Hello!!
Everyone..
I am feeling like a Supergirl..
Third update todayπ₯³
I was really irritated with my projects and I decided to lighten my mood..so yay!!
One note:- Riansh born to be united is not going to end…I thought but After your comments, I don’t want any flying thing on me…and Radhika dare you to end yours….
One more thing I just got my OS book reviewed on Wattpad and it was really amazing.I am very happy.. overall review was 96.5/100π₯³
I will post soon #RBTBU
So this was requested by Aditi..
Rihaan OS!!
So this one begins when Anupriya shot Vansh akka vihaan but Riddhima took the bullet…
*So no confusion…I also don’t know right now ki Vihaan is vansh or not..so you will know at the end of the story..so I will write vansh as all family members know he is Vansh*
Vansh:- Riddhima!!!
Riddhima:- V..I.h.a..a..n..I .on.ly.took..b.u.l.let..for..vansh..b.u.t.don..t
Thank you.. Please save my family…
Vansh:- shh.. nothing will happen to you…
He picked her in his arms and ran towards the parking..
Vansh:- Angre open the door…
They reached hospital…
Vansh:- Riddhima nothing will happen to you..I will no..let anything to..
Doctor:- Mr.vansh pls go out..
Angre:- boss please..
And the OT was closed…
Vansh:- Riddhima ko kuch nahi hona chahiye Angre..
Saying this he went towards the temple area…
Vansh:- I am warning you if anything happens to her..I will end your name from my heart..take this as my warning.!!
And I never break my promise…I will protect her…I promised vansh I will protect her..
Tears were rolling down his cheeks…
When he feels a hand on his shoulder..
Vansh:- Angre..
Angre:-Boss..v.o.h. doctor..
Vansh:- What happened..angre Don’t test my patience..
Angre:- Voh doctor has come out from OT..b..ha..bhi.is..i.n.c.o.m.a
Vansh:- W.h.a.t..
He faces towards the statute..
Vansh:- I warned you ..but you did this very wrong now don’t expect anything from me…(we can say this very easily but the belief in him is very strong..it can’t break so easily # experience)..
He collapsed..
Angre:- Bhai you have to be strong..
Vansh:- strong my foot…I promised her..
Doctor:- Mr.rai Singhania..you have to sign on these papers..
He somehow managed to hold the pen with shivering hands..
He signed the papers..
And then closed his eyes…
All the moments he spend with her..
She teaching him Vansh’s moves..
Arguments with her…
The argument he had with her under shower…
The moment when he filled her hair line…
The way she cried remembering vansh..
The respect for vansh that she had limitlessly
“Pal ek pal mein hi tham sa gaya
Tu haath mein haath jo de gaya
Chalun main jahaan jaaye tu
Daayein main tere, baayein tu
Hoon rut main, hawayein tu
Saathiyaβ¦
Hansu main jab gaaye tu
Roun main murjhaaye tu
Bheegun main barsaaye tu
Saathiyaβ¦
Saaya mera hai teri shakal
Haal hai aisa kuch aajkal
Subah main hoon tu dhoop hai
Main aaina hoon tu roop hai
Yeh tera saath khoob hai
Humsafar⦔
When he was disturbed by a voice..
Angre:- Bhai Mr.mehata fixed meeting at 5 pm..
Vansh:- Cancle the meeting you know na it’s my time to meet Riddhima…
Angre smiles..
Angre:- yess boss…
He left..
Vansh:- It has been 6 month’s she is in coma…
I am trying to fulfill my promise..I am Full filling my duty as Vansh..
And Vansh I am full filling our promise…
He took a photograph from a diary..
And said..
Vansh see I am taking care of your sweetheart..
You have to take care of my mother..
You know na I don’t believe in God..
And Riddhima I know you will never forget vansh but..
We can be best friends isn’t it..
Β I have to tell you…
You have to get up..
Dollar biwi..
He again closed his eyes..
And remember he dance he did with Riddhima on her birthday…
Tu ishq ke saare rang de gaya
Phir kheench ke apne sang le gaya
Kahin pe kho jaaye chal
Jahaan ye ruk jaaye pal
Kabhi naa phir aaye kal
Saathiyaβ¦
Ek maange agar sau khwaab doon
Tu rahe khush, main aabad hoon
Tu sabse juda juda sa hai
Tu apni tarah tarah sa hai
Mujhe lagta nahi hai tu doosra
Pal ek pal mein hi tham sa gaya
Tu haath mein haath jo de gaya
Chalun main jahaan jaaye tu
Daayein main tere, baayein tu
Hoon rut main, hawayein tu
Saathiyaβ¦
Hansu main jab gaaye tu
Roun main murjhaaye tu
Bheegun main barsaaye tu
Saathiyaβ¦
This was a very very raw one..hope you like it…Do comments.
I am not saying it boring.π€§
Mind it.. π€ͺ
Bye take care…
I will try to post soon..but can’t promise..
Shayad tomorrow no Post π₯Ίπ€§
Your author Aayu…
71 Comments
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amazing di
I loved it
Plz Post soon
Congratulationsππ….Thank you..will try..
Amazing.
And don’t think that u are a supergirl as you are a superset girl.
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Thank you…..
Aww it means a lot..me superest ππ¦ΈββοΈ
Nyc π
Thanks..
Amazing os
Superb
Guys if my readers are reading this then i wanna say i will post tomorrow
Sry for the delay
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Hurray!!! π₯³π₯³ππππ
Thank you diπ
that is the best news ever..
Amazing β€οΈβ€οΈ! Supergirl πβ€οΈππππ! Party to banti hai..party to banti hai…born to be united khatam nhi horahaπ₯³π₯³π₯³πππ
Thank you..π¦ΈββοΈπ¦ΈββοΈππ…yes Radhika will give party..π₯³π₯³π
Nice dear plz pst soon
Thank u… π will try
Yaa…. Exactly our belief on God is so strong that I say him many things many times but then also belief doesn’t break…..amazing… Please post soon
hmmm….Thank you niyati..will try my best π
awesome aayu post soon
Thank you….will try
Amazing my supergirl
Thank you menna diπ
Nice OS
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Wah aayu devi ji idhar ek post karna he hota din me aur dekho aayu aur gauri 3 de dete. It was amazing. Party!! Ff end nhi hogi
π€£π€£π I have written in parts..it was work of 4 days.π..Thank you, Anjali..Party? Radhika ji will give.. π₯³π
Thik h radhika ji se lengeπ
Thanks a lot for writing this β€β€β€β€..it was just like I want…… Fabulous os
It was a pleasure…β€..Thank Gd..I was nervous will you like it or not…glad you like it..Thank you π
Welcome dear β€β€β€…..keep writing
Amazing OS Aayu
Thank u di π
Awesome Aayu . Its really nice and the song PAL is one of my fav . I was enjoying while reading it with my fav song . Thanks for the update yaar .
Thank you…yes!! it is a very nice song I also love it…your welcome π
Awesome os aayu β€οΈ loved it β€οΈ post more soon like these and you really get a outstanding reviews… congratulations ππ
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Awesome one dear!!
This was a good one, and our super girl nailed it again!!
Thank you pari !!
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Thank god u r not ending itπ ππblackmail acha thaπ€£π€£πvaise os is amazing..riddhu in comaπ’π₯π±hum sab riddhu se kya kya karwa te haiπ€£πbechara vansh always get punishment ππtry to post jaldi no hurry coz study is firstππβ€β€β€β€
huussh….thinking to do so again!!π yesπ..Thank you.
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Amazing OS and thanks for not ending BTBU! And congratulations for the amazing review you got!! You are an outstanding writer yarβ€οΈπππππ§‘π§‘πΊπΊπ
Thank you…β€β€ππππππ..
I was thinking but after your comments, I thought I am doing wrong so..
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Fabulous episode aayu
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Awesome dear. Aayu…. loved this Riahaan OS.
Thank you diβΊοΈ glad you like it
This is wonderful!!!!!! Amazing dear Aayu!! Post more plsssss
Thank you βΊοΈ… already posted!