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Home»Fan Fiction»Riansh ( A ghost story) # epi 6 #limited edition#by aishaD
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Riansh ( A ghost story) # epi 6 #limited edition#by aishaD

Aisha08By Aisha08June 19, 202176 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello everyone giving only one update today

I wrote this epi in night at 12 to thoda upr niche ho jaye toΒ  mind na kre or comments kre.

Epi starts here..

Scene 1

Kabir’s room

He is lying on bed shivering.. Badly

His POV

Its been whole freaking day i m locked in my room

No no no i can’t go out what if she will come there too

She will kill me and what if vansh would get to know abt my deeds

I am trapped from both the sides…

Pov ends

Suddenly there is a knock on the door

Kabir started shouting

Kabir(shouting) – No.. Don’t kill me ragini go…

Plz don’t come near me..

Suddenly the sound of knock started increasing

Kabir, (shivering) – Who’s these

———-

It’s me kabir ..

A male voice is heard

Kabir (sighs) – Vansh..

He opens the door immediately hugging vansh

Kabir (happy) – Bhai thnq u came
I am so scared

Ragini will kill me

He is shivering badly

Vansh makes him calm down

Vansh (keeping his hand on kabir’s shoulder) – Relex kabir..

Calm down

She wont kill u

She was our frnd why will she kill us..

We didn do anything wrong with her right…

Kabir’s face become pale..

Kabir (shivering) – She threatened me.

She will kill me…

Vansh Makes him calm down..

Suddenly the sound of anklet is heard

Chnn…chhhanana…chhhnnn.chhhananana..

Kabir (shouting) – Wo agyi… Ragini agyi..

Vansh wo maar degi mujhe..save me plz

Vansh – relex kabir..we will see lets go.

Kabir refused several times but vansh drag kabir with him..forcefully stating the fact that he is also scared…(ghnta πŸ˜‚)

The sound of anklet is heard continuously…

Chhhnnn…chhhannana..chhnnn…

Kava is walking in corridor with baby steps

Kabir is shivering badly and drenched in sweat..while vansh is smirking seeing him like this..

The whole corridor is dark.. making the scenario more worse…

Kava reached the hall…

A female whisper is heard

K…..a……b…i…r….

K…..a…..b…..i….r….

Kabir shivers listening this

He clutches vansh’s kurta like a baby

Kabir (shivering) – Aagyi..wo….ragini..agyi maar degi mujhe.. Bro save me..

Vansh assures him..

And then she comes

Descending from stairs like a queen


The same style as ragini..

The same way of walking …

Kava moves aside seeing her…

Riddhima comes in center And shakes his ankle little making sound of her ghunghroo

Chnnn chhannana..chnnn..chahanna…

Mere dholna…sun..

Mere pyar ki dhun…

Mere dholna…sun..

She started dancing gracefully the same way ragini used to do..

She comes near vansh and encircle her arms around him dancing

Saathi re Saathi re mar ke bhi tujhko…

chaahega dil…

Tujhe hi bechainiyo mein..

paayega dil...

She goes near kabir and touches him seductively

Tere dhadkanon ki sargoshi
Meri dhadkano mein bajti hai
Meri jaagti Nigaahon mein,
Khwaahish Teri hi sajti hai
Mere khayalon mein harpal,
Tere khayal shaamil hain
Lamhe judaiyon wale,
mushkil bade hi mushkil hain
O piya…………………

She started taking rounds in dancing

And fall down in center..

She lift her head slightly

Riddhima (smiling wickedly) – kabir…

Kabir (stammering) – Stay away from me..

Pss mt ana…

Vansh hides behind pillar..to enjoy thr drama…(bole to popcorn la du vanshuπŸ˜‚)

Suddenly all the lights of mansion started Turning off and on frequently

Kabir started running to the main door and bang it to open but in vain

He turns abruptly and gasps

Kabir (gasp) – Ri…rim.riddhima

She is standing very close to him with blood shot eyes..

I will write riddhima instead of ragini…

RiddhimaΒ  (shouts) – Ragini… Ragini hu me

Riddhima nhi

She holds kabir’s neck

Riddhima (intimidating)- Kon hu me….

Kabir (shivering) – Ra….ra… Ragini…

She leaves him..

Riddhima (smirking) – Good boy kabir darling..

Kabir runs again but riddhimaΒ  push him.. Hard and He fell on the floor

SheΒ  keeps his one leg on his chest and bend on his level

RiddhimaΒ  (shouts) – U have to pay for ur deeds darling…

See u loved me so much na..

I came back for u..

Won’t u give me pleasure now..πŸ˜‰

She again chokes his neck scaring the shit out of him

Kabir gets up..and runs few steps

Riddhima (shouts) – Kabirrr!!!😬

She moves her hand upward in air
And kabir started flying in air according to her hand’s direction (remember the chip…)

Kabir(pleading)- why..why are u doing this plz leave me

Riddhima (angry) – U bastard…

U have this much audacity till now that u r asking me why i m doing this…

She moves him more in air..to scare him

Kabir (crying) – Dont kill me ragini plz i am sorry what i did with u..

Plz mujhe mt maaro jaane do..

Maaf krdo mujhe plz

She lowers her hand and let him fall on floor with thudd!!! Beneath the chandelier

Meanwhile vansh is watching the whole scenario and fuming in anger

Fb starts

After discussing the plan

Vansh(angry)- i want to kill that kabir..

Riddhima- We can’t take law in our hands vansh..

Vansh(angry)- No riddhima he deserves this.

Riddhima- Fine i will ask the servant to cut the rope of chandelier

Rest will be his fate..

Vansh hugs riddhima

Fb ends

Kabir fall down with thudddd!!!

Riddhima (smiling)- u want me to leave u..

Fine i will let u go i won’t kill u..

Kabir (happy) – thnq ragini…thnq so much…

Riddhima -Tch.tch..poor kabir..

Even oxygen is not free how can i let u go..

I have a contidion

Do as i say n i will let u go

Kabir (happy) -i will do what you say

Riddhima (angry)-Confess all ur crimes and ask for apology from me..

I will.let u go then

Kabir (shocked)- I …. Can’t do this..

Mene kuch glt ni kia..

I didn’t do any crime…

Riddhima(smiling)- I knew it u won’t do so easily

It’s ok i have special treatment for u..

She snaps her finger once and fire ignited around kabir in circle

Kabir gasp seeing this

Riddhima(smiling)- Now what u are going to do..

Wanna die or wanna confess

Kabir (pleading) – I wil…will confess

He joins his hand bowing down in front of ragini.. Crying

I am sorry ragini…

I was always jealous of vansh

He had name fame and everything what i wanted

Then i saw u..and i wanted u with me.

But u loved vansh…

So i molested u to make u mine and to make vansh suffer i killed u ruthlessly

And faked the phone call in front of u..that vansh ordered me to kill u..

He was not at fault i did everything..

Now plz let me go…i confessed everything

Riddhima(with tears)- Just for your desires u killed me ruthlessly.

U molested me..

People like u don’t deserve to be alive…

She points a finger towards the chandelier

Riddhima (pointing finger upwards) – Look there kabir

Kabir (scared)- What is there.. kya hai waha

Riddhima (dangerously) – Tumhari maut…!!!😬

Kabir looks upward and shouts on top of his voice

Kabir (shouts) – Aaaaaaaaaaaashhhhhhhhhhhhh!!

The chandelier fall on him.. taking his soul with it..

Riddhima cries seeing this…

Vansh comes from behind the pillar with tears…

Riddhima (happy tears) – Ham jit gye vansh..hm jit gye…

Your ginni got justice…

She will be so happy na

Vansh is crying seeing kabir’s body after all he was his frnd best frnd

Vansh (with tears)- Look kabir what ur deeds served u..

U are the reason of ur own doom

My ginni will be at peace now..

He hugs riddhima and they both cry!!

Vansh (breaking the hug)- U got tired sweetheart go and change.i will ask servants to remove this bastard’s body from here

Go and freshn up..

Riddhima smiles and leaves

Scene 2

Vansh reaches to his room And open the door

He is going to switch on the light but a servant comes to him

Vansh – What happened

Servant – ****************

(Conversation muted)

He leaves

Vansh (gasped) – Whattttt!!!!!!!

Done for today

Roz roz rehem ni krungiπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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Aisha08

    Well i m not so good at writing ff as i m shayar and i love to pen down my thoughts in shyri..and here i m exploring my writing skills

    76 Comments

    1. RiansHLoveR on June 19, 2021 9:18 am

      1st

      • RiansHLoveR on June 19, 2021 9:24 am

        Sab thik thak h but last meπŸ₯΄ginni to ayegi e ayegiπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚om shanti om me jese hua tha🀣🀣post soon…

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 9:37 am

        Tysm dear
        Krapaya theory na banyeπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚wait kre…

      • jaskiranarora0605 on June 19, 2021 9:25 am

        Lol, even I got the same feeling πŸ˜‚πŸ€£

    2. Thebhooth18 on June 19, 2021 9:22 am

      ❀

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 10:41 am

        😍

    3. jaskiranarora0605 on June 19, 2021 9:25 am

      Fantastic episode…finally Kabir died because of his deeds

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 9:37 am

        Tysm dear
        He had to die…

    4. Aishwarya Wanjari on June 19, 2021 9:28 am

      Ab to doubt aa raha hai ki sch me atma ghuss gayi riddhu me

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 9:37 am

        πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚wait kro….pta chlega…

    5. prapti0809 on June 19, 2021 9:33 am

      Firse suspense pe chod diya Aisha di aapne. Abhi meroko aatma ke existence pe 50-50 doubt hai

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 9:38 am

        πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚doubt hi rkho…accha rhega…

    6. N Ayesha on June 19, 2021 9:42 am

      Awesome di

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 10:41 am

        Tysm

    7. 1234Aayu on June 19, 2021 9:48 am

      Di sach mein toh aatma nahi aygayi…You wrote it at night salute to your braveryπŸ˜‚
      Amazing episode..
      post soon…
      suspense,kahan se lati h app itna suspense..some shop or what give me the address I will also buy some from my storiesπŸ€—

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 10:42 am

        πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ honestly meru bhi pht ri thi thodiπŸ˜‚
        Ek adress dungi le ana waha se

    8. Akshara on June 19, 2021 9:52 am

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 10:42 am

        Tysm dear…

    9. Mennahussein55 on June 19, 2021 9:53 am

      So lovely episode

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 10:43 am

        Thnq dear..

    10. Tanya K on June 19, 2021 9:55 am

      Aree bhaisahab suspense dediyo didi ne to🀣🀣. Amazing episode ❀.
      Kabir ke saath acha hua.🀣πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 10:43 am

        πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚tysm dear…

    11. Priyanshi_13 on June 19, 2021 10:02 am

      Amazing 😍 loved it

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 10:43 am

        Thnq dear…

    12. Varshini on June 19, 2021 10:03 am

      Phir ithna suspense 🀯. Post soon

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 10:44 am

        πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ kya kre..sehna pdta h…

    13. Cutuuu on June 19, 2021 10:10 am

      Awesome ❀ Kuch rehem kro hum garibo pe roz suspense pr chodna shi baat nhi hai 😯😯

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 10:44 am

        πŸ˜€πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚adat se majbur…

    14. Anannya07 on June 19, 2021 10:21 am

      Amazing episode di but u end it with suspence.

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 10:44 am

        Tysm dear
        πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚My fav work😎

    15. Zara on June 19, 2021 10:34 am

      Nice episode πŸ’•

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 10:45 am

        Thnq dear….

    16. Palak on June 19, 2021 10:36 am

      ❀️

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 10:45 am

        😍😍….

    17. Attractiveuser on June 19, 2021 10:52 am

      Suspense mein marjawanπŸ€§πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚.
      Awesome episode ❀️❀️

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 12:56 pm

        πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚thnq dear

    18. Annoyinguser on June 19, 2021 11:07 am

      Kya pta sach me aa gyi ho πŸ˜‚ apka koi bharosa nhi kya kar do. Awesome Episode. Justice served🀧.

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 12:56 pm

        πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚tysm dear…

    19. Priyanka Thakur on June 19, 2021 11:14 am

      Awesome episode Aishu mai boli thii naa ki Ragini ka aatma Riddhima mein jaurur ayeygaa last mein vahee Hua again today you ended the episode with suspense eagerly waiting for next update

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 12:57 pm

        πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚thnq dear…😘😘😘

    20. AarushiSoni on June 19, 2021 11:30 am

      This Kabir deserves this only huh πŸ˜€πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘. amazing!!! Ab kya huaπŸ™‚

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 1:21 pm

        Tysm😘😘😘
        Wait for next

    21. Neetu on June 19, 2021 12:02 pm

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 1:21 pm

        Thnq dear

    22. Akansha roy on June 19, 2021 12:44 pm

      Yaar sab toh thik tha last meh kiu sab pani pani kardi ab toh sachme lakta hai ki ridhima hi ragini ha by the way episode was not less than an horror movie so ya it was awesome . Lots of love and kisses β€β€β€πŸ’πŸ’πŸŽπŸŽπŸŽŠπŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽˆπŸŽˆ

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 1:22 pm

        Awww…thnq so much dear😘😘😘😘

    23. Real@kriti on June 19, 2021 12:46 pm

      itna suspense di , itna suspense , KABHI me is suspense main marjawan…

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 1:24 pm

        πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚are are 2 epi bche h abhi

    24. Prabhleen 😊 on June 19, 2021 12:56 pm

      Amazing episode di 😍. Loved it 😘. What happened with Kabir – he deserved that. Last mein kahi sachme to ragini ki aatma to nahi agayi πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚. Again suspense. Post soonπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 1:25 pm

        Thnq dear..wait for next

    25. Sumisha on June 19, 2021 1:43 pm

      Awesome episode dear πŸ’“πŸ’“

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 5:15 pm

        Thnq dear

    26. Ishu on June 19, 2021 1:48 pm

      Amazing

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 5:15 pm

        Tysm dear….

    27. Niyati12 on June 19, 2021 3:11 pm

      Awesome di……….please post soon di

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 5:16 pm

        Thnq dear i wil

    28. Scarlet Flower on June 19, 2021 3:14 pm

      Amazing di
      Mujhe lagta hai apne aur Amyra di ne kasam khayi hai ki har baar episode suspence pe hi khatam karna hai

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 5:17 pm

        Tysm
        πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚Adat se majbur

    29. Priya Singh on June 19, 2021 5:13 pm

      ❀️

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 5:17 pm

        😍😍…..

    30. Parita on June 19, 2021 5:48 pm

      Awesome episode!! Kabir deserved it totally!!
      Now what happens…sach mein ab Riddhu possess ho gayi hai kya??πŸ˜‚πŸ€”Post soon pls

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 6:57 pm

        Tysm dear..
        Lets wait for next😍

    31. @Mj on June 19, 2021 8:06 pm

      AmazingπŸ’žπŸ’ž
      Post soon

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 8:56 pm

        Thnq dear..

    32. Jayashree on June 19, 2021 9:59 pm

      Wow amazing 😍😍😍😍❀️. It’s really interesting very interesting day by day. Thanks for updates 😊😍❀️

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 11:33 pm

        Thnq dear

    33. Priyadharshini on June 19, 2021 9:59 pm

      Super πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 11:33 pm

        Tysm dear…..

    34. JJ on June 19, 2021 10:00 pm

      Wonderful 😊😍❀️😍❀️

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 11:33 pm

        Thnq so much….

    35. Vkjhp on June 19, 2021 10:00 pm

      Wow fabulous πŸ’–πŸ˜πŸ’–πŸ’–

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 11:34 pm

        Tysm…..

    36. Sree on June 19, 2021 10:00 pm

      Fantastic πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ˜β€οΈπŸ˜β€οΈ

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 11:34 pm

        Tysm….

    37. Maanvika on June 19, 2021 10:54 pm

      Awesome…so trilling…post soon…
      I servant didn’t cut the top….

      • Aisha08 on June 19, 2021 11:34 pm

        Tysm dearπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚sbr kro kl tk

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