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Home»Fan Fiction»Rhythm of Life – Tune 23 (RagSan)
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Rhythm of Life – Tune 23 (RagSan)

AsthaBy AsthaDecember 29, 201619 Comments9 Mins Read
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Thnq soooooooo much for ur support….. HAPPY NEW YEAR EVE IN ADVANCE

Recap: ragsan romance

Another one week passed…… But that week was good bcoz there was sweet news….. the news is ishani is pregnant…… so there was celebrations n happiness were filled

On fresh morning

Ragini was packing dresses…… then sanky hugged her from back……
Rag: arrey…. Always in u r romantic mood… really I was misjudged u on that day…..
He hugged her more tightly……
Rag: oh… my romeo… u can romance later…. I’m very nervous… 1st time I’m coming to TN…. 1st gonna meet ur family…. I’m excited as well nervous….
He turned her n hold her hand….. don’t wry… everything will be alri8….. nothing bad will happen…. God is with us… she nods in yes n hugs….. both comes out with luggage….

Swasha: all the best di….. both hugs n wishes them….
Rag: u don’t wry… come to home at ri8 time…. Harsha don’t fight with her… swara shows tongue to harsha…. Swara u don’t disturb him…. Harsha shows teeth to her…. Study well….
Ragsan left to railway station…. Ishveer came to station to sent off them……
Rag: where is kaaka kaaki?
Ishani: they went to tour na…..

Rag: yup forgot…. Ragsan hugged ishveer….. sanky stepped in train n ragini abt to step san phone rings…..
San: hello appa…..
RP: where r u?
San just now boarded the train it will move in few mins…. Y what happened?
RP: thatha (dada/parameshwar) met an accident……

San in shock: what? Ishveer n ragini gestures what? San signs wait
RP: a lurry hit him….. out of danger…. Come soon
San: haan I’m coming…. He disconnected the call…..
With pale face he explained the happening…..
Ish: ragini is going there for the first time but shagun is not good…..

San: what did u said?
Ish: shagun is not good…. Sanky recalled the past happenings……
Parvathi (dadi) is going out to temple then funeral of dead person was going…… she murmured while going temple whats this abshagun……
Another time in morning time she came out to clean n put rangoli but found dead crow….. she crated it as big prob and arranged for pooja to compensate
RV asked what r u thinking?
San: voh dadi is very superstition…… don’t know how will she react now……
Ishveer looks eo helplessly…..

Rag: then we can go some other day… I think this is not ri8 time…… u go n tc of ur family
San: but…. Ragini assures him everything will be alri8….. n sent off him….

Ragini came to home….. swasha asked what happened she explained…..

RV called RK n told the matter…..
RK: I believed he will take her there….. but he…… how can her dadi blame ragini for dada’s accident?
RV: her dadi didn’t blamed….. he is saying it can be happen….
RK: I don’t what all r going to be happen….. but he lost my faith on him… in angry he disconnected the call.

One week passed… sanky called rag daily in ni8…. Both shared what happened….. sanky don’t know what excuse make to go return to Mumbai…..
ragini went to visit ishani……
amba: arrey ragini now only u got address of this home?
rag: not like that kaaki….. where is bhabhi?
Amba: in her room….. ragini nodded n went to ish’s room
Ishveer: hey rag…….

Rag: kya bhaiya…. In morning only u started romance? Didn’t u went to office?
Rv rubs his head: vo….
Rag: u can romance ur wife in ni8… now bhabhi is my responsibility….
Rv twisted rag’s ear…. Now a days u r talking much…..
Rag showed tongue n said its not paining….. rv smiled n said ok take care…. Bye I’m going to office…
Ish: for one week u forgot me na?

Rag: not like that bhabhi….. I was with swara….
Ish: next time u bring swasha to home…..
Rag: I called them but they made some excuses…. Next time sure I’ll bring them……
Both had random n funny talks…. Then rag got call…. Rag cut the call….
Ish: y did u cut the call? Who is calling?
Rag: vo.. bhabhi that’s job offer call….. they saw my designs from clg n got my number…. Their company needs a designer

Ish: oh…. R u not interested then say them no…. y r u ignoring….?
Rag: voh they called one week ago only….. I told sanky abt this…. He said what is the need to stress….. he said he’ll manage. So I said them no… but still they r calling
Ish: oh…
Rag: ya…. Then I too not interested then but now I’m getting bore in home…. clg gonna open soon swa will go to clg…. I’ll get damn bore….
Ish: then join in work….
Rag: don’t know what will be sanky’s reaction
Ish: just talk to him…. Rag nodded yes n dialled sanky’s num

@ Village

Lax: anna….. anna…. He shook sanky…..
San: what happened?
Lax: where u lost? Ur phone is ringing…..
San saw his phone n attend the call n came out…..
San: haan ragini…. Any matter?

Rag: voh sanky….. continuously I’m getting call from ur company….. san remains silent…. Here I’m getting very bore without u…. feeling alone….. shall I join in job?
San pov: I don’t have any objection to sent ragini to home….. I like to give support whatever she want to do….. but if RK came to know that he will think I sent rag to job for salary…. He is already upset on me for not taking rag here…. If I told this rag then she will be upset…. If I didn’t allowed her then she will think I’m dominating her…. Moreover she is getting bore n feeling alone…. No… I should keep her happy….
Rag: hello sanky….. r u in line?

San: haan haan….. sure if u want then u can go….. it will be good opportunity to expose ur talents… they r calling u again n again it means they knows ur value
Rag: r u sure? Don’t u have any objection….
San: nope…. I don’t have… u can go…..
Rag: love u my dear…. Love u love u…… bye…..
Sanky disconnected the call….. smile appeared on his face as her jungli bili is happy now

Next day ragini met chief of Metha industry….. he saw her resume n introduced one of her staff…..

Chief: she will tell u abt ur work….. the staff leaves as per some work….. u don’t wry…. I know u r not interested to work full time….. so just take ur down ur task…. U can complete that in home too….. u can work here n home wherever u want….
Rag: thnq thnq thnq sooooooo much sir…. Its very big offer for me….. for a week…. Till I understand the whole process I’ll come to office then I’ll complete my task from home….
Chief: u r most welcome Miss. Ragini
Rag: Mrs. Ragini…

Chief: r u married?
Rag: cant u see vermilion on my hairline? I’m Mrs. Ragini Sanskar…..
Chief: sanskar’s wife? He is in leave na….
Rag: yup… he is with his family as his grandpa’s health is not good…. Anyway sir thnq soooooo much. She left from there (sanky working by online as he don’t know when he’ll be back)

Very soon ragini mingled with colleagues…..

Sneha (one of the staff): pavi…… when will this sanky come?
Rag heard sanky name n asked them who is he?
Pavi (one of the staff): ragini I know u r married…. But still I’m saying in this office a boy named sanskar….. he is sooooooo hot u know….. (they don’t know san is her hubby) damn handsome…. We r missing him…. For us.. I mean girls,…. He will do anything …. He is in leave….. don’t know when he will return…..
rag: what? He is flirty type?

sneha: why is anything bothers u?
Rag: nothing…. with angry face….
Pavi continued to describe sanky’s nature….. ragini heard everything closed her fist…. The day when he comes after leave I’ll propose….. ragini spits the juice as they r in canteen….
sneha: what happened? are you Jealous?
Rag: why I’d be?

Pavi: he is ur husband na…..?
Rag: how u know?
Sneha & pavi: Just now only chief told abt it…. u hid this from us….. don’t worry your hubby is siya ki ram….
Rag smiles n blushes

4 months passed….. san tried his best to make excuses….. he told them that he got job in Mumbai n wanna join….. as usual they refused n he tries to convince them…..
Rag is getting ready to office….. she bid bye to swara and about to enter into lift but she felt dizzy n fainted
Swara screamed di…….

Screen freezes with fainted face of ragini

To be continued…………….

QUOTE OF THE DAY
“Sometimes we are only given few minutes to be with the one we love, and, thousands of hours to spend thinking of them”

Frnd I’m really really sorry for such a boring chappy…… this is the last day of this year but I didn’t expect that I’ll give such boring chappy…… but next year I’ll give good chappy…..

SORRY for the bad happenings….. sometimes may I hurt you…. I made you wait….. sometimes I disappointed you…… Sorry for that all

Sorry frnds today I wont be able to reply ur cmnts….. every writers will have their expectations in cmnts…… I too have….. when I see 50+ and 100+ cmnts in some ff I’ll think “how much talent they have na…. I too should learn from them…… those writers who got many cmnts inspired me….. Thnq soooooo much for them…… 25 cmnts is my highest cmnt with out my reply….. very very very big Thnq sooooo much for those all who cmnted in my story till now…… u don’t know how much u made my day….. bcoz my day starts with reading ur cmnts…… thnq soooooo much for bringing smile on my face….. again sry I cant reply ur cmnts today…..

THANK YOU SOOOOOOO MUCH……. For all the support….. never your comments and likes failed to made smile on my face…… thank you sooooooo much for keep me happy

Forget the bitter incidents of this year but don’t forget the lessons taught by those incidents…… store your sweet memories and start a bright year……HAPPY NEW YEAR EVE IN ADVANCE

By urs loving Aastha

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    Jovial type. Like to communicate more. Be happy keep ur fmly n frnds happy. Wattpad ID : SriAastha if u wish u can follow & vote there.

    19 Comments

    1. MI_MAHI on December 29, 2016 11:52 pm

      Superb….।

    2. nikky on December 29, 2016 11:57 pm

      nice amazing superb excellent mind blowing next part soon

    3. Richa19 on December 30, 2016 12:04 am

      Awww.. I’m feeling so sad for ragsan. Bechara sanskaar….. But hoping for the best. .

      N dear please don’t judge urself on the basis of comments u r a great writer n a very talented person so never think like that. ….. v love ur ff and u hv great writing skills!!!! ! So don’t underestimate urself… Keep smiling and take care!! ???

    4. Fairy on December 30, 2016 12:44 am

      Oye my doll!!! Love u sooo much sweeety :D….n yap richa is totally correct!!
      U r a superbbbb writer…n d commnts u get,proves dat u r a fab. Writer …getttng 25 commnts widout countng urs is reallly an achievement yaaar…
      N dose who gets 50+ or 100+ commnts r after countng dere commnts also…

      Now comng to d chappppy…omg rags fainted…ny god news??? Wohooo m waitng for nxt part eagerly…
      Bt m feeelng reallly sad for ragsan.poor dey 🙁 🙁 ..lets see wt wl happen nxt….post soon..love u sooo my my talented doll..keeep rockng n stay blesssed sweeetypie 😉 😀

    5. Myra on December 30, 2016 1:01 am

      Awesome. Amazing

      U r the bestst author and writer…….
      Nvr estimate much from others…… As u write in ur quotes……
      Nd ur quotes are mind blowing bcoz they represent d situation of ur update………

      Nvr feel bad if no one cmnt. U know u r d bst…. ???????

      Happy ? ? year ???

    6. Sreevijayan on December 30, 2016 2:10 am

      Awesome update my dear……

    7. silent_writer on December 30, 2016 3:07 am

      Wooow Wooow what a amzing chapppt dinasour i loved it alot se b ziada lotsssssss its superbbbb love u n HNY in adv

    8. silent_writer on December 30, 2016 3:11 am

      N u r amzing writer no douby cuz u always bring reality in ur ffs which i loveddd

    9. Pinky on December 30, 2016 6:05 am

      Awesom

    10. priyanka on December 30, 2016 6:52 am

      It was not boring chappy dear….
      Awesome dear…..feeling sad for ragsan….as stated Richa don’t judge urself on the basis of cmnts dear…you’re my fav writer baby..you are great writer …
      Love you dear…keep smiling Aasthuuu….?

    11. lovely on December 30, 2016 7:19 am

      Nice

    12. Asw on December 30, 2016 8:58 am

      Nice a very happy new year to u update is quiet interesting keep going

    13. abi on December 30, 2016 9:25 am

      It’s amazing
      Don’t worry
      You are awesome writer

    14. Ragz_teju on December 30, 2016 10:50 am

      superb dear….loved it

    15. Vk on December 30, 2016 10:54 am

      Awesome

    16. Ammy on December 30, 2016 11:05 am

      superb dear

    17. jazzy on December 30, 2016 12:35 pm

      amazing dearrand u r the sweetest qriter here dont be disheartened u know many stupid people r like me who dont comment heheheheh

    18. dharani on December 30, 2016 5:18 pm

      awesome

    19. hemalattha on December 31, 2016 1:53 pm

      Nice

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