Hi guys , here is the review of Swasan-magical story written by a very amazing writer Shivika Oberoi.
TITLE – Title is good but u still make better choices according to story.
CONCEPT- Plot is pretty good & something different from normal love stories. It is somewhere inspired from Harry Potter series . Characters are amazingly presented by u .
DIALOGUES – Your dialogues are well written but I expect more heart-wrenching dialogues in emotional situations. Try to write some intense dialogues.
WRITING STYLE – This is the best thing if your FF. Your writing style is really fabulous. Bonds between character are well-described . Your description of Ragini’s character is amazing . Her character is really bold & that’s why I love your story.
STORY MOULDING – Your way of penning down your thoughts in the form of story is awesome. Your story is on right track.
FAULTS – There are not much faults except few which anyone can ignore . Try to avoid them & make your dialogues more intense.
Rating – 8.5/10
Those who want to read a love story with a twist of magic , then can surely follow the story .
Overall it is a nice story , I enjoyed while reading.
Hope u like the review .
Regards
Hania