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Rishto ki Dastan (Part 10)

Hello people…I’m back…I hope u r liking my story…..my previous episode’s comments reminds me of Samjhota 1..I was bashed badly….People I have two requests
1)Criticism is accepted…but criticize the story for improvements and not the writers..
2)U don’t have any right to bash readers…

I guess my ff is the only ff where people bash each other…someone said that I do this couple drama for comments…really? Is that my fault that people r commenting?And bashers themselves r increasing my comments..they r dragging such topic that r creating controversies…none of u know me personally..then y r u saying that u hate me?For this story?If u think that these things will affect me then that’s your misconception….I guess I’m the worst writer here…I was really hurt by the comments..many of u suggested me to take them positively..now u tell me how do I take comments like I hate u Eva and Eva is autistic positively?This won’t make any improvement in my writing but just discourage me…..I did not write for part 2 days because I was hurt…seeing bashers bashing everyone who wer supporting me….

I’M REALLY SORRY….MANY OF U TOOK MY STAND AND WER BASHED INSTEAD….So lets go for this episode…

The epsode starts with…
Swara comes to the office…Sanskar smiles seeing her…Swara goes to her place…
Laksh is in his cabin..he is thinking about Swara…he is founding Swara everywhere..just then Swara comes to hs cabin..
Laksh:Okay Swara..I know u r not here..but I’m seeing u everywhere…..i know u will disappear soon…
Swara:Sir..I’m here…
Laksh:No u r not..
Swara:Sir I am…
Laksh:Okay fine then if u r here then hug me…will u?U won’t cause u r not here…u r just my imagination….
Swara:What r u saying dir?
Laksh:See I’m correct..u r just my imagination..
Swara hugs Laksh…
Laksh is shocked and speechless….Swara breaks the hug…
Swara:Now r u sure that I’m here?
Laksh nods innocently..Swara gives him a file and asks him to sign…Laksh is about to sign when she stops him and asks him to read before signing….
Laksh;U read it right?Thats enough for me…i trust u..
Laksh signs the paper and Swara leaves from there…Just then Sanskar asks Swara to come….Swara comes with him..
Sanskar:Hello everyone…I wanted to share something with u all…I want to introduce u all to my fiancé
Everyone smiles…
Sanskar:So meet my fiancé…Swara Gadodia….
Everyone starts clapping…Laksh comes there and asks everyone or the reason for their happiness…
Sanskar:Lucky..i introduced my fiancé to everyone..and..
Laksh:Bha..where is my would be bhabi?
Sanskar:Areh u know her…..your pa….as in Swara…
Laksh looks at Swara…he stands speechless…..Swara gives a fake smile….
Everyone goes and congratulates them..and then get back to their work…Laksh calls Swara to his room..
Laksh:So Miss Gaadodia..or should I call u bhabi?
Swara;Swara at office and bhabi at home simple..(Sarcastically)
Laksh:U think everything is a joke?
Swara:What joke?
Laksh:Nothing..
Swara is about to leave when Sanskar comes there…
Laksh has tears in his eyes…
Sanskar:U crying?
Laksh:No

Sanskar:tell me the truth…
Laksh looks at Swara..
Sanskar:r u sad cause she is going to be your bhbai?U hate her so much?
Laksh:That’s what I can’t do bhai..i can’t hate her…..cause I love………..
Sanskar:Lucky?
Sanskar:Swara….u even love…
Swara:Sir…
Swara looks down…
Sanskar;oh so u both love each other..
Sanskar has tears in his eyes…still trying to hold back his tears…
Laksh:Bhai..I’m sorry….
Sanskar:U idiot..y r u apologizing?U loved someone…that’s not a mistake….I’ll go and talk to mom dad..u both deserve to be with each other…u both love each other….u will be together..that’s a promise…
Laksh:U r sacrificing your love for me?
Sanskar:Laksh….she is a nice girl…and this was an arrange marriage(he is lying)
Laksh:That means u don’t love her?
Sanskar:No….
Laksh:I’m relieved then..thank u bhai..
Sanskar leaves from there
Laksh hugs Swara…Swara feels irritated but still pretends to be fine…
Swara leaves from there..and meets someone…
The unknown person:Our plan is working…
Swara:ha….thank u so much..u r helping me in this mission…without u nothing would had been possible
The person:I’m happy to see Sanskar in that state..
Swara;Why?As in u don’t have any personal rivalry with her..right?
Person:no no..i’m just helping u..after what he did to Ragini…he deserves it…
Swara:I don’t know why I feel that Sanskar is the wrong person…i mean…i don’t think that he will do something like that….i planned of leaving him on the marriage day and marry his brother..so that he feels the pain of losing love….of being betrayed…….but he….he got to know everything today..i could clearly see that he loved me…he was in pain…but he…he backed up….just because he got to know that we(swalak) love each other…the person who respects the word love so much….can he betray his own love?
The person:No no..u don’t know him….he has 2 faces….he is not innocent..he plays with everyone”s feelings..
Swara;u r Di,Laksh and Sanskar’s college friend….u told me the truth..so I came here to take my revenge…thank u…

Precap:Who is the person?
Hint:I introduced that person in my story….

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