Hi readers , here is the review of Duniya palat gayi written by very awesome writer Prajakta.
TITLE – Your title sound interesting & suiting on story well . Title is giving idea of your plot .
CONCEPT – Plot is really intriguing . Story is about reversed characters of ShivOmRu & AniRiMya.I really love your idea but it get more interesting if u make their characters lil bit different inspite of similar reversed version .
DIALOGUES- This is mostly the weak point of many fanfiction that the dialogues are not relative . Your dialogues are pretty good in the comparison of others but keep them more realistic.
WRITING STYLE- Your writing style is almost perfect .Every scene is described beautifully.Your way of presenting emotions is very relative . Best part of your writing is that your story always on concept .
STORY MOULDING – In term of storyline , your story is well executed without any stretching or dragging .
FAULTS- Try to write more realistic dialogues & make some habit different in reversed version . It look more promising.
Rating – 8/10
Those who want to enjoy reversion version of your favourite characters, they can definitely try her FF.
Hope u like the review
Regards
Hania