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Home»Fan Fiction»Rishten yeh banae hai pyaar ki rang mein (Chapter-3)
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Rishten yeh banae hai pyaar ki rang mein (Chapter-3)

elinaBy elinaMarch 14, 20183 Comments4 Mins Read
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The chapter starts with abhigeet’s fight

Abhi : tum dekh kar gadi nahi chala sakti

Geethu : Actually we were in a hurry and we didin’t notice Sorry

Abhi : Sorry yeh acha hai phele mere gadi ko karab kar diya and now Sorry

Geethu : Aae; it’s just a small crash

Abhi : yeah ! yahi agar mein apke car par takratha toh aap yaha hungama machadeeti

INSIDE THE MALL

Maya and Arjun paid their bill they were about to go

Maya : Vaisae it was nice meeting you Mr..?

Arjun : Arjun Mehrotra. Aap se bhi milakar acha laga…

Maya : Maya singh rathore

They shake their hands and went apart

CAR PARKING

Abhi and geethu were still fighting .Twinkle was scared and she was just behind geethu holding her hand.Just then maya enters

Maya : abhi yeh sab ho kya raha hai

Abhi : you see yourself . isne hamare car ke sath kya kiya

geethu : (angrly) oyye ; janbochkar todi kiya it was an accident

Maya(smiled) :aab tum log yeh sab chodo . hamae ghar bhi toh jana hai na

Geethu : dekhiye Ms. it happehed accidently and i’m really sorry for it

Maya : it’s ok.Vaisae be rath hone ko hai

Twinkle and geethu was happy and felt reveld Maya’s words on the other hand Abhimanyu gave maya a “you’re impossible wala look”

On the way to rathore mansion

Abhi : tumhe unhe aisae janae nahi dena chahiye tha

Maya : toh what should have i done

Abhi : You should have.

Maya : Rehanae dho abhi …agar tumhare bas mein hota. You should have killed her because she hit on your favorite car

Abhi : ha.. i should have

They look at eachother making a serious face and brust into laughter

On the way to goenka mansion

Twinkle : Di what do you think woh unki wife hogi ya behan

Geethu : kyon aur kiski

Twinkle : Car parking

Geethu : woh ma’am jo bhi thae. She was nice par tht ladkaa I’m telling you…..Aarea ek car hi toh toda scrach hua he was angry like.. meinae uska car mein buldoosar chada liya..Such an attitude .I wish mein ab zingdgi mein kabhi uski chehra na dekhna padae mujhe

Twinkle : Di all that’s cool par mom ko math bathao

Geethu : undono ko patha chalega ko phur kabhi drive karne nahi doogi

Twinkle : Vaisae hum dono khafi achi company hai

Geethu and twinkle reach Goenka mansion

Twinkle : Mom …Dad abhi tak nahi aya

sakshi : his flight got delayed woh kaal morning hi ayega

Geethu : Tik hai toh phir mein chalti hoon

Sakshi : itni raat ko kahi janae ki zarrorat nahi hai .I have spoke to Anika ji tun aaj yahi par rukho

They dine to do dinner and talks, laughs

RATHORE MANSION

Maya and abhi have just entered rathore mansion and Maya was about to ring the door bell.Just then Naira opens the door

Naira : kya socha di shaddhi kar rahi ho??

Maya: mein

Lucky : Naira unhe andar toh aanae dijiyeh

Yuvraj : Maya di , sab apko bula rahe hai…

Maya give a not so pleasent smile and went towards the elder

yuvi : apko kya lagta hai …

Abhi : huh???

lukcy : it wll be a Yes or No

Abhi : I don’t know

lucky : That means apne di se bath nahi ki

Yuvi : aap bade buissiness ko handle karthae hai itnu chotti bath patha nahi kar payi

Naira : very bad bhaiyya

Lucky : yeh tu chup kar

In Maya’s room

payal : Maya bachi kya socha hai tum

Falguni : look maya koi sabardhasti nahi hai

Maya : Mom i don’t know..Dad I’m just confussed

Vikram : I can understand that..

Maya : Mom apko jo mere liye sahi lagta hai ap woh kijiyae

Viraj : Tu kya hamare har decission par kush hogi

Maya : Ha because aap sab ki har decission mein hum sab ka bhala hi hai na

Falguni : toh iska matlab ladkha dekhna shuru kar de jayae

Maya just give them a smile and went out .She standed infront of the statue of Lord ganesh..and prayed

They all had dinner and went to there respctive room .Yuvi was in lucky’s room

Lucky : Di itne jaldi shaddhi ke liye maan gayi

yuvi : D ne na safe play kiya hai

Lucky : matlab

Yuvi : mujhe laga tha ki woh ek achae ladkhae ko apne liye choose ki hogi but no

Lucky : ha… all are not like you

Yuvi : ha…wait what

They both start having a brother v/s brother fight….

precap : A accident..

 

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    3 Comments

    1. Jasminerahul on March 14, 2018 2:12 pm

      i am so happy that you posted the new part soon.abhi geetanjali fight was so funny.good that Maya intervened and ended it.I have seen abhi Geeta scene only in their show’s promos.but liked them.I am loving them more because of this ff.waiting for their next meeting.though short liked arya introducing each other.waiting for their long scenes. Maya abhi scene was so cute.loving their bonding also twinkle Geeta bond.waiting for raglak twiraj scenes too.so Maya agreed to marry.wonder if her parents will choose arjun or someone else.
      please try to add pics too.if you have doubts about adding pics please message me

      • elina on March 14, 2018 2:26 pm

        yes i have doubts dear …I just want to make it like a vishual treat so I wanted to uploade pictures of them ; the situations.. etc

        But the sad part is i don’t really know how to do these hope you’ll help me…

      • Jasminerahul on March 14, 2018 2:41 pm

        take text.put the ff update.then take google 4 pics.choose the pics u want to put in the scene.u dont need to save the pics in ur pc.just select the pic,right click the mouse.click copy image address.select the area in the update where u want to add pic.In the text where we put the article u can find IMG.click it.a box appears.there u can paste the image address and press ok.no need of writing any description.click ok again.the link will appear where u selected in the update.now click visuals n see if the pic has appeared or not,now itself u check

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