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RiKara OS: When I Fell In love?? – Teaser

PiyaliBy 31 Comments2 Mins Read

Teaser:

” I am Guari Kumari Sharma…understand , you better do because I am not at all those Patidev type things , you married me , don’t think you got me because Guari Kumari Sharma doesn’t love you and the one whom she doesn’t love , she doesn’t considers that person anything…” Guari said angrily pointing the tip of her finger towards Omkara while he just smiled a bit.

” Toh Pyaar Karwa Denge…” Omkara said with a smile as he kept a hand on her shoulder and then left to sleep on couth , Guari kept looking at him with her mouth wide open.

She stamped her foot hard on floor and went to sleep on the bed.

” Mohobbat Chahe Ho Na…Parvah Toh Humari Dosti Se Shuru Hui This Guari…” Omkara whispered with a smile , Guari got up , looked at him , passed him a glare and then went to bed again.

” Aur Woh Parvah Pyaar Mein Bhi Jaldi Hi Badlegi…” Omkara this time said to himself which Guari didn’t hear as she was fast asleep.

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” Omkara…I want to talk to you…” Guari said as Omkara was moving in the corridor of Oberoi Mansion handling some decoration work and wasn’t listening to her.

” Omkara , I want to talk to you…” Guari said again angrily , to get no reply again.

” Omkara…” Guari shouted while all looked at her , Annika her sister now Jethani walked to her , ” What happened…?” She asked confused.

” Pyaar…” Guari said angrily to herself gritting her teeth while she left the place , Omkara turned and smiled seeing her go.

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A New Shade of Love , her anger , attitude turned into Love…How ? Read to know…
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Just a small try to write on RiKara with a different shade of Omkara…

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31 Comments

    • Piyali on

      Hey , thanks a lot dear , well its just a teaser na………don’t worry OS will be a long one……thanks a lot again…….Love you……be happy……

  4. Kavya347 on

    Honestly speaking, i am not at all a fan of Rikara nor of DBO…i don’t like them for ruining, messing up and disappearing Ishkara…the most beautiful and magical pair..
    But your promo is really interesting. I would have loved if they had showed Gauri and Omkara’s character in the same way u did. It kind of fits for Omkara’s love story. It’s unique and cute too. So Omkara is gonna make his girl fall in love with him…interesting☺…looking forward to ur ff dear. Plz continue..

    • Piyali on

      Hey , even I am a huge IshKarian but to my sadness , they are no more in the show….IshKara seriously did a magic on me but after Ishana’s diappearance Ii was like , Just a give a love story to Om , anybody and I think , I have fallen for RiKara too…….I think you should watch them , they seriously are amazing , though not like IshKara but taking another place in my heart………happy you liked the Teaser………..yup , he is gonna make her fall for him , fell its not an ff , just a One Shot…will post it soon……thanks a lot ……..Love you…….be happy……

  5. mia12 on

    “”Jab mai pyar karungi na to aise karungi ki
    sari hadein par hogi”” omg I love this dialogue yarr,,??
    U knw even I to also thinking the same..☺Now my small intro,,? M a big TWINJ fan,,?? Crazy and mad about them,,?? 1st time cmntng N reading ur article,,☺☺
    And u knw i just don like Ishaqbaaz show even ishkara pair also,,?? but now I liked it and watch also bcoz of GAURI n now the show is getting beautiful and ab toh i liked RIKARA pair very much,,??.. Ur just Awesome girl,,?? and liked ur RIKARA teaser very much,,?? Plz cont it and write like more…I want to read it…??
    .
    With lots of love..❤❤
    Muaah..??

    • Piyali on

      Haha , then we resemble , because Mine too is like that , ” Jab Mein Pyaar Karoongi toh Saari Hadein Paar Hongi” , TwiNj , fan , Ii haven’t watched Tashan e ishq much but loving Jasmine in Dil Se Dil Tak and Sidharth…….He doesn’t really need my approval for anything(I loved him in Jhalak)…..he is amazing……even I am in love with RiKara because I am a mad Omkarian…….he is amazing……….thanks a lot for such a sweet comment……….will try to post the OS soon….thanks a lot lot lot again……hope to stay in touch…….Love you…….be happy…….

    • Piyali on

      Thanks a lot dear , will continue for sure……….thanks a lot again…….Love you…….be happy……

    • Piyali on

      thanks a lot dear , for sure , will continue…….thanks a lot again……..Love you……be happy…..

  10. Renimarenju on

    Awesome teaser…..dear…..eagerly waiting to know how will be the story…….post next one soon….

    • Piyali on

      thanks a lot dear , actually its a One Shot……will post it soon….thanks a lot again…….Love you…..be happy……..

    • Piyali on

      thanks a lot dear….its just a teaser and the story is a one shot……..Love you…….be happy……

    • Piyali on

      thanks alot dear……..actually its just an OS……..thanks a lot again……..Love you……be happy…..

    • Piyali on

      Hello dear , its not an ff but an OS and this one’s just a teaser…….will try to post the os soon…..thanks a lot……Love you…….be happy…..

  15. deepika on

    Hi dear ur untro is amazing
    But this is my request pls if u write any Hindi word n add English meaning also
    U know it’s so difficult to understand Cox I don’t knows Hindi
    I hope u understand

    • Piyali on

      Thank s a lot dear….well really sorry , actually I always felt that the brackets make the post look weird so didn’t include English subtitles but I have included them in the main OS…….do check , if you still have doubts regarding words then please ask me…………really sorry again……..Love you…..be happy;………