Riansh ( A ghost story) # epi 6 #limited edition#by aishaD

 

Hello everyone giving only one update today

I wrote this epi in night at 12 to thoda upr niche ho jaye toΒ  mind na kre or comments kre.

Epi starts here..

Scene 1

Kabir’s room

He is lying on bed shivering.. Badly

His POV

Its been whole freaking day i m locked in my room

No no no i can’t go out what if she will come there too

She will kill me and what if vansh would get to know abt my deeds

I am trapped from both the sides…

Pov ends

Suddenly there is a knock on the door

Kabir started shouting

Kabir(shouting) – No.. Don’t kill me ragini go…

Plz don’t come near me..

Suddenly the sound of knock started increasing

Kabir, (shivering) – Who’s these

———-

It’s me kabir ..

A male voice is heard

Kabir (sighs) – Vansh..

He opens the door immediately hugging vansh

Kabir (happy) – Bhai thnq u came
I am so scared

Ragini will kill me

He is shivering badly

Vansh makes him calm down

Vansh (keeping his hand on kabir’s shoulder) – Relex kabir..

Calm down

She wont kill u

She was our frnd why will she kill us..

We didn do anything wrong with her right…

Kabir’s face become pale..

Kabir (shivering) – She threatened me.

She will kill me…

Vansh Makes him calm down..

Suddenly the sound of anklet is heard

Chnn…chhhanana…chhhnnn.chhhananana..

Kabir (shouting) – Wo agyi… Ragini agyi..

Vansh wo maar degi mujhe..save me plz

Vansh – relex kabir..we will see lets go.

Kabir refused several times but vansh drag kabir with him..forcefully stating the fact that he is also scared…(ghnta πŸ˜‚)

The sound of anklet is heard continuously…

Chhhnnn…chhhannana..chhnnn…

Kava is walking in corridor with baby steps

Kabir is shivering badly and drenched in sweat..while vansh is smirking seeing him like this..

The whole corridor is dark.. making the scenario more worse…

Kava reached the hall…

A female whisper is heard

K…..a……b…i…r….

K…..a…..b…..i….r….

Kabir shivers listening this

He clutches vansh’s kurta like a baby

Kabir (shivering) – Aagyi..wo….ragini..agyi maar degi mujhe.. Bro save me..

Vansh assures him..

And then she comes

Descending from stairs like a queen


The same style as ragini..

The same way of walking …

Kava moves aside seeing her…

Riddhima comes in center And shakes his ankle little making sound of her ghunghroo

Chnnn chhannana..chnnn..chahanna…

Mere dholna…sun..

Mere pyar ki dhun…

Mere dholna…sun..

She started dancing gracefully the same way ragini used to do..

She comes near vansh and encircle her arms around him dancing

Saathi re Saathi re mar ke bhi tujhko…

chaahega dil…

Tujhe hi bechainiyo mein..

paayega dil...

She goes near kabir and touches him seductively

Tere dhadkanon ki sargoshi
Meri dhadkano mein bajti hai
Meri jaagti Nigaahon mein,
Khwaahish Teri hi sajti hai
Mere khayalon mein harpal,
Tere khayal shaamil hain
Lamhe judaiyon wale,
mushkil bade hi mushkil hain
O piya…………………

She started taking rounds in dancing

And fall down in center..

She lift her head slightly

Riddhima (smiling wickedly) – kabir…

Kabir (stammering) – Stay away from me..

Pss mt ana…

Vansh hides behind pillar..to enjoy thr drama…(bole to popcorn la du vanshuπŸ˜‚)

Suddenly all the lights of mansion started Turning off and on frequently

Kabir started running to the main door and bang it to open but in vain

He turns abruptly and gasps

Kabir (gasp) – Ri…rim.riddhima

She is standing very close to him with blood shot eyes..

I will write riddhima instead of ragini…

RiddhimaΒ  (shouts) – Ragini… Ragini hu me

Riddhima nhi

She holds kabir’s neck

Riddhima (intimidating)- Kon hu me….

Kabir (shivering) – Ra….ra… Ragini…

She leaves him..

Riddhima (smirking) – Good boy kabir darling..

Kabir runs again but riddhimaΒ  push him.. Hard and He fell on the floor

SheΒ  keeps his one leg on his chest and bend on his level

RiddhimaΒ  (shouts) – U have to pay for ur deeds darling…

See u loved me so much na..

I came back for u..

Won’t u give me pleasure now..πŸ˜‰

She again chokes his neck scaring the shit out of him

Kabir gets up..and runs few steps

Riddhima (shouts) – Kabirrr!!!😬

She moves her hand upward in air
And kabir started flying in air according to her hand’s direction (remember the chip…)

Kabir(pleading)- why..why are u doing this plz leave me

Riddhima (angry) – U bastard…

U have this much audacity till now that u r asking me why i m doing this…

She moves him more in air..to scare him

Kabir (crying) – Dont kill me ragini plz i am sorry what i did with u..

Plz mujhe mt maaro jaane do..

Maaf krdo mujhe plz

She lowers her hand and let him fall on floor with thudd!!! Beneath the chandelier

Meanwhile vansh is watching the whole scenario and fuming in anger

Fb starts

After discussing the plan

Vansh(angry)- i want to kill that kabir..

Riddhima- We can’t take law in our hands vansh..

Vansh(angry)- No riddhima he deserves this.

Riddhima- Fine i will ask the servant to cut the rope of chandelier

Rest will be his fate..

Vansh hugs riddhima

Fb ends

Kabir fall down with thudddd!!!

Riddhima (smiling)- u want me to leave u..

Fine i will let u go i won’t kill u..

Kabir (happy) – thnq ragini…thnq so much…

Riddhima -Tch.tch..poor kabir..

Even oxygen is not free how can i let u go..

I have a contidion

Do as i say n i will let u go

Kabir (happy) -i will do what you say

Riddhima (angry)-Confess all ur crimes and ask for apology from me..

I will.let u go then

Kabir (shocked)- I …. Can’t do this..

Mene kuch glt ni kia..

I didn’t do any crime…

Riddhima(smiling)- I knew it u won’t do so easily

It’s ok i have special treatment for u..

She snaps her finger once and fire ignited around kabir in circle

Kabir gasp seeing this

Riddhima(smiling)- Now what u are going to do..

Wanna die or wanna confess

Kabir (pleading) – I wil…will confess

He joins his hand bowing down in front of ragini.. Crying

I am sorry ragini…

I was always jealous of vansh

He had name fame and everything what i wanted

Then i saw u..and i wanted u with me.

But u loved vansh…

So i molested u to make u mine and to make vansh suffer i killed u ruthlessly

And faked the phone call in front of u..that vansh ordered me to kill u..

He was not at fault i did everything..

Now plz let me go…i confessed everything

Riddhima(with tears)- Just for your desires u killed me ruthlessly.

U molested me..

People like u don’t deserve to be alive…

She points a finger towards the chandelier

Riddhima (pointing finger upwards) – Look there kabir

Kabir (scared)- What is there.. kya hai waha

Riddhima (dangerously) – Tumhari maut…!!!😬

Kabir looks upward and shouts on top of his voice

Kabir (shouts) – Aaaaaaaaaaaashhhhhhhhhhhhh!!

The chandelier fall on him.. taking his soul with it..

Riddhima cries seeing this…

Vansh comes from behind the pillar with tears…

Riddhima (happy tears) – Ham jit gye vansh..hm jit gye…

Your ginni got justice…

She will be so happy na

Vansh is crying seeing kabir’s body after all he was his frnd best frnd

Vansh (with tears)- Look kabir what ur deeds served u..

U are the reason of ur own doom

My ginni will be at peace now..

He hugs riddhima and they both cry!!

Vansh (breaking the hug)- U got tired sweetheart go and change.i will ask servants to remove this bastard’s body from here

Go and freshn up..

Riddhima smiles and leaves

Scene 2

Vansh reaches to his room And open the door

He is going to switch on the light but a servant comes to him

Vansh – What happened

Servant – ****************

(Conversation muted)

He leaves

Vansh (gasped) – Whattttt!!!!!!!

Done for today

Roz roz rehem ni krungiπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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76 Comments
    1. RiansHLoveR

      Sab thik thak h but last meπŸ₯΄ginni to ayegi e ayegiπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚om shanti om me jese hua tha🀣🀣post soon…

    2. Aisha08

      Tysm dear
      Krapaya theory na banyeπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚wait kre…

    3. Jaskiranarora0605

      Lol, even I got the same feeling πŸ˜‚πŸ€£

  1. ❀

  2. Jaskiranarora0605

    Fantastic episode…finally Kabir died because of his deeds

    1. Aisha08

      Tysm dear
      He had to die…

  3. Aishwarya Wanjari

    Ab to doubt aa raha hai ki sch me atma ghuss gayi riddhu me

    1. Aisha08

      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚wait kro….pta chlega…

  4. Prapti0809

    Firse suspense pe chod diya Aisha di aapne. Abhi meroko aatma ke existence pe 50-50 doubt hai

    1. Aisha08

      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚doubt hi rkho…accha rhega…

  5. N Ayesha

    Awesome di

  6. 1234Aayu

    Di sach mein toh aatma nahi aygayi…You wrote it at night salute to your braveryπŸ˜‚
    Amazing episode..
    post soon…
    suspense,kahan se lati h app itna suspense..some shop or what give me the address I will also buy some from my storiesπŸ€—

    1. Aisha08

      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ honestly meru bhi pht ri thi thodiπŸ˜‚
      Ek adress dungi le ana waha se

  7. Awesome

    1. Aisha08

      Tysm dear…

  8. Mennahussein55

    So lovely episode

  9. Tanya K

    Aree bhaisahab suspense dediyo didi ne to🀣🀣. Amazing episode ❀.
    Kabir ke saath acha hua.🀣πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί

    1. Aisha08

      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚tysm dear…

  10. Priyanshi_13

    Amazing 😍 loved it

    1. Aisha08

      Thnq dear…

  11. Phir ithna suspense 🀯. Post soon

    1. Aisha08

      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ kya kre..sehna pdta h…

  12. Cutuuu

    Awesome ❀ Kuch rehem kro hum garibo pe roz suspense pr chodna shi baat nhi hai 😯😯

    1. Aisha08

      πŸ˜€πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚adat se majbur…

  13. Amazing episode di but u end it with suspence.

    1. Aisha08

      Tysm dear
      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚My fav work😎

  14. Nice episode πŸ’•

    1. Aisha08

      Thnq dear….

  15. ❀️

    1. Aisha08

      😍😍….

  16. Attractiveuser

    Suspense mein marjawanπŸ€§πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚.
    Awesome episode ❀️❀️

    1. Aisha08

      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚thnq dear

  17. Annoyinguser

    Kya pta sach me aa gyi ho πŸ˜‚ apka koi bharosa nhi kya kar do. Awesome Episode. Justice served🀧.

    1. Aisha08

      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚tysm dear…

  18. Priyanka Thakur

    Awesome episode Aishu mai boli thii naa ki Ragini ka aatma Riddhima mein jaurur ayeygaa last mein vahee Hua again today you ended the episode with suspense eagerly waiting for next update

    1. Aisha08

      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚thnq dear…😘😘😘

  19. AarushiSoni

    This Kabir deserves this only huh πŸ˜€πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘. amazing!!! Ab kya huaπŸ™‚

    1. Aisha08

      Tysm😘😘😘
      Wait for next

  20. Akansha roy

    Yaar sab toh thik tha last meh kiu sab pani pani kardi ab toh sachme lakta hai ki ridhima hi ragini ha by the way episode was not less than an horror movie so ya it was awesome . Lots of love and kisses β€β€β€πŸ’πŸ’πŸŽπŸŽπŸŽŠπŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽˆπŸŽˆ

    1. Aisha08

      Awww…thnq so much dear😘😘😘😘

  21. Real@kriti

    itna suspense di , itna suspense , KABHI me is suspense main marjawan…

    1. Aisha08

      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚are are 2 epi bche h abhi

  22. Prabhleen 😊

    Amazing episode di 😍. Loved it 😘. What happened with Kabir – he deserved that. Last mein kahi sachme to ragini ki aatma to nahi agayi πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚. Again suspense. Post soonπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί

    1. Aisha08

      Thnq dear..wait for next

  23. Awesome episode dear πŸ’“πŸ’“

    1. Aisha08

      Tysm dear….

  24. Niyati12

    Awesome di……….please post soon di

    1. Aisha08

      Thnq dear i wil

  25. Scarlet Flower

    Amazing di
    Mujhe lagta hai apne aur Amyra di ne kasam khayi hai ki har baar episode suspence pe hi khatam karna hai

    1. Aisha08

      Tysm
      πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚Adat se majbur

  26. ❀️

    1. Aisha08

      😍😍…..

  27. Parita

    Awesome episode!! Kabir deserved it totally!!
    Now what happens…sach mein ab Riddhu possess ho gayi hai kya??πŸ˜‚πŸ€”Post soon pls

    1. Aisha08

      Tysm dear..
      Lets wait for next😍

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