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Home»Fan Fiction»Rhythm of Life – Tune 20 (RagSan)
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Rhythm of Life – Tune 20 (RagSan)

AsthaBy AsthaDecember 23, 201643 Comments9 Mins Read
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Thnq sooooooooo much for ur cmnts in previous chappy…. sry for not replying

Recap: family discussions

Ragsan sitting on bed… both sharing eye contact…. Sanky trying to speak but he is not getting word. Rag broke the silence by asking “y r u starting me like this?” she holds sanky’s hands….

San: voh… ragini….
Rag: mm tell…
San: voh… I agre that we loves each other… n now we got marry too…. but this all….
First rag gave confused look but at end she understood what he is trying to say…..

Rag: sanky u know what? I love u sooooooo much….. bcoz u gave respect to others feelings…. I know u r trying to say that this first ni8 is not ri8 tym…. Isn’t it?
San nods sadly…. Rag gives sweet smile n says even I too lil scared now….. so we just sleep casually bcoz we r not strangers to understand abt each other…. Both sleeps in same with cute smile on their faces.

Next day morning…..

Rag opens her eyes n finds sanky getting ready in formal dress….. she checks the tym its 8 o’ clk…
Rag: oops its 8…. Y didn’t u woke me?
San: u was sleeping cutely…..
Rag: ok u got ready? From where will u come?

San: what?
Rag: who is going out to them we should not ask where r they going so I asked where u’ll come from….. gave eeeeee look
San: u r really rare made of god…. Actually I’m going to join in a company… I decided this company shows company name on appointment card
Rag: ok u go n eat…. I’ll join u after fresh up.

San goes down…. Ladies serves him food….
Rag came out of bathroom after frsh up n dressed up in casuals… then she saw the vermillion box…. She took in hands n applied in her mang… an unknown smile appeared on her face…. san completed his breakfast…. Rag came down n fed sweet n said all the best… with smiling face san went out….

San went to one of company from which he was selected….. he was called in to MD cabin…. He greet the man in position
MD: u r Mr. sanskar ri8? He nod in yes
MD: actually…. We cant u offer u job
San: what? But y?
MD: hope u know the leading business man Mr. Nikhil khanna…. He is our one of important partner… he don’t like to be a part of our company if u joined here…. So I’m sry…. We cant… (Nikhil is in jail only but he told when they interviewed sanky) u can go….

San don’t know whats happening….. he was puzzled…. If he didn’t gave then what? I have job offers from 6 companies

He went to balance 5 companies….. he got same relies from all companies….. he was just broken….. don’t know what to do next…… he stood in road lifelessly…. Then he got a
call from village

Uttra: hello anna…. San: mmm
Utt: maa call connected…. Come here….
Suj: hey ur exams got over na…. when u r coming? Is today ni8 ur train?
San: adhu…adh.. vandu…. (voh voh maa….)
Suj: akka his voice is not good…. I think something is wrong….

AP: switch on loud speaker…..
Ap: sanskar r u alri8?
San: haan periyamma I’m alri8….
Ap: when u r coming?
San took deep breath n gathered courage: maa my frnd’s marriage is after two weeks….

Ap: so?
San: he is my close frnd n he was with me all the tym…. He likes to be with me till his marriage….
Suj: what? For two morw weeks u’ll stay there?
Ap: no sanskar but periyappa n thatha will kill u…. they wont allow u that much day….
San: plz…. I’m not going to be here always na…. this tym let me plz…. Plz maa

Suj: but sanskar….
San: no but kit… don’t say no….
Ap: we cant take decision….. u know na all decisions taken by mama (parameshwar)….
San: plz u both can convince….
Suj: we will try but we cant assure…. They disconnects the call

San came to home with dull face… straight he went to room… no one noticed him…. Ragini came to take phone from her room n saw sanky…
Rag: sanky…. When u came? Y ur face is soooo dull? Y r u rubbing head? Is this paining? What happened?
San: what I’ll say? Will I say abt all companies rejected me or will I say abt maa’s call or will I say I failed?
Rag: what? Companies rejected u? but y?

San: all bcoz of that Nikhil… he is partner of top companies…. He told all not to take me in job….
Rag: what but now he is in jail na…. when he said? But in yesterday only he….
San: in clg tyms…. He have complete detail abt u n me…. he well know abt us…. U may recognize our love in late but he was aware abt it…. so he done this.
Rag; how cheap he is….. disgusting….. u don’t wry I’m with u….. she placed her hands on his shoulders….
San: maa called… I told there is frnd marriage after two weeks so I wanna stay here?

Rag: they said we cant allow but we will try to convince ur dad, uncle n grandpa….
San: how u know….. ?
Rag: how many tyms u told abt ur family cant I guess this atleast?
San: I think ur family is ri8… I’m not a good pair to u….
Rag: sanky plz don’t talk like this….. I believe u…. she hugged him but he didn’t reciprocate…. She holds his cheeks n made eye contact…. Tell me all the seven companies
rejected u?

San: no I just went to 6 companies…. In 7th company also I’ll get same reply so I came home
Rag: ok no prob…. Just forgot everything….. she brought dinner n made him eat n made him sleep n caressed his hair till he sleep…..
Bright morning rays glanced through window…… sanky woke up n saw rag is setting her hair….
San: early morning u woke up? Rag: go n get fresh….

He is wearing shirt then rag entered room with food plate….
San: y u brought food here? She placed plates on side table n helped him to wear tie…. While she said… if u go down then u have to answer so many questions…. Ur mood will get spoiled that’s y I brought….. both ate….
San:go then bye…. I’ll go to that last company….rag smiled n said go to that company….neither with head weight nor with disbelief…..go there with confidence n faith on god……. This tym surely good will happen bcoz ur lucky charm also gonna come with u…. san gave confused look….

Rag: I’m only lucky charm lets go…… both reached METHA INDUSTRIES…. Sanky was called in….
Rag: all the best…. She hugged him n sent…..
After few mins san came out n saw rag who is folding her hands n praying…. He smiled n her n came near her…. Rag opened her eyes n asked what happened?
San: same dialogues….
Rag’s face bcm pale……

San: same dialogues but with different ending…… bcoz my luck had worked….. rag gave confused look….

FB starts
San went in ….. chairman asked u r sanskar ri8? He nodded yes…. MD: hope u know the leading business man Mr. Nikhil khanna…. He is our one of important partner… he don’t like to be a part of our company if u joined here….
San gave weak smile n abt to leave the room
chairman: but I’m ready to loose contract with his company to give job for most talented guy n take my company to more big position than khanna industries…..
Sanky was shocked n surprised….. sir….?
chairman: u can join in our company if u want….. bcoz if u here then I can get big deals than khanna company…. It’s a selfish motive that’s it….
San: sir… I don’t know what to say…. U r saying its selfish motive but its valuable for me too…. bcoz now I need job…. Now job is my most important requirement n u gave it….. I don’t know how to greet u….
Chairman: good then u join from tmrw…. Tmrw is good day hope it will be good day for ur career too…
San: as ur blessing sir…. San came out of room
FB ends

Wow…… ragini exclaimed in happy….. both came out of office… just then san got call from DP
San: periyappa……
DP: thatha unkita pesanum nu solraru…. (dada wanna take to u….)
Parameshwar: sujatha told u wanna stay two more weeks for ur frnd marriage… is it?
San gulped n said: haan grandpa… may i….
Parameshwar: don’t u think two weeks is long?

San: ya but what to do…. I didn’t fixed the marriage date…. N I cant change it too….
Parameshwar: u r very good at talking….. but after muhurth u should pick ur train ok?

San exclaimed n said thnq sooooo much thatha…… he kissed on phone….
Parameshwar: hey hey I’m ur grandpa not wife…..
San bit his tongue…. Greeted again n disconnected the call…. Hugged rag tightly n shouted they gave permission….
Rag: hey its road….

San: its party time lets go…. Both went to ice cream shop
San: bhaiya two butter scotch…. Rag was simply staring happy face of sanskar
Ice cream came….. rag was abt to eat….
San: wait baby I’ll feed u….. both fed ice cream to each other…. Then drunk juice in one glass with two straws….. sweet music played in bg…..
Rag felt someone waving hand…. She saw sanky eating ice cream n saw her cup with full of ice cream…..

San: where r u lost…. Eat soon or else it will melt…..
Rag ate unwillingly with fake smile….
Rag pov: there is just clay in his head…. Waste fellow…. Still he behaves like I’m his frnd…. I wished to get most romantic person as my husband but this idiot…. He is unfit for love….. he don’t know to romance….

Screen freezes with pity yet funny face of Ragini

To be continued……………

QUOTE OF THE DAY
Where u think u are ready or not, just start right now…. There is magic in ACTION.

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    43 Comments

    1. nikky on December 23, 2016 11:49 pm

      nice amazing superb excellent mind blowing plzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz be regular bcoz now days ragsan ff are very less

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 8:56 pm

        thnq soooooooo much my dear…. now i cant be regular bcoz my clg annual day practice…. i enrolled my name in competitions so i’m really busy sry dear

    2. jazzy on December 24, 2016 12:11 am

      amazing dear

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 8:57 pm

        thnq sooo much di

    3. Ammy on December 24, 2016 12:32 am

      nice epi

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 8:58 pm

        thnq soooo much dear

    4. Ragz_teju on December 24, 2016 1:03 am

      superb loved it

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 8:59 pm

        thnq soooooo much akka

    5. lisa on December 24, 2016 2:33 am

      haha han bhai apni ragu buhut romantic haihehehe

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 9:00 pm

        ha ha ha…. thnq soooo much dear

    6. Sindhura on December 24, 2016 7:22 am

      Nice

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 9:00 pm

        thnq soooo much akka

    7. inu on December 24, 2016 7:28 am

      Superb. Lovely epi

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 9:00 pm

        thnq soooo much dear

    8. lovely on December 24, 2016 7:29 am

      Nice

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 9:01 pm

        thnq soooooo much dear

    9. j on December 24, 2016 7:42 am

      awesome. ithu rmba short ah feel pana inum padikunum thonuthu after 2 weeks ena agum sanky epdi inga stay panuva intha question la ans theriyanumna update soon clgla busy ah

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 9:02 pm

        haan akka clg la busy… annual day practice n competitions…….. thnq sooo much akka… stay tune on…..akka

    10. moni_ragz on December 24, 2016 8:45 am

      Awesome….. ?? loved it.. unromantic sanky??funny face rags?

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 9:03 pm

        thnq soooooo much dear

    11. A12345 on December 24, 2016 8:59 am

      Awesome

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 9:03 pm

        thnq sooooo much dear

    12. suhani on December 24, 2016 9:50 am

      Finally u post the epi… Ragsan scene’s are superb…and ice creams scenes are funny….waiting for next part soon…keep smiling… Next epi eppa…

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 9:05 pm

        thnq sooo much akka…. next chappy…. post pannitu iruken akka…. happy to see ur cmnts.

    13. fira on December 24, 2016 10:16 am

      Nice epi…ragsan rendu perum senthu poi interview attend pannathu super….nikil is very bad guy….sanskar family enna decision yeduppanga after 2 weeks ore tension n.a. irukku….i think sanskar avan job va reason n.a. vachu weeks sa extent pannuvan nu ninaikkiren….keep rocking…take care…Sem laam mudunjurucha….

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 9:06 pm

        thnq soooo much akka….. good guess… but avan job patthi sona accept pannuvangala? kkeep guessing n stay tune on

    14. Richa19 on December 24, 2016 11:29 am

      Superb dear… Loved it!!!

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 9:09 pm

        thnq sooo much dear

    15. priyanka on December 24, 2016 12:26 pm

      Awesome dear…
      last part superb dear…
      Ragini pov?????…unromantic sanky??….
      Aasthuu when is your bday??(if you dont have any problem)pls tell me
      Love u loads dear…take care?

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 9:10 pm

        my bday on april 9 baby…. urs?
        thnq soooo much for the cmnt……
        he he he….. poor ragsan……
        love u loads n tc

    16. Asw on December 24, 2016 12:27 pm

      Nice keep going

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 9:11 pm

        thnq soooo much dear

    17. Vk on December 24, 2016 1:18 pm

      Last part is super akka….. Feeling bad for ragini…. Unromantic Sanju???

      • Vk on December 24, 2016 1:19 pm

        Sanky*

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 9:12 pm

        ha ha ha… thnq soooo much da chellam

    18. dharani on December 24, 2016 1:52 pm

      awesome

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 9:12 pm

        thnq sooo much dear

    19. asra on December 24, 2016 6:04 pm

      fabulous akka….last scene than akka semma….ragini oh my poor baby….ne Sanky pathi romantic’a dream panra…but ur Sanky is unromantic’a irukan pola….feeling bad for u my dear….nikhil s soo bad boy akka….ragini s lucky charm of our Sanky….superbbb superbbb superbbb loved it akka….waiting for nxt one..plz seikirama update panunga akka….tkcr akka….

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 9:18 pm

        ha ha ha….. unromantic sanky…… thnq soooooo much da…. ur cmnt is sooooo sweet… yup rag is his lucky charm….. ya nikil is bad boy….. love u loads…. tc baby

    20. Sherin on December 24, 2016 8:18 pm

      awesome…..just loved it…

      • Astha on December 24, 2016 9:18 pm

        thnq soooooo much dear

    21. Akshata on December 24, 2016 11:43 pm

      awesome

      • Astha on December 25, 2016 7:23 am

        Thnq sooooooo much dear

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