Rhythm of Life – Chap 1 (RagSan)

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Hi…… frnds. I’m AASTHA. Hope some of u know me and remember me……. this is a short story….. don’t know how much chapters it will last…… this is a simple love and family oriented story hope you’ll enjoy it.

Rhythm of music is stressed and unstressed tones……. But,



Story starts with the darshan of different temples.

@ Mumbai
With the rays of bright sunlight one apartment shown. The camera focused on one door which is in seventh floor. clock indicates the time 6:30 am, which was hanging in medium size living room’s wall which has brownish orange coloured designs. Music of OM JAI JAGADISH HARE song flew everywhere in the home.

A girl who wore dark grey coloured saree is chopping vegetables in white marble stoned kitchen table. Her beautiful eyes shown. Sweating drops falls on floor from her forehead. Suddenly song was changed….. (1234 get on the dance floor song from Chennai express plays)
The girl shouts “SANSKAR”

A boy is shown with sleeveless vest and nightwear pant in living room near medium size LED tv which hanged in center of the wall. As a response to the voice he turned with yawning, he stretched his hands, though he don’t have six packs he looked handsome any girl will fall in love with 1st sight…….. his face was revealed he is none other than our chocolate boy sanskar.

He winked at the girl what? The girl’s face revealed as RAGINI with frown. “y u changed the song?” ragini asked. “hey its morning time….. we have to be enthusiastic….. don’t spoil mood by ur slow bajans…..” sanskar replied back. “u r just impossible” by saying this she tried to pick remote from sanky’s hand but he raised his hand…..

Sanky gave naughty look to rag, and forwarded his steps. “hey stay back….. hey till now u didn’t took bath….. by touching me don’t made me impure….. I’ve lots of work” ragini said. Naughty sanky dragged ragini….. by twirling she was locked up by sanky’s hand. They both shared intense eyelock. He was abt to kiss her. A small boy’s voice “ amma (mom) I’m ready”

By hearing that voice ragini pushed sanky n he fell on sofa. She went to that boy n said, “ my ROSHIK is always perfect, love u my son. Sanky…… go n wake up ur favourite daughter”

Sanky murmured “ no villain need to my romance my so called son is enough” he went to bed room which was simple yet attractiveness. He said, “ DIYA….. diya……. Get up….. u r getting late to school ” A small girl woke up from bed by stretching her hands and body. “good morning dad” cute diya said. “ok lets take bath…. Both went to bathroom which was small and has white marble floor”

In living room, Roshik asked “maa….is there any work for me?” “haan fill up water in ur water bottle and her water bottle too” ragini replied to Roshik. Sanky and Diya too to came after bath. Sanky is checking files in living room. Roshik and Diya in sitting on dinning table n packing their school bags. Ragini placing foods on dinning table.

A bubbly girl entered into the house by saying “Good morning di….” “welcome maharani….. what is the time now?” ragini asked. With pout face the girl said, “sorry di…. I woke up lately that’s y…..will u for give ur sweet sis SWARA?” ragini said, “ok ok leave it….. did u complete ur assignment?”

A male voice, “haan haan she completed her work, but never let me to sleep peacefully” sanky asked “ y HARSHA?” “by the name of assignment she put all lights then how can I sleep jiju?” harsha, the charming n handsome replied back. Ragsan smiled.

Ragini, “ok all come and eat….. all of u getting late na….. all came near dinning table….” swara Put extra chairs as there is three only….all started eating. Ragini gave lunch box to swara and told to give that to Harsha. Swara shouted “hey harsha…… take this with you…. di gave….” Harsha turned who was sighing the beautiful view of apartment from rags home’s veranda which has spongy chair and small plant at corner and said “ di…. Plz teach her some respect….. see what respect she gives to her elder brother?” harsha said. Swara behaved like nothing fell in her ears.

Ragini said “ok ok….. now time to pooja…. Come to mandhir…..” Ragini opened the mandhir door which was made of wood, Lord Ganesh’s Glassed photo was in centre and rest god’s idols were in side. Ragsan showed Aarthi, then harsha, then swara last children. Then they sat for five minutes as one should not go after pooja immediately.

Ragini said, “ ok swara go and lock ur home, I’ll lock this” “ sure di but I wanna ask onething” swara said. “voh…. Usually everyone do pooja first then will eat but here y reverse? Swara replied for the question of what? “I think u should lock the door now…” rag said. swara locked the house which was opposite to ragsan’s house. They leave Roshik in the apartment’s child care, then dropped swara and diya in corner bus stop to get respective college and school bus.

“hope I’ll return soon” ragini said with tension. “di…. Don’t wry….. in half day I’ll back from clg…. I’ll take care of diya and roshik” swara replied sweetly. Ragini nodded and ragsan went to office and harsha went to his office.

Screen freezes with smiling face of Ragsan

To be continued………

Tejaswi Wyankankar Prakash as Ragini (fashion designer in MNC)
Varun Kapoor as Sanskar (working as MD at same MNC)
Diya (same diya whom appeared in prologue but this is when she was 3 yrs old) (studying Pre KG)
Roshik (age 2)
Helly Shah as Swara Arora (doing PG)(sister of Harshad)
Harshad Arora as Harshad Arora (mostly called as Harsha….. working at MNC, brother of Swara) (he is not working with ragsan…. Its some other MNC)


“No family is perfect…
We argue, we fight, we even stop talking to each other at times, but in the end, family is family.
The love always be there.
Love ur family to get more love. “

IF U LIKED IT AND IF U FELT I WANT TO CONTINUE THIS…. Tell me through comments.If u liked this do suggest ur friends to read. keep smiling.

By urs loving Aastha

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  1. Sreevijayan

    Aweee..awesome start dear..loved it soo much

    1. Astha

      thnq sooooooo much my dear sis

  2. Ragz_teju

    it’s super duper amazing… I loved it so much… such a cute family of ragsan

    1. Astha

      omg ….. happy to hear super duper…. thnq sooooooo much di…

  3. Awesome.loved it.plz countinue this

    1. Astha

      thnq soooooo much ammy dear

  4. A.xx

    fab loved it do continue.xx

    1. Astha

      thnq sooooo much axx….. i missed ur cmnt in prologue… but happy that u cmnted in 1st part

    1. Astha

      thnq soooooo much di

  5. Ragsan r married.. awesome akka

    1. Astha

      mmm yes they r married… thnq sooooo much my dear sis

  6. Awesome

    1. Astha

      thnq soooooo much ashu dear

  7. Amazing

    1. Astha

      thnq ssooooo much my dear lovely

  8. Awesome dear…so cute family?….
    I loved it to the core….

    1. Astha

      haiya…… nan sandosathula kuthikiren….. priyanka…. mad fan od abhigya is reading ragsan ff for me….. love u da chellam… umma….. thnq soooooooo much for the cute cmnt. 🙂 🙂 🙂

      1. Pair abhigya va iruntha enna ragsana iruntha enna…en fav writer storya epdi na miss pannuven?..love you too dear…

  9. Awesome

    1. Astha

      thnq soooooo much sanam

  10. Asw

    Nice quiet interesting

    1. Astha

      thnq sooooo much Asw

  11. Awesome

    1. Astha

      Thnq soooooo much nahira dear

  12. Fairy

    Wohoooo ragsan r married 😉 😉 wowww loved it!!heheheh naughty naughty sanky.. …..ragsan likng r different,one lyk bhajans n other lyk rockng music 😉 😉 interestng… i loved d way u described sanky,dat he dsnt hve 6 packs still hes sooo handsome 😉 ..
    Swara is so sweet!! 🙂
    Awww!!!dey hve a sweeeet cute lill family 🙂 🙂 🙂
    Roshik is mummas boy n diya is papas priencess 😉 😉 😉
    Waitng eagerly for nxt part….keeep rockng n stay blesssed doll..love u sooo much 😉 😉 😉 …
    N ur quote is fabulous dr..i totallly agree wid it!!family is everythng to us 🙂

    1. Astha

      Thnq soooooo much darling for such a cute cmnt…. Description….. Learned from u only my doll. Ya san is naughty boy. They r different but not two pole. In later chapters u’ll see that. Ya always girls r papas’ princess ? love u too my doll ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

  13. Awwweeeessooomeeeeee episode…super family..sanskaar intro also superb…ragsan scenes are nice…waiting for next part…when will u update the next epi…I’m waiting…

    1. Astha

      Thnq sooooo much akka. Tonight I’ll update and it will publish on midnight akka. Happy that u liked it.

  14. OK thank you so much..

  15. Nice epi…cute family….diya sanskar scenes are perfect….ragsan swara harsha bonding was mindblowing….waiting for next updates…..

    1. Astha

      Thnq sooooooo much di…. Happy that u liked everyone bonding

  16. Asra

    osam akka….ragsan married omg…sooo cute family….swaragsanharsh bonding superbbb akka….loved it core akka….waiting for nxt one…tkcr akka…

    1. Astha

      thnq soooooo much my dear sis… tc…. keep smiling

  17. Priya15

    Di… U know Wt… My xmz r postponed to 21st…. Na nalla irukan… Maths enaku plus Ka… Ungaluku Oru visayam sona shock ayiduveenga.. Na accounts la centum….M soo happy and couldn’t believe di…. Haha…

    Ragsan r married.. Aww…. Amazing di.. U r a great and blissful writer.. Luv u loads… Loads of teddy bear hugs to u sweetie didu…..

  18. Jazzy

    superb cute family

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