsh!
And the fight continued. Suddenly Sanskaar dismantled everything that was kept on the table, got up and left.
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Sanskaar was sitting in his car luking outside. Manchala plays.
Kabhi gardishon ka maara
Kabhi khwahishon se haara
Roothe chaand ka hai chakor
Zara se bhi samjhote se
Yeh parhez rakhta hai kyun
Maane na kabhi koi zor
Duniya jahaan ki bandishon ki
Yeh kahaan parwaah kare
Jab kheenche teri dor
Kheenche teri dor…

Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore

Khamoshiyon ki sooraton mein
Dhoondhe tera shor
Dhoondhe tera shor
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
He sees a poor kid playing with his siblings happily. Tears well up in Sanskaar’s eyes.
Sanskaar’s Monologue
That kid is much wealthier than me. What happiness do I have by owning a BMW, luxurious rooms, suits worth thousands. Jst superficial happiness bt that kid is happy with nothing.
Monolouge ends
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Silver line Orphanage
A crowd of children- Swara didi which song are you going to sing today?
Swara a pleasant luking damsel frowns.
Swara- that’s not fair it has always been a surprise and it’s will always be so? May I start?
Children- yeah!
Hasi ban Gaye plays
“Main jaan ye vaar doon
Har jeet bhi haar doon
Keemat ho koi tujhe beinteha pyaar doon (x2)

Saari hadein maine meri, ab maine tod di
Dekar mujhe pataa awaargi ban gaye

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

Aa o… aa…

Kya khoob Rab ne kiya
Bin maange itna diya
Warna hai milta kahaan
Hum kaafiron ko Khuda (x2)

Hasratein ab meri tumse hai jaa mili
Tum duaa ab meri aakhiri ban gaye

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

O…
aa… o…”
Song ends.
Swara- so how was it my kids?
A woman- waah Swara! Kya kehna tumhara. Your voice actually represents your name.
Swara-(smiles) thank you Mother
Mother- So where are you going now?
Swara- my next stop is the kindergarten.
Mother- are you off from your social work today?
Swara- yeah thought to spend some time with the children of the world?
Mother- omigod kabhi to apni life ke baare mein socho? Ur Love Life
Swara- oh mother pyaar jab hona hoga hojayega. Accha now I have to go b bye
And then she runs away.
Mother- I wonder what’s written in her fate
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Hello guys! Maheera here. Ok so I apologise for being away for a long time but I knw was extremely busy nd right now also m having my exams huh! This thug life! Bt in the long run we’re gonna miss it, aren’t we? ? So do u guys remember me? If yes then pls comment below and let me know my previous ffs name and and do tell me how’s the part and pls pls shower ur love on this one too and hopefully I’ll the post the next part soon❤

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    24 Comments

    1. anu on December 11, 2017 9:24 am

      welcome back again dear..
      nice story continue it update soon

      • Maheera on December 11, 2017 8:13 pm

        Thanks Anu I m feeling awesome to be back?

    2. Fariha on December 11, 2017 11:52 am

      superb

      • Maheera on December 11, 2017 8:14 pm

        Thank you Fariha!☺

    3. Fariha on December 11, 2017 12:02 pm

      awesome

    4. Fariha on December 11, 2017 12:03 pm

      amazing

    5. Sandhiyaswasanian on December 11, 2017 1:57 pm

      Nice

      • Maheera on December 11, 2017 8:15 pm

        Thanks Sandhiyaswasanian? I hope I I typed the correct name?

    6. Parul on December 11, 2017 2:51 pm

      Awesm starting dr

      • Maheera on December 11, 2017 8:16 pm

        Thanks Parul?

    7. vyshu10 on December 11, 2017 4:38 pm

      superb…welcome back

      • Maheera on December 11, 2017 8:17 pm

        Hey Vyushu! How’s you? By the way thanks?

      • vyshu10 on December 12, 2017 8:28 pm

        i m gud…hw r u?

    8. ShonaLaado on December 11, 2017 5:35 pm

      Sorry today but no I don’t know you and may be I commented on your earlier ffs. I am not able to recollect. I read fed and very less comment before but now I am trying to recognise all the awsm writers. Somaaf krna and I am waiting for next.

      • Maheera on December 11, 2017 8:18 pm

        It’s ok ShonaLaado no problem ? thanks!

    9. harneet on December 11, 2017 7:04 pm

      nice ….. sorry i joined a months ago … so dont know you … bit seems a very talented writter is back ….

      • Maheera on December 11, 2017 8:19 pm

        Omigod! Thanks for that overwhelming response?

    10. Uzmasheem on December 11, 2017 7:48 pm

      Superb

      • Maheera on December 11, 2017 8:20 pm

        Thank you Uzmasheem!

    11. kumu on December 11, 2017 10:14 pm

      awesome..r u on wattpad?

      • Maheera on December 12, 2017 7:28 pm

        No Kumi m nt on wattpad?

    12. nabamita on December 12, 2017 12:14 am

      Awesome…Loved it

      • Maheera on December 12, 2017 7:29 pm

        Thanks Nabamita?

    13. Tani on December 17, 2017 9:17 am

      Awesome

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