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Home»Fan Fiction»Riansh Os: Losing her (completed)
Fan Fiction Ishq Mein Marjawan 2

Riansh Os: Losing her (completed)

chahd2017By chahd2017January 16, 2021Updated:January 16, 202130 Comments68 Mins Read
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V(trying to control his anger): Dadi, I don’t believe it !! You hid this big truth from me, why???? Despite everything you witnessed, You didn’t tell me that she was safe. And the body?

D(angrily): Yes, I didn’t because I witnessed 2 years back what my grandson is able to do !! (All of them transferred their gaze to her) when you were confessing, I was there too. Poor her, she was trying to treat your sister after informing me about Anoop. But ungrateful you, betrayed her and broke her that she wanted to die. You are unworthy of this small happy family (pointing toward the babies)

Fb starts

R(to someone): I will go now to bring it, Today we’ll execute our plan, Then Vansh’s reaction will be priceless.

the other person nodded at her agreeing. It was dadi.

D: I am sure it will be the biggest surprise for him except the other one (winking at her)

R(blushed): dadi!

D(grinned): Thank god I heard your conversation with the doctor and got to know or else, You were intending to keep it secret till his birthday. Not fair, even you didn’t tell your dadi.

R: I had a wish, to see always the happiness shine in his eyes, I know he always masks his feelings (excited) that’s why I will keep a letter along with my gift.I want to observe his facials when he read it. Oh my god! Dadi, My heart will come out because of my over-excitement.

D(hugging her): May God bless you and keep you always smiling.

R: aweee my sweet dadi, I love you so much.

Fb ends

D: then I saved her when she fell but her condition was so bad, Almost dead for so many months. God’s will was that the kids were safe but she was in Coma. Because of the pain, Now, Amaya and Aarush are having seizures often. Do you still want to claim anything? (he bowed his head, and she faced Riddhima) Go beta, Don’t worry this incident won’t happen again.

V(to Riddhima): Let me hold them for once, please.

R(straightly looking in his eyes): No, mei Nahi chahti ki Tumhara saya mere bachon par pade, wo bhi galti se, unhe pakadna to dur ki baat hai.Tum mere bacho ke paas aane ki sochna bhi mat (He was taken aback by her words ad she continued) Meii ab wo ridhima Nahi Hun Jo tumhare saamne aane se pehle Kai Baar sochti thi,dur raho mere bachon se, Apne bhale ke liye.

Expressing her hatred toward him, She held Amaya while Anoop opened his arms for Aarush.

Aar(to Anoop): Papa

Vansh fumed at the word which should be reserved for him, it’s given to another man who is just a stranger. He glanced at his children lovingly, They looked like him only Amaya’s eyes were like her mother. But the boy was definitely the second version of him as he was holding Amaya’s hand when they were busy arguing.

V(to himself): I don’t care about anything else than Riddhima and My kids, I want them back and I’ll face anything even her hatred. Let me see How will this Anoop will marry her!

Riddhima left the mansion with her kids and Anoop, He knows what she was being through, so he didn’t want to stress her more.

In the car

Riddhima put the kids in the backseat as they were asleep, and then sat near them, She caught Anoop looking at her through the mirror.

R(holding her head): Just talk, Yaar, I know that you want to say something, we know each other for years now.

Ano(apologized): I am sorry, I suddenly mentioned the marriage topic without even discussing it with you before.

R(understanding): It’s okay, I know what were your intentions, Anoop, I won’t misunderstand you. Chill !! I am just frustrated because of the drama that occurred.

Ano(honestly): No, You don’t get it, I wanted to propose you in a proper way, because I really want you to be a part of my life, Not just you, And the kids too, I can’t live without them. Don’t answer me now, Take your time.

R(perplexed): WHat do you mean by proposal? Do you want us to get married for real?

Ano: Look, I can understand how hard it is for you to love someone as I knew the reason behind it. However, I can’t even think of staying away from you.

R(confused): why? I mean a man like you why would you start with me?

Ano(holding her hand): Because I LOVE YOU, Riddhima ! for a long time, since I saw you in the orphanage I loved you. and My love grew stronger with every day I spent with you and Amaya aur Aarush. It’s okay if you don’t reciprocate my feelings, I need just your mere presence near me.As I said before, take the time you need before deciding. I will be waiting.

R(smiled): Thank you for understanding. 

VR MANSION

Vansh decided to start with his dadi, Their relationship wasn’t good for years and now it’s time to mend it. He knocks on her door then entered after getting permission.

V: dadi

D: Vansh, I won’t help you if this is what you are expecting from me.

V(with pain): why dadi? We became strangers, I made the worse mistake, and I was not worthy to be called a human being still I loved Riddhima, dadi, and this part hurt me so much when Kabir told me that in order to help him in traping me she married me. My heart was shattered into pieces. Do you think I was happy while impacting pain on her? I felt as if daggers were deeply stabbed in my heart. All pieces of evidence were against her, but I know I was so foolish to believe it. Especially that she was ready to die for me. (putting his head in dadi’s lap) for the first time, after these years, I feel that I am really breathing. iI don’t want to lose her again, I will die, dadi.

Dadi felt bad for him and put her hand on his head caressing his hair.

D: It’s so hard, no almost impossible for her to forgive you. She hates you now !!

V: You said almost and it means I have the smallest chance to gain her back, & I will take it, Your grandson will be back, but not the one of whom you felt ashamed, Still I have another mission to do.

D: If you are talking about Kabir, then, don’t worry, He will be finished soon.

V: Kabir’s end should be done by me, and just me. with whom he has enmity?

D: They want revenge for Riddhima, Both of them love her so much and will do anything for her sake.

V(confident): One is Angrey for sure, but the other, who is he?? (jealous) don’t tell me that he is that man?? Does he really want to marry Riddhima? Dadi, She is my wife. She can’t remarry., it’s illegal !!

D: In this matter, I will support Riddhima’s decision, she is the only one who suffered so much. Her state has deteriorated, and the kids were affected by it.

V(remembering): Dadi, what’s wrong with my kids?

D: They suffer asthma attacks due to the critical state in which Riddhima was found, She was so weak and in a coma state for many months, Vansh, till I & Anoop lost hope that she will ever wake up but destiny has other plans, She woke up and gave birth to two adorable kids.

V(in tears): Yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai, agrm maine ussey ye dard ni diya hota toh usey itni takleed ni hoti, meri wakah se usey aur mere baccho ko kitna kuch sehna pda, But dadi, please help me.

Riddhima’s house

Riddhima was thinking deeply while looking at her children, She was at peace when he didn”t know about them, but now she is stressed, what he will do next? She won”t give them to him. And she has to make sure of it.

R(to herself): If not for me, then I will do it for my kids, They love him so much, and he loves them more, I guess I will accept Anoop’s proposal.

She heard knocks on the door and went to see who was there, she eyed him angrily.

R(in rage): what are you doing here? You don’t know that you are not allowed to come near us?

V(ogling): I know, but sweetheart, I couldn’t hold myself back, I miss you so much, I want to just stare at you every day to make sure that you are fine.

R(angrily): Don’t talk about nonsense of missing me and all because it disgusts me so much to hear that word. The betrayal is the only thing people can give you. kill yourself or sacrifice it, they will betray you anyway. The moment I understood this fact, my life became easier, I don’t expect anything from anyone, because I am very much able to live without it.And one more breaking news, I will invite you to my wedding because I will get married soon.

He held her arm and pulled her to him while they stared at each other in a challenging manner, they were affected by the closeness between them, but Riddhima wouldn’t showed it ever.

V(with intensity): You are only mine, Riddhima, I am jerk and ass***, I deserve the worse punishment, shoot me if you want, but don’t say you’ll be another man’s wife, because it won’t happen, sweetheart as long as I am alive, I love you & Sorry won’t express how I feel for my wrongdoings;

She pushed him away from her and snapped at him.

R: Yes, exactly, Sorry won’t do anything now, Because it’s too late, I don’t feel anything toward you except hatred .

She heard the babies chocking and ran to the room with Vansh behind her, They found Amaya struggling to breath, and panicked.


She heard the babies chocking and ran to the room with Vansh behind her, They found Amaya struggling to breathe, and panicked.

R(scared): Oh my god !!

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      Oooooo Riansh, u are killing me, episode was great, and amazing 💙🧡💜💚❤️

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